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中考语文万能作文
[中考语文万能作文]
010年广东中考作文那天我捡到快乐的钥匙写作指导中山市坦洲中学 林凡题解:钥匙,一般都是锁的心脏,只要有锁,就可以打开大门,寻觅所有的神奇,中考语文万能作文。在这里,钥匙具有比喻义,喻指打开快乐之门的方法或方式。其实在我们的周围,有很多写作的题材,只要我们细心留心一下就能发现!要点指导:一、要抓住题眼快乐二字做文章。既然你是以快乐为主要的题眼,那么你用钥匙打开的就是在你心里觉得是能使你开心、高兴的、一直想要得到的东西。也可以是在某一次你受到了挫折、失败,你的朋友一直在你的身边鼓励你、帮助你、支持你重振信心,帮你排除周围重重的高山,开辟新的天地,等等。二、要留意题目背后的言外之意。那天,我捡到了快乐的钥匙,言外之意是:以前我没有找到让自己快乐的方法或方式,以前的自己比较多烦恼,并且深受困惑,通过那天的那事之后,才豁然开朗,在不经意中捡到了打开快乐之门的钥匙。三、要注意使用细节描写,尤其是心理的细节描写。在捡到这把钥匙之前,自己的心理如何,捡到时的心理又如何,捡到后又有什么感想。心理描写越细腻,越能流露真情实感,以情动人。四、要使用以下技巧,才能拿到高分:环境描写,烘托气氛;叙议结合,画龙点睛,深化主题;前后对比,突出中心;排比式的结尾,增强文章的气势,深化主题。下是范文:【由于是命题作文,所以题目全部相同】那天,我捡到了快乐的钥匙中山市坦洲中学 林凡【范文一】那天,我捡到了快乐的钥匙我的房间与父亲的卧室隔了一道门。有很长一段时间了,我从未主动开过那扇门,因为我和父亲的共同语言实在少得可怜,而心与心之间的距离,也是远得好像没有边际。对此,我固执地认为,这就是代沟的表现形式。那是前几天,班里开了一个班会,主题就是如何打开快乐之门,并规定每人对此进行一次较为详细的调查。这可让我犯了难,我可不愿去问老爸究竟怎么做,可作为班干部,又不允许我敷衍了事。回家后,正赶上开饭时间,一家三口坐在一起,我试着张了几次嘴,可一想到每次交谈都会不欢而散,甚至闹得连饭都吃不成,话到嘴边又强咽了下去。说起来都不是什么大事,有时我也感到不可理解,自己和爸爸为什么会为一些事不关己的事大动肝火呢?爸爸会瞪着眼说:这都是为你好!什么为我好,纯粹就是不允许我有思考的自由嘛!今天拖明天,明天拖后天,距交这篇讨论稿的时间越来越近了,我心中想的还是那些和父亲争吵的画面,作文素材《中考语文万能作文》。 ◆分享好文◆父亲的屋门伸手可及,几次人都站在门口了,就是没有信心为自己打开。门的那边,父亲也不知在写什么,我的心思不知他注意到没有?第二天,由于成人考试要占用我们的教室,我们提前放学回家。路过菜市场,看到父母正在买菜,还没等我走上前去,他们的话就像长了腿似的跑到我的耳朵里来:这东西孩子不太爱吃,是不是不买了?妈妈拿着木耳,有些为难地说。买,买,报上说这里面稀有元素多,让孩子适当吃点有好处。说着,爸爸便掏出钱来。我知道木耳很贵,可爸爸并不因为我不爱吃就不买,他此时考虑的是我需不需要这些营养,可我在吃这些东西时,怎么就不去考虑营养这一因素呢?并由此联想到爸爸那不怎么入耳的说教,是不是也有我需要的营养在里面呢?晚上,我又走到那扇门前,主动地打开了那扇门。那天,我和父亲谈了许多,父亲告诉我说:打开快乐之门的办法,最关键是要了解对方,然后是理解对方&&后来,我顺利写完了那篇稿子,我清楚记得那篇稿子的第一句是:敞开心扉,用心感悟,快乐不是高高在上,遥不可及的东西。快乐是一种心态,是一种处世的心态&&我很高兴,那天,我终于找到了打开快乐之门的钥匙【范文二】那天,我捡到了快乐的钥匙我环顾四周,心灵的小屋早已落满尘埃。我孤独地在这里生活,阴冷早已侵占我的大脑。在这个世界上,我看到的,只有人与人之间的勾心斗角、相互摧残,所以,我把自己禁闭在心灵的小屋中。我从懂事起,一直在忍受着孤寂的煎熬,我不想看到人们那丑恶的面孔,不想,永远不想&&目光落到那把锁上,那上面,已满是黑褐色的锈。是它,彻底锁住了我的心灵。我发现门缝中塞入一张纸条,于是我便轻轻地捡起它。上面写着:太多的眼泪,只能使你的心灵变成一片沼泽。太多的忧愁,
只能使你更加孤独!其实不必把自己禁闭在心灵的小屋中,打开那扇紧锁的门,你会发现,世界到处充满阳光。我从口袋中拿出那把锈迹斑斑的钥匙,颤抖着把它插进锁孔中。啪,伴随着锁的滑落,东方第一缕阳光射入这间尘封的小屋,刺痛了我的眼睛。我试着走出了这间小屋,温暖的阳光笼罩着我的全身,我感到心中的那块冰开始慢慢融化,那颗冰冷的心也开始变得火热。这种感觉曾是那么的可望而不可即!当全身变暖后,我揉揉被刺痛的眼睛,开始慢慢地观察这个世界:马路上秩序井然,人们扶老携幼,相互谦让;公园里,人们悠闲散步,小草花儿争取拥抱更多的阳光,屋檐下,老人躺在竹椅上,尽情享受阳光的沐浴,操场上,小朋友们在阳光下自由自在的奔跑&&我发现,原来一切都如此美好!我来到大地的怀抱中,与马共同奔跑,和鱼一起游泳,聆听小鸟在唱歌,看鹰在天空飞翔,然后大声喊:啊&&把积压在心灵底层的苦闷全部发泄出来。我又发现,学会快乐如此简单!这时,一个声音朝我大喊:到人群中来吧!到蓝天中来吧!到大地中来吧!不要让阴冷的心灵封锁着你,放飞自己,打开那扇紧锁的门,敞开心扉,去拥抱阳光,也许你会大喊:世界如此美丽!我高兴,那天,我捡到了快乐的钥匙!
中考语文高分作文万能开头
中考语文高分作文万能开头
作文是语文考试的重头戏,几乎一半的分值就表明了它的分量。它的成败极大程度上影响着语文的成败,而语文的成败又牵动着全局。所以洞悉中考作文写作技巧,提高写作表达能力,成为众多学子的迫切愿望。在此,结合历年月考及期中期末统考的考场作文中学生的优秀写作范例,就中考作文的开头,提几点建议供大家参考。
例1:起点对于人生有一种神圣的美。是这种美,给了人前进的动力,力量的源泉,进取的心灵,搏击的勇气。一个个新的起点,如同缀连着的美丽的珍珠,延伸着生命的价值与辉煌。(《起点之美》)
例2:当小树从黝黑湿润的土地破壳而出的那一刻,它知道,是土地给予了它生命。于是,它便跨过重重艰难险阻,想要长成参天大树,来报答他的土地母亲。心存感激,我们就能像这棵小树一样,跨过生命中种种沟壑。(《心存感激》)
点评:文章开门见山,直奔主题,统摄全文,有提纲挈领之功效。
在考场上,好的开头大多是言简意明的。它的目的在于给人以清楚明白而又不同凡响的印象,激发阅卷人强烈的阅读欲望。但是由于考场作文的写作,受时间和篇幅的限制,所以一般以开门见山,落笔入题为好,让人一读开头,便能感受到你的观点、思想或者情感。切忌故弄玄虚、兜圈子,有意让人捉摸不透,进入“迷魂阵”,不愿将意思直截了当地写出来。仿佛这就是文章新颖巧妙的所在,见水平、见功力的地方。其实这种故弄玄虚的作法,恰恰是写作的弊病。
就字数来讲,开头结尾不宜过长,一般说来,标准的考场作文纸,100字左右即足够,三四行左右为宜。
技巧二:文采斐然,引人入胜
例3:从山川,到大河,从古诗,到俗语。生活中无处不体现着语文的存在。思壮阔,则有金戈铁马,虎峰烟举;想清新,则有小桥流水,江南红杏;说凄婉,则有泪洒潇湘,秦淮风月;论哲思,则有庐山真面,柳暗花明„„语文,轻轻地来到我的身边,又轻轻地从我身边走过。(《语文从我身边轻轻走过》)
例4:大韵中华,浩浩五千年文明;大情华夏,荡荡九百万平方。纵横贯古今,捭阖通南北。韵海情天,诗词传承了中国人的血脉,顶起了中国人的脊梁。(《韵海情天》)
点评:这两则开头,巧用排比和对偶,读起来朗朗上口,韵味十足。文采飞扬,而且从大处落笔,气势磅礴,直率刚健的语言风格,显示出了深厚的语言功底,让人为之一震,激发了强烈的阅读兴趣。例3中古典诗词的恰当引用,增强了文章的表现力。有关的古典诗句,信手拈来,挥洒自如,内容充盈,语言有意蕴,彰显了文化品位。
例5:廊内的春风轻轻拂过,窗外的绿色流光溢彩,我的视线不由被你的风采吸引,走近你,我的心顿时轻舞飞扬。莺雀嬉闹,彩蝶飞舞,雁排长空,虎啸深山。大海上一片静谧,在我们的脚下,波浪轻轻吻着岩石,像朦胧欲睡似的,在平静而深黯的海面上,月光辟开了一款狭长的明亮的灯,闪闪地颤动着,银鳞一般,远处灯塔上红光镶在黑暗之间,像一颗红玉。(《别样青春年华》)
点评:开头清婉亮丽,纤美多姿,流光溢彩,美不胜收。这样的开头,给全文营造了一股浓浓的抒情氛围,充满诗情画意。
练就好的语言,犹如拥有一把锋利的武器,让自己的作文在考场上纵情驰骋、所向披靡。短短的阅卷时间,一般也就3分钟左右,如何吸引评卷人的眼球?对于初中生的思维能力和表达能力来讲,语言是最大的突破口。所以在语言上下功夫是写作的重中之重。在
平时应该多积累好词佳句,在潜移默化中提高语言表达能力。要让作文扮靓,尽力给语言美美容。
技巧三:巧用修辞,增强文采。
例6:人生的乐趣莫过于微笑着面对一切,它缘自佛祖拈花微笑的智慧,于是,微笑便成了一种态度,一种领悟,一种修行。因为它,你可以自信而不傲慢,悲伤而不颓废,年老而不僵化,青春而不轻狂„„(《微笑着面对
生活》)
例7:语文宛若一束香草,时时浸润着人们的心脾,使人陶醉其中;语文宛若一阵小雨,时时甜美着人们的心扉,使人们迷醉其中;语文宛若一根支柱,时时支撑着人们的心灵,使人们沉醉其中。这就是语文,它总是轻轻地从人家身边走过,从我的身边走过。(《语文从我身边轻轻走过》)
例8:小时候,父母把一位老人领到我身边,告诉我他叫语文。我打量着他,他满头白发,却老当益壮,风采丝毫不输年轻人。后来我才知道他已经上千岁了,从夏商西周到21世纪,他脑中的智慧一辈子也听不完,于是我央他授予我智慧。(《语文从我身边轻轻走过》)
点评:修辞是语言运用中不可缺少的部分。巧妙而又贴切的修辞手法的运用常能使语言增添许多风采。在考场作文中,考生若能熟练运用修辞手法扮靓语言,定能得到良好的效果。上面几例中,例6运用排比手法,例7运用比喻、排比手法,例8采用拟人手法,生动地阐述了自己的观点,抒发了自己内心的真实情感,语言亮丽多彩,读之令人耳目一新。开头如此不凡,自然会给阅卷老师一个良好的印象。
技巧四:巧妙发问,引人深思
例9:老实说,刚看到这个题目,我心里有点犯难。微笑着面对生活,现在的初三生活中,课本如高山,习题如海洋,生活已把我们压得气喘吁吁,疲惫不堪了,又如何让我们微笑着面对生活呢?(《微笑着面对生活》) 例10:微笑很美,它胜过世上任何其他表情。蒙娜丽莎的微笑宁静神秘;奥黛丽·赫本的微笑清丽亲切;茱丽叶·罗伯茨的微笑自信并充满活力„„面对这些微笑,我不仅要问:她们的微笑为什么美?(《微笑着面对生活》) 点评:欣赏一支优美的乐曲,曲虽终但余音缭绕,给人留下无穷的韵味。同样一篇好的文章也应该做到言有尽而意无穷,要有启发性。例9从学生生活的实例出发,对题目提出了质疑,这样反而能激发人的阅读兴趣,想看看作者独特的想法,自然也就吸引人阅读下去;例10开门见山,在列举了数个名人迷人而倾倒众生的微笑之后,提出了疑问“微笑为什么那么美”,巧妙地扣题,并激发人的想象空间和阅读欲望。
技巧五:广泛引用,多姿多彩
例11:古人说“会当凌绝顶,一览众山小”;哲人说“站得越高,看得越远”;而我说“半山腰”的风景独好。因为它展现的是过程中的美丽。(《半山腰的风景》)
例12:在短暂的生命里寻找永恒。柏拉图如是说。——题记。(《翅膀载梦向远方》)
例13:滚滚长江东逝水,浪花淘尽英雄,是非成败转头空。青山依旧在,几度夕阳红„„(《英雄·诗》) 点评:让语言美起来,引用不失为一个良策。古今中外,名言佳句、俗语谚语很多,若能巧妙引用,定能使文章增色许多。这里列举几例分别引用了诗文佳句、名人言论,还有影视剧歌词,既增添了文采,还可以加深文章的意境或者增添思想的深度。
技巧六:首尾呼应,凸显主旨
例14:(首)时间流逝,光阴飞转。十四岁的春秋,我已与父母走遍数载花开花落。从我生命的始初以同一速度不可挽回地向未来飞速冲刺。待偶尔停驻,才发现:季节轮替的十四年里,我一直与父母同行。苍老的,是岁月,是父母;而与之相反的,我长大了。
(尾)我想我们还会一直走更长的岁月,大概要有他们的一辈子那么长。我们会感叹时光荏苒,岁月如梭。以后的几十载,我与父母同行。苍老的,是岁月,是人;而不变的,是爱。(《我与父母同行》)
点评:首尾呼应是考场作文中最实用的方法之一,一般情况是作者先在开头提出文章的中心,然后在结尾时再次强调,照应开头,从而使文章的中心鲜明突出。例14中,开头和结尾都用朴实而深情的语言,将绵绵的亲情娓娓道来,虽然不是文采斐然,可字里行间的浓浓的真情使得本文情思饱满,而且首尾的最后一个长句,都用了相同的句式,仅仅是用词的巧妙变换,形成了前后照应,激起了内心的感动、深情的勃发与和情感的共鸣,凸现了本文的主旨——和父母一生同行,永生相爱。
以上几点是我在平日的教学和学生的练笔中所感所得。并非“灵丹妙药”,也不是什么“高分秘籍”,
中考英语万能作文模板(超级背诵版)
百思特教育中考英语万能作文模板(超级背诵版)
中考英语作文万能模板:阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.
2. 分析并举例使其更充实. 一、中考英语作文万能模板:解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)( 这两个变换的词要记住)
Confronted with _ A, we should take a serious of effective measures to cope with the situation.(我们应该采取措施认真对待) For one thing, ---------------(解决方法
一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).( 这三个变换的词要记住)
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). In a word , I’m confident that a bright future is a waiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
二、中考英语作文万能模板:说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A(事物) because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.
----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides.(事物都有两面性) The negative aspects are also
A的第一个缺点).The other
hand,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
In a word (总之), I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
So we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, it will be better(对前景的预测).
三、中考英语作文万能模板:议论文的框架
不同观点列举型( 选择型 :你会选A还是B,说说理由)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion is different from person to person. A majority of people think (大多数人认为)that _ 观点一________. There are 2 factors as follows: firstly, ___原因一_______. Secondly , ___原因二_____.
however, People differ in their opinions on this matter. Some
people think that ___观点二_______. On the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also
because _________(不仅因为。。还因为。。). The more _harder______, the more ___better_____.(越努力越好)
四、中考英语作文万能模板:图表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure in the table
(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily
rising/decreasing from______to ______ . From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that
________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there
are
some other reasons. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)
五、中考英语作文万能模板:说明原因型
(一件事情或事物产生影响的原因)
Currently, A has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than A .
It is clear that ( 1 ). If you ( 2 ), as a result ,your dreams will come true . On the contrary(相反), if you ( 3 ).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that(总结的话) .
No one can deny another fact (没有人会否认事实)that ( 4 ) .You donn\'t have to look very far to find out the truth 。 We all know ( 5 ) .
6 ).
For me ,I think (总结全文:题目中观点——某个原因很重要 ).
终极模板:
1、一般原因、事件等:
开头 Currently, 作文题目的议题 has been the order of the day . Many people prefer A(题目中事物) ,because it has a significant role in our daily life.
中间 There are at least two reasons accounting for __题目中事物___. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ . In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.
【如果判断好坏,加上这句Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.(它很好)First -----(A的优点之一). Besides ------(A的优点之二).】
结尾 As far as I am concerned或In a word(总之) , I hold the point of view that __点题____. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)as for me I think that_______.
2、图表或图画:
开头As is shown by the figure in the table , ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (上升或下降)。 From the sharp rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) __作文题目的议题__is serious。
中间Here are at least two good reasons accounting for __点题____. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______. According to reasons, some measures should be taken for __点题____.It is believed that the above mentioned measures are commonly convincing.
结尾 As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that __作文题目的议题_____. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)
注意:一定注意每一句自己写的空格里要结合题目;
一定把字写好,不要乱涂,错了就一笔划掉;
一定把给出的单词用上。
对于提建议的题,一定针对问题中的每一项分别提建议,包括学生、老师、学校、家长
其他人等等。
附加
一、英语书信的常见写作模板(注意格式)
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
举例:
1.最近,你校就学生英语阅读情况做了一次调查,结果不令人满意(见下表)。请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文,并提出一些建议。
注意:1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容,适当增加细节;
2. 建议可面向学生或教师提出,但至少写三条;
3. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数,只需接着写;
4. 词数:80—100个。
参考词汇:合适的suitable 材料material
开头As is shown by the figure in the table , __ students' English reading___ has been on decrease (下降)。 From the information in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) __students' English reading situation__is serious。
中间Here are at least two good reasons accounting for __English reading situation. On the one hand, students aren't very interested in reading. On the other hand,they can't read in right ways. According to reasons, some measures should be taken for _English reading.It is generally believed that the above mentioned measures are commonly convincing.
结尾 As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _we are supposed to spend more time in reading. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)In a word ,(总之)as for me I think that We need to practice reading every day.
原文: [Recently, our school has done a survey of students' English reading situation,(翻译题目中语句) but the results are not pleasing. On the one hand, students aren't very interested in reading. And they can find little time to read because they have too much homework. On the other hand, they can't read in right ways. Besides, there are not enough suitable materials for them to read.
In my opinion, we are supposed to spend more time in reading. We need to practice reading ]every day. As for teachers, I hope, they can give us less homework. What's more,(还有) they had better teach us how to read and provide more suitable materials for us.]
2.假如你是韩梅,对英语兴趣浓厚,但学习起来却很棘手。你知道,中国学生要想学好英语,练就听、说、读、写的技能很关键,掌握枯燥的语法更是必要。对于native speakers来说,是否也如此?因此,你打算
中考英语作文万能模板及万能句型汇总
中考英语作文万能模板及万能句型汇总
(一)各档评分标准:
2分:条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
4分:基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
6分:基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,有一些是严重错误。 8分:切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
10分:切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
(注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分,字数不足应酌情扣分。)
(二)初中英语写作六要素
一、审题要清
看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
二、要点明确
要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。
三、列出提纲
为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下,形成提纲。
四、写顺全文
写短文时要做到五个方面:
1.避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
2.段落分明,层次清晰,文章宁可平平淡淡,也不要漏洞百出。
3.多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等复杂的句型。
4.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法,例如:It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写,例如:fourteen,forty,ninth等不要写成forteen,fourty,nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。
5.描写人物时,要生动具体,可以选择使用下列词汇,例如:外形:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,pretty等;颜色:red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等;心情:glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等;情感:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。
6.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:并列关系:and,as well as,or„;转折关系:but,yet,however„;时间关系:when,while,after,before,then,after that„;因果关系:so,there-fore,asaresult„;目的:in order to,in order that,so as to,so that„;列举:for example ,such as„;总结性:in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking„
五、没有病句
中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:
(1)看字数是否达到要求,看有无遗漏要点。
(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。
(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。
(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错,标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。
(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。
六、先打草稿
考试中,书面表达应做到先打草稿,写完后多读几遍,检查是否有误,然后再抄到试卷上,注意字迹要工整,不涂、不画、不勾不抹,避免不必要的扣分。
(三)各种题型的框架
一、阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2. 分析并举例使其更充实.
二、解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状 2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,
---------------(解决方法一)。 For another -------------(解决方法二)。 Finally, -------------(解决方法三)。 Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法)。 Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because --------------(带来的好处)。
三、说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1.说明事物现状 2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面) 3.你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一)。 Besides -------------------(A的优点之二)。
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore,I would like to ---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
四、议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
五、图表作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
六、现象说明文(新中国成立以来发生了翻天覆地的变化,)
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.
There
what are is many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason a is____________________. more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As result_______________.
Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.
七、一种事物或现象(负面意义倾向)
关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落,都有越来越多的关于A的议论。
给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事,因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言,我们可以这样描述A„
A能成为公众关注的焦点,主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。 认 真分析后我们可以看到,A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先,从最直观的角度来看,A的出现直接损害了(这里加入一句针对性的话,如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡)。(举例)。其次,从更深一层次上讲,它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是,由于A所产生微小利益,却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以,破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。
事实上,A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物,A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时,A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性,他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益,而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此,我奉劝他们,跳出狭小的角落,用
长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。
而如今,我们已深受其害,要想消除它的危害,我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生,我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视,用系统的和科学的方法去解决,唯有这样,避免它带来更多损失,我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳,更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。
八、说明原因型
Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX 。
It is clear that ( 1 )。 If you ( 2 ), as a result,your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you ( 3 ), failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that ( 4 ). You don’t have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know ( 5 ). It will exert a profound influence upon ( 6 ). With reference to my standpoint, I think ( 7 )。
(四)常见文体的模板
一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:{中考万能作文题目}.
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
2016年中考英语万能写作模板
2016年中考英语万能写作模板
1.解决方法题型
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状)。Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一)。 For another -------------(解决方法二)。 Finally, --------------(解决方法三)。
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法)。 Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处)。
2.说明利弊题型
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一)。 Besides -------------------(A的优点之二)。
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点)。To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)。
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)。
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)。)
3.不同观点举例
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic
varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude
as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in
the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.{中考万能作文题目}.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一
或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more
4.利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive
aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To
begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same
time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
5.图表作文的框架{中考万能作文题目}.
_______as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in
_______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
6.现象说明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________, it is true that__________.
There are many reasons explaining__________________________. The main reason is____________________.
2014年全国各省市中考作文题目
2014年全国各省市中考作文题目
2014河北省中考作文题
“衣着与生活息息相关,衣着反映着一个人的性格、修养,衣着背后有着不同的故事,体现着不同的感情、生活状态„„
请以“这样的衣着”为话题,写一篇不少于600字的文章。
2014山西省中考作文题 大作文:记一次语文活动的经历
三年的初中生活丰富多彩,马上就毕业了,在语文课中,我们开展过一些生动的活动,比如汉字大赛、演讲活动、作文比赛、戏剧表演,请你任意选择一次你认为有意义的活动记录下来,并写出自己的感受。题目自拟,文体不限,不少于600字。
小作文:介绍大自然的美景
2014湖北武汉中考作文题{中考万能作文题目}.
_____的趣味
2014湖北黄石中考作文题
二选一:
1.又到一年_______时;
2.电话无人接听
2014湖北襄阳中考作文题
1.半命题作文:与XX同行 2.话题作文:点赞
2014湖南长沙中考作文题
二选一
1.我们一起品味过的
2.不一样的真情
2014年湖南