中考英语作文跑题

中考英语作文跑题篇一

2016中考英语作文热点和训练

2016中考英语作文题目（热门话题）大全

中考英语作文培训

中考英语作文阅卷三个标准：

1） 结构 2）内容要点

3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。 中考作文审题五个步骤：（定时态——定结构——正确句型）

审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生，我要说的是审题一定要做到四个方面

一审主题（写什么），

二审人称（用什么人称写）

三审体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议），

四审时态（时态中考两个错误扣一分，三个降一档）， 五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时 候忘记，导致跑题）

中考满分作文五个关键点： “结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！”

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，结构十分清晰。“观点（总）——要点（分）——总结（总）”让人一目了然。

三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，

第二段：分2-3点说明。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论，要有升华。

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点， 要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文 章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词 等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, so far, as far as

表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally

表因果的过渡语

for, because of, one reason is that„ another reason is that„, so, as a result (of)

表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact,

表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, and so on

表推进的过渡语

:what’s more, on one hand„ on the other hand„, not only„but also„,besides,

表总结的过渡语:

in short, in a word, in general,

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬 性的。如，单词的使用，时态，人称等。

亮点：

当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要

点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful, good-looking, B 篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。但是对于写作基础不是很好的同学，切不要因为追求“亮点”而用“错句，错词”，以稳妥为重！

英语作文万能句子 段首句

1. 关于„„人们有不同的观点。一些人认为„„

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that____. There is an old saying______.

2. 现在，„„很普遍，许多人喜欢„„，因为„„，另外（而且）„„。 Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like______ Because ______. Besides，______.

3.任何事物都是有两面性，„„也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages.

4人类正面临着一个严重的问题„，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ..., which is becoming more and more serious.

5.如今，人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...。

Nowadays，it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...

6.“如同硬币的正反面，...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。

Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...

7.“随着...的快速增长，...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。

Along with the rapid growth of ..., ...has become increasingly important in our daily

8列举时可以用

First of all, 首先 secondly,其次 beside, 另外 what's more, 另外 last but not least 最后的但不是不重要的

一、 学术文化篇

1.沉迷网络游戏

题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

★ 范文

Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.

Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.

If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

2.怎样学好英语

世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。

要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

★ 范文

How to learn English well

English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.

First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.

In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.

二、 素质教育篇

3.如何减压让生活更美好

许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:

(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;

(2) 我的压力是什么;

(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。

★ 范文

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

4.学做好人好事

今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”

请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。

在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。

★ 范文

Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character. Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.

To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.

I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit.

三、 现代生活篇

5.怎样保持健康的生活习惯

健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。

信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。

要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。

★ 范文

I think healthy habits are very important for us.

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

6.毕业感想

初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。

提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry

★ 范文

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

四、 社会经济篇

7.低碳生活

中考英语作文跑题篇二

2014考研英语一大作文你跑题了吗？

2014考研英语作文押题命中对照 2014考研英语一大作文押题对照

原文：

Part B

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) interpret its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET(20 points)

普明考研2014英语最终密押题第5页王若平老师重点讲解

2014考研英语小作文押题对照

原文：

Part A

51. Directions:

Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition. You should include the details you think necessary.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

普明考研2014英语最终密押题第56页建议信

中考英语作文跑题篇三

中考英语作文万能格式

中考英语作文万能格式佳句11句

1. We ' re often told that ......But is this really the case ?

我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗？

2. People used to ......however , things are quite different today .

过去，人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。

3.some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that ......

一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到......

4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution .

认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。

5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face .

这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。 6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place . 简而言之，为了把世界变成更美好的地方，我们必须勤奋工作。 7.Lost time is never found again. 岁月既往，一去不回。 8.Everybody should have a dream. 每个人都该有个梦想. 9.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. 抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。 10.Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。 11.Let's look on the bright side. 让我们往好处想吧。

中考英语满分作文必背句型

1. 重点句型

1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…

2). … so … that … 如此… 以至于…

… too … to do 太… 而不能…

such … that … 如此… 以至于…

3). not…until… 直到…才…

例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back.

4).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…

The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)

5). That is why + 句子 那是…的原因

6). That is because + 句子 那是因为…

7). It is said that + 句子 据说…

It is reported that + 句子 据报道…

8). There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问…

9). It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻，毫无疑问

10). There is no need to do没必要做…

11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

2. 提建议

had better (not) do 最好(不)做

how about / what about doing …怎么样?

I think you should do 我认为你应该…

I suggest that you should do 我建议你做… If I were you, I would do…我要是你的话，我会做… It’s best to do 最好做… Why not do / why don’t you do…? 为什么不… 3. 表示喜欢和感兴趣 like / love doing enjoy doing be fond of doing 喜欢做… be keen on n/doing 喜欢做… prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing 感兴趣 4. .努力做… try to do努力做… strive to do 努力做… try one’s best to do= do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做… make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做… do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做… spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做… do what / everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做… 5. 打算做… / 计划做… intend / plan to do 打算做… be going to do 打算/计划做… decide to do 决定做… determine to do决定做… be determined to do决定做… make up one’s mind to do下定决心做… 6. 表示想/希望 want to do = would like to do 想做… hope to do 希望做… expect to do 期待着做… wish to do 希望做… consider doing 考虑做… 7. 只加doing 作宾语的动词 finish 完成/ practice 练习 / suggest建议 / consider 考虑 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜欢doing 固定搭配 look forward to doing 盼望做… keep on doing 坚持做… dream of doing 梦想做… can’t help doing 情不自禁地做… keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做… be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做… spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做… have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心 have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 或 with + 名词 做…有困难

中考必背的30个作文经典词句

■ 中考考点

培养同学们的写作能力是初中英语教学的目的之一?写的能力包括:书写端正,拼写正确,语言通顺,无语法错误,层次清楚,内容完整?《英语新课程标准》明确提出同学们在书写方面应做到能依照学过的题材或话题,利用所给的范例写简单的书信?便条?通知等;能按照要求用书面形式转述所听?所读的简单内容;能为图片提供简单的文字说明并能清楚地能表达自己的观点?

■ 必背知识

常用的名言警句

1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩?

2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友?

3. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半?

4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成?

5. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马?

6. Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难?

7. Easy come, easy go. 来得快,去得快?

8. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点?

9. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母?

10. Look before you leap. 三思而后行?

11. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人?

12. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳?

13. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难?

14. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪?

15. As you sow, so shall you reap. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆?

16. I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort. 成功要靠三件事才能赢得:努力,努力,再努力?

17. Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 有事莫推明天?

18. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧?

19. Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里?{中考英语作文跑题}.

20. Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本?

21. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的关键?

22. Don’t judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人?

常用过渡语

23. 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far, as far as等?

24. 表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, finally等?

25. 表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of… on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等?

26. 表因果的过渡语:for, because of, one reason is that… another reason is that…, thus, so, as a result (of)等?

27. 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, unlike, although, otherwise,nevertheless, in spite of, after all等?

28. 表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, that is, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等?

29. 表推进的过渡语:what’s more, on one hand… on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only…but also…, besides, furthermore, moreover等?

30. 表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, on the whole等?

考英语高分作文必备杀手锏—三段四步法

中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准：

1）结构2）内容要点 3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。

三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏

知己知彼，方能百战不殆，既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化，相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享，笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。

1 “三段”（三个段落）——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点，让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。 中高考情景是作文，无论是那种文体，都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试，（SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试，故被叫过美国的高考）。

我们管这样的文章叫做HamburgerWriting(汉堡写作){中考英语作文跑题}.

顾名思义，就是无论是记叙文、还是议论文、或者08年中考以及09一模西城的夹叙夹议文章，都可以通用。简单解释如下：

第一段 记叙文 议论文

开篇背景介绍（时间、地点、人物、事件）

发表观点

第二段

故事发展 论据、论点支撑

第三段{中考英语作文跑题}.

结局 总结观点

2 “四步”

有了框架就相当于有了骨骼，而真正的血肉要靠四个步骤来实现。

步骤一：审题

审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生，我要说的是审题一定要做到五个方面：一审主题（写什么），二审体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议），三审时态（时态中考两个扣一分，三个降一档），四审人称（别犯低级错误），五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时候忘记，导致跑题）

步骤二：打草稿

中考一定要打草稿，两大优势

1中考不准在试卷更改，涂改带、橡皮、胶条（囧）、小刀（我小时候想都没想过），而中考时落笔错误是难免的，涂改就会后卷面分，打草稿就可以避免这个情况了。

2 正式写作是对草稿的在梳理，语言的在锤炼。

步骤三：正文写作

做到两点，一要凝练，而要变化。文章80—100字为宜，一定要注意使用过渡词、从句、50个句型和词组搭配。

步骤四：检查：

很多学生考试都会检查，但总是不能找到自己的错误。原因很简单，方法不对：

英语写作检查的原则：

1 内容要点：缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档

2 语法错误：名词查单复数和冠词问题，动词查时态语态和三单问题。

3 变换句式：过于简单的结构要试着变化

祝所有中考考生，金榜题名。

中考英语作文跑题篇四

中考英语写作学生普遍存在的问题

中考英语写作学生普遍存在的问题

随着中考脚步的临近，同学们的学习也就愈发显得匆忙。越来越多学生提出在英语作文方面遇到一个瓶颈，虽然很努力，也尝试了很多写作的方式和套路，但分数一直不够理想，以下是中考英语写作中同学们普遍存在的一些问题。 通过对近些年英语作文出题的趋势来看，中考对英语写作有不同体裁的要求，但是由于客观和种种主观原因，很多同学的作文容易走入种种误区，这些误区主要体现在以下方面：

一、构思、准备不充分，匆忙下笔

任何一篇作文出题都是有它独特的道理的，所以提前审题和构思就显得必不可少了。很多孩子目前存在一个情况，想到哪写到哪，有记流水帐的习惯;这也造成了作文杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现写错单词和用错句型的情况。针对这种情况可以从以下几个方面予以解决：

1. 了解写作的基本要求: 即分段，字数，卷面的要求。

2、认真进行审题:审题的重心放在确定所写文章的文体、人称、时态，要点方面，确保第一遍审题就能得到基本分。

3、列提纲：将开头，结尾精心设计好，按照每个要点为一个主题句的形式列出提纲，然后再扩展每个主题句；

4. 打草稿，修改，誊写: 这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持作文卷面工整。

二、主题不明确，重点不突出。

英语写作不是语文散文(形散神不散)。汉语作文我们习惯于隐晦地表达观点。读者在读文章的时候根据作者的细节描写和情节的发展充分进行联想，从而产生共鸣，了解作者的写作意图，了解文章的中心大意。而英语作文则更提倡开门见山地提出明确的观点，尤其是在中考大压力下短时内写出主题明确，重点突出的高分作文一定要注意这一点。

学生的主要问题是主题不明确或者重点不突出!!!

三、文章的布局不合理，叙事杂论无章，缺乏逻辑性。

要想达到布局合理，必须在打草稿时先构建出一个总体的框架，把审题得出的要点分别以主题句的形式一条一条列出来，避免出现跑题，拉掉要点，布局不合理等问题。要想有条理地叙述事物，上下文紧密联系，有较强的逻辑性，过渡词语的使用是关键。要写出清晰流畅的文章，需要把文章中各部分巧妙地连接在一起。这样可使文章自然而别致，并能层层展开主题句，完整地表达中心思想。而过渡词（Transitional Words）是连接这些部分的纽带。过渡词是一种关系指引词，一般由副词或起副词作用的短语承担。此外，代词、连词、上下文的近义词等也可作过渡词。过渡词能使文章启、承、转、合，融会贯通，连成一体。 关键词: 开头, 结尾, 过渡句, 过渡词语, 支撑句

My vacation plan Unconsciously, the summer vacation is approaching. In order to have a colorful vacation, I make the vacation plan.

开头：

( As is known to all, the longing summer vacation is a better time to relax the students from heavy schoolwork and learn new things.)(1) So in the first few days,(2) I want to have a good rest. Besides this(3), I tend

to do some reading and take an active part in social activities. By doing it, we can acquire knowledge and broaden our horizons Last but not least(4), my parents have done so much that I can never pay them back for their love.(6) Therefore, I will chat with them quite often to share the summer vacation happily. I truly believe that this vacation will be the most unforgettable one for me. I can't wait!

结尾：

四、忽视文化差异。

我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在

英语作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用自己在书上学过的英语句型，老师讲过的写作经典句型去表达自己的想法，就能避免出现汉语式的英语。

五、忽视细节，无谓丢分。

很多同学在写作文时常常感觉"下笔如有神"，但最终结果出来后大惑不解。这方面的问题主要体现在忽视标点、大小写，拼写，时态，名词单复数，主谓一致等问题。所以只要更加关注细节，认真检查，这些无谓的丢分问题就可以解决。

中考英语作文跑题篇五

中考英语作文话题之周围环境

十、周围环境

（一）交通安全

（红灯）It’s very important for students to know about the traffic rules. When the red light is on, you must stop and you are not allowed to go on walking. Even though you have something urgent to do or maybe you think the drivers dare not run over you. But do you know that rushing is at the cost of your life? So it’s not worth taking the risk.（绿灯）It’s safe to cross the road when the light is green. （黄灯）When the orange light is on, you must wait and be careful, because the red light will be on very soon.

Here are some suggestions to protect ourselves. First, we should follow the traffic lights and can’t break the traffic rules. Second, we’d better look left and right to make sure we are safe before stepping forward to cross the street. Last but not least, don’t forget that it’s very dangerous to play on the street. From now on, not only I myself will strictly obey the traffic rules but I’ll also call on my classmates and my family to do so.

（二）网络安全

利--- The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. We can not only read news from home and abroad, but also get information, send emails, make phone calls, attend on-line schools, read various books and study English by ourselves. What’s more, people can enjoy music, watch sport matches, play all kinds of games and go shopping on-line.

弊--- However, every coin has two sides. It’s risky to make friends and shop on-line. What’s worse, some students who are addicted to the Internet don’t study hard or even quit school.

个人观点--- For my part, I completely agree with the latter view that the Internet has more disadvantages than advantages. It results in various computer crimes.

What is more, it is harmful to the growth of the young. Something should be done as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the Internet.

（三）介绍沈城

最好的旅游季节 ---

The best time to visit Shenyang is in spring which is neither too hot nor too cold, so spring is regarded as the perfect time of the year to be outside now that everything seems fresh and new.

介绍名胜古迹 ---

I suggest visiting places of interest like Shenyang Imperial Palace .It is worth visiting where there are royal buildings, fantastic artwork for people to enjoy. 说明注意事项 ---

Before you come to Shenyang, you need to know that it is of great necessity for you to travel with a map since looking for ways in this large city could be confusing. Besides, you must be patient about waiting in line or large crowds because Shenyang is home to millions of people who come from different cities and countries.

十一 易错点整理：

（一） 审题：

在大家写一篇文章之前，我们肯定是要先看题目要求的，文章让写什么，什么文体有什么特殊的要求等等。比如海淀的期中考试作文，题目首先说：简单描述这种变化，这一点就告诉了我们，无论写什么要写两方面的对比，以前什么样子现在什么样子(文中题目实例已经给出)。第二问的是你将如何处理好之间的关系，第三是原因或者理由，少了一点的话，要点肯定就不全了。

（二） 时态：

看完题目了，马上构思先思考事件发生在什么时候，我们要拿捏准确事情发生的时间，英语写作中最忌讳两个错误，一个是跑题，一个就是时态错误，因为这样的错误非常严重。一般的文章时态比较好写，但是要注意有的文章是需要两到三种时态的。这个时候保持一个冷静的头脑很重要。

（三） 主谓一致：

写了文章之后，大家会有很多的大意，疏忽或者是不细心。本来句子写的很好，时态也注意了，但是往往大家在写完作文之后就会准备交卷，从而就忘记了检查，这个时候第三人称单数的问题就会出现，作文中出现的错误跟完成句子中所犯的错误基本一致，也可说完成句子就是写作的一个缩影。下面我给大家列举一下常见的几个主谓一致的错误，

很多同学会用doing动词的现在分词做主语，在写的时候就往往会写成：Doing more exercise have a lot of advantages.而我们知道这里的have由于受到前面doing 的限制应当用第三人称单数has。再比如我们常用的there be 句型，请注意比较：There are three boys and a girl.与There is a girl and three boys.里面的be动词要取决于它后面紧跟着的名词。

（四） 多个谓语

多个谓语也可以说是多个动词出现在一个句子中，由于很多同学分不清或者压根儿就不知道谓语与非谓语的区别，从而导致了很多时候写出一个词之后不知道往后要接什么，那么我们常说：一个句子里有且只能有一个谓语动词，就是这句话让很多同学摸不到头脑，那么我换一种形式来说这句话，我们所学的时态：一般现在时(do或者dose)，一般过去时(did)，一般将来时(will do)，进行时(be doing)，现在完成时(have/has done)，被动语态(be done)都属于谓语动词，而单独出现的doing，to do，done就是我们所说的非谓语了，所以一个句子中不能有两个谓语形式出现，除非中间出现了连接词。

（五） 一些小错

我们在写作文的过程中，难免会有单词的拼写错误，这样的失分对于我们来说很遗憾。此外还会有一些比如我们的词组记忆的混淆，比如搭配记错，或者短语的介词运用的有错误。

（六）检查方法

针对错误的检查：我们写作文的时候要多加小心，毕竟是写一门我们不常用的语言，平常不坚持写作势必就会像刚刚加热过的牛奶一样，会自己冷却。一门外语也是如此，在这里跟大家分享一个好用并且能在最后几分钟发挥很大作用的改错方法：“三大时代介”，“三”就是说的动词的第三人称单数，“大”就是我们说的大小写问题，“时”就是我们所说的时态，“代”是代词，就是注意男女的指代词不要用错，“介”是介词。

中考英语作文跑题篇六

中考英语作文万能模板

“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！”

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话.

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！

英语高分作文必备杀手锏—三段四步法

中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准：

1）结构2）内容要点 3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。

三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏

知己知彼，方能百战不殆，既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化，相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享，笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。

1 “三段”（三个段落）——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点，让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。

中高考情景是作文，无论是那种文体，都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试，（SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试，故被叫过美国的高考）。

我们管这样的文章叫做Hamburger Writing(汉堡写作)

顾名思义，就是无论是记叙文、还是议论文、夹叙夹议文章，都可以通用。简单解释如下：

第一段 记叙文 议论文

开篇背景介绍（时间、地点、人物、事件）

发表观点

第二段

故事发展 论据、论点支撑

第三段

结局 总结观点

2 “四步”{中考英语作文跑题}.

有了框架就相当于有了骨骼，而真正的血肉要靠四个步骤来实现。{中考英语作文跑题}.

步骤一：审题

审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生，我要说的是审题一定要做到五个方面：一审主题（写什么），二审体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议），三审时态（时态中考两个扣一分，三个降一档），四审人称（别犯低级错误），五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时候忘记，导致跑题）

步骤二：打草稿

中考一定要打草稿，两大优势

1中考不准在试卷更改，涂改带、橡皮、胶条（囧）、小刀（我小时候想都没想过），而中考时落笔错误是难免的，涂改就会后卷面分，打草稿就可以避免这个情况了。

2 正式写作是对草稿的在梳理，语言的在锤炼。

步骤三：正文写作

做到两点，一要凝练，而要变化。文章80—100字为宜，一定要注意使用过渡词、从句、50个句型和词组搭配。 步骤四：检查：

很多学生考试都会检查，但总是不能找到自己的错误。原因很简单，方法不对：

英语写作检查的原则：

1 内容要点：缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档

2 语法错误：名词查单复数和冠词问题，动词查时态语态和三单问题。

3 变换句式：过于简单的结构要试着变化

高频分析

书面表达是每年中考的必考题型,考查同学们用英语以书面的形式来传递信息并进行交际的能力,分值一般为10~20分,其题型多样,主要可分为两大类:一是命题作文,如 My School/Family/Hometown等;二是材料作文,根据给出的书面(中文或英文)材料,按照要求作文,包括英文书信(E-mail?感谢信)?日记?英文请假条?便条?英文演讲稿?发言稿(或值日报告)?介绍?英文通知?看图说话等?此类题型属主观性试题,具有较大的灵活性,是对同学们更高层次的能力的考查,是不少同学的薄弱环节?

背诵秘诀

中考书面表达的取材范围越来越广,涉及的内容也越来越丰富?近年来各省市的中考英语作文大多是材料作文?因此,我们在日常学习中要加强写作训练,扩大课外阅读,多搜集?积累英语作文素材?例如可搜集有关三鹿奶粉的英语作文素材?同时在写作中要做到:1. 认真审题,提炼要点;2. 紧扣主题,扩词成句;3. 表述准确,连句成文;4. 通篇检查,确保无误?

中考英语作文必备万能句型10个

1. 不用说„„ It goes without saying that „ = （It is） needless to say （that） „= It is obvious that „ 例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。

It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

2. 在各种„„之中，„„ Among various kinds of „， „ /= Of all the „， „

例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。

Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.

3. 就我的看法„„；我认为„„

In my opinion „ = To my mind „= As far as I am concerned „= I am of the opinion that „ 例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。

4. 随着人口的增加„„With the increase/growth of the population, „

随着科技的进步„„With the advance of science and technology, „

例：With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。

5. „„ 是必要的 It is necessary （for sb.） to do / that „

„„ 是重要的 It is important/essential （for sb.） to do / that „

„„ 是适当的 It is proper （for sb.） to do / that „

„„ 是紧急的 It is urgent （for sb.） to do / that „

例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

It is proper that we （should） keep the public places clean.

我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

6. 花费 spend „ on sth. / doing sth. „

例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。

We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in.

7. how 引导的感叹句

例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。

At least it will prove how honest you are.

8. 状语从句

A）如果你不„„，你就会„„ If you don't „， you'll „

例︰If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance.