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英语作文
【原文】
今年是世界反法西斯战争胜利70周年,也是中国人民抗日战争胜利70周年。中国人民浴血奋战14年,最终取得了世界反法西斯战争的伟大胜利。为保护人类文明、捍卫世界和平做出巨大贡献。中国希望同广大同盟国共同回顾总结历史,展望开辟未来,坚定铭记历史、永不再战的庄严承诺,构建以合作共赢为核心的新型国际关系,让世界更加和平,更加和谐,更加美好。 【参考译文】
It is the 70th anniversary of both the world's anti-fascism war and the victory of China's Resistance War against Japanese Aggression this year. The Chinese people finally achieved the great victory of the anti-fascist war of the world after an everlasting bloody battle for 14 years. They made a great
contribution for the protection of human civilization and the dependence of the world peace. China hopes to review history and look forward to the future together with its allies. To insist on remembering the history and the promise of never to fight will be their common goal. Only in this way can they build a brand new international relation, with win-win cooperation as its core, and make the world a more peaceful, more harmonious, more beautiful place to live in.
The Chinese Dream, My Dream
Our president Xi first came up with the view chinese dream.For the chinese dream,is a constant pursuit.reviewed the history of the Chinese nation 100 years the dream of power and unremitting exploration,shows a picture of the world national revival.
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor.Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are
智能手机I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
[2] The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone. And what’s more, it’s the latest fashion.
[3] However, most teachers think middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. And it’s easy to cause the students to vie with each other. If necessary, they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.
[4] In my opinion, following the fashion is understandable. But as middle school students, we should put all our heart into our studies
作文模板
一)原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation. A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2. The answer to this problem involves many factors. 3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that... 4. The factors that contribute to this situation include... 5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that... 6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are... 7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...
One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ... Another contributing factor (cause ) is ... Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that ... 二)比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages. 2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that... 4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that... 5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages. 6.Like anything else, it has its faults. 7.A and B has several points in common. 8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B. 10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects. 12. People used to think ..., but things are different now. 13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ... 三)批驳
1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact. 3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is. 6) It makes no sense to argue for ...
7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ... 9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ... 四)后果
1. It may give rise to a host of problems. 2. The immediate result it produces is ... 3. It will exercise a profound influence upon... 4. Its consequence can be so great that... 五)举例
1) A good case in point is ... 2) As an illustration, we may take ... 3) Such examples might be given easily. 4) ...is often cited as an example. 六)证明
1) No one can deny the fact that ... 2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ... 4) Recent studies indicate that ...
5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ... 七)开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ... 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...
6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular. 7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ... 8) According to a recent survey, ... 9) With the rapid development of ..., ...
八)结尾
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ... 3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ... 4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help. 6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly. 9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ... 10) Taking all these into account, we ...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
山西省平遥县2015高考英语一轮起航短文改错(1)
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错(1)及参考答案
1. 短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument.Of course, he can’t.Then you take a glass of water.You put your finger in water and then move it slow round the rim of the glass, as shown in the picture.Your finger must not be much wet, but it must not be dry.So you must try many time.At last you will hear clear music which comes from the glass.When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass to vibrate and the glass makes a musical voice.The same principle makes the violin or its strings give music.
The America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls.He used the different principle.
【参考答案】1.
Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument.Of course, he
if / whether
can’t.Then you take a glass of water.You put your finger in∧water and then move
it slow round
the slowly
the rim of the glass, as shown in the picture.Your finger must not be much wet, but
it must not
very / too
be dry.So you must try many time.At last you will hear clear music which comes from
the
times
glass.When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glassvibrate and the
glass makes a
musical voice.The same principle makes the violin or its strings give music.
sound and
The America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass
bowls.He
American
used the different principle.
same
(201***·保定调研)
Last Sunday I went to the Bird's Nest Stadium. At gate1.________
I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2.________
to them in English and then we began to chat. From the chat3.________
I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4.________
but most of them were fond of Chinese culture. They were5.________ busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6.________
the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7.________
After come out of the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8.________ and had a good time there. We exchanged our email address so that9.________ we could write to each other later. They thanked us again and again.10.________ I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.
答案与解析:
1.gate前加the 此处表示特指,指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。
2.America→American 应该用形容词来修饰名词。
3.去掉第一个to greet是及物动词,可直接加宾语,不必加to。
4.√
5.but→and 来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折,应用and表示并列。
6.seem→seemed 根据事情发生的时间last Sunday和全文的时态可知,此处也应用一般过去时。
7.去掉been take place无被动语态。
8.come→coming 介词after后要用动名词形式。
9.address→addresses 交换的是双方的邮箱地址,故此处应用复数形式。
10.us→me 是“我”帮助了他们,因此用me。
1.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分lO分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:l每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改lO处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Bobby was a dog that went every moming to a baker's shop to fetch twelve bread roll for its owner. However. when Bobby returned back one day, it had only eleven rolls. Bobby's owner wants to know what had happened, but he followed Bobby to the baker's shop the next day Instead taking the road home as usually. Bobby took another road and went up to a farm. There was a poorer little dog with a broken leg. Bobby was offered the roll to the little dog. The owner was very proud of Bobby and rewarded
itself a nice big bone. Later, the owner's family never grew tired of tell everybody how kind and clever Bobby was
【参考答案】1、
2. 短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you. For other reason I think it will be too more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is up to you to make right choice.
【参考答案】2.
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking
ago about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your
asked finishing studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our
what country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in
easy companies convenient
another
for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is
But
up to you to make∧ right choice.
a
3.短文改错
I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in
my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li
山西省平遥县2015高考英语一轮起航短文改错(4)
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错(4)及参考答案
短文改错(每小题I分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。{10篇英语作文初一平遥的}.
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. Two minutes ago, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
【参考答案】6. 76. In---on 77. while---when 78. sides---side
79. drive---driving 80.made---make 81. she---he
82.young woman---a young woman
83. 加who/wearing 84.ago---later 85. passed---passing
1.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分) 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有
10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。{10篇英语作文初一平遥的}.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
【参考答案】1.
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited ∧ a bus to come at a stop. 30
for
minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner
passed
foot
4.短文改错
Tom and Jack are next door neighbours who all work 66. _________
in same office, so they often walk together to and from 67. _________ work. One afternoon, they were walking home together 68. _________ while it started to rain. Tom quickly opened his 69. _________ umbrella and said proud, “My wife really has great 70. _________ foresight (远见). She said this morning it will rain 71. _________ and told me carry my umbrella with me.” Jack smiled 72. _________ and walked closely to him under the protection of Tom’s 73. _________ umbrella and said, “My wife has more greater foresight. 74. _________ He didn’t let me carry mine and told me to use yours.” 75. _________
【参考答案】4. Tom and Jack are next door neighbours who all work 66. both in∧ same office, so they often walk together to and from 67. the work. One afternoon, they were walking home together 68. √
while it started to rain. Tom quickly opened his 69. when umbrella and said proud, “My wife really has great 70. proudly foresight (远见). She said this morning it will rain 71. would and told me ∧carry my umbrella with me.” Jack smiled 72. to and walked closely to him under the protection of Tom’s 73. close umbrella and said, “My wife has He didn’t let me carry mine and told me to use yours.” 75. She
5.短文改错
Dear Hou Ting,
I am sorry that maths disappoint you, but you can’t give it up.
66. _____
As you say, it is one of the most important subject and there 67. _____
is a reason for this. We have to use maths from all the time.
68. _____
69. Wherever your career takes you, maths will have to be using.
_____
In fact , most employers and universities will accept people 70. _____
71. _____
72. _____ who have failed or given up maths. All you can do is try your best in maths and make the most use of time you had. If you
have trouble understand anything, the first person you should
73. _____
tell is your teacher. That is often surprising how simple things
74. _____
75. _____ seem when you are explained properly — even maths problems!
【参考答案】5.
66. disappoint - disappoints 67. subject - subjects 68. 去掉from{10篇英语作文初一平遥的}.
69. using - used 70. will后加not或will – won’t 71.正确
72. had - have 73. understand - understanding 74.That - It
75. you - they
6.短文改错
A few years ago, some tourists pay no attention to 66.____________ environmental protection . They threw waste things about, 67. _____________ like plastic bags, fruit skins and waste papers. Sometimes 68. _____________ they broke trees, picked up flowers and killed birds; some 69._____________ even made fires in the woods to cook for picnics. What 70. ___ ___ dangerous it was! Fortunately, great changes have been 71. ___ ___ taken place here. All the tourists have got used to put their 72. ___ ___ rubbish into dustbins. But they are making great efforts to 73. ___ ___
protect birds and plants as well. They bring our own meals 74. ___ ___ prevent any accidental fire. All these should be appreciated. 75. ___ ___
【参考答案】6.
66. pay→ paid 67.∨ 68. papers→ paper 69. 去掉up 70. What→ How
71.去掉been 72. put→ putting 73. But→ And 74. our→ their
75. prevent 前加 to
4.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
山西省平遥县2015高考英语一轮起航短文改错(6){10篇英语作文初一平遥的}.
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错(6)及参考答案
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词作斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have many friends so my best friend is called Li Hao. I met him about
five years before in a class we attended together. Though we didn’t know
each other before, but we have lots of things in common. At that time, the pressure with us to study was quite heavily. We both hoped to pass the National
College Entrance Exam and entered university. She was very diligent and we both
studied hard. I was good at maths while she good at English. Finally, we both did
very well in the exam. In fact, she gave me a lot of helps with my study. Our
friendship has growing a great deal over the last five years.
【参考答案】4.
第一行so改为and/but; him改为her;
第二行before改为ago; 第三行去掉but;
第四行with改为on; heavily改为heavy; 第五行entered改为 enter;
第六行good 前加上was; 第七行helps改为help;
第八行growing改为grown。
5.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school.
Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to participate in a volunteer labour. They reached the park on nine o'clock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and watered flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter(垃圾) leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. Group Three wiped all the equipments on the Children's Playground. All of us worked hardly. Before noon we finished working. Each of us feel a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.
【参考答案】5.
The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can
you
I
labour. They
We
reached thOne planted
was
trees and watered flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter(垃圾) leaving by the
tourists and
were left
cleaned all the benches. Group Three wiped all the equipments on the Children's
Playground. All
equipment
of us worked hardly. Before noon we finished working. Each of us feel a little bit
tired, so we
hard felt but were happy because we had done a good deed.
4.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。{10篇英语作文初一平遥的}.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his hand. On the wall was a fly he took for a nail. The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they fell and broke. When the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him favor. The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had been. Before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him the accident. Looking at the spot what he thought
the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped it with all his strengths. On hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in. To her surprise, the poor old man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched(咬紧) and the palm of his hand bleed.
【参考答案】4.
An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his
came
hand. On the wall was a fly he took for a nail. The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they
it fell and broke. When the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him
去掉 been
∧ favor. The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the
a exactly “fly” had been. Before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him ∧the
When of accident. Looking at the spot what he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped
where it with all his strengths. On hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in. To her surprise, the poor
strength
old man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched (咬紧) and the palm of his hand bleed.
Bleeding
5.短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A recent survey show that most students often communicate with our parents. But there are still some think it embarrassing to share their ideas with them. Actually everyone should attach importance to family communication. It can be strengthen the bond of the whole family or bridge the gap between children and parents. Besides, share your personal problems and emotions will greatly help reduce the pressure on you and build up your confidence. As for my family, we had a special dinner together every Saturday evening, over that everyone takes turns to share one problem. Then others try to suggest solutions. In this way the whole family can enjoy every single bit of life. I think my family will stick out the tradition forever.
【参考答案】5. A recent survey shows that most students often communicate with our parents. But
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山西省平遥县2015高考英语一轮起航短文改错(3)
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错(3)及参考答案
1.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Elli,
I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for
everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary
that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making
fun of me
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My
other problem
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other
way?
Please give me some advices.
Yours,
Mary
【参考答案】1.
Dear Elli,
I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for friends with
everyone. Butdiary
that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making
fun of me
disliked She be
because I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My
other problem
friendly
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other
way?
Or
Please give me some advices.
advice
Yours,
Mary
4.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
下面短文中共有10处错误,错误涉及每一个单词的增加、删除或或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Mr.Smith had neither wife nor children.He liked nothing but drinking.He
almost spent all of his money drinks.Sometimes he went hungry, but he had to borrow some money to buy some food.One evening he met a friend of him in the street.The man invited him to have dinner in a restaurant.He was very happy that he drank too much.His friend stopped a taxi and ask the driver to take him home.Soon they reached in the door of his house.The driver drove away.But Mr.Smith couldn't insert the key into the keyhole.Just then a policeman went up, offering to help him but he refused, saying "the house is circled now.If you can keep it moving, I can open the door myself.”
【参考答案】4、
1. 4.wife前加 a
2. money 后加on 或者 drinks 改为 drinking
3. but改为and 或so
4. him改为his
5. very 改为so
6. ask改为asked
7. in 删掉
8. went 改为came
9. circled 改为 circling
keep改为stop或者prevent,或在moving前加 from
5.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am glad to hear of you again. You want to know that everything is going in our
school. In shortly, all has been improving since the school had began to carry on new policies. In the past, teachers always keep on explaining the points in class. Our students just listened and took note. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. Before class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We can go to the library or surf Internet for various kinds of information. We are now masters of study, and we are happy.
【参考答案】5. I am glad to hear of you again. You want to know that everything is going in our school. In shortly, all has been
from how
short always keep on explaining the points
kept
in class. Our students just listened and took note. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the
We notes raised
teachers or ourselves. Before class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For
After
example, we can read what we are interested in. We can go to the library or surf^Internet for various kinds of information. the
We are now masters of study, and we are happy.
2.短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
【参考答案】2. I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after
with
school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of the full every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am her
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abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
3.短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面加上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
山西省平遥县2015高考英语一轮起航短文改错(2)
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错(2)及参考答案
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time .We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English.
【参考答案】
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2.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his hand. On the wall was a fly he took for a nail. The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they fell and broke. When the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him favor. The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had been.