2017上海中考英语作文评分标准

2017上海中考英语作文评分标准篇一

2017届中考英语作文练习

英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事

迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。

内容要点及要求：

1. 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；

2. 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；

3. 词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词（可选用）：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework,

study hard

Monday, June 30 Sunny

This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the

most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013 ”.

【答案】

Monday, June 30 Sunny

This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the

most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those

teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.

I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it.

I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take

good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to

study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can

become a filial piety youth like them.

(88 words)

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不

少。如:set an example for为……树立榜样；used to do sth过去常常做

某事；take care of照顾；try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事；强调句

式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意

总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出

彩。

考点：考查提纲类作文。

请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把

她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。

要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。

2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。

3、词数不少于60个英语单词。

4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。

【答案】

One possible version

Dear Mary,

I’m very glad to introduce(介绍) my classmate Zhang Ying to you.

She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early

every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions.

After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she

helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has

some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes

she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time

and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an

hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang

Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?

Yours

Huang Deshun

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作

中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在

时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意

不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接

词。

【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth

高兴做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。本文中时间词如After

supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻

辑清楚，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式

及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条

理.

考点：考查提纲类作文

3.假设你是李华，请在答题卡相应位置用英语给你的美国笔友Jim写

一封电子邮件，告诉他以下事情：

1．感谢他给你寄来的那些书。你非常喜欢它们，每晚睡前都会读

几页。请他下次来信时给你介绍一些美国的节日。

2．非常盼望与他面对面交谈，所以希望他明年夏天能来你的家乡。

你愿意作他的导游。你们可以一起参观一些有趣的地方。

3．顺便问一下，这些天他是否在电视中看世界杯。

注意事项：

1．文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名等内容。

2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

3．词数70—110，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

邮寄：mail/post v．

导游：guide n．{2017上海中考英语作文评分标准}.

世界杯：the World Cup

Dear Jim,

How is it going?

【答案】

Dear Jim,

How is it going?

Thank you for mailing the books to me. I like them so much that I

read some pages every day before going to bed. When you write to me

next time, could you tell me something about American festivals such as

Thanksgiving Day?

I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer. On

the one hand we can talk face to face and discuss some problems that we

are both interested in. On the other hand, I will be very happy to act as

your guide and show you around some nice places.

By the way, are you watching the World Cup on TV these days?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不

少。如:thank sb for sth因为某事感谢某人；so…that…如此……以至

于……；such as比如；On the one hand …On the other hand, 一方

面……另一方面……； It is adj to do sth，做某事怎么样等。学习中

2017上海中考英语作文评分标准篇二

2017中考英语作文预测

2017中考英语作文预测：

1.Talk about Internet Today，I’ll talk about going online. We know thatthere are too many net-bars (网吧) around us. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable.Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to usethe computer and get more information from the Internet. We can learn English.We can read some good newspapers and magazines. It can make us cleverthrough playing computer games. I can sende-mails to our friends quickly. We can chatonline with our friends. It can help us get in touch with (取得联系) people from all over the world, but unfortunately the government

doesn’t allow communication with many people.

But some students spend too much time playing computer games and some stay in net bars all day and all night.As a result, they do worse and worse in their lessons andthey don’t study well any more. I think we shouldn’t goonline when it is time for us to study. We can do it in summer or winterholidays.

2.It's Important to Learn English

English is widely used throughout the world. So many people speak it as a second language. ()n line, you'll find lots of information in English. If you don't understand English, how can you know more about the world, how can you get more knowledge. At international conferences, English is also used as the official language. Without good English, you cannot express your ideas well at such conferences, neither can you introduce China to the outside world.

3.2016年中考英语话题。学习的苦与乐The Bitter and Happiness of Study

Before I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, sometimes I can’t do well. Every time when I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play andstudy together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.

在我上学前，我很兴奋，因为对校园生活很好奇。如今我已经读初中了，经过了七年的学习，我体会到了苦和乐。苦的是经常会有考试，有时候我考不好。每次我拿到低分的时候，我会担心让父母失望。高兴的是在这里我交到了很多朋友。我们一起玩耍和学习。他们就像是我的兄弟和姐妹。这就是成长的过程，参杂着痛苦和快乐。我很幸运，这些朋友出现在我的生命中，他们对我来说很重要。

4.2016中考英语话题作文：学生做兼职

题目：以“兼职”为话题写一篇初中英语作文

Students Doing Part-time Work(学生做兼职)

范文一：

More and more students are doing part-time work today. Students working part time usually have a positive attitude towards this extracurricular experience. Besides earning some money to support themselves,they can learn a lot which cannot be learned from textbooks. They will learn to get along with different kinds of people,get useful working experiences and learn the value of labor.

However, there are also some disadvantages in students doing part-time work. For example, too much work may cut into student's study time when they should get the best out of their college llfe and lay a good foundation of knowledge for their college life and lay a good foundation of knowledge for their future work. Another disadvantage is that money earned, if not properly used, may lead to some bad habits, or even greed.

Good or bad, it is not easy for students to get part-tithe jobs in China now. Even if they do get some work, they are often badly paid. To change the situation, the society should develop a fresh look at students doing parttime work and provide them with opportunities in applying what they learn in the classroom to the real life situation of our society.

5.2017中考英语作文预测： My View on Television

Television has been in our life for many years. We can’t live happily without television.It can give us the latest information and news. It can open up our eyes and enlarge our knowledge. We canget happiness from the plays on television. We’ll be bored all day if there is no television. Television programsare attractive. After a whole day’s hard work, we can sit before the televisionand drink a cup of tea. How wonderful it is!

Television is also bad for people’s health. It’s not good for you to watch TV for toolong, especially bad for your eyes. It is true that watching TV can influence our behavior and achievement.However, it depends on what we do.

中考英语万能句子：环保

1. It's our duty to protect our environment.

2. It is very important to take care of our environment

3. We should not throw litter onto the ground

4. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

5. We should plant more flowers and trees.

6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

7. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

★范文1. My best friend

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at ho{2017上海中考英语作文评分标准}.

me. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him.

★范文2. The Teacher I Like Best

Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.

he had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.

Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.

★范文3. My Chinese Teacher

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.

My Chinese teacher，Ms Sun is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short. 折works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we＇re getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

话题二：毕业，回忆，感恩，幸福 ，助人为乐，烦恼，

压力

1. 回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，从学习， 生活，爱好等方面作出自我评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价)

★范文

I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese. But my math and physics are a little weak. I think I will try my best to learn them well. I hope I can study in No.1 High School.

2. 初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。

提示词语： three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry

★ 范文

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my

happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years' life. One of them impressed me very much.

I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me.

Little by little, I've become interested in English and I'm good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I've learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

3. My School life ( 我的学校生活)

My name is Beth. I'm 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Hangzhou. My school is very big and beautiful. I'm very happy in the school.{2017上海中考英语作文评分标准}.

I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.

We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes for my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak English with many other students there. It's very interesting and exciting. I think it's help for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play soccer ball, basketball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.

I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life more and more colorful. My school life is wonderful, isn't it?

4. 三年的初中生活就要结束，崭新的高中学习即将到来。回顾过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾；展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以―Unforgettable Memories ‖为题，给英文报纸21st Century ―青春校园‖栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。

Unforgettable Memories

How time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I‘ve made great progress. But I‘m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, ―It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.‖ The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.

2017上海中考英语作文评分标准篇三

2017年中考英语作文专题复习

2017年中考英语作文专题复习

书面表达(结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！)

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！

写作步骤

1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称、要点等细节；

2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分3段（层），以及每段（层）大体内容；

3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；

4 复查：2遍——1遍看查要点、拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；英语写作检查的原则：

5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。

*总之做到三审：体裁、时态和人称、要点；

三思：词汇—>短语—>句式；

三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。

标点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如：

汉语 英语

A. 句号 。 .

B. 省略号 „„ „

C. 顿号 、 无

结构

文章分3段（层）：

（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；

（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；

（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。

逻辑

1)表层次:

1first, second, third, last 2firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3the first, the second, the third, the last 4in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5 to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6to start with, next, in addition, finally 7first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8most important of all, moreover, finally 9on the one hand, on the other hand 10for one thing, for another thing

2)表转折；but, however, yet, though, although, after all, in spite of，

3)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to,since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thus

4)例证 for example, for instance, such as

5)表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact

6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; „have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; have an effect on sb.;

表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy„; be fond of„; be interested in„; show great interest in„;

7)总结 As I see, As for me，As we all know,To my mind, as far as I’m concerned, from my perspective, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact , in a word, all in all, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up,

句型

一（1）简单句

1. 主系表 I am a middle school student. He is fourteen.

2. 主谓 I ran fast.

3. 主谓宾 We will have dinner together.

4. 主谓宾宾补 (主谓+固定搭配) We keep our classroom clean and tidy.

（2）简单句+状语短语

1. 时间状语 I am a middle school student now. He is fourteen this year.

2. 地点状语 We will have dinner together at home.

（3）简单句（主句）+状语短语

1. 时间状语从句 My parents helped me a lot when I was in trouble.

2. 条件状语从句 If you have any questions, please write to me.

3. 原因状语从句 I like English best because it is interesting and fun.

（4）主句+宾语从句

我认为（我想、我希望） I think he is helpful and great.

I believe you will love this city. I hope I can be a volunteer some day.

（5）使用定语从句

我喜欢可以跟着跳舞的音乐。 I love music I can dance to.

父母是我最爱的人。My parents are the people who I love most.

（6）简单句+连词+简单句

1. 并列连接 I am a middle school student and I study in No. 1 Middle School.

2. 转折连接 I work hard at English but my English is not good enough.

3. 因果连接 He is good at English so I often ask him for help.

二1. I am of the opinion that=My point of view is that=I think=I hold the idea that=as far as I’m concerned=To my mind=in my opinion 2.Among various kinds of +复数名词在各种...中，Among various kinds of sports, I like sth in particular. 3 as the saying goes,/as the proverb goes/as the proverb puts it 4 It’s said/reported/believed that 5 It’s our duty to do sth 6 ask/tell sb. (not) to do sth. 7 concentrate on sth 8 be busy doing sth. 9 be supposed to do sth=should do sth 10Every coin has two sides. Computer has both advantages and disadvantages No pains, no gains. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Failure is the mother of success. Think twice before you do. Where there is a will, there is a way. Do as the Romans do. The early bird catches the worm. An apple a day keeps the doctors away. All roads lead to Rome. Practice makes perfect. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。

A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事，今日毕。Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。

11.be glad to do sth 12buy/give/show/bring/lend/send/pass/tell sb. sth. 13 there be 句型 14 enjoy/hate/like/finish/stop/mind/keep/go on doing sth. 15 find it + adj to do sth. 16 get + 比较级 17 don’t do sth=stay away from sth 18 had better (not) do sth. 19 help sb. (to) do/help sb.with 20 I don’t think that 21 I would like to /Would you like to„? 22 is one of the + 最高级 + n(pl.)„ 23 It is +adj. for sb. to do sth. (important/ essential/ necessary/ urgent/ proper)24 It is a good idea to do sth. 25宾语从句、定语从句、感叹句型 26 不用说„„ It goes without saying that „ = （It is） needless to say （that） „= It is obvious that 27 It seems that„ 28 It sounds +adj. /It looks +adj. 29 It takes sb some time. to do sth. 30 It’s bad/good for„ 31 It’s time for„/to do sth. 32 Can you give me some advice on... 33 keep sb. doing 34 keep/make sth. +adj. 35 like to do / like doing 36 make / let sb.(not) do sth. 37 neither„nor 38 not„at all 39 not„until 40 One„the other„/Some„ others„ 41 prefer„to/prefer to...rather than...42 see/hear sb. do(doing) sth. 43 so„that 44 have fun doing sth48 thank sb for sth. 49 The more„the better 50 There is sth. wrong with„ 51 too„to 52 used to 53 What about /How about„? 54 What’s the matter with„? 55 What’s wrong„? 56 Why not„? 57 Will (would, could) you please„?

58.How nice to hear from you again./Let me tell you something about the activity./I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th./I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit./I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.59.I’m looking forward to hearing from you. / I’m looking forward to your reply.

亮点

一、the + est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)

例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V

例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education。没有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much (再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。) 例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much。我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

四、There is no denying that + S + V .。。(不可否认的„„)

例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse。不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道„„)

It is well-known + 句子~~ (全世界都知道„„)

例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us。

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的„„){2017上海中考英语作文评分标准}.

例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired。毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、An advantage of is that + 句子(„„的优点是„„)

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution。使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

八、The reason why + 句子is that + 句子(„„的原因是„„)

例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此„„以致于„„)

例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it。

时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。

十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V (虽然„„)

例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory。

{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不} 虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V

The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V (愈„„愈„„)

例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make。

十二、By +Ving, can (借着„„，„„能够„„)

例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 十三、enable + Object(受词)+ to + V („„使„„能够„„)

例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed

听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能„„)

例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge。

我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是„„的时候了){2017上海中考英语作文评分标准}.

例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems。该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

十六、Those who ~~~ („„的人„„)

例句：Those who break the law should be punished。违法的人应该受处罚。

十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不„„)

例句：There is no one but longs to go to college。没有人不渴望上大学。

十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不„„)

例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports。由于考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的) It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)

例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是„„的原因)

例句：Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

二十一、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式。(过去„„年来，„„一直„„)

例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination。过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。

二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式

例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard。自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

二十三、It pays to + V („„是值得的。)

例句：It pays to help others。帮助别人是值得的。

二十四、be based on (以„„为基础)

例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony。社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)

We should spare no effort to beautify our environment。我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让„„明白„„事)

例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard。我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。

二十七、be closely related to (与„„息息相关)

例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health。做运动与健康息息相关。

二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V (养成„„的习惯)

We should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing。我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。 二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, (因为„„)

例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream。

因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。

三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么„„!)

例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise! How important a thing is to keep our promise!

遵守诺言是多么重要的事!

三十一、Leave much to be desired （令人不满意）

例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.

我们的交通状况令人不满意。

三十二、Have a great influence on ~~ （对„„有很大的影响）

例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.

抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

三十三、do good to （对...有益），do harm to （对„„有害）

例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。

Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。

三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ （对„„造成一大威胁）

例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.

污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。

三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best （尽全力去„„）

例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.

我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。

范文

2017上海中考英语作文评分标准篇四

2016-2017中考英语作文指导及范文

2016-2017中考英语作文指导 如何写好一个句子？ --如何写好复合句。

复合句是由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句构成的句子，我们在写作时，要学会使用宾语从句，状语从句和定语从句等。下面就谈谈有关这方面的一些句型。

句型 1 主+谓+that从句-- We’re sure that we’ll win the first prize.我们肯定能得头奖。He found that his English was too 他发现他的英语太差了。She decides that she is going to be a nurse.他决定要当个护士.I don’t believe that he has finished his work.我相信他还没有做完他的工作.

句型点评：在动词say，think，hope，believe，expect，explain，hear，know，find，regret，remember，decide后可接that引导的宾语从句，that常可省略。

句型2 主句+whether/if+从句.我不知道他会不会来。。我问他是否有字典。I don’t know 句型点评：if和whether可引导一个表示疑问的宾语从句，二者一般情况下可通用。

句型3 主句+疑问词+从句--No one knows what he is doing.没有人知道他在干什么。Take back what I said just now.我收回刚才说的话。Could you tell me where the booking office is？你能不能告诉我售票处在什么地方？I must thank you 我一定要谢谢你为我所做的事。

句型点评：连接代词who，whom，whose，what，which等和连接副词when，where，why，how等都可以用来引导特殊疑问句充当宾语从句。注意：从句中要用陈述语气。 句型4 主句+when/while/as/before/after+从句（时间状语从句)

We took notes as/while/when we were listening to the teacher.我们一边听老师讲课一边做笔记。Please keep silent while/when she’s writing.她在写作，请保持安静.I was speaking when a policeman came in.我正在说话，这时，突然进来一个警察.You must finish the work before I go home.你们必须在我回家以前把工作做完。

句型点评：时间状语从句通常由从属连词when，while，as，after，before等引导，使用时必须注意他们之间的词义和用法区别。

句型5 主句+until/till-从句--Last night,his parents waited for him till/until it was 12.昨晚他父母一直等他到12点。 我们练唱一直练到下课。The child 这个小孩看完电视剧后才开始做功课。He did not go home until/till he finished his work.他一直把工作做完之后才回家。

句型点评：在使用本句型时要注意until/till的用法，若主句中的谓语动词是“keep，remain，stay，wait..”等延续性动词，则用动词的肯定式，until/till的含义是“一直到....为止”；若主句中的谓语动词是“arrive，come，finish，go，reach，start”等瞬间性动词，则用动词的否定式，这时的until/till的含义是“直到....才....” 句型6 主句+since-从句/It is+.....since.....

自从我们来到这个城市，就一直住在这儿。 句型点评：since是从属连词，连接时间状语从句表示“自从....以来”。从句中的谓语动词通常用过去时，主句中的谓语动词通常用现在完成时，以表示从过去某一时刻开始，一直延续到现在的动作或状态。

句型7 主句+as soon as/the moment.... ---Please call us as soon as you arrive at the airport.请你一到机场就给我们打电话。I’ll tell your mother the news as soon as I see her.我一见到你母亲就把这个消息告诉她。As soon as the students got they began to help the farmers with their work.学生们一到农场，the children stopped talking.老师一进来，孩子们立即停止谈话。

句型点评：as soon as表示“一...就...”的意思，它引导的从句所表示的动词几乎跟主句的动作同时发生，相当于the moment that引导的从句。

句型8 主句+where/wherever(no matter where)从句 --Get up where you fall.哪里跌倒就在哪里站起来。She phoned to I always follow you.不论你到哪里，我总是跟着你。Wherever you go，you may find friends.不论你走到哪儿，你可能找到朋友。 句型点评：where和wherever都可引导表示地点的状语从句，不过wherever的语气较强，相当于“no matter where”意思是“不论/无论......在/到哪里....”。

句型9. 主句+because从句；Since/As从句+主句

He didn’t pass the English examination last term .因为他学习不努力，所以上学期英语考you’d better put on a coat.今天天气很冷，you can begin your experiment.既然一切都准备好了，现在你们可以开始做实验了。 句型点评：表示原因的状语从句通常用从属连词because，since和as等引导。 句型10. 主句+so that/in order that-句型

他大声喊，为的是让别人听见。We had to 为的是参观长城和其它名胜。

句型点评：so that/in order that意思是“以便；为的是”，引导表示目的状语从句，其从句中的谓语动词通常要与一些情态动词“may，might，can，could”等连用。另外，“so as to/in order to/to+do”也可引导目的状语。 句型11 主语+be/v+so+adj./adv.+that从句

她唱得很动听，所以受到了听众的高度赞扬。 珍妮是这样一个可爱的孩子，所以每个人都喜欢她。She did so well in the office that she was praised by the manager。她在办公室里

干得很出色，受到了经理的表扬。

句型点评：表示结果的状语从句，通常用“so/such....that”表示“如此...以致”来引导。 句型12 主句+as+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 主句+not/so(as)+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 黄河不像长江那样长。他不像我所想的那样聪明。I hope you will start as early as you can.我希望你们尽早动身。 句型点评：“as+adj./adv.+as”这个结构中，其中的形容词或副词要用原级；“not as（so）+adj./adv.+as”意为“不如....那样；不像....那样”，其中的形容词或副词也用原级。

句型13 主句+adj/adv比较级+than+..... 主句+（the）+adj./adv.最高级+...... 卡车比自行车跑得快多了。It’s 这是我读过的最好的一本小说。In autumn，the weather of Beijing is much cooler than that of Wuhan.秋天北京的天气比武汉凉爽得多。 句型点评：表示甲>乙（或甲< 乙），要用“形容词（或副词）的比较级+than”句型；表示最高级时，常用“（the）+adj/adv.最高级+.....”等句型。

句型14 Though/Although-从句+主句 Although you are very clever,you are unable to work out the problem.尽管你很聪明，你也不可能解出这道题。He made little progress although he studied very hard.尽管他学习很用功，但是他取得的进步很小。

句型点评：though和although引导的让步状语从句可以置于句首，也可以置于句末。注意“though/although”不与不but同时使用。

句型15.主句+if/unless-从句 We will go and visit the museum if it is fine tomorrow.如果明天天晴，我们将去参观博物馆。I won’t let you leave unless you promise to return tomorrow.=If you don’t promise to return tomorrow,I won’t let you leave.除非你答应明天赶回来，否则我就不让你离开。 句型点评：if/unless引导的条件状语从句可以放在句首，也可放在主句后面，其从句常用一般现在时表示将来。（即主从句要遵从：主将从现的原则）

句型16 先行词+关系代词who(that)/whom/whose+从句-- The child who is reading is my daughter.在那儿读书的那个孩子是我的女儿。The man(whom)you met at the gate is my teacher.在门口你碰到的那个人是我的老师。The boy whose mother died in the accident works hard.其母亲在事故中死去的那个孩子学习努力。 句型点评：在定语从句中，如果先行词是人，要用关系代词“who，whose，whom，that”等引导，其中who在定语从句中作主语或宾语；whose在定语从句中做定语，whom在定语从句中作宾语。 句型17 先行词+关系代词that/which+从句

The book(that/which)you lent me yesterday is very interesting.你昨天借给我的书非常有趣。The film which/that is about animal is wonderful.关于动物的那部电影好看极了。

句型点评：在定语从句中，如果先行词是物，要用关系代词“that，which”等引导。在定语从句中that，which作主语时，不能省略；若作宾语时则常省略。 附2015年各省中考满分作文---

1.上周五，你们班举行了《我们的梦想》的主题班会，在班上同学们踊跃发言；有的想成为老师，有的想成为一名警察，有的想当医生.....请你根据下面的表格的提示以“Our Dreams”为题，写一篇英语论文，报告这次班会的情况，并谈谈你自己的梦想。

Our Dreams Last Friday,our class held a class meeting about

our dreams.Here is my report.Liu Wei’s dream is

to be a teacher,so he decides to study education.Li Ming,he does sports every

day,wants to become a policeman,for he thinks

that without physical exercise,he can not make his dream come true.Susan wants to be a movie

dreams one day.

2.某校开展“我是课堂小主人”建议征集活动，各班就此展开讨论，同学们纷纷发言：“我希望能有足够的自主学习时间....”“我喜欢的课堂是每个人都有一台笔记本电脑，方便网上查询.....”“课堂上我们能自由的讨论，充分展示我们的学习成果.....”等等。请你结合同学们讨论的结果，给以电子邮件的形式写一封信，建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱，也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容包括以下要点：

1)What is your favorite class like? 2)Please tell us an unfotgettable experence you’ve had in your class. 3)Please give at least two suggestions. My favorite class is an open and free class where we can learn by myself and discuss in groups,it is good for my development,I think.

I still remember an unforgettable experiencein my math class.Several days ago,I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,but they were too hard for me to work them out.So I had to ask my classmate for help.After a considerable discussion,we solved the problems in our group.How excited I was.

Having such a great experience,I want to give two suggestions.Firstly,please don’t teach us too much in class.We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class.Secondly,please provide us with some laptops if possible,so we can surf the Internet easily.No doubt,we need an open and free class,you see. That’s all.Thank you.

3.请根据提示内容，以“A visit to________home”为题，为学校英文报写一篇短文，叙述你“走亲访友”的一次经历。提示：When？Whose home？ How？ What？ Your feelings..... A visit to my friend’s home

Last Sunday