书面表达英语作文初三

书面表达英语作文初三篇一

最新外研版九年级英语(上)书面表达范文

最新外研版九年级英语（上）书面表达范文

一、从听说读写四方面谈谈你的学习英语的建议。

How to learn English well

English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here is my advice. First, watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English !. It’s good for your listening and pronunciation. Second, try to speak English as much as possible. And you can talk with your classmates in English. Third, it’s a good idea to read English stories. They are very interesting. It’s good for your reading. Finally, why not make some English friends？ you can write to them. If you often do that, I am sure you can improve your English a lot.

二、 以 My hometown 为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。

My hometown

come from Qinzhou， a small beautiful city in the south of China. The population of Qinzhou is over 3 million. Qinzhou is very famous for the white dolphin. Many tourists come to here to see the white dolphin every year. The buildings of Qinzhou are not very tall, and the roads are not very wide ,but they are clean.

Qinzhou is a small city. But it is developing quickly and getting more beautiful. So I love my hometown------Qinzhou.

三． 以我最喜欢的运动为题写一篇文章

1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么 2. 你喜欢这项运动的原因 3. 这项运动和其它运动的不同（比较） 4. 你和这项运动的故事

My favourite sport

f all the sports, I like swimming best. I think nothing is more interesting than swimming. It makes me healthy and strong . And it brings me a lot of fun. In summer, I usually go to swim with my classmates after school. I began to swim when I was 6 years old. I enjoy swimming very much. I often watch swimming match on TV. And I hope to be a swimmer in the Olympic Games .

四、Keep our school clean保持我们学校干净

We are studying in this school .It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places ,such as in the library, in the class . we shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there . Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school. We should keep the class room clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school , I’m sure our school will be more beautiful.

五、人口增长太快会给社会带来哪些问题呢？你是怎么认为的？请写一篇短文谈谈你对观点。

The population problem

The population problem is one of the biggest problems in the world. China

has the largest population in the world. If the population grows too fast, it will cause a lot of problems. For example, the traffic will be heavier. Public places will be more crowded. Rubbish will be here and there. Clean water will become a big problem. There will be much noise, smoke and dirty water too. So what

should we do? I think if each family has only one child, we will have a happier life.

六、目前，安全事故频频发生，如食品安全、交通安全等等，请以How to keep safe 为题写一篇短文，谈谈你对安全的认识。

How to keep safe

It’s important for us to keep safe， it will make us study better and live more happily. In order to keep safe , we must do like these. we should pay more attention to the traffic. First , don’t ride or drive too fast on the road . Second, be careful when we go across the road and stop at a red traffic light . Third，don’t ride side by side with your friends. And you mustn’t listen to music while are riding. Don’t swim in the river. if you are in danger ,you should call 110 for help as soon as possible.

七、请写一篇短文介绍中国的春节习俗。

Spring festival

Spring festival is the most important traditional festival in China. Before Spring Festival, we often do some cleaning and buy a lot of things. Such as food, drink, fruit, new clothes and so on. On the New Year’s Eve, we often have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we always watch “Chunwan” on CCTV-1. After that, we play fireworks. On the first day of Spring Festival, we often wear new clothes, watch dragon and lion dance, visit relatives and so on. Children often get Hongbao from their parents and relatives. Welcome to China to spend Spring Festival with us.

八．污染问题

随着世界人口密度的增长，污染成了严重问题。人多产生的废物就多。所

有的垃圾都在污染环境。污染严重地影响我们的生活。工厂的烟囱里冒出的烟雾污染空气。植物由于缺少新鲜空气而枯死。河流污染，鱼不能生存。汽车、工厂发出噪音对人耳有害。是对污染采取措施的时候了。我建议多植树以保持空气新鲜。我们应该使水净化，利用废物，转害为利。通过共同努力，我们将创造一个清洁、美丽的生活、工作环境。

Pollution(污染)

As the world is getting more densely populated, pollution presents a severe

problem. More people make more waste. All this waste is polluting our surroundings.

Pollution has a bad influence on our life. The air is polluted by the smoke

and fog coming out of the factory chimneys. Plants die for want of fresh air. The river is polluted and the fish are unfit to live. There is noise pollution made by cars and factories, etc, which hurts the ear.

It is high time we did something about pollution. I suggest more trees be

planted to keep the air fresh. We should purify the water and make use of the wastes and turn harm into good.

By cur common efforts, we will make a clean and purified environment for life and work.

九．关于“低碳生活”的描写

1．Lower carbon life

Now more and more people get to know it's important to protect our living environment．

As a student，it's my duty to do something for the earth．

From now on，I'll go to school by bike or on foot instead of in a car．I'll use fewer plastic bagsto reduce white pollution．In order to save energy，I'll plant more trees so that the air will be fresher．I'll take less lift and reuse water．At last l will use second-hand books，so we don't need to cut down more trees．

If everyone takes action，our enivronment will be better and better．Our world will be more beautiful．

2.My Low-carbon Life

节约资源, 保护环境. 从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重“低碳”

生活的中学生, 请以“My Low-carbon Life” 为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。

提示: (1)每天步行上学; (2)离丌教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时, 记

住关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张；（5)不使用塑料袋。

参考词汇：on foot, turn off, tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic bag

要求：①词数：80个单词左右。

It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans; TV sets and lights in time when we don’t need them. What’s more, water should be reused by us. Third, it is good to make full use of paper. We should use the both sides of the paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

3．What can do for the Environment

提示：1、在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋2、尽可能地再利用使用过的课本3、离开教室应关灯4、最好走路或骑自行车上学5、简述理由：保护环境，节约能源等

What can we do for the environment？There are many ways．We should use cloth

bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags all the time．We should also reuse the books as possible as we can．What's more，we should turn off the lights when we leave the classroom．And we'd better walk to school or ride our bikes instead of driving cars．All in all，each one of us is responsible to protect the environment，and we should save the energy in our daily lives．

In fact，If everyone does something for the environment，I believe the earth will be a better place．

十．.随着“创建美丽城市”活动的开展。请你以 “Rules of My School”为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对校规的了解和认识。

要点如下：

1. 你所知道的校规（列举3条）；

2. 你对这些校规的认识；

3.请你对改善校规题意见，词数不少于80词。

Rules of My School

There are lots of rules in my school. For example, we must clean our

classroom every morning. I think it’s very necessary for us to keep it clean. And it’s good for our health. We have to wear school uniform every day. I think the uniforms are ugly. In my opinion, we should be allowed to choose our own clothes. We can’t talk in the classroom. As far as I am concerned, keeping quiet is good for studying.

附英语写作技巧：一、叙事文常用的句子间连接词 at first; at last; in the end„ then / next/ after that„; when / while/as soon as/ at the same time; at times; Luckily/ unluckily/„; in a word 二、议论文常用连接词 1. 表示并列： not only„but also; 2.表示递进的：besides; what’s more; what’s worse; (moreover); 3. 表示原因的：because; because of„;4.表示目的的：so that„in order to„; 5. 表示转折的：however; but; 6.表示举例的：for example; such as„ 7.表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; 8. 表达个人想法的： I think/believe„; in my opinion 9.其他：as we know 三、熟悉写作步骤： 1、 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节； 2、 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3、 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点； 4 、复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感 检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称； 三思：词汇—>短语—>句式； 三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。 四、作文一般框架：文章分3段： （1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3 个方 面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题。

书面表达英语作文初三篇二

九年级英语书面表达范例

九年级书面表达

①不同的国家有不同的风俗习惯。请根据以下信息，写一篇短文介绍各国不同的餐桌

Different countries have different customs.Let's have a look at the table manners.In China, people use chopsticks to eat and they are supposed to eat without making a noise.But in Japan, it's polite to make a noise when you are eating noodles or drinking tea, because that means the food is delicious and you thank the meal maker.In western countries, people use knife and fork at table.But American table manners are simpler than those in Europe.Western people may use more than one set of knife and fork at dinner.

②生活中难免会遇到一些感觉不幸的事。下面请以“An Unlucky Day”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。 An Unlucky Day

Today is an unlucky day. I kept on watching TV last night and didn't go to bed until 12.My alarm didn't go off in the morning. So I got up quite late. And my mother didn't buy me breakfast. I rushed out of the door without breakfast. When I hurried to the bus stop, the bus had already left, so I had to run to school. Luckily, Tom's dad saw me on the street and gave me a lift in his car. When I reached school, I found our teacher had begun class. After I sat down, I realized that I had left my backpack at home. At noon when I got ready to buy lunch, I found that I hadn't taken any money with me. When I got home after school, I couldn't find my key to the door, because I had left it in the desk.

What an unlucky day I had!

③研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。

Research_has_shown_that_music_has_an_important_effect_on_one's_moods.So people use different kinds of music to change moods.If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music.After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed.Some of the students are crazy about computer games and feel over-excited, they can listen to country music.After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful.Some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music.After they listen to it, they will feel excited.Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco music.After I listen to it, I feel happy again.Music is so wonderful.I like it very much.

④假如你是李磊，你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写

一 封80词左右的电子邮件，介绍一或两个中国传统节日，如春节(the Spring Festival)、中秋节(the Mid-autumn Festival)等。

写作要求：

1．作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2．语句通顺，内容连贯。

3．文中不能出现学校真实的名称和学生真实的姓名。参考词汇：traditional传统的；

decorate装饰

Dear_Tom，

I'm_very_glad_to_tell_you_something_about Spring Festival.

It's a traditional festival in China.It comes in winter.

It's time to get new.We usually clean and decorate our house carefully before it comes.I

always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes.We put on Chunlian on the

door and Chuanghua on the window.

It's time to get together.Everyone go home to get together with their family, though someone

is far away from home.They must have dinner together on that day.They must visit their

relatives and friends and say “Happy new year” to them.When the kids greet their

grandparents, they can get money.

Yours，

Li Lei

⑤假如你是刘华，要去英国参加为期半年的交换生项目。请你根据以下要点提示，写

信给外教Mr. Green，就英国社交礼仪方面的问题向他请教并请他给出建议。100词左右。 要点提示：1.衣着服饰方面； 2．接受邀请方面； 3．馈赠礼物方

面。

Dear Mr. Green，

I am writing this letter to ask for some information about British customs. I will go to Britain and attend a student exchange program, which will last for half a year. However, I know little about British customs, so I have to seek your help. Would you like to give me some advice on dressing? In what kind of situation will I need to wear formal clothes and when should I just dress casually? Besides, I also want to know about the manners of accepting invitations and giving gifts.

I would greatly appreciate it if you can give me any advice. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Liu Hua

⑥在中国学习的外国中学生Jim受到中国同学的邀请，去参加生日聚会。下面是Jim

询问他的好朋友李雷关于参加这个聚会的一些问题。假如你是李雷，请给Jim写一封回

信，回答Jim的问题。70词左右。开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：be supposed to，at about 7 o'clock, small gift, informal clothes

Dear Li Lei，

How are you?

I will go to my classmate's birthday party the day after tomorrow. But I don't know what I am supposed to do to be polite. My classmate told me to arrive at 7 o'clock. Then when am I supposed to arrive? And should I bring a birthday gift to him? What kind of clothes am I supposed to wear?

Waiting for your reply and thank you in advance.

Yours,

Jim

回复如下：

Dear Jim，

I am pleased to answer your questions.

First, you are supposed to arrive at 7 o'clock. But it is better that you arrive a little earlier. And you are supposed to bring a small gift. For example, you can buy some flowers. Because they mean friendship and beautiful things. Last, to take part in such parties, you are supposed to wear informal clothes, such as jeans and a Tshirt.

Hope you will have a good time at the party.

Sincerely yours，

Li Lei

⑦同学们对愚人节有不同的态度。下面表格是你们学校的一份调查结果。请据此，以

A survey has recently been done at our school, and it shows there are three different attitudes to April Fool's Day among the students. 40% of the students think they like to have April Fool's Day.They say the special day is enjoyed by people around the world.And it can add much pleasure to our school life.

But still 30% of them dislike April Fool's Day.They think it would disturb others to play jokes on them on that day.Even worse, most of the jokes may cause much trouble.And the rest don't care.In their opinion, people just play jokes on April Fool's Day.

⑧假设汤姆是你的朋友，由于他抄袭你的作业，你和他产生了矛盾。结合自己的想象描述一下你针对这件事情的想法和感受。

写作要求：语句连贯，词数80个左右。

Tom is my best friend. But he doesn't talk to me now, because we had a quarrel. Last week he forgot to do his homework. So he wanted to copy mine. I didn't let him do this because I didn't think it was a good idea. It's bad for him to copy mine. It would start a bad habit and he should do it by himself. But he didn't think so. He got mad at me. He said he didn't want to be my best friend anymore. So we stopped talking to each other from then on. I feel very sad about that. I hope we will be friends again.

⑨请以Save the earth为题写一篇60词左右的作文

Save the earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.

It’s our duty to protect our environment. No matter where we live, we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy. We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places. We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better. ⑩每个人在学校期间，都有自己难忘的老师。假如你叫李雷。毕业在即，请你根据以下提示给你的英语老师(Miss Zhao)写一封信。内容包括：

1．表达感激之情；2．回忆印象最深的一件事(一次帮助，或一次鼓励，或一次批评……)；

3．你的感想或建议。

Dear Miss Zhao，

Asyou_know,_I've_made_great_progress_in_English_with_your_help.At_this_moment,_I_want_to_say_“Thank_you”．

I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it.I lost my confidence and almost gave it up.As soon as you knew it, you had a long talk with me about how to learn English well.You always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress.Ever since then I have been interested in it and improved myself a lot.

Though I have to say goodbye to you very soon, I still think I am so lucky to be your student.I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy.

Best wishes to you!

⑾关于家乡的大气污染

About The Air Pollution In My Hometown

In my hometown, the air is polluted seriously. However, in recent years, the pollution gets from bad to worse, because of the increasing number of private cars. Especially during the rush hours, too many private vehicles move slowly on narrow roads, emitting a large amount of waste gas. Moreover, the poisonous gas sent by the nearby factories is also one of the main causes of pollution. Therefore, it’s demanded that immediate and effective measures must be taken to restrict private cars and public transportation must be developed to the largest extent. Besides, we should use renewable and clean energy recourses. ⑿ 我的烦恼 My Upset

I'm a middle school student. I’m upset these days because of my parents. They pay too much attention to my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. If I get good grades they will be happy and satisfied. But if not they will be worried about me, especially my mom. I never want to let her down, but she has made a plan for my future. I am very disgusted with it. I don't know what to do. I know they really love me. I also know knowledge is important for everybody. However, I can't stand they are always making me study. I'm really expected they can understand me.

书面表达英语作文初三篇三

中考英语书面表达训练及范文

书面表达训练

Jenny 是一名《Heart To Heart》电台主持人，深受同学们的喜爱，被大家称呼为知心姐姐。昨天，她接到一名九年级李湖同学的热线电话，李湖向Jenny诉说了很多苦恼。假如你是Jenny,

要求：1、围绕以上表格内容进行合理表述；

2、所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；

3、词数80词左右,开头语已给出 (不计入词数)。

提示词汇：fail, confident, smile at, be used to, senior high school, in my opinion, close mind, open

one’s heart, share, advice, travel, spend, prepare for

Dear Li Hu,

Thanks for telling me about your problems! It is true that every student is very nervous before a test. As you say, you are worried about tomorrow’s English test____________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Wish you good luck! Wish you happy every day!

参考范文

Dear Li Hu,{书面表达英语作文初三}.

Thanks for telling me about your problems! It is true that every student is very nervous before a test. As you say, you are worried about tomorrow’s English test because you are not good at English and are afraid of failing the test. Be more confident, then you will smile at any problem. Get ready for the next challenge, though you might fail the exam. You have been used to the life now. However, you don’t know how to get on with the new teachers and classmates in the senior high school. In my opinion, Don’t close your mind! Open your heart to everyone and try to be friendly to them. If you do so, you will share your happiness with them. As for your plan, I would like to advice you to relax yourself after the test. It is good for you to go traveling and do some sports. But don’t forget to spend more time on your poor subjects to prepare for your new study. Wish you good luck! Wish you happy every day!

2011年中考英语作文训练（二）

背景设定：《21世纪英语》近期开展了《Safety is always in hearts》英语征文活动。假如你是

Maria, 请你根据以下提示要点给报社写一篇征文。

提示要点：1、关注心理健康安全：友善待人，学会倾诉，正确面对挫折和失败。

2、保护人身安全：注意交通安全，远离网络游戏，不打架和斗殴。

3、注意饮食健康安全：多吃健康食品，少吃垃圾食品，不吃霉变过期食品。

要求：1、围绕以上内容进行合理表述；

2、所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；

3、词数80词左右,开头语已给出 (不计入词数)。

提示词汇： care about, mental health safety (心理健康安全) , failure（失败） personnel safety

（人身安全）, spend, foods safety(食品安全), keep away from, moldy, spoiled or expired foods（霉变或过期食品）{书面表达英语作文初三}.

As we know, safety is the most important in our life. But do you know how do keep safe? First of all, _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文

As we know, safety is the most important in our life. But do you know how do we keep safe? First of all, we must care more about mental health safety. Learn to be friendly to people around you. When you are in trouble, make sure to talk about your problems to your friends, classmates, teachers or family. It is OK to regard your failure as the challenges. Next, we should pay more attention to personnel safety. Be careful when you ride or walk across the roads. And we aren’t supposed to spend too much time on computer games. It is bad for our health and study. What’s more, it is dangerous to meet net friends alone without permission. It is rude to argue and fight with your classmates. If you do, it will cause a lot of trouble. Finally, we have to care about foods safety. We should have good eating habits. The more you eat healthy food, the healthier you will be. Remember to keep away from junk food. And it is very dangerous to eat moldy, spoiled and expired foods.

In a word, if we care more about safety we will live in a better life!

书面表达英语作文初三篇四

中考英语书面表达技巧及满分作文

中考英语书面表达技巧及满分作文

写好英语文章的20字诀

Agreement: 主语和谓语在人称、数上的一致，关系代词与先行词的一致。

Ambiguity: 尽量不去使用可能引起歧义的词语或句子。

Brief: 文章"简为贵"，要抓住要点，简明扼要。

Coherence: 文理通顺，前后连贯。

Development: 主题的发挥应当充分、合理、正确。

Division: 词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当，划分要清楚，避免使用重复字句和种子片段。 Figures: 正确合理使用各类修辞格式。

Inflated diction: 不使用做作的语言。

Key: 用适当的关键词突出主题，每段都应有主题句。

Logical: 内容要符合逻辑。

Message: 信息要新鲜、确实、可信。

Omit: 合理删除多余的不必要部分。

Proposition: 主张、观点、论述要清楚肯切、合情入理。{书面表达英语作文初三}.

Punctuation: 正确适时使用标点符号。

Relevant: 文章一定要要题。

Sentence pattern: 句型要尽量多样化。

Strait: 开门见山，直来直去。

Style: 文体恰切，适合内容要求。

Tense: 动词时态要正确、一致、变化合理。

Theme: 选题得当，主题突出

记叙文的写作

记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（ what, who, when, where, why ）和一个“ H ”（ how ）。记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：

The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如： Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a

good idea.

2. 动词的时态

在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3. 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。

4. 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5. 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：

I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It＇s you." I said, quite released.

二、写好记叙文的基本要领

1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2. 突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.

I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3. 用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn＇t take it. She served them with tea but they left.

修改后：

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.

"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.

"Don＇t worry, we＇ll send you home."

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.

走出英语作文的误区

误区Ⅰ 使用句型太复杂以致出错

小作文的写作强调的是内容连贯，句子通顺，语言流畅，并且句子与句子之间能够用恰当的关联词衔接起来，并不要求写出多复杂的句子。但有些考生理解为只有句子长了，所用的从句多了才更纯正，所以使用各种从句分词等，致使文章言不达意，错误百出，效果适得

其反。

误区Ⅱ 加入太多的想象成分，使内容细节过多，文章冗长。

学生在写作中的一大担心就是文章的长度不够，再加上对于“可适当增减细节，不可字对字的翻译”的误解，于是加入了很多离题较远的细节，乱了主题。不可字对字其实只要求学生不可简单照译，并非不可翻译。学生只要在理解写作要求的基础上以翻译为主，在要点之间加上简练恰当与必要的关联词和关联句即可。翻译要点可直译也可意译，但要恰当准确，用已学过的词语与句型，切不可生搬硬造。

误区Ⅲ 书写不规范造成大量失分。

由于该卷的主观性，作文的卷面分往往不只1、2分。因此写作的规范与书法非常重要，甚至所用墨水的颜色也应列入考虑之列，比如，浅色的墨水或油笔写出的字就显得乱，而深色的如碳素墨水则给人以整齐美观的印象。这里介绍几个应注意的地方。

1.好的开头和结尾。由于评卷人的主观性，好的开头与结尾往往给人以好的印象。一般开头不要写得太罗嗦，要找着恰当的切入点，快速入题，简洁明快。结尾同样不拖泥带水，最好还能适当评论，写出点睛之笔。

2.用好关联词。在写作的过程中，以下关联词的应用非常关键。比如，表并列的and，besides，as well as，in addition to，not only„but also，when，表递进的furthermore，what＇s more，what＇s worse，表转折的but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however，表选择的either„or„，whether„or„，otherwise等。有了这些词的连接，就会使文章变得语句通顺，层次清楚，有声有色，考生勿需用很多的复合句也能让评卷人感觉到你的水平不同一般。

3.用好标点符号、大小写，安排好段落。如果是汉语作文，学生大多注意标点符号，但写英语时一些考生就不够认真。一篇文章下来一逗到底，没有标点的变化，没有大小写，没有段落划分（一般以两段为宜），让人一看就烦，更不要说得到好的分数。

4.用好情感词语。任何文章都有自己的观点，英语小作文也不例外。考生应注意用一些能反映自己观点的词，否则文章就很干瘪，没有韵味。没有人愿意读没有感情的作文。

5.书写清楚，整洁，规范。{书面表达英语作文初三}.

英语作文的结尾方式示例

文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表达得更加深刻。

文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：

1、首尾呼应，画龙点睛

在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如“I Cannot Forget Her” (我忘不了她)的结尾：

After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.

2、重复主题句

结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾：

I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.

3、自然结尾

随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾：

I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.

4、含蓄性的结尾

用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法，而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾：

Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.

5、用反问结尾

虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，并具有特别的强调作用，引起读者深思。如“Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我们要不要学做家务？) 的结尾。

Everyone should learn to do housework. Don’t you agree, boys and girls?

6、指明方向，激励读者

结尾表示对将来的展望，或期待读者投入行动。如“Let’s Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动)的结尾：

As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let’s go in for sports.

文章的结尾没有一定的模式，可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是，一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法；但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语，以便使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。

中考满分作文欣赏

向外国友人简单介绍黄山（ the Yellow Mountain ）

（ 2002 年安徽省）安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（ the Yellow Mountain ）。

（ 1 ）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。（ 2 ）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。（ 3 ）登山便可领略其云海（ the sea of clouds ）、奇松（ wondrous pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

注意 1 词数： 80 词左右。 2 请不要逐字翻译。

The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China . It lies in the south of Anhui . Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there . It＇s not far from here . It takes you about three hours to get there by bus . You can also go there by train or by plane . While you are climbing the mountain ， you can enjoy the sea of clouds ， wondrous pines and unique rocks around you . In the early morning when the sun rises ， the sky looks very beautiful . It＇s really a nice place to visit .

中国与WTO

中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我市——河源参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。

要求： 1. 100 词左右； 2. 要点包括： a. 有悠久的历史，位于广东的东北部，离广州 198 公里，人口约 324 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹，如苏家围（ Sujiawei ）；万绿湖（ WanluLake ）等等；万绿湖是一个很美丽的地方，湖水清澈，无污染；湖中有各种各样

书面表达英语作文初三篇五

【独家】2015全国中考英语写作真题 带答案

2015中考写作真题

梅州

书面表达（本题15分）

养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯，对于我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数90左右的短文，发表在学校网站上。

提示要点：

（一）良好的生活和学习习惯包括：

1）在生活方面：①健康饮食 ②经常锻炼 ③利用好时间

2）在学习方面：①课前预习 ②认真听讲 ③独立作业

（二）良好习惯带来的益处包括

1）帮助我们更好的学习知识

2）使我们提高技能，学会自我控制。

（三） 谈谈你的感受

作文要求：

1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数90左右，开关已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing．

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答案：{书面表达英语作文初三}.

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing．

In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet．Also, it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot．And we should learn to make good use of our time．

In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson．In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully．Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework on our own．

In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills．We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits．

I think good habits are really good for our mind and body．

广州

面表达（共1题，满分15分） 你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学