小学作文 点击: 2012-05-25
2017考研英语:满分作文要怎么写?
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研途宝以2014考研英语一大作文的满分作文为栗子,让广大考生抓住复习方向
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This picture, which illustrates the importance of love and help between parents and children, consists of two drawings. The first drawing shows what a mother and a daughter were like 30 years ago. The second drawing , in contrast , shows what the mother and the daughter are like now. The mother was taking the daughter’s hand in the first drawing while the daughter is aiding the mother in the second.
第一段作者非常朴实的描写了图画内容,没有过难的词汇;逻辑清晰:段落总分总,首句为主题句,二三句分述,最后一句总结。亮点还在于句型多变。首句一个简单句添加插入结构,三句也同样使用插入语,实现华丽变身。本篇文章由两图构成,使用的”in contrast”,”while” 同学们应该学习。
What is intended to show in the picture is clear: parents should help their children when the latter are young, and the children, when growing up, should take care of their parents who have by now grown old. This is what makes a family.
二段详细阐释图画含义:父母与子女之间应该相携。值得学习的地方是要变换说法,避免单调重复。
Impacted by the change in lifestyles, China is witnessing some kind of disintegration or loosing of ties in family relationship。 Yet, the love between parents and children is not only eternal, but the basic component of a healthy society. Only upon the solid
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foundation of domestic well being can the skyscraper of social progress be built; but if that be loosening, the construction upon it, however towering and glorious, would fall inevitably into debris. Love your parents and love your children.
三段提出了自己的建议和评论。句型更加丰富多样,不仅采用插入结构(最后一句),首句采用过去分词,第三句采用only半倒装句。
总之,满分作文多能够紧扣思想,行文逻辑非常清晰,表达地道,句型结构丰富多变。希望同学们认真学习此篇满分档作文,争取在不久的考试中拔得头筹,取得胜利!
2017年考研英语一小作文点评及范文
2017年考研英语一小作文点评及范文
今年英语一的小作文不出预料,再一次考查到了推荐信。在英语一的考试当中,推荐信已经考查过两年了。例如我们英语一在2011年就考查过向你的朋友推荐一部电影。具体题目要求是Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and;2) give reasons for your recommendation. 2015年考察的是you are going to hold a club reading session. Write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members.You should state reasons for your recommendation. 而今年的作文题目要求给新来的澳大利亚国籍教授James Cook介绍你城市的tourist attraction。因此,考生不用惊慌只要把2011年或2015年的小作文,主要是推荐原因部分,稍作修改即可成文。这就启发我们2018届的同学们要高度重视历年真题,因为考过的话题或是书信类型会反复考查。 那么今年的作文具体该如何来写呢?今年考题的Direction要求向新来的James Cook教授推荐旅游景点。根据题目的要求,我们可以判断本文为公务信函,语域为正式语域,即不能出现缩写、省略问句和和口语表达。
称呼: Dear Prof. James Cook, 注意称呼中,Prof后面的句点不能丢,称呼最后的逗号号不可丢,也不能写成冒号。当然如果称呼不写Prof. 写成Mr. James Cook 也是可以的。 正文
第一段:写作内容需涵盖两点:1:欢迎Cook 教授来中国;2:写信目的,表明推荐。 用到了这样的表达Welcome to China. I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you one of my favorite scenic spot- Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.
第二段: 写作内容为推荐原因。可以从三个角度来考虑:美景、美食和热情的人们。用到了这样的表达:I think you must like it for the reasons as follows. To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on. In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street. Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.
第三段:再次强调写信目的。Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you. I am sure you will enjoy it. 最后,表达祝福 Best wishes for you!
落款: Yours sincerely, 特别提醒sincerely后面逗号不能丢;
签名: Li Ming特别注意 Ming 后面一定不能出现句点。 落款和前面左、右对齐都可以。
参考范文:
Dear Prof. James Cook,
Welcome to China. I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you
one of my favorite scenic spot—Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.
I think you must like it for the reasons as follows. To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on. In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street. Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.
Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you. I am sure you will enjoy it. Best wishes for you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2017考研英语作文环境类范文
2017考研英语作文环境类范文
作文预测
大作文话题类型:1. 抽象品质; 2. 社会现象类 3. 社会问题类
预测话题包括:1. 网络类(网购、微博、微信等新现象);2. 抽象品质类(梦想与行动、创新、 诚信等)3. 环境类(节约型社会、交通状况、动物/资源保护等)4. 社会现象类(剽窃,明星代言、真人秀等)
预测作文范文
环境类(交通状况、动物/资源保护、节约型社会等){2017考研作文范文}.
(Common as it is, the above picture has deep implication). As is vividly shown in the cartoon, at least five patients are staying in one hospital who are injured because of jay-walking, driving after drinking and disregarding of the laws. If we take a closer watch, it is of little difficulty to find that one police is patiently explicating the traffic laws to one injured person, sitting at a wheel chair which is pushed by one nurse.
There is no doubt that it describes a common phenomenon in our society that traffic problems are increasingly severe. What might trigger this affair? (For my part, the following two are of utmost importance.) For one part, the general public have failed to realize the importance of abiding by the traffic regulations and laws(and a big deal of the attention have been distracted by the so-called“great affair”). Once some drivers easily disregard the traffic signals, so do other drivers who intend to obey the laws. Moreover, the current state of affairs depicted in the drawing, may have been encouraged, though not justified, by the lack of severe legal penalty. If someone does disorderly parking or drive under the influence of alcohol, the punishment is not so harsh that the drivers could afford to learn a heavy lesson from the fine. (If we let this situation continue as it is, ultimately, our society will suffer a great destruction.){2017考研作文范文}.
It is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this current evil trend. On one hand, we should cultivate the awareness of people that everyone needs to reflect on his or her uncivilized conducts and strengthen his self-discipline. On the other hand, it is high time that more severe and sound laws and regulations should be introduced to harness and curb this matter. Only in this way, can we crack the hard nut and embrace a bright future.
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范文一:
A thought-provoking dialogue between the mother elephant and her own child appears in the first picture. Having growing his teeth, the young elephant is eager to share the exciting news with his mother. However, after repeating his words several times, there is still no response coming from the mother. Meanwhile, the attractive caption in the second photo reads: no trade, no kill. The above pictures unveil a hazard posed to wildlife due to the expanding scale of world commercial hunting. At least two fundamental factors could contribute to this phenomenon. The industry of commercial hunting have undergone a booming expansion (along with the growing public awareness of the merits of wildlife, which makes/), making hunting unusually profitable. Worse still, lacking knowledge regarding the significance of ecological balance, some people take the gun to chase animals insatiably (and thus cause a severe threat to all life in the world). Apparently, this trend will surely in turn endanger humankind in the long run.
(On no account should we turn a blind eye to such things.//All these factors above make it crucial to take drastic measures to protect the wildlife.) Accordingly, governments all over the world are supposed to unite to work out effective measures against commercial hunting. Additionally, people should be educated from childhood to cultivate the awareness that we and the rare wild animals share the same precious planet. I do believe a harmonious relationship between the wildlife and human beings is awaiting us if we make every effort to promote wildlife protection both nationally and internationally.
范文二:
The drawing does mirror a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking. According to the above photo, a couple of elephants are walking forward slowly while the young elephant says to his mother, “Mom, my tusks start to grow up!
But mom, why aren’t you happy about that?” What is conveyed carries the message of the human’s threat on the wild animals by catching and killing.
A host of reasons may make this happen. To start with, an army of hunters have been killing rare wild animals just to make huge profits. That is the very reason why the mother elephant does not glad to hear that her son’s ivory growing. Another significant cause of the rapid reduction of wildlife is the disappearance of their natural habitats. Because of the fast advancing of urbanization, animals are forced to give up their original places and move to another site which may not be as good as before.
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Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic and effective measures to protect the wildlife. On the one hand, we can appeal to the government to make some strict laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. On another level, we must enhance citizen's awareness that loving the nature is everybody's responsibility. Only through these measures are we able to have
opportunities to expect a beautiful world and a promising prospect to come.
What is explicitly demonstrated in the above caricature is that there sits an individual by the river bank, fully equipped with a protective mask, who is fishing in the acid rain with an umbrella in his right hand. It is not difficult to notice that what he got from the highly polluted river is a fishbone rather than a real one and noxious gases are pouring into the sky continuously which is already dusky.
What might trigger this phenomenon? Previously, it is widely admitted that the authorities concerned have failed to enact strict legislations and regulations to curb environmental detriment, which has exerted negative impact on the daily life of the average folks. Simultaneously, there is no denying that citizens lack of awareness of protecting the surroundings we are living in, which are vital to us. Ultimately, another contributory factor to this situation is that some folks are tempted by the economic motivation so that they put the environment at risk. .
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend. To begin with, relevant laws should be made to severely punish those who deliberately destruct the environment. In addition, the awareness of the public should be cultivated that guarding the circumstance we are dwelling in is protecting our own homeland. Only by enforcing these actions, can we effectively, efficiently and eventually crack this hard nut and embrace a promising community.
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What is vividly revealed in the picture is that water is being reused in daily life at home. After washing rice, the water can be used to wash vegetables and then clean the mop and the toilet. What a harmonious scene it is!
It is not difficult to find that what the picture intends to express is the importance of saving and protecting resources. On the one hand, as we all know, water resource is limited and water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being. On the other hand, the phenomenon of wasting water can still be easily found anywhere in our daily life. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it o that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious water is that we cannot afford to waste it. Water resource is not only indispensable in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. It is hard to imagine what the world would be like when there I is no more water.
It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention. But, this is not adequate. As is shown in the above picture, what we need is more actions to save and protect resources! First of all, social environment is shaped by the general public, and the cultivation of conservation-minded society depends on the active involvement of every member of our society, be he old or young. Accordingly, an education campaign should be launched to call on people from all walks of life to save and protect resources. In addition, saving and protecting resources is bound up with our daily life. We, college students, should spare no efforts to save valuable energy and natural resources such as power, water, coal, gas and so on. Only by the joint efforts of the whole society can we create a real conservation-minded society.
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2017考研英语作文话题练习及范文汇总{2017考研作文范文}.
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2017年考研联考中文写作备考指南
2017年考研联考中文写作备考指南
以下是凯程考研逻辑写作教研室名师为2017考研的同学们分享的联考中文写作全年复习规,写作要拿到理想的分数,所以要在开始做好规划。
一、联考与中文写作 (一)联考简介
我们参加的联考指的是,管理类联考和经济类联考两种考试。其中管理类联考是为招收包括MBA、MPA、MPACC、MTA、MEM等在内的硕士而设置的;经济类联考是为招收包括金融硕士、应用统计硕士、税务硕士、国际商务硕士、保险硕士及资产评估硕士而设置的。 管理类联考包括两张试卷,四个科目,其中英语(二)满分100分,考试时间180分钟;综合能力测试试卷由数学、逻辑、中文写作三科组成,满分200分,考试时间同样为180分钟。
经济类联考包括三张试卷,英语(一)满分100分,考试时间180分钟;综合能力测试试卷由数学、逻辑、中文写作三科组成,满分150分,考试时间同样为180分钟。另外还需要考政治及专业课。
(二)综合考试与写作 管理类联考
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综合能力考试中的写作部分主要考查考生的分析论证能力和文字表达能力,通过论证有效性分析和论说文两种形式来测试。 1.论证有效性分析
论证有效性分析试题的题干为一段有缺陷的论证,要求考生分析其中存在的问题,选择若干要点,评论该论证的有效性。
本类试题的分析要点是:论证中的概念是否明确,判断是否准确,推理是否严密,论证是否充分等。
文章要求分析得当,理由充分,结构严谨,语言得体。 2.论说文
论说文的考试形式有两种:命题作文、基于文字材料的自由命题作文。每次考试为其中一种形式。要求考生在准确、全面地理解题意的基础上,对命题或材料所给观点进行分析,表明自己的观点并加以论证。文章要求思想健康,观点明确,论据充足,论证严密,结构合理,语言流畅。
三、中文写作复习建议
复习的基本思路:基础知识+真题+练习。复习可以分以下四个阶段进行: 基础阶段:7月之前
对两类题型有初步的认识。对论证有效性分析进行批判性思维专项训练,即怀疑论据的真实性和论证过程是否具有必然性,给出理由,形成120字的段落。论说文此阶段的复习重点放在审题立意和材料积累两个方面。 强化阶段:7月 - 8月
每周保证写一篇论证有效性分析和论说文(从2003年的真题开始)。
每写一篇文章前,把我们所学的中文写作的基础知识复习一遍,然后合上笔记和书本,独立完成写作。写完后对照真题解析和范文,查找不足。这个阶段注重质量,速度其次。 提高阶段:9月 — 11月
再一次梳理真题,每一位考生在上考场之前要保证真题至少写过3遍,一遍遍构建、调整、完善自己的写作思路。最好保证每周2套真题,每套时间控制在50—60分钟。这个阶段,主要是提升写作速度,达到质量与速度都合乎要求。 模考阶段:12月
这一阶段核心任务是梳理知识点,实战演练。
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2017考研英语二小作文范文分享
2017考研英语二小作文范文分享
作文预测
应用文考察类型:书信
预测书信种类:建议信、道歉信、邀请信、请求信、推荐信、祝贺信
预测作文范文
书信作文预测:建议信、道歉信、请求信、询问信、邀请信、申请信
建议信、道歉信、邀请信、请求信、推荐信、祝贺信{2017考研作文范文}.
建议信
Write a letter to your university canteen, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET .
Dear Sir or Madam,{2017考研作文范文}.
I am a student of our university, who often have meals in our canteen. Generally speaking, our canteen provides quite good food. However, I still have some suggestions for you to make our canteen more popular among students.
To begin with, I wonder whether you could provide more varieties of food. We do not have many options when eating in our canteen now. To continue, some students have complained about the price of the food there, would you please lower it down?
I do hope to have a better canteen. And I would be highly grateful if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
道歉信
Suppose you have accepted Mr. Zhang’s invitation to dinner, but you have to change your plan for some reasons. Write a letter in about 100 words to make an apology to him.
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I sincerely thank you for inviting me to dinner in your house next Sunday.
However, now, much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have just been caught serious cold, which requires me to take a rest for a long time. And I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you. If I get better during this time, I will be there on time.
I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying the perfect dishes with friends. Besides, please give my regards to Mr. and Mrs. Rogers when they come to dinner.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
邀请信
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually:
1) Invite them to the party,
2) Elaborate on the reason why such a party should be held,
3) What activities will be arranged for them.
Dear friends,
I will hold a dinner party at my house on April 2, 2015 to celebrate Mr. Old Fish's marriage with Miss Diana. As you are my closest friends of us, we would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy.
The occasion will start at seven o'clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.
If you do not have any prior appointment on April 2, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
推荐信
Directions
One of your students, Liu Ming, wants to study for the master's degree under the supervision of Professor Smith in an oversea university, you are asked to write a letter of recommendation for him in about 100 words.
Dear Prof. Smith,
I am writing to you to recommend one of my best students, Liu Ming, who wants to pursue his graduate study for a master's degree under your supervision.
Liu Ming was an excellent student in our university as can be seen from his straight A grades on all subjects. He has passed the TOTEL test, indicating a good command of his English. More importantly, during the time he worked as my research assistant from July, 2010 to September, 2012, he had displayed great enthusiasm and intelligence on academic research.
I believe with his diligence, intelligence and great passion, Liu Ming has great potential in his future academic pursuits. Therefore, I recommend him to you without any reservation. I am ready to provide any further information upon your request.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
祝贺信
Directions
You heard that Lucy, one of your best friends has been admitted to his dreamed university. Write an e-mail to him to express you congratulations to him in about 100 words.
Dear Lucy,
I am very glad to hear that you have been admitted to Beijing University. Congratulations! Your long-cherished dream has finally come true.
I really think that you deserve the success. You have been working so hard in preparing for the entrance exam in the past years. All your time and energy was devoted to the hard study. Now your diligence and devotion have been repaid.
I do believe that you will achieve one success after another on this new stage. And I am looking forward to hearing more good news from you. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming