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上海中考英语作文专题指导
上海中考英语作文专题指导
一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意”写作法
“四审”:
一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作,如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础; 二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you 或第三人称she, he, it或they为主;
三审时态。一般而言,写作时文章应多以现在时(包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时)或过去时(一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时)为主,切忌时态混乱; 四审内容。如有提示,应尽量按照所给提示来写,不可偏题乱发挥,可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述,不可遗漏,这是很重要的一点,一般文章按who,when,where,what,how,why等要素展开。
“四注意”:
一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾,一定要写开头结尾。当然,开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套,要有一定的新意,一般一两句即可,结尾要点题,有所立意;
二注意句式要富于变化,不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调,否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分,如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句,I think / I hope / I believe that 等宾语从句,如用定语从句必须有绝对把握;
三注意适当运用连接词,如on one hand, on the other hand; what’s more; however等,这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性,若语言和内容没问题, 做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。
四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型,尽量运用课本所学词句,坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”,更不能乱“发明”, 一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。
最后需要提醒考生的是,中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得, 以80词左右为宜。另外,书写一定要认真、工整,以免造成不必要的失分。
二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析
1. 时态错误
2. 时间状语错误
3. 名词单复数错误
4. 动词误用
5. 语态错误
6.词性误用
7. 介词误用
8.某些搭配和惯用法误用
中考英语总复习专项训练题
写作专项训练
A. 中考英语热门写作话题
1. 关于学习
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “How to learn English well”. (以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● When did you start learning English? (in ... / ... years ago)
●How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day ...) ● What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)
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2. 关于兴趣
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My interest”. (以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What is your interest?
● Why do you like it so much?
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3. 关于写事
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Unforgettable memories”. (以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What is your unforgettable memory?
● Why do you think it is unforgettable?
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上海历年中考英语写人 类作文
作文写人题材汇总
2017上海中考英语写作模板(附常考短语句型)
2017上海中考英语写作模板(附常考短语句型)
1)be back/in/out 回来/在家/外出{上海英语中考作文题}.
2)be at home/work 在家/上班
3)be good at 擅长
4)be careful of 当心,注意,仔细
5)be covered with 被……覆盖
6)be ready for 为……作好准备
7)be surprised (at) 对……感到惊讶
8)be interested in 对……感兴趣
9)be born 出生
10)be on 在进行,在上演, (灯)亮着
11)be able to do sth. 能够做……
12)be afraid of (to do sth. that…) 害怕(做)……
13)be angry with sb. 生(某人)的气
14)be pleased (with) 对……感到高兴(满意)
15)be famous for 因……而著名
16)be strict in (with) 对事(人)严格要求
17)be from 来自……
18)be hungry/thirsty/tired 饿了/渴了/累了
19)be worried 担心
20)be (well) worth doing (非常)值得被……
21)be covered with 被……覆盖……
22)be in (great) need of (很)需要
23)be in trouble 处于困境中
24)be glad to do sth. 很高兴做……
25)be late for ……迟到
26)be made of (from) 由……制成
27)be satisfied with 对……感到满意
28)be free 空闲的
29)be (ill) in bed 卧病在床
30)be busy doing (with) 忙于做……(忙于……)
31)come back 回来
32)come down 下来
33)come in 进入,进来
34)come on 快点,加油,跟我来,得了
35)come out 出来,出版
36)come out of 从……出来
37)come up 走近,发芽,被提出
38)come from 来自……
39)do one's lessons/homework 做功课/作业
40)do more speaking/reading 多做口头练习/朗读
41)do one's best 尽某人最大努力
42)do some shopping (cooking,reading, cleaning) 购物(做饭,读书,打扫)
43)do a good deed (good deeds)做一件好事(做好事)
44)do morning exercises 做早操
45)do eye exercises 做眼保健操
46)do well in 在……某方面干得好
47)get up 起床
48)get everything ready 把一切都准备好
49)get ready for (=be ready for) 为……作好准备
50)get on (well) with 与……相处(融洽)
51)get back 返回
52)get rid of 摆脱,除去
53)get in 进入,陷入,收获
54)get on/off 上/下车
55)get to 到达
56)get there 到达那里
57)give sb. a call 给某人打电话
58)give a talk 作报告
59)give a lecture (a piano concert)作讲座(举行钢琴音乐会)
60)give back 归还,送回
61)give sb. some advice on 给某人一些关于。。。。。。的忠告
62)give lessons to 给……上课
63)give in 屈服
64)give up 放弃
65)give sb. a chance 给某人一次机会
66)give a message to…… 给……一个口信
67)go ahead 先走,向前走,去吧,干吧
68)go to the cinema 看电影
69)go to bed 睡觉(make the bed 整理床铺)
70)go to school (college) 上学(上大学)
71)go to hospital 去医院看病
72)go over 复习,仔细检查
73)go fishing/skating/swimming/shopping 去钓鱼/滑冰/游泳/买东西
74)go home (there) 回家(去那儿)
75)go round 到处走动,绕道
76)go up 上去
77)go out for a walk 外出散步
78)go on (doing) 继续(做……)
79)go shopping 去购物
80)go on with one's work 继续某人的工作
81)go upstairs/downstairs 上/下楼
82)(the lights) go out (灯)熄了
83)have a lesson (lessons)/a meeting 上课/开会
84)have a football match (basketball match) 举行一场足球(蓝球)赛
85)have dictation 进行听写
86)have a try 试一试
87)have a good/wonderful time 玩得很高兴
88)have a lecture (a piano concert) 听讲座(听钢琴音乐会)
89)have a report/talk on 听一个关于……的报告
90)have a glass of water (a cup of tea) 喝一杯水(一杯茶)
91)have breakfast/lunch/supper/dinner 吃早饭/午饭/晚饭
92)have a meal (three meals) 吃一顿饭(三餐饭)
93)have bread and milk for breakfast 早饭吃面包和牛奶
94)have (have got) a headache 头痛
95)have a fever 发烧
96)have a cough (a cold) 咳嗽(感冒)
97)have a look at 看一看……
98)have a rest (a break) 休息一会儿(工间或课间休息)
99)have a talk 谈话
100)have a swim/walk 游泳/散步
101)have sports 进行体育锻炼
102)have a sports meet (meeting) 开运动会
103)have something done 让人(请人)做……
104)have a test/an exam 测验/考试
105)have an idea 有了个主意
106)had better do sth. (not do sth.) 最好做……(最好不要做……) 107)have a word with 与……谈几句话
108)help sb. with sth. 在某方面帮助某人
109)help sb.(to) do sth. 帮助某人做某事
110)help oneself to some chicken/fish/meat 请随便吃点鸡/鱼/肉 111)help each other 互相帮助
112)have nothing to do 无事可做
113)keep up with 跟上……,不落后于……
114)keep silent/quiet 保持沉默/安静
115)keep sb. doing sth. 使某人一直做某事
116)keep one's diary 记日记
117)make a noise 吵闹
118)make a living 谋生
119)make sb. do sth. 迫使某人做……
120)make faces (a face) 做鬼脸
121)make friends with 与……交朋友
122)make a mistake (mistakes)犯错误
123)make room/space for 给……腾出地方
124)make a sentence (sentences) with 用……造句
125)make a fire 生火
126)be made from/of 由……制成
127)be made in 在……地方制造
上海中考英语作文指导范文
作文目录
1. A good way to study English 学习英语的方法
2. A good way to study well 努力学习的方法
3. Travelling (7篇) 旅行
4. Haze weather in Shanghai(3篇) 上海的雾霾天气
5. My view on comic strips 漫画之我见
6. My way to school (2篇) 上学路上{上海英语中考作文题}.
7. My views on an English Festival (2篇) 英语节之我见
8. Using the Internet makes our life convenient 运用网络使生活更便利
9. Let’s learn to smile 学会微笑
10. Growing up with good books (2篇) 好书伴我成长
11. The best gift I’ve received (3篇) 我收到的最好的礼物
12. Encouragement brings me power(5篇) 鼓励带给我能量
13. Being a polite person 做一个有礼貌的人
14. How to protect myself 2013上海中考满分作文
15. Write a letter 写一封信
16. This time next year 明年此时
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My way of studying English is to read lots of English books. It is very efficient.
When I read English books, I can learn lots of extra-curricular words (which enable me to write better sentences as well as understand articles better.)Besides, it can set examples of writing articles for me. So I think reading books is a good way. It enables me to learn better with less time. However, there is no doubt that there are still some better ways. But no matter how we learn, the idea of using good methods never changes. A good method can always improve the quantity and quality of what we do, not only for studying English.
A good way to study well
In my opinion, reading widely is a good way to study well.
On one hand, reading widely can bring us lots of powerful knowledge which we can’t learn in class as well as give us much fun. Reading is like stairs of a high mountain. The more you read, the higher you will go and the better you will learn. On the other hand, reading can also open your mind, which will help you easily solve the problems which are so difficult that few people can work out. How useful the way is!
To sum up, if you read a book every day, you will study better and better.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As tourists, we ought to pay attention to our behaviors. First, respecting local customs is of great importance. We should learn some traditions of the place before we travel so that we won’t do things that make local people unhappy. Also, wearing a smile is a good way to show our politeness. Wherever we go and whatever we do, smile is a great passport that shows kindness and friendliness. When we are abroad or in other cities, we should always be friendly and kind to local people. In a nutshell, l hope you can follow my tips when you travel.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Many students plan to travel with their parents on holidays. But when we are travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors and travel politely. Firstly, we should keep quiet when we’re travelling. Secondly, it will be terrible to draw some pictures on famous buildings.
I think that if we do these things well, we’ll have a good time when we are travelling.
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Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As a tourist, we must pay attention to our behaviors. First of all, we must obey the rules. Next, we must keep the environment clean. For example, we should leave rubbish in rubbish bins. A clean environment can make us feel happy . we must respect local customs so that we can give them a good impression. More importantly, it will be very bad to hurt the ancient buildings because they are very precious and they should be protected . in a word, it is important for us to control ourselves when we are going for a trip.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Quite a few people go abroad to spend their holidays. We should pay attention to our behaviors. First, we should put rubbish into rubbish bins instead of leaving it everywhere. Second, when we have a walk along the lakes, we shouldn’t throw stones into the lake. What’s more, we shouldn’t shout or smoke in public places. We should give others a helping hand when they are in trouble. Last but not least, it will be necessary not to draw here and there. I think if we do these,our travelling will be better.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. While travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors. It is as important as enjoying the views. First, when we travel to another country, we should respect local customs. If we don’t, we may be not popular among the people in that country. Second , it will be terrible to leave rubbish in the river or on the road. It may make the view less beautiful. Finally, we should be quiet in public p places. If we are noisy, we may make others unhappy. As a result, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors while travelling .{上海英语中考作文题}.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. When we travel to other places, we should pay attention to our behaviors. Firstly, we must respect local customs. We shouldn’t draw or write on the wall. What’s more, it will be terrible to leave rubbish. Instead, we ought to put it into rubbish bins. Last but not least, we mustn’t take photos if it isn’t allowed.
I hope that everyone can behave well during the trip. In this way, our life will be better.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As students, it is common that we go travelling with our parents when we are free. But we must pay attention to our behaviors when we travel to other countries and local places.
Firstly, we should respect the local culture. Every country has its own culture and it’s precious. So we can’t be rude to their culture. What’s more, when we ave arrive at a famous scenery spot, wee can take photos with it so that we can have a nice memory about it . but we can’t destroy any of it. Instead, we
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上海中考英语作文
上海中考英语作文学习资料
一.评分标准
上海中考英语作文总分为20分,其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。 以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准:
1.内容分8分。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚完整。
2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误,词汇拼写正确,句型使用恰当。首先是字数,少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
3.组织结构分4分,也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。
二. 注意点:
每少5个词扣0.5分,拼写错误每处扣0.5分,标点,大小写错误每2处扣0.5分 3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上,得2~3分 内容和语言总分13~14分,如确有好句型或表达用语,可酌情给1~2分 通篇句型,句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,也不给分 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。
先划档次:A档 18~15分 B档 14.5~12分 C档 11.5~8分 D档 3.5~0分 然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。
三.学生常出现的问题:
1. 内容空洞,没有清晰的思路,表达能力不强,总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达,所
以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假,当然也就得不了高分。
2. 议论过多,描写不足。大多数情况下,我们把议论当成的作文的重点,所以常常会跑题。 应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像,不能只翻译了事。
3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子,重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达,比如:I must learn English well. 就可以换成:It is important for me to learn English well.
4. 结构散漫,想哪儿写哪儿,乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。
5. 都是简单句,缺少复合句。多用状语从句,宾语从句,定语从句及一些重要的句型,也 人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导(一)初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。
6. 连词的使用较少,句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些:比如: to my surprise (让我惊 讶的是), what’s more(而且,还有)等,让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。
四. 中考写作高频使用词组、句法
1.作文开头的有用句
As we all know, As it is known to all, It’s known to all that… It’s common knowledge that… It’s commonly accepted that… There is no denying that… How time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.
2、中间分层部分的有用结构:
分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand 分两点:For one thing, For another, 分三点:Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least
3、结尾部分
All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的说,简单的说 Last but not least
组织语言 发表观点的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not,
表示递进的 In addition Furthermore More importantly What’s more Moreover 其他与“我”有关的写作材料 1、重点句型 It`s+a. for sb.to do sth. So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that too„to do Not„.until That’s why+句子 那是。。。的原因 It’s said that +句子
There’s no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问··· It goes without saying that+句子 毫无疑问··· There’s no need to do 没必要做··· There’s no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 2、 提建议 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why don`t+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话,我会做``` It’s best to do 3、表示喜欢,感兴趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth. Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in 4、努力做``` Try to do/strive to do Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try one’s best/do one’s best to do Do what/everything sb can to do 5、打算做···/计划做··· Intend to do/plan to do Be going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one’s mind to do 6、表示想/希望 Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 7、其他有用的短语 From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn„by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in„. 8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, People’s view on„vary from person to person
4、增添亮点 使用复合句和谚语 谚语举例 I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.” It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”
五.2002-2013 上海中考英语作文题目集锦
2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物
2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人
2004 Leave School 毕业时分
2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼
2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦
2007 A Story about My Parent(s) 一个关于我父/母的故事
2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边
2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么
2010 I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪
2011 My Favourite Thing(s) 我的心爱之物
2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信,并给予建议。
2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”.(以“如何保护自己”为
题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文)
六.近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享
2009命题作文
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”. (以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
l What do you want to do for your school?
2 Why do you want to do it?
3 How are you going to do it?
例文1:
I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean." But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now,
do you think it is simple?
2 One possible version
I want to do something for my school I'm leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.
2010命题作文
上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself
1、What kind of person are you?
2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)
3、Why are you proud of yourself?
要求:至少60字
范文:1
I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me: "impossible is nothing," "you could challenge yourself!" so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew, I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
2. I am proud of myself
The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. By looking backwards, I’m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud I’m of being a strong-minded person.
10年上海市中考英语作文精选
2010学年作文范文
1.静安区{上海英语中考作文题}.
Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Where there is a will, there is a way.” (请以“有
志者事竟成”为题写话。词数不少于60个。要求内容连贯,表达清楚。标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
What do you think of this famous saying?
Give example(s) to support your idea(s).
Do you have any suggestions to others?
Possible version 1:
I think the key to success is not so much money as a strong will. I used to be poor at Physics.
So I made a will to learn it better. I worked hard and tried my best on it. Finally, I made progress.
I think it is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world. As long as you make up your mind
to do it, you will certainly fulfill your dream.
Possible version 2:
I disagree with this old saying because I think when there is a will; there should be an opportunity or a suitable
surrounding to enable the man get success. Mao zedong and his army failed in the first revolution war because they don't
have good weapon supports.
But in 1947, they are not only well supported but also get the help and hope from all the Chinese people. So they
succeeded. That shows when there is a will, there may not be a way. However, we should
try to find it, and realize the will in a proper time.
2.长宁区
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Traffic in our city”. (以“我们城市的交通”为题写一篇不少于60
个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
What do you think of the traffic in our city?
Why do you think so? (Give at least two reasons)
What is /are your suggestion(s) to improve the traffic in the city?
Possible version 1:
In my opinion, the traffic in our city is heavy and terrible. Every Friday, I see the underground station full of
people. It’s quite hard to get on the train, as well as to get off. On the ground, the traffic is also terrible as traffic
accidents are reported almost every day. The main reason is that there are too many private cars and people are
violating the traffic rules all the time. I suggest that more public transport vehicles should be put into work to
improve the heavy traffic.
Possible version 2:
Nowadays, traffic in our city becomes better and better. There are more and more cars on the roads. The number of both taxis and buses are
increasing. In addition, the underground system in shanghai seems to be very
convenient. In every corner of our city, an underground station can be found easily. However, there’re still some
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problems. For example, there’re too many private cars on the roads. Since the public transportation system is so
modern, I suggest private car owners drive less and go to work by bus or underground more often.
3.浦东区
Write at least 60 words about the topic “The subject I dislike most”. (以“我最不喜欢的学科科目”为题
写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
Which subject do you dislike most?
Why do you dislike this subject? (You’d better give two reasons.)
How can you improve this subject in future?
Possible version 1:
I dislike painting lessons most. Frankly speaking, I haven’t any talent in painting at all. The colors, shapes
and shadows are nightmare for me. Actually, I often draw pictures in a dreadful mess. Although painting is difficult for me, I like enjoying myself in a museum. Gazing at masterpieces is not bad. After all, I can’t draw a good one but I can improve this subject by enjoying those masterpieces.
Possible version 2:
My favorite subject is Math and I dislike Physics most. I dislike it because it is so hard and complex that I
never get a satisfying score. I will work hard and try my best on it. I might say that success is won by three things:
first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort. I think It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in
the world. As long as I make up my mind to do it, I will certainly make progress. And Physics won’t be the subject
I dislike most any longer.
4.虹口区
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Homework in our study”. (以“我们学习中的家庭作业”为题写一
篇至少60字的短文,标点符号不占格)。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
What do you think of homework in your study?
Why do you do your homework every day?(At least two reasons)
Is there too much homework in your daily life?
What do you want to say to your teacher or your parents?
Possible version 1:
Every day, we are busy with our studies. Our teachers often give us a lot of homework to do. After a day's
hard work, we all feel tired. We want very much to have a rest. But when we get home, we still have to do a lot of
homework. It is really a hard job. Most of the students in our class become short-sighted.
If teachers would give us less homework, we can enjoy our life more and be more willingly to go back to
school to study.
Possible version 2:
I do all my homework every day because I think it’s a students’ duty to do so. However, sometimes I feel
doing homework is a waste of time since it both boring and useless. In my opinion, truly useful homework acts as
a wonderful tutor. It summarizes the key points in our study. I would be more familiar with what I have learnt and
thus be good at them. I hope teachers would only give us homework like his and omit anything unnecessary.
Therefore, we can study more efficiently.
5.黄浦(嘉定)
Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Dream Life of Senior High School”. (以“我向往的高中生活”
为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。首句已给,不记入60个词。) 2
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
What senior high school life do you like?
What do you hope to do in the senior high school?
What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have?{上海英语中考作文题}.
(You may begin your passage with:)
My dream senior high school life is …
Possible version 1:
I am looking forward to entering a senior high school. I like a modern and active school. There I can enjoy
myself very much. I hope to take a lot of lessons which I am interested in. I also want to do a lot of experiments.
Don’t you think it’s interesting? Of course, teachers and friends are important as well. I expect to meet kind
teachers and helpful friends. The life in senior high school will be totally new. I can’t wait to try it.
Possible version 2:
My life of senior high school will certainly be busy, but I hope it will be a pleasant and colorful one. Of course,
first of all, I want to get more knowledge, especially on Math and English. Secondly, I’d like to join a club or a
society. Classmates and I will take part in many interesting activities. However, teachers and friends are also an
important part in my study life. Good teachers may affect my study a lot. And I also expect to make a friend that I
could talk with him heart by heart. I’m looking forward to my life of senior high school.
6. 青浦区
Write at least 60 words on the topic “The Important Things in My Life”.(以”我生命中重要的事”为题写