2017闸北区初三英语一模作文范文

2017闸北区初三英语一模作文范文篇一

上海初三2014一模英语作文题目

Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一

篇不少于60词的短文)

Suppose there is an English Festival in your school every year. Some students think it is

helpful, but others don‘t think so. What do you think, and why? （假设你们学校每年开展英语文化节活动，有些学生认为活动对自己有帮助，有些则不这么认为，你的观点是什么？并说明理由。）

Complete the poster of at least 60 words on the topic “A little more fresh air, please”. (以“多

一点新鲜空气”为题完成一篇不少于60个词的海报，标点符号不占格。

Write a letter at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于

60词的信，标点符号不占格。)

假如你是Zhang Lin，你的笔友Li Hua来信询问你学英语的方法。请你给他写一封回信，

并给他提一些学好英语的建议(至少两条建议)。回信的开头已给出，不计入总字数。 Dear Li Hua,

Thanks for your letter. You asked me __________________________________

Yours sincerely, Zhang Lin

Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一篇不少于60词的

短文，

标点符号不占格。)

Situation: Nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground„ How do

you go to school? What do you think of it? 眼下不少学生骑自行车、乘私家车、乘地铁等方式上学。你是怎么去学校的？你觉得你的方式如何？谈谈你的想法并简述其理由。

Words and patterns for reference (以下单词或词组可供选用):

choice, convenient, save time, stop…from

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic „let‟s learn to smile.‟ 以“让我们学会微笑”

为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。

Suggestion points:

1 do you often smile in your daily life?

2 why should we learn to smile? (Give one or two examples)

3 what changes will we see if we smile more often?

Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I see an old person fall down in the street, I „.

以《当我看到老人在街上摔倒，我......》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 Reference words (Use at least two of them):

a traditional virtue (美德)； in favor of /against; calm; get along with; care for;

Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封

不少于60词的信)

假如你是Linda, 你收到英国笔友Mark的来信，他现住在北京姑妈家，春节期间他收到

一些长辈给的压岁钱，请写一封回信，对有关“如何使用压岁钱”提出一些建议。）

Write at least 60 words with the topic “A heavy smog day ”. （以“大雾霾天”为题，写

一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：去年12月上旬，申城笼罩在茫茫的雾霾（was shrouded in heavy smog）中，陷于

重度污染（severe pollution）。人们戴口罩（wear masks）出行，雾霾天给人们的健康带来危害，给生活和工作带来不便（inconvenience）。请你就其中某一天，描述你的经历和感受。

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A suggestion to my dear school!” (以“给

学校的一个建议！”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

What aren‟t you satisfied with in your school? Your reasons?

What is your suggestion?

Would you give your possible solution(s)?

Suppose you are a fan of “Where are we going, Dad”. Please write a letter to the

programme and recommend a place for them to spend a 3-day trip. 提示：近来“爸爸去哪

儿”节目轰动了全国。如果你是这个节目的忠实粉丝，请给栏目组写

一封推荐信，推荐一个地方适合父亲与孩子一起共同度过一个三天两夜的旅行，并请至

少给出两个理由。 Phrases for reference （以下短语仅供参考） be located in/on/at famous for share„with have interest in

（ 注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）

Dear Editor,

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Xxx

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Haze weather in Shanghai”.(以“上海 的

雾霾天“为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：近来人们深受雾霾天气的困扰，学习、工作、出行等都受到了不同程度的影响。

请简单描述一下雾霾天气给你带来的烦恼或不便，并谈谈你的建议或希望：

The following are for reference.（以下词语仅供参考） outdoor activities, air quality. road

safety. mask (口罩) improve, cancel. allow, control, prevent

(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予给分。)

Write a passage on “A happy memory in my Junior High School” in at least 60 words

according to the given situation（以“我初中时期的一次快乐回忆”为题，谢一篇不少于60词的文章。）

提示：初中时期留给我们很多快乐的回忆，你可以结合学习或生活中的某一个情景或具

体事例，例如：一次约会、一次活动等等，谈谈初中时期曾经留给你的一次快乐的回忆。 Phrases for reference（以下短语仅供参考）： a spring outing a class meeting a party take part in play with be happy

write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation.

1.提示：假设你是张翔，你的朋友孙磊上周来信说，他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话，

这使他非常苦恼，不知道如何处理这件事。请你给他写封信，提出一些建议并帮助他。{2017闸北区初三英语一模作文范文}.

2.要求：建议不得少于两条。

3.Phrases for reference

In trouble; be bad for; talk with; heart to heart; try one‟s best; after all; get on well

with;

Write at least 60 words about the topic “ I believe I can _______________ ”. (“以我相信我能_______________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested points:

Why do think you can do that

How will you do that?

Write at least 60 words about the topic “A good way to ________”（在生活中，在学习技能等各方面，每个人都会有做某件事独特的非常有效的好方法，请以“一个______的好方法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

2017闸北区初三英语一模作文范文篇二

2016-2017中考英语作文指导及范文

2016-2017中考英语作文指导 如何写好一个句子？ --如何写好复合句。

复合句是由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句构成的句子，我们在写作时，要学会使用宾语从句，状语从句和定语从句等。下面就谈谈有关这方面的一些句型。

句型 1 主+谓+that从句-- We’re sure that we’ll win the first prize.我们肯定能得头奖。He found that his English was too 他发现他的英语太差了。She decides that she is going to be a nurse.他决定要当个护士.I don’t believe that he has finished his work.我相信他还没有做完他的工作.

句型点评：在动词say，think，hope，believe，expect，explain，hear，know，find，regret，remember，decide后可接that引导的宾语从句，that常可省略。

句型2 主句+whether/if+从句.我不知道他会不会来。。我问他是否有字典。I don’t know 句型点评：if和whether可引导一个表示疑问的宾语从句，二者一般情况下可通用。

句型3 主句+疑问词+从句--No one knows what he is doing.没有人知道他在干什么。Take back what I said just now.我收回刚才说的话。Could you tell me where the booking office is？你能不能告诉我售票处在什么地方？I must thank you 我一定要谢谢你为我所做的事。

句型点评：连接代词who，whom，whose，what，which等和连接副词when，where，why，how等都可以用来引导特殊疑问句充当宾语从句。注意：从句中要用陈述语气。 句型4 主句+when/while/as/before/after+从句（时间状语从句)

We took notes as/while/when we were listening to the teacher.我们一边听老师讲课一边做笔记。Please keep silent while/when she’s writing.她在写作，请保持安静.I was speaking when a policeman came in.我正在说话，这时，突然进来一个警察.You must finish the work before I go home.你们必须在我回家以前把工作做完。

句型点评：时间状语从句通常由从属连词when，while，as，after，before等引导，使用时必须注意他们之间的词义和用法区别。

句型5 主句+until/till-从句--Last night,his parents waited for him till/until it was 12.昨晚他父母一直等他到12点。 我们练唱一直练到下课。The child 这个小孩看完电视剧后才开始做功课。He did not go home until/till he finished his work.他一直把工作做完之后才回家。

句型点评：在使用本句型时要注意until/till的用法，若主句中的谓语动词是“keep，remain，stay，wait..”等延续性动词，则用动词的肯定式，until/till的含义是“一直到....为止”；若主句中的谓语动词是“arrive，come，finish，go，reach，start”等瞬间性动词，则用动词的否定式，这时的until/till的含义是“直到....才....” 句型6 主句+since-从句/It is+.....since.....

自从我们来到这个城市，就一直住在这儿。 句型点评：since是从属连词，连接时间状语从句表示“自从....以来”。从句中的谓语动词通常用过去时，主句中的谓语动词通常用现在完成时，以表示从过去某一时刻开始，一直延续到现在的动作或状态。

句型7 主句+as soon as/the moment.... ---Please call us as soon as you arrive at the airport.请你一到机场就给我们打电话。I’ll tell your mother the news as soon as I see her.我一见到你母亲就把这个消息告诉她。As soon as the students got they began to help the farmers with their work.学生们一到农场，the children stopped talking.老师一进来，孩子们立即停止谈话。

句型点评：as soon as表示“一...就...”的意思，它引导的从句所表示的动词几乎跟主句的动作同时发生，相当于the moment that引导的从句。

句型8 主句+where/wherever(no matter where)从句 --Get up where you fall.哪里跌倒就在哪里站起来。She phoned to I always follow you.不论你到哪里，我总是跟着你。Wherever you go，you may find friends.不论你走到哪儿，你可能找到朋友。 句型点评：where和wherever都可引导表示地点的状语从句，不过wherever的语气较强，相当于“no matter where”意思是“不论/无论......在/到哪里....”。

句型9. 主句+because从句；Since/As从句+主句

He didn’t pass the English examination last term .因为他学习不努力，所以上学期英语考you’d better put on a coat.今天天气很冷，you can begin your experiment.既然一切都准备好了，现在你们可以开始做实验了。 句型点评：表示原因的状语从句通常用从属连词because，since和as等引导。 句型10. 主句+so that/in order that-句型

他大声喊，为的是让别人听见。We had to 为的是参观长城和其它名胜。

句型点评：so that/in order that意思是“以便；为的是”，引导表示目的状语从句，其从句中的谓语动词通常要与一些情态动词“may，might，can，could”等连用。另外，“so as to/in order to/to+do”也可引导目的状语。 句型11 主语+be/v+so+adj./adv.+that从句

她唱得很动听，所以受到了听众的高度赞扬。 珍妮是这样一个可爱的孩子，所以每个人都喜欢她。She did so well in the office that she was praised by the manager。她在办公室里

干得很出色，受到了经理的表扬。

句型点评：表示结果的状语从句，通常用“so/such....that”表示“如此...以致”来引导。 句型12 主句+as+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 主句+not/so(as)+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 黄河不像长江那样长。他不像我所想的那样聪明。I hope you will start as early as you can.我希望你们尽早动身。 句型点评：“as+adj./adv.+as”这个结构中，其中的形容词或副词要用原级；“not as（so）+adj./adv.+as”意为“不如....那样；不像....那样”，其中的形容词或副词也用原级。

句型13 主句+adj/adv比较级+than+..... 主句+（the）+adj./adv.最高级+...... 卡车比自行车跑得快多了。It’s 这是我读过的最好的一本小说。In autumn，the weather of Beijing is much cooler than that of Wuhan.秋天北京的天气比武汉凉爽得多。 句型点评：表示甲>乙（或甲< 乙），要用“形容词（或副词）的比较级+than”句型；表示最高级时，常用“（the）+adj/adv.最高级+.....”等句型。

句型14 Though/Although-从句+主句 Although you are very clever,you are unable to work out the problem.尽管你很聪明，你也不可能解出这道题。He made little progress although he studied very hard.尽管他学习很用功，但是他取得的进步很小。

句型点评：though和although引导的让步状语从句可以置于句首，也可以置于句末。注意“though/although”不与不but同时使用。

句型15.主句+if/unless-从句 We will go and visit the museum if it is fine tomorrow.如果明天天晴，我们将去参观博物馆。I won’t let you leave unless you promise to return tomorrow.=If you don’t promise to return tomorrow,I won’t let you leave.除非你答应明天赶回来，否则我就不让你离开。 句型点评：if/unless引导的条件状语从句可以放在句首，也可放在主句后面，其从句常用一般现在时表示将来。（即主从句要遵从：主将从现的原则）

句型16 先行词+关系代词who(that)/whom/whose+从句-- The child who is reading is my daughter.在那儿读书的那个孩子是我的女儿。The man(whom)you met at the gate is my teacher.在门口你碰到的那个人是我的老师。The boy whose mother died in the accident works hard.其母亲在事故中死去的那个孩子学习努力。 句型点评：在定语从句中，如果先行词是人，要用关系代词“who，whose，whom，that”等引导，其中who在定语从句中作主语或宾语；whose在定语从句中做定语，whom在定语从句中作宾语。 句型17 先行词+关系代词that/which+从句

The book(that/which)you lent me yesterday is very interesting.你昨天借给我的书非常有趣。The film which/that is about animal is wonderful.关于动物的那部电影好看极了。

句型点评：在定语从句中，如果先行词是物，要用关系代词“that，which”等引导。在定语从句中that，which作主语时，不能省略；若作宾语时则常省略。 附2015年各省中考满分作文---

1.上周五，你们班举行了《我们的梦想》的主题班会，在班上同学们踊跃发言；有的想成为老师，有的想成为一名警察，有的想当医生.....请你根据下面的表格的提示以“Our Dreams”为题，写一篇英语论文，报告这次班会的情况，并谈谈你自己的梦想。

Our Dreams Last Friday,our class held a class meeting about

our dreams.Here is my report.Liu Wei’s dream is

to be a teacher,so he decides to study education.Li Ming,he does sports every

day,wants to become a policeman,for he thinks

that without physical exercise,he can not make his dream come true.Susan wants to be a movie

dreams one day.

2.某校开展“我是课堂小主人”建议征集活动，各班就此展开讨论，同学们纷纷发言：“我希望能有足够的自主学习时间....”“我喜欢的课堂是每个人都有一台笔记本电脑，方便网上查询.....”“课堂上我们能自由的讨论，充分展示我们的学习成果.....”等等。请你结合同学们讨论的结果，给以电子邮件的形式写一封信，建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱，也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容包括以下要点：

1)What is your favorite class like? 2)Please tell us an unfotgettable experence you’ve had in your class. 3)Please give at least two suggestions. My favorite class is an open and free class where we can learn by myself and discuss in groups,it is good for my development,I think.

I still remember an unforgettable experiencein my math class.Several days ago,I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,but they were too hard for me to work them out.So I had to ask my classmate for help.After a considerable discussion,we solved the problems in our group.How excited I was.

Having such a great experience,I want to give two suggestions.Firstly,please don’t teach us too much in class.We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class.Secondly,please provide us with some laptops if possible,so we can surf the Internet easily.No doubt,we need an open and free class,you see. That’s all.Thank you.

3.请根据提示内容，以“A visit to________home”为题，为学校英文报写一篇短文，叙述你“走亲访友”的一次经历。提示：When？Whose home？ How？ What？ Your feelings..... A visit to my friend’s home

Last Sunday afternoon,I went to my friend’s home.It was not far.So I went there by bike.

In her home,we watched an English movie and listened to music.We also made some toys with some old clothes.It was not easy but we tried.We cut clothes into pieces.Then we put the pieces and other things together.At last,these pieces were made into different toys.How lovely they were!We had fun when we did it.We were very proud!What a pleasant day!

4.某中学正在招收赴英夏令营领队，应聘的条件是用英文给你的队友写一封e-mail，提醒相关注意事项。假如你是王涵，请根据要点提示，写一封e-mail，参加应聘。 要点提示：1.出行前（了解相关信息，提高英语口语）。。。2.旅行中（注意言谈举止，人身安全等） You will soon leave for England for a camp.Before you start,you should get to know the imformation and improve your oral English.While traveling,you should try to keep yourself safe and at the same time pay attention to your behavior.As a Chinese,it’s your traditional to be polite and behave well.Besides,wherever you go,be sure not to litter. I hope you can do these well while you are enjoying the summer camp in England. 5.某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。1.与他人交流 2.参加体育运动 3.参与娱乐活动 4.其他减压方式 参考词汇：stressed adj.有压力的 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 my friends,parents and teachers,they can help me reduce stress.In addition,I also enjoy taking exercise with my friends,especially playing basketball.Sometimes,I will listen to light music in my free time or dance to music,too.Besides,walking with my pet dog in the evening is also a good way to relax myself.I think that as long as we are relaxed,we can have a good time and learn better. Nothing is too difficult,if you put your heart into it. 6.英文有句谚语“East，west，home’s best”。某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境，家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。 80词左右 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 East，west，home’s best

.I live in a house in the countryside.There’s a big living room,three bedrooms,a kitchen and a washroom in it.There’re some trees and flowers around my house.The air is really clean.And I often hear birds singing.

There’re four people in my family.They are my parents,my sister and I.We’re helpful and friendly.And we always get on well with each other.

I’m happy I have a good family.I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work.I’ll study harder so that I can make more money in the future.With our effort,I’m sure my home will be better and better.

7.假设你是李杰,正通过e-mail和美国友好姐妹校的朋友Tom交流校纪班规,请你用英文向他介绍下面的“班级公约”. 班级公约:

1.准时到校穿校服，见到老师问声好；2.上课专心勤思考，作业认真按时交；3.教室保洁常打扫，离班熄灯关门窗； 4.和谐相处应友爱，互相帮助共进步

参考词汇：school uniform； be active in thinking come to school on time in school uniforms.It’s polite to greet our teachers when we meet them.Second,we must listen carfully in class and be active in thinking.Also,we should do our homework carfully and hand it in on time.Third,we need to clean the classroom often and always keep it clean.And we’re required to turn off lights and close windows and doors before we leave.Fourth,being friendly is importan8.生活中每个人都有与他人沟通交流的体验，如：与家人，朋友等。请根据下面的要求写一篇不少于80词的短文。 要求：1.表达你对沟通的理解 2.描述自身经历或社会现象中在沟通方面存在的问题 3。提出至少一点更好地与人沟通的方法。

In our daily life,if we want to get on well with others,we should learn some skills about communication.

When friends are eating dinner,most of them just surf the Internet on the phone without any communication.They may feel bored so that they won’t get together any more.In addition,some students always get into trouble with others,so they have no friends and so on.All these problems are caused by lack of communication.

In my opinion,if they learn to talk with others more,share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes,they will communicate better with each other.The better you communicate with others,the more friends you will have. 9.亲爱的同学们，中考过后将迎来愉快的暑假。你一定对旅行感兴趣吧？请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的旅行计划。可适当发挥。

1.与父母乘火车去北京 2.想游览哪些风景名胜 3.其他打算 4.将会有何收获

可能用到的词语：capital，symbol，the Great Wall，the Palace Museum，Tian’anmen Square,Beijing Duck The summer vacation is coming.I’m so excited because I’m going on a trip to Beijing with my parents.

We’ll go there by train.As we all know,Beijing is the capital of China and there are many places of interest there.We’ll first visit the Great Wall,a symbol of our country.Next,we’ll pay a visit to the Summer Palace and Tian’anmen Square.After that,we’ll enjoy Beijing Duck.Of course,we’ll take photos during our trip. I do believe we’ll have a wonderful time.

10.学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示，并结合自己的观点，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护（self-protection）。 提示：1.never swim 2.be careful to make friends 3.call the police when you are in danger 4.eat healthy food 5.Don’t crowd （go upstairs and downstairs）

How Can We Protect Ourselves?

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how we protect ousdelves?Here are some suggestions.

First,we should be careful when we make friends,especially on line.Second,if we are in danger,we must call the police in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also,we should eat heathily and safely.Besides,we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.Last,summer is coming,we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone. All in all,everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

11.请你以My______为题，写篇英语短文。要求：1.在My后面加上适当的词补全标题。2、词数80左右。 My dream I always dream of becoming a doctor in the future.

Doctors are nice and kind.They devote all their lives to helping patients.They are always dressed in white,so we regard them White Angels. It is said that doctors are always tired and busy working in the hospital,but it can’t obstruct me in realizing my dream.I’ll study harder and read more books about medical science.No matter how difficult,I will never give up my dream.

12.请你以“My Father”为题，写一篇短文。从性格，爱好等方面简略介绍一下你的父亲，重点写一个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事，并简要说明你将如何回报这如山的父爱。参考词汇：感动move（v.) 回报 in return My father is an ordinary worker.He is a kind and generous man. He is always ready to help others.He likes playing chess and listening to music when he is free.In my heart,he is my hero.

Last year,I took part in the relay race held by my school.I got so tired during the race that I even wanted to give up.My father not only ran with me but also encouraged me all the time until I reached the finishing line,which made me very moved.

In return for his love,I’ve decided to work hard and make greater progress so that one day he can be proud of me!

13.你身边的每个人对你来说具有特殊的意义。请你以“My special_______”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友，老师，同学的等。要求：1.在题目空格中填入你要描述的对象，如grandma，teacher或friend等。2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。3.80词左右。 My special grandma

My grandma is special to me because we’re like friends.She always helps me and whenever I am in trouble.There are no secrets between us. When I am with my grandma,we spend a lot of happy time together.I know my grandma is very

smart because she seems to know everything.My grandma is good at many things.One thing she likes best is cooking.She often cooks delicious food for me.I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.

14.假如你是李平，最近你学习上遇到困难。请用英语给你的英国朋友Nancy写一封电子邮件，讲述你的问题并寻求她的帮助。参考词汇：考试不及格fail the exam 熬夜stay up late 开头和结尾已给出。

Last week,I failed the physics exam again.My mother was very angry with me.She said I wasn’t hard-working.So I didn’t go to bed until I finished my homework every night.Since I stayed up late,I couldn’t pay attention to my lessons in class next day.My teacher asked me”What’s wrong with you?”But I didn’t know how to answer.I expect you to give me some advice on how to study well in an efficient way. 15.假如你是李明。本周五早上你班同学将去格林农场参加实践活动。请你用英语草拟一则通知。内容要点如下：1.摘蔬菜，给植物浇水； 2.7点校门口集合，乘车前往 3.体验农场生活，活动约2小时 4.互相关照，注意安全 5.补充一两点有关事项。词数80左右。参考词汇：experience v.体验 pick摘 activity n.活动

We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:00 am and take a bus to the farm.We will spend around two hours experiencing the lives of farmers and taking some meaning activities such as picking up vegetables,watering the plants.Of course,safety is the most important.Never walk along the river,and never leave our class.We are supposed to help each other.Besides,we will have a big lunch at the farmers’. I believe we will have a great time.

2017闸北区初三英语一模作文范文篇三

2017人教版中考英语作文热点话题和例文

2017中考英语作文题目（热门话题）大全

中考英语作文培训

中考英语作文阅卷三个标准：

1） 结构 2）内容要点

3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。 中考作文审题五个步骤：（定时态——定结构——正确句型）

审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生，我要说的是审题一定要做到四个方面

一审主题（写什么），

二审人称（用什么人称写）

三审体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议），

四审时态（时态中考两个错误扣一分，三个降一档）， 五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时 候忘记，导致跑题）

中考满分作文五个关键点： ―结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！‖

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，结构十分清晰。“观点（总）——要点（分）——总结（总）”让人一目了然。

三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，

第二段：分2-3点说明。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论，要有升华。

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点， 要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文 章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词 等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, so far, as far as

表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally

表因果的过渡语

for, because of, one reason is that… another reason is that…, so, as a result (of)

表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact,

表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, and so on

表推进的过渡语

:what’s more, on one hand… on the other hand…, not only…but also…,besides,

表总结的过渡语:

in short, in a word, in general,

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬 性的。如，单词的使用，时态，人称等。

亮点：

当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要

点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful, good-looking, B 篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。但是对于写作基础不是很好的同学，切不要因为追求―亮点‖而用―错句，错词‖，以稳妥为重！

英语作文万能句子 段首句

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that____. There is an old saying______.

2. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。 Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like______ Because ______. Besides，______.

3.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages. 4人类正面临着一个严重的问题…，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ..., which is becoming more and more serious.

5.如今，人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...。

Nowadays，it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...

6.―如同硬币的正反面，...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。

Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...

7.―随着...的快速增长，...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。

Along with the rapid growth of ..., ...has become increasingly important in our daily

8列举时可以用

First of all, 首先 secondly,其次 beside, 另外 what's more, 另外 last but not least 最后的但不是不重要的

【话题一：二胎】

假如你是初中生李华，在家是独生子女，国家开放二孩政策后，你的父母想再生一个孩子，征求你的意见。恰好你的美国笔友Peter来信询问我国的二孩政策。你给他回一封信，内容要点如下：

1. 简单解释国家二孩政策；

2．得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；

3．征求Peter的看法。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入字数。

Dear Peter,

I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in

China._______________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________.

Yours

Li Hua

【参考范文】

The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child? As you have a younger sister, did you have similar problems?What’s your opinion about this?

【话题二：安全自救】

【参考范文①】

Although our parents are trying their best to prevent us from difficulties, teenagers have to learn how to protect ourselves. I remember once I was doing shopping by myself. And a robbery happened. I was

frightened. But I know that only by calming down can I got through it. So I hid under a shelf and called the police. A few minutes later,the policemen rushed into the store and saved everyone. That was an extremely unforgettable experience of my life. Sometimes life gets in the way and dangerous things are all over the world. Learning how to protect myself is very essential.

【参考范文②】

安全对于每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点，请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。

内容提示：

1. 交通安全:遵守交通规则,不闯红绿灯等；

2. 食品安全:吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品等；

3. 活动安全:进行体育锻炼时,不要弄伤自己,不私自下河游泳等。

作文要求:

1. 词数:100词左右。正文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 作文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；

3. 作文句型有变化，有复合句。

参考词汇：焦点：focus 遵守： obey 交通规则：traffic rules...

Safety is very important to everyone.Middle school students are flowers of our country, so students’ safety is becoming the focus to us all.

First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food.Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs.Besides, don’t hurt ourselves while we are playing. It’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don’t go to the river without permission.

In a word, it’s important to remember these for us all.

【参考范文③】

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.

First,we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.

In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

【话题三：校园暴力】

近年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学初三8班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华，以―How to protect ourselves in campus violence‖为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容：

1．校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注。

2．要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力。

3．遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警。

注意：1．词数120左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。{2017闸北区初三英语一模作文范文}.

参考词汇：增强—enhance

How to protect ourselves in campus violence

Dear friends,

This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad

results.____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

【参考范文①】

Dear friends,

This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. The

incidents of campus violence have drawn widespread attention in our country. As a student, we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection.

Of course, if we meet the violence, we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves. At first, we’d better keep calm, judge the situation and be aware of the possible dangers. Then, we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence. At last but not least, we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury.

That’s all. Thank you.

【参考范文②】

There is a piece of news that makes me shocked. It is said that there happened a violent event in

campus which cause 4students injured and 2 dead. Some reasons arouse in this event. First, schools should try to avoid things like this, if the students are injured or dead, the schools have responsibility to them;

second, families, especially parents should educate their children well, give them a good guide and take care of them; third, the society should control violent events. If the above three try their best and pay enough attention to them, things like this should be avoided.

话题四 学术文化篇

1.沉迷网络游戏

题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。

提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

★ 范文

2017闸北区初三英语一模作文范文篇四

2017年高考英语作文范文10篇

2017年高考英语作文范文10篇

高考英语满分作文一般胜在行文清晰、准确、简洁三点，这就是公认的英语满分作文―黄金三定律‖。为保证所写文章清晰明了，一是越确切具体越好，二是组织结构富有逻辑性。为让读者更好地理解所传递的信息，使用英文进行写作时，行文一定要注意做到清晰、准确、简洁这三点。下面小编为各位整理了2017年高考英语作文范文20篇，供各位考生参考阅读。

高考英语作文范文：(1)

假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。 内容包括：1.认为同学们不必为此烦恼 2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 3.建议与父母进行交流沟通

范文： Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,

Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there‘s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we‘d like to trust them .If you don‘t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .

Thank you!

(2)

假定你是李华，在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I‘m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?

写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。

范文： Hi, TigerMom ,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .{2017闸北区初三英语一模作文范文}.

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were

expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .

So I suggest that you take your friends‘ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .

(3)

假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情景，主要内容如下：

1.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介绍你处理该事的方式 3.谈谈你的感想

范文：

Dear zhuanghua ,

It‘s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .

On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him

come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named ―mother‖ for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .

From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I‘m looking forward to your reply .

Yours truly ,

Li Hong

(4)

假设你程光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国的某中学的访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排其在天津的活动。请根据提示，给美国的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动安排并简要说明理由，最后征求对方的意见。 1.上午与我校学生座谈(如校园文化，文化差异)2.中午与我校同学共进午餐(饺子，面条等) 3.下午和我校学生游览海河。

范文： Dear Mr. Smith ,

I am Lihua ,chairman of the student