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目录

TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路＋范文 完美重排版 …………………………3

本部分填补了目前网络iBT 备考资料的空白。根据李笑来老师提供的作文思

路与《iBT 高分作文》原书范文重排。本部分对iBT 考试的独立写作部分与

口语部分均具有重要的参考作用。

范文中加粗部分均依为原书所有。

附录一 185 题库按关键词分类 …………………………………………184

照录原书附录

附录二 李笑来作文笔记（独立部分）…………………………………185

根据本人新东方听课详尽笔记整理而成

附录三 句法多样性专题 ………………………………………………193

摘自李笑来老师网站（）

附录四 例证表达法 ………………………………………………………199

摘自李笑来老师网站（）

时间匆忙，欢迎指出错误，将在后面的版本中修正。

感谢笑来老师给我们提供了如此之好的备考材料，一切版权归笑来老师所有。

仅供广大iBT 考生备考参考，建议购买原版以更好使用。

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1. Why people attend college?

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,

career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机

会 父母要求子女上大学 别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书 找不到工作

("无知"，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险

运动亦如是[43]。)

相关题目：[168]

『范文』

After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work

force. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding

jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for

advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. Before attending college, students have a

limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be

competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science

degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well

prepared for

any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from,

degree holders

are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.

Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example,

many

companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher

salaries to attract

them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores,

employers may still place

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a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a

well-known

university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of

competence in a

given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also

command higher

salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.

Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to

jobs with a

clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a

student to find a job

in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same

major could also

be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be

unavailable without

taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.

2. Are parents the best teachers? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents

are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

最好的老师不仅仅是父母

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

z有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

『范文』

Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are

generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely

true to say that parents are the best teachers.

First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less

have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating

their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another

deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of

education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream

by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do

not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In

fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses

Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones.

When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of

teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school.

But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by

multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a

professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No parent

is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise

parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the

possibility outside the family.

Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts

of children education are virtually beyond teachers' reaches. It is parents that supplement.

Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to

their children. Albeit Einstein's mother and that of Forest Gump are both good examples. On the

other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of

those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted.

In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.

3. Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

总体上，―食物变得越来越容易准备‖是一种进步[37]，所以自然会带来improvement。使人们

的生活方式发

生了一些变化： 好的：

节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来

也有不好的变化：

准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减

少

了，比如―速冻饺子‖[quick-frozen dumpling]

快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩子

相关题目：[13]

『范文』

People today can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. To prepare a single

dinner,provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to buy home dirty

vegetables which had to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. Each and every step of

preparation was a time-consuming task. But now, things are entirely different. Supermarkets

provide vegetables and meat clean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and

need only a few minutes to be made into delicious meals. And this change has indeed greatly

improved the way people live. In a sense, food preparation is no longer a tedious task, at least

much easier to tolerate. Such a change has liberated many women and given them chance to do

more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. On the other hand,

more men are becoming willing to do the thing that they once hated so much, and in some cases

such transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on the family. Today, it's not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a day's hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has already prepared her several her favorite dishes! Children can more easily become independent—at least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents are

occasionally not present. But such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. Girls nowadays are becoming more and more reluctant to deem household work as their

responsibility. The reason is quite straightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: "I can work as well, or maybe I can earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if you want to marry me, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day?" And some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is one thing: "I can take care of myself, at least I don't really need someone prepare me dinner!" Anyway, such a

change is positive and it did improve the quality of people's life. At least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no matter what kind of

opportunity it is.

4. Which is more important, book knowledge or experience?

It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is

more important? Why?

『分析』

注意一定要先进行比较

从书本中获取的知识

优点：

题材、范围更多

有更多的深度

更加的系统

缺点：

有时过于教条

也不见得完全准确

从经验中获取的知识

优点：

获取直接、简单明了

更加地实用

有些知识无法从书本中获得

缺点：

不系统，很大的随意性

很容易产生片面理解

不一定要说A比B更重要，或者B比A更重要。也可以选择在不同的情况下，有不同的比较。学习抽象

的知识，书本是最好的来源。学习游泳，这只能靠经验。另外，大多数的知识要书本经验相结合才可

以。

相关题目：[116]

有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习，比如，语言，体育

有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、地理

有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧；管理技巧

所以不能一概而论(treat different things/problems/matters] as the same)，要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。

『范文』{toeflibt高分作文:toefl官方题库大全}.

In general, knowledge gained from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. We now live in a world that typophile is no longer exorbitant, and that printed matters are readily available. In libraries, we can learn nearly everything only if we have already acquired basic

reading skills, philosophy, history, literature, physics, mathematics, chemicals, biology, geography, anthropology, and the list will go on. Unlike the experience of an individual that is limited by the range of that individual, books seem to have almost no limitation. Sitting in the local library, we virtually can travel everywhere through an interesting geographic encyclopedia, and certainly, with nearly no expense at all. On the other hand, it can be argued that sometimes knowledge

gained from experience is much deeper and more comprehensive than that gained from books. It is quite true that not every thing is contained in books. How to deal with personal finance, how to cope with current social trends, even how to most effectively organize our own mind, and

numerous other things can seldom be found thoroughly and comprehensively discussed in books, we have to gain the knowledge by our own experience. And the sad news is that even some knowledge that is contained in books usually needs further comprehension, mainly through experience. As to which source is more important, the answers vary. Some knowledge can be acquired only through books. It's hard to imagine we can have a good understanding of history without reading books. On the other hand, some knowledge can be obtained only through experience. When we try to learn to swim, merely a detailed manual of swimming skills, even abundantly filled with illustrations, is at most useless. We have to jump into the water and then gain the knowledge with experience. We have to use books and experience as source

simultaneously to get what we want to know. Take learning physics for example, both books and experiences are equally important sources, and examples as such are numerous. Therefore, I think whether one source is more important than the other depends on circumstances.

5. The advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near your community

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the

factory? Explain your position.

『分析』

先讨论―假设工厂真的落成了，而带来的好处和坏处‖，而后发表看法。

好处：

直接增加了就业机会(到工厂去上班)；间接增加了就业机会(会有很多服务业，比如饭店、商店、

超市等等跟着开业)

如果工厂规模足够大，物流规模也足够大，那么将最终成为交通改善的起点

大的工厂可以缴纳很多税，对地方财政有好处，进而促进社区的繁荣

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Topic1：有人认为人类活动是环境变坏，对此你怎么认为?

Topic29 Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Topic: 1

People have been living on the Earth for thousands of years. Human activity influences the Earth. Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. In my opinion, the earth is being damaged by human activity. There are many statements supporting my opinion.

Human activity has damaged natural environment and almost exausted natural resources. Modern industry needs more and more resources, including minerals, fuels and water. So we confront of the serious problems such as the lack of fuels and water. Ecological balance is damaged because factories occupy many places where animals and plants live. More and more buildings are constructed and forests become less and less. If we cannot recognize these problems and solve them soon, we would finally lose the environment suitable for our living.{toeflibt高分作文:toefl官方题库大全}.

An other serious problem is "the green-house effect." Human activity decreases forests and increases the usage of fuels so that the gas of carbon dioxide is output more and more and there are not enough plants to absorb it. The green-house effect is more obvious and more sensible these years. Due to the effect, icebergs in the south polar and north polar melt and the sea level becomes higher than before. I am worried about the cities nearby the sea and hope scientists find an effective method to eliminate the green-house effect.

Although we have advanced machines and our life seems more comfortable than before, we have less chances to approach natures.....

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胡敏老师的 托福 全真高分作文：It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I can see both advantages and disadvantages to having a new restaurant built in our neighborhood. I'm worried

about traffic and how it will affect our neighborhood. However, I think that it will benefit local businesses and increase appreciation for our neighborhood. Overall, I think it is a good idea.

Traffic congestion is always a concern when you build something new. Our streets are narrow, with parking on both sides. More cars traveling through the neighborhood could cause a lot of congesting. Traffic means parking problems, too. Our neighborhood has very few garages attached to the houses. Most of us depend on finding a space to park on the street. If the new restaurant is built, we’ll be competing for those spaces with the restaurant's patrons. Plus, if the restaurant offers wallet parking, it'll be even worse. Valet parkers work in teams to grab every possible space available on the street.

I'm also concerned about the type of patrons this new restaurant will bring into our neighborhood. A family

restaurant wouldn't be a problem. However, if it's going have a bar and dancing, then there could be problems. The restaurant would stay open later, and people leaving the restaurant might be drunk. Who wouldn't worry about rowdy customers staggering around our neighborhood in the early morning hours, looking for their cars?

I have to admit, though, there are advantages to a new restaurant. Our neighborhood could certainly use the jobs the restaurant would provide. Not only that, the money neighborhood residents would earn there would likely be spent at other neighborhood businesses. This would give a boost to those businesses and make our neighborhood more prosperous.

A new restaurant would also attract a lot of people to our neighborhood. They could see what a nice area this is to live. That might attract new residents to the neighborhood. That would be a good thing, because we've been losing residents to the suburbs the last couple of years.

There are a lot of details to consider, but all in all, I support the idea of this new restaurant in our neighborhood.

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1. Why people attend college?

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,

career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机

会 父母要求子女上大学 别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书 找不到工作

("无知"，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险

运动亦如是[43]。)

相关题目：[168]

『范文』

After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work

force. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding

jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for

advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. Before attending college, students have a

limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be

competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science

degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well

prepared for

any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from,

degree holders

are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.

Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example,

many

companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher

salaries to attract

them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores,

employers may still place

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a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a

well-known

university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of

competence in a

given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also

command higher

salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.

Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to

jobs with a

clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a

student to find a job

in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same

major could also

be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be

unavailable without

taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.

2. Are parents the best teachers? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents

are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

最好的老师不仅仅是父母

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

z有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

『范文』

Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are

generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely

true to say that parents are the best teachers.

First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less

have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating

their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another

deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of

education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream

by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do

not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In

fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses

Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones.

When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of

teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school.

But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by

multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a

professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No parent

is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise

parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the

possibility outside the family.

Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts

of children education are virtually beyond teachers' reaches. It is parents that supplement.

Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to

their children. Albeit Einstein's mother and that of Forest Gump are both good examples. On the

other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of

those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted.

In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.

3. Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

总体上，―食物变得越来越容易准备‖是一种进步[37]，所以自然会带来improvement。使人们

的生活方式发

生了一些变化： 好的：

节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来

也有不好的变化：

准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减

少

了，比如―速冻饺子‖[quick-frozen dumpling]

快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩子