管理学 点击: 2013-04-08
看范文学BEC中级写作
BEC考生练习写作时,看范文会不知道自己的问题在哪里,自己写的作文也不知道该如何改进,下面是两篇范文和详细的点评,说不定也能发现自己练习时的问题。
笔者上商务英语的课已经有些年头了。个人的体会是,商务英语课程以其务实、针对性强而受到学生的青睐,近年来报考的学生数明显大幅上升。当然要得高分也不易,尤其是作文部分,由于BEC写作和我们传统的作文考试题要求相差较大,学生比较难以适应。
本文通过对BEC中级考生文章的分析,给广大考生一点备考建议。
首先一点,我们必须牢记,归根结底,BEC作文考察的还是考生英语表达能力。所以学生并不需要担心自己缺乏这方面的实际经验是否会影响考场发挥。(顺便提一句,BEC高级对商务知识的要求大大提高,因此考生要在语言功底上苦下功夫。比如说,写商务报告的固定格式和用于必须牢记在心。)
与此同时,试题结合商务实战的特点,要求文章必须包含特定信息点,或者是通过提供信息源,以及考题中的标注,规定考生写作的具体范围和内容。所以审题是关键,所有已知条件都必须充分利用,换言之,如果遗漏已知条件,就会因信息表达不完整而导致失分。以下是对我的一名学员习文进行点评。
PART ONE
You have been informed that next Wednesday your company's computer system will be closed down so that improvements can be made.
Write an email to all staff in your department:
♦ saying what time on Wednesday the system will be closed down
♦ suggesting how staff should prepare for this
♦ saying how the system will be better after the improvements
Write 40--50 words
学生作文:
From: Jenny Xu
To: All Staff
Date: 5 April 2009
Subject: Computer System
I want to tell you that our Intranet based on Linux will be closed next Wednesday at 10 o’clock.. I want to suggesting that you should save all your important documents. The computer system will be faster because we will use a newer SAP system. The new system is according to ISO900 and we will benefit from that.
作文解析:
BEC作文解答时,审题非常重要。题目中给出的要求就好比是解代数题中已知条件,都要用到。小作文处理的时候,大家不妨可以把每一个已知条件扩写成一句句句子,同时兼顾句子之间的连接。
通常学生犯的错误是:
1. 漏掉题中给出的已知条件。
2. 给出的已知条件没有表达清楚,用词过于口语化,没有条理,暴露出语言功底薄弱。
3. 切忌过于花哨的发挥,多说多错。
这篇学生的作品是比较典型的案例。作者有一定的英语表达能力和工作经验,但文章中所暴露出来的不足也是明显的。写作不能从细处下笔,而是先要搭建框架。
以这篇习文为例,作者在具体语言的表达的雕琢上可圈可点,比如说第一个句子中based on引导的过去分词做后置定语,但是显而忘记了这篇文章的主要目的,那就是通知同事公司电脑系统要升级,但update这个词始终没有在文章中出现,因此读下来以后,可能同事还不是非常清楚,为什么computer system will be closed down, 尽管后面提到了improvement,总让人觉得有些如鲠在咽,言之不尽;因此,思路不清晰是这篇习文最大的问题。
此外,本文还有以下一些问题:
1. 有些用词过于口语化,比如说,文章开头, I want to tell you, 文中you should save这样的用语;
2. 建议Linux, 将SAP, ISO900等唬人术语统统除去,诚然BEC涉及到基本的商务知识,但是真正考核的还是语言功底,语用能力;商务知识好比是盖浇饭里面的小炒而已。
3.里面还有一个明显的语法错误,I want to suggesting„.,当然阅卷者不会刻意去搜寻语法错误,而是综合考量语法得分,但由于小作文篇幅较短,那么这个错误就显得非常明显。
范文:
Please be informed that our computer system will be closed next Wednesday at 12 o'clock for system upgrade. The closure will last for at least two hours. Make sure that you have saved all your documents before that time. The whole system will run on a new server, much faster than the current one.{bec中级范文}.
PART TWO
You work for PJT Ltd, a manufacturing company. You need more staff in your department and your line manager has asked you to write a report explaining why.
Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.
Write 120-140 words.
学生作文:
The purpose of this report is to explain why we need more staff in our department.
We compare the number of staff in our department between 2001 and 2003, it only increased five staff. But the average number of ordered units grow up from 200000 to 400000 between 2001 and 2003.
Our sales department has announced a big new order from an international company recently. It will bring us much more workload. And the annual holiday increased to 5 weeks per year. That means that we have more workload and less working days.
If we had more staff the order should be on time. We should save our company’s reputation. And the workflow will be improved.
作文解析:
BEC中级的大作文题型一般以写报告、书信为主,因此,这些必考问题的具体格式必须掌握。英文商务报告的格式有五个部分组成,其中包括报告的Subject, Introduction (This report aims/sets out to„„),Findings (it was found that), Conclusions(It was decided/agreed/felt that„„), Recommendations (It is suggested that„..) 括号中是每段开头固定的表达方式,考生不宜自己去创造。同样写信也有格式化的表达方式,再此恕不展开。 和第一部分一样,大作文的写作审题是第一步,所有给出的已知条件必须用足。
本文中:
1.考生的习文字数恰当。但没有把报告应有的四个部分写完整,这将导致大量失分。在以上的习文中,考生表现出了不错的语言驾驭能力。{bec中级范文}.
2.在审题上还有一些欠缺,比如 Another reason for more staff is that we will have fewer delays. 在题目中给出的已知条件中,有一份客户的投诉信件,应当作为佐证被引用,否则order should be on time无从谈起。
3.除了没有按照报告的固定格式外,考生语言太随意。比如说,our sales department has announced a big new order,没有出处,而根据文章中给出的已知条件,这是公司Newsletter
所通告的,那么根据报告的要求,应该指出信息来源。
4.中国学生还普遍特别敏感的就是企业的信誉,因此经常会看到学生动辄就是喊口号的语言,比如说文中We should save our company’s reputation. 这样空洞无物的话应该避免。
5.还有就是细节处理,句子和段落之间连接忽略了。比如说,It will bring us much more workload. And the annual holiday increased to 5 weeks per year. 以及最后一句话And the workflow will be improved.其中的and 这个词用在这里显随意了些,可以考虑用Meanwhile 有“祸不单行”的意思。后面的And 应该删除。That means that we have more workload 这里两个that离的太近,可以考虑把后面一个去掉,同时时态应该是we will have。
范文:
Report on: More staff in our department
Date: 27.03.2004
Introduction
This report aims to explain why our department needs more staff.
Findings
Statistics show that there exists a big gap between the number of staff in our department and staff workload. While the number of ordered units grew up from only 200000 to 400000 in 2 years, the number of staff grew only by 5 people. According to the Staff Newsletter dated February 2004, we have won a big new order from an international company. That will bring us more work. At the same time, annual holiday has been increased to 5 weeks per year, meaning there won’t be enough staff for all the work. Our customer service department recently received a complaint from one of our clients about a tremendous delay in our delivery.
Conclusion
There are many reasons which explain the need of more staff. It is especially important for reducing the number of delays in delivery and to optimize the workflow.
Recommendations
More staff does not only mean more costs, it also means improved customer satisfaction.
BEC中级作文模板、句型总结
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BEC中级作文模版
新编剑桥商务英语(中级)学生用书(经科版)
作文范文
Unit 2b P26下
Dear Ms Goddard
With reference to your letter of November 3, I am writing to thank you for your kind invitation.
I would be very pleased to accept your invitation to visit Oxford and see Trackplus production facilities. I would also be interested in meeting your colleagues at Head Office, the design team in particular. I should also be delighted to accept your offer of arranging for me to see a play in the West End.
Unfortunately, due to a business trip abroad, I am unable to come to England at the end of November as you suggested.However, as I feel it is important that we meet before Christmas, I would be grateful if you could tell me if the second week of December would be suitable for you?
I look forward to hearing from you again.
Yours sincerely
Paolo Fellini
Unit 3a P32下
Dear Korinna
Re:Order for Faci(314739) and Cristi (315227)skirts
Thank you for your fax concerning the above skirts.
I discussed the problems regarding the two skirts with Mr Hubner during his trip to Italy.
The skirt made by Faci has a slit at the bottom, which might make it difficult if the customer wanted to change the length of the skirt.We therefore agreed that the vendor would have to supply the skirt in two different lengths.
Mr Hubner also thought it might be better to leave the two different lengths of
the Cristi skirt.The skirt has a special knitting technique; as a result, it might be difficult if the customer wanted to shorten it.
When Mr Hubner left Italy, I thought we had sorted the problems out .I was therefore surprised by your fax cancelling the other sizes.
Please let me know if you definitely want to cancel the other length skirts. As for reducing the total quantinty, I will wait for confirmation of the information about lengths before I contact the vendors.
Thanks and best regards.
Unit 3a P36
Dear Antonella
Thank you for your fax. In answer to your queries, I can confirm that the measurements charts do not need changing and all knitted skirts will now be produced in a standard length. We would like to propose a delivery date of 30 June. Does that suit you?
Best regards
Korinna
Unit 3b P37
Hi Steve
It’s good to know that business is going well, of course I’ll help! I think Sue’s idea could be one solution but wait and let’s discuss it together in more detail. How about a meeting on Friday at 10 am in my office? See you then.
Barbara
Unit 4b P50下
Dear Mr Downe
I am pleased to be able to invite you to the launch of English Tomorrow.the exciting new multi-level CD-ROM program for business English learners. English Tomorrow is published by Talk International in cooperation with
Bookers Publishers.
The official launch will take place at 3pm on 25th July at Tht Royal Bell Hotel. South Harford, Somerset.
During the afternoon there will be an opportunity for you to try out the material. Moreover,the
you may have.
Yours sincerely
Ruth Williams
PR Manager
Unit 5a P58
A comparison of ERS and Worldwide Relocation
Introduction
The aim of this report is to assess which of the two companies, ERS or Worldwide Relocation, would be the most suitable for the relocation of Fenway employees and their families from Seattle to Dublin.
Findings
Both ERS and Worldwide Relocation offer an accommodation and school search services. Both companies can organise visas and work permits. In addition to these basic services, ERS also offers removal and shipping assistance whereas Worldwide Relocation offers an integretion programme and assistance with partner employment. The latter is a key requirement for Fenway.
Conclusion
It was concluded that both companies go some way to fulfilling Fenway’s needs, but neither meets all its needs.
Recommendation{bec中级范文}.
We would recommend that Worldwide Relocations be chosen to facilitate the relocation process as its services match Fenway’s requirements more closely designers-Mark Brightman and Sally Waters, and representatives of Bookers Publishers will be present to answer any questions
than ERS’ do.
Unit 5b P60 上
4 place Jean Moulin
Dear Mr Slater
I am writing to say that, after having visited the site, my company is very interested in renting the office premises at 4 place Jean Moulin. However, I would be very grateful if you could give me some further information.
Firstly, would it be possible for you to tell me which companies share the site? Could you also tell me how many floors there are in the building in total? We are only interested in renting a single floor of the building. Would this be possible?
You say the property is near two metro stations. Please can you tell me which they are? I would also like to know where the additional surface car-parking is exactly.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Exam focus P78下
To: Sales Team
From: Huge Jones, Assistant Sales Manager
Unfortunately, I have to postpone next week’s sales meeting. I have to go to Munich early in the week because Rosemary is ill. I’ll be back on Thursday. Could we therefore have our meeting on Friday at eleven o’clock?
Unit 6a P86下
Ramsden Breweries and Bute Chemicals:Investment Potential
Introduction
This report aims to assess which company,either Ramsden Breweries or Bute Chemicals, this company should invest in.
Ramsden{bec中级范文}.
The company had mixed results last year;although turnover increased by approximately 25%, net profit rose by less than 4%. However, restructuring may be able to eliminate these inefficiencies and expected growth in the drinks industry suggests opportunities for increased profits.
Bute
Results were disappointing, with turnover and profit both falling slightly. Nevertheless, the company managed to increase its dividend to shareholders. The rumoured merger seems likely to push up the share price considerably. Conclusion
Despite the merger rumours, any investment in Bute Chemicals would involve a risk.
Ramasden, on the other hand, despite its present inefficiency, is still profitable and has definite potential for further growth.
Recommendation
We would recommend investment in Ramsden Breweries.
Unit 6b P90下
Environmental performance
Introduction
This report sets out to compare our environmental performance over the last four years with the targets which we have set out for next year.
Waste reduction
There was an increase in non-hazardous waste three years ago, this was due to by-products resulting from the new processing system. Although the amount has fallen steadily since then it seems unlikely that next year’s target level will be achieved.
In contrast, the introduction of the new waste processing system enabled us to reduce hazardous waste to target levels three years ago.
Energy dfficiency
BEC剑桥商务英语中级作文模板、例题超全解析
BEC中级作文模板、例题超全解析 题型: 1.商务便条类; 2.商务便函类;3.商务书信类;4. 商务报告类
注意:BEC不是单纯的英语考试,也不是考察商务知识。
对策:学习、模仿高水平的论文
例题解析:
You work for a company which produces laser printers.You are visiting another company,Softcell, to buy some computer software for your department.They have expressed an interest in your company‘s printers and you would like to take twenty brochures and three sample printers with you.
相关词汇:laser, inkjet, projector (Barco), photocopier (Xerox), fax machine, scanner, computer, monitor
相关词汇:company literature; brochure; leaflet; flyer; white book; data sheet; prospectus
Write a short note to Mr. Jim Asano,the Sales Manager.
Asking for his permission to take these items.
Explaining why you want them.
Mentioning the time and date when you want to collect them.
Write 40-50 words on your Answer Sheet.
商务书信类
这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文,如书信、传真、便函、留言条(电话留言条)等,起草一封书信,字数要求达到120—140词左右。
题目结构:
Input: 1 situation description
2 task
3 target reader
Reading: texts in note, letter, fax, memo + content points (handwritten notes; second letter)
Write: business letter (120-140 words)
注意英美拼写问题
【例题】
You have organised a production conference for your company which will be held on 10 October 2005. The following is the letter of confirmation you received from the Conference Centre.
Read the letter and fax below, which gives details of the conference.
Then, using all information from the fax, write your letter to John Smith at the Nuffield Conference Centre, explaining the changes to the arrangements. Do not include postal addresses.
Write 120-140 words on separate sheet.
Today your Production Manager has sent you the fax below with changes he would like to make to the conference arrangements
注意:1 不要跑题
2 适当发挥
3 目标读者
4 不要抄袭
第三讲 商务便函与便条
审题:
Mr Smith, your boss, told you to ask Ms Liu to attend a sales presentation on a new product.
Write a note to Ms Liu:
*saying who wants her to attend the sales presentation;
*informing her when and where the sales presentation will be held
有同学写成Mr Smith told me to ask who wants to attend
有同学写成 Please write a note to Ms Liu asking her to attend a sales presentation. 一定要把题目看清楚,再下笔写。
(一)商务便函
一般公司企业往往都印有按照自己公司风格的商业便函,请看下列例子:
商务便函一般由以下几个部分组成:
1、Memo: Memo是Memorandum缩写,因此也可以用Memorandum,此外还有Internal Memorandum和Interoffice Memorandum,其意思都是一样的。
2、To:这一标题后面应写收信人的姓名与职衔,姓名前可以用尊称或不用,如:
To:Mr. John Smith,Sales Manager
3、From:这一标题后应写发信人的姓名与职衔:职衔可根据需要决定写或不写,但姓名前不要用尊称。
4、Date:日期的写法同书信里日期写法的要求完全一样,不要用数字来表示月份。
5、Subject:这一标题后是写事由的,即用一个或几个词汇简单概括便函的内容,以便查阅。事由必须简洁明了,不要用完整的句子,如:
Changes in Travel Advance Form
Promotion of Staff
Vacation Schedule
Participation in Training Programmes
(二)商务便条
商务便条一般有四个组成部分:日期、称呼、正文、签名。一些公司有印好的便条笺。如:
分类:
1 告知信息 inform
2 布置安排 arrange
3 征求意见 request
4 询问信息 enquire
5 求助申请 apply
6 推荐建议 suggest
1 告知信息类
例题:
You are a manager at an auditors called Golding & Co. Your company has just
merged with a competitor to become MasonGolding. You have been asked to inform staff of the change of name.
Write a memo of 40 - 50 words:
* informing staff of the new name
* telling them when to start using the new name
* asking staff to use only the new name after that time.
收购与兼并 merger and aquisition
范文:
As a result of our merger with Mason&Co., the name of our company will be changed MasonGolding. Please start to use the new name on 1 March 2006. You are reminded that only the new name can be used from then on.
remind/ advise
例题
You are the training manager of a company which has won a large export order. You have been asked to organise foreign language training for some of your staff.
Write a memo to staff:
explaining why the courses are necessary
saying which members of staff should attend
announcing when the courses will start
Write 40-50 words on a separate sheet.
[范文]
To: All staff
From: the Training Manager
Date: 1 March 2005
Subject: A Foreign Language Training Course
I was asked to organise a foreign language training course because of the large export order we received recently. It will start on 15 March and will last 2 weeks. Those who will deal with orders should attend this course.
2 布置安排类
You are Head of Research for an international car manufacturer. You have to
make an urgent trip tomorrow to visit Pierre Blanco, a colleague who works for a subsidiary.
Write a memo of 40-50 words to your secretary:
telling her who you are going to see and when
asking her to book flight tickets and accommodation
telling her what work you would like her to do in your absence.
Write on your Answer Sheet.
subsidiary, parent company, holding company, affiliate, branch, headquarters, representative office
范文:
I need to have an urgent meeting with Pierre Blanco of our Paris office tomorrow.
商务英语BEC中级写作范例(1)
海报是贴在人来人往的地方,告知广大群众大多是喜闻乐见的消息,如电影消息、球讯、商品报道等等,其性质类似广告,有的还配以绘画以增加吸引力。
有关球赛的海报
POSTER
Football Match
All Are Warmly Welcome
Under the auspices of the Student Union of our university, a friendly football match will be held between our team and the team of Chemical Engineering College on our football field on Saturday, May. 27th, 2000 at 5:00 p. m.
The Student Union
Thursday, May. 25.
足球赛
由本校学生会主办的足球友谊赛将于2000年5月27日(星期六)下午5时在足球场举行,参赛队为我校队与化工学院校队。欢迎届时观战。
校学生会
5月25日(星期四)
商品大拍卖海报
GOOD NEWS
Summer Clearance Sales
All the goods on show are sold at twenty percent discount. Please examine and choose them carefully before you pay. There will be no replacement or refunding. You have been warned in advance. You are welcome to make your choice. Personal Shopping Service
好消息
夏季清仓物资处理
本店陈列商品一律八折出售。请顾客们仔细看货,认真挑选。商品付款出门后不退不换,特此预先声明。如蒙惠顾,无比欢迎。
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BEC中级写作常用观点句型汇总
BEC中级写作常用观点句型汇总 1. When asked about…, most people say… But many other people regard…as… I personally think…
当被问及对„„有什么看法时,大多数人认为„„但是,还有很多人认为„„我个人认为„„
2. When it comes to…, some people think that… Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but…
涉及„„这一问题,有的人认为应该„„另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理,但是„„
3. It is widely acknowledged that…contributed to… Experts argue that China must
introduce… But I doubt whether…alone will solve the problem。
人们普遍认为„„专家认为中国必须推行„„但我对仅仅„„就能解决问题表示怀疑。
4. An increasing number of people are joining… In reaction to the phenomenon, some say… But do they realize that…can also lead to…
越来越多的人„„进入了„„针对这一现象,一些人认为„„但是,他们有没有意识到„„也能导致„„
5. One of the pressing problem facing our nation (China) today is…and…
我们国家(中国)如今面临的紧迫问题之一是„„
6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…
也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是„„
7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。
历史上,„„的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。
8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…
也许现在是应该重新考虑„„的时候了。
9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。
越来越多的人开始意识到„„并不是幸福的唯一条件。
10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…
对人们行为的多年观察使我能够得出这样的结论:„„和„„的主要区别仅仅在于„„
11. There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards… A recent survey showed that…percent of respondents ranked…as their top priority, compared to…percent only a few years ago. Why do people fail to realize that…?
近年来出现了对社会有害的„„倾向。最近的一项调查表明,„„的调查对象把„„作为他们的首选,相比之下,就在几年前,只有„„的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到„„不一定带来幸福呢?
12. I recently read a newspaper article on… The deplorable problem of…has aroused public concern nationwide。
最近,我在报纸上读到一篇关于„„的文章。„„的问题令人深感遗憾,它已经引起了全国公众的关注。
13. Judging from the reams of evidence presented, we can safely conclude that…
根据现有的大量证据,我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论:„„
14.Along with the development of…, more and more…
随着„„的发展,越来越多„„
15.In the past few years, there has been a sharp growth/boom/decline in…
在过去几年内,„„有显著增长/激增/明显滑坡„„
16.The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that…
提出的充分证据使我们能够合理地得出这样的结论:„„
17.While the rhythm/pace/tempo of people’s living is speeding up, a lot of changes have taken place in…
人民生活节奏加快的同时,„„也发生了很多变化。
18.With the fantastic spur both in industry and its economy in China, the number of…is on the rise
随着中国工业经济的迅猛发展,„„的数目不断上升。
19.It is commonly believed that the rise in…is the inevitable result of economic development。
人们普遍认为,„„的增长是经济发展的必然结果。
20.In recent years, China has experienced an alarming increase in…
最近几年来,中国„„有了惊人的增长。
第一部分、BEC作文段首句常用句型
一、对立观点命题形式的首句
1. Many people do not doubt that A is superior to B , while others think quite differently on the issue of _____. Personally, I stand on the side of A .
2. Some people say A , other people argue B . In a word , _____. But I cannot agree this point of view for many reasons.
3. There are different views concerning this topic . Some people like to CHOOSE A , some prefer to CHOOSE B . Personally , I prefer B . I think B has more advantages.
4. From my point of view , it is more advisable to CHOOSE A than to CHOOSE B .
5. Despite the fact that most people prefer A , I would like to choose B because the following reasons .
6. In general , I prefer to _____ .
7. As far as I am concerned , I would like to prefer _____ .
8. When it comes to _____ , most people tend to believe A . But others consider B as _____ .
9. When asked about _____ , the vast majority of people would support that A . But others regard B as _____ .
10. At the risk of address the issue too direct , I prefer A because I think that _____ .
11. When asked about _____ , many people give their opinions that _____ , but other people may see _____ differently .
12. When faced with _____ , quite a few would claim that _____ , but others , in contrast , deem _____ as _____ .
13. When inquired about _____ , the vast majority of people would like to _____ , but other people , who hold an opposite view , consider _____ as _____ .
14. When _____ is mentioned _____ , most people believe that _____ , but other people would rather think _____ as _____ .
15. While many people may stick to me idea that _____ , I would like to prefer _____.
二、单一观点式
A . Agree
1. One of the greatest writers once said that _____ . Now , it still has its significant realistic value .
2. I would follow the reasoning that _____ .
3. Many people advocate that _____ . They claim that _____ . My opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons .
4. I totally agree with the statement that _____ . The reasons are presented below .
5. After pondering this question on many occasions , I finally reached the conclusion that _____ is something worthy to do and I cannot skip it .
6. my arguments for point are listed as follows.
7. I agree with the above statement because _____ .
8. Nowhere in the world has the issue of _____ been so much debated like in our society.
9. I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation because _____ .
10. Thinking logically , I can only say that the title statement is valid because _____ .
11. I fully support the statement above because I am very sure that _____ .
12. Some may hold the opinion that AAA . But others have a negative attitude . As far as I am concerned , I agree that _____ .
13. Many one have the idea that AAA . However , many others disagree with this argument . But both side of the problem whether _____ are supported by good reasons.
14. Recently , it has been much debated over the problem of AAA . Those who object to AAA announce that _____ . But those who favor AAA utter a sonorous voice that _____.
15. Recently , there is vehement discussion on the issue of _____ . Those who criticize _____ argue that _____ . They claim that _____ . But people who firmly advocate _____ , on the other hand , argue that _____ .
16. There is a much-debated problem today about _____ . Those who object to _____ argue that _____ . They are very sure about _____ . But people who prefer _____ , on the other hand , claim that _____ .
B . Disagree
1. Until recently , _____ was viewed as _____ . But people are taking a fresh look at
2. Recently , we often hear about _____ . But is it ?
3. These days , it is often heard about _____ . But is this really the truth ?
4. I feel such an attitude is negative , and that it can bring _____.
5. Some people argue as if it is a general truth that _____ . But to be frank , I cannot agree with them for the flowing reasons .
6. Despite the fact that many people believe that _____ , I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis .
7. Although some people hold the opinion that _____ , I wonder whether the argument could bear close examination .
8. In the nationwide , discussion , many people argue that _____ . But I can say nothing but _____ .
9. Advocates of AAA proclaim that _____ , but I _____ .
10. Until recently , _____ was regarded as _____ . But _____ .
11. Some people think that _____ , but I disagree with this opinion for numerous reasons , as presented below .
12. Now , it is increasingly mentioned that _____ . Such people think _____ . But I can only cast doubt on whether _____ .
13. Now , it is widely believed that _____ . These people think _____ . But I wonder if
14. I cannot totally the idea that _____ . Because , in my point of view , I believe _____ .
15. As a matter of fact , I support that _____ , but I cannot agree with the title statement .
16. Nowadays , it is widely held that _____ . People of this kind think _____ .But I doubt whether _____ .
第二部分、BEC作文常用结尾句
1. Taking into account of all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that_____ .
2. All reliable evidences point to one saying , that is _____ .
3. For the reasons presented above , I strongly commit to the notion that _____ .
4. While it is true that _____ , I think that _____ .