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2017年考研英语一小作文点评及范文
2017年考研英语一小作文点评及范文
今年英语一的小作文不出预料,再一次考查到了推荐信。在英语一的考试当中,推荐信已经考查过两年了。例如我们英语一在2011年就考查过向你的朋友推荐一部电影。具体题目要求是Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and;2) give reasons for your recommendation. 2015年考察的是you are going to hold a club reading session. Write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members.You should state reasons for your recommendation. 而今年的作文题目要求给新来的澳大利亚国籍教授James Cook介绍你城市的tourist attraction。因此,考生不用惊慌只要把2011年或2015年的小作文,主要是推荐原因部分,稍作修改即可成文。这就启发我们2018届的同学们要高度重视历年真题,因为考过的话题或是书信类型会反复考查。 那么今年的作文具体该如何来写呢?今年考题的Direction要求向新来的James Cook教授推荐旅游景点。根据题目的要求,我们可以判断本文为公务信函,语域为正式语域,即不能出现缩写、省略问句和和口语表达。
称呼: Dear Prof. James Cook, 注意称呼中,Prof后面的句点不能丢,称呼最后的逗号号不可丢,也不能写成冒号。当然如果称呼不写Prof. 写成Mr. James Cook 也是可以的。 正文
第一段:写作内容需涵盖两点:1:欢迎Cook 教授来中国;2:写信目的,表明推荐。 用到了这样的表达Welcome to China. I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you one of my favorite scenic spot- Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.
第二段: 写作内容为推荐原因。可以从三个角度来考虑:美景、美食和热情的人们。用到了这样的表达:I think you must like it for the reasons as follows. To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on. In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street. Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.
第三段:再次强调写信目的。Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you. I am sure you will enjoy it. 最后,表达祝福 Best wishes for you!
落款: Yours sincerely, 特别提醒sincerely后面逗号不能丢;
签名: Li Ming特别注意 Ming 后面一定不能出现句点。 落款和前面左、右对齐都可以。
参考范文:
Dear Prof. James Cook,
Welcome to China. I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you
one of my favorite scenic spot—Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.
I think you must like it for the reasons as follows. To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on. In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street. Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.
Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you. I am sure you will enjoy it. Best wishes for you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2017考研英语一作文押题
求职信:
Suppose you are a graduating seniors, you see an advertisement in Beijing Youth Daily, you want this job and write a letter.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
参考范文:
Dear Sir,
In reply to your advertisement in today's newspaper regarding a vacancy in your office, I wish to apply for the position of senior clerk, which you have specified.
I feel confident that I can meet your special requirements indicating that the candidate must have a high command of English, for I graduated from the English Language Department of Tsinghua University three years ago. In addition to my study of English while in the University, I have worked for three years as secretary in the firm of ABC Trading Co. Ltd.
The main reason for changing my employment is to gain more experience with a superior trading company like yours. I believe that my education and experience will prove useful for work in your office.
I am enclosing my personal history, certificate of graduation and letter of recommendation from the president of the University, I shall be obliged if
you will give me a personal interview at your convenience.
Very truly yours,
Li ming
英语一大作文:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1)describe the drawing briefly.
2)explain its intended meaning, and
3)give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
人生犹如篮球赛,坚持到底是成功。
范文
What a thoughtful picture it is! As is described in the picture, a boy is play basketball to escape difficulties and finally he puts the basketball into the ball frame. From this picture, we know only by overcoming difficulties can perseverance succeed.
It is very true that success derives from persistence, for which there are several reasons. Firstly, no accomplishment can be achieved in a short time, and success asks for continuous industrious work and efforts.{2017英语考研作文范文}.
Secondly, when one is able to insist in stepping towards achievement, he must believe what he dedicates to. This belief is the source of persistence that paves the way to success. Thirdly, just as the saying goes, "Rome was not built in one day".
To conclude, I would like to borrow another ancient saying that "he laughs best who laughs last". Laughing symbolizes the confidence for success, and confidence always yields patience and insistence. Hence, I firmly believe that if everybody applies what the picture conveys into actual practice, they will surely reap a lot.
2017考研英语:满分作文要怎么写?
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研途宝以2014考研英语一大作文的满分作文为栗子,让广大考生抓住复习方向
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This picture, which illustrates the importance of love and help between parents and children, consists of two drawings. The first drawing shows what a mother and a daughter were like 30 years ago. The second drawing , in contrast , shows what the mother and the daughter are like now. The mother was taking the daughter’s hand in the first drawing while the daughter is aiding the mother in the second.
第一段作者非常朴实的描写了图画内容,没有过难的词汇;逻辑清晰:段落总分总,首句为主题句,二三句分述,最后一句总结。亮点还在于句型多变。首句一个简单句添加插入结构,三句也同样使用插入语,实现华丽变身。本篇文章由两图构成,使用的”in contrast”,”while” 同学们应该学习。
What is intended to show in the picture is clear: parents should help their children when the latter are young, and the children, when growing up, should take care of their parents who have by now grown old. This is what makes a family.
二段详细阐释图画含义:父母与子女之间应该相携。值得学习的地方是要变换说法,避免单调重复。
Impacted by the change in lifestyles, China is witnessing some kind of disintegration or loosing of ties in family relationship。 Yet, the love between parents and children is not only eternal, but the basic component of a healthy society. Only upon the solid
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foundation of domestic well being can the skyscraper of social progress be built; but if that be loosening, the construction upon it, however towering and glorious, would fall inevitably into debris. Love your parents and love your children.
三段提出了自己的建议和评论。句型更加丰富多样,不仅采用插入结构(最后一句),首句采用过去分词,第三句采用only半倒装句。
总之,满分作文多能够紧扣思想,行文逻辑非常清晰,表达地道,句型结构丰富多变。希望同学们认真学习此篇满分档作文,争取在不久的考试中拔得头筹,取得胜利!
2017考研英语:作文评分标准及范文示例
2017考研英语:作文评分标准及范文示例
一、考研作文考试内容
该部分由A、B两节组成,考查考生的书面表达力。总分25分。
A节题型有两种,每次考试选择其中的一种形式。备选题型包括: 1) 考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。 2) 要求考生根据所提供的汉语文章,用英语写出一篇80~100词的该文摘要。考生在答题卡2上作答。共10分。
B节要求考生根据所规定的情景或给出的提纲,写出一篇150词以上的英语说明文或议论文。提供情景的形式为图画、图标或文字。考生在答题卡2上作答。共15分。
二、评分原则和方法
1. 虽然A、B两节的考查要点有所不同,但对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的,所以一般评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节不同的考查要点,评分时会有不同的侧重点。
A节:应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖、内容的组织、语言的准确性及格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词,但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。
B节:B节作文的评分重点在于内容完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有1--3分的调节分。
3. A节作文的字数要求是100词左右。B节作文的字数要求是150词。文章长度不符合要求的,酌情扣分。
4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一方面。评分时,视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5. 如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
高分范文
Dear Bob,
I am writing to express my apology to you. Several days ago,I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately,after I came back from Canada,I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you .I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible. If necessary,I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.
Once again,I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please accept my apologies.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
范文:
It seems reasonable when people laugh at the cartoon, but it would no longer be laughable when people find similar things taking place in our daily life. Recently there is a trend of making promises in various fields of our society. From departments of government to common shopping centers, many businesses who supple products of offer services have made various promises to their customers or service receivers. (范文)
第五档:A节 (9-10分)B节 (17-20分)
很好地完成了试题规定的任务;
包含所有内容要点;
使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;
有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰;
格式与语域恰当、贴切;
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
第四档:A节 (7-8分)B节(13-16分){2017英语考研作文范文}.
较好地完成了试题规定的任务;
包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉1、2个次重点;
使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;
语言基本准确,只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误; 采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,组织较严密;
格式与语域较恰当;
对目标读者产生了预期的效果。
第三档: A节 (5-6分)B节 (9-12分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务;
虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点;
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;
有一些语法及词汇错误,但不影响理解;
采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰;
格式和语域基本合理;
对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。
第二档: A节(3-4分)B节(5-8分)
未能按要求完成试题规定的任务;
漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点,写了一些无关内容;
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;
有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;
未采用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性;
格式和语域不恰当;
未能清楚地传达信息给读者。
第一档: A节(1-2分)B节(1-4分)
未完成试题规定的任务;
明显遗漏主要内容,且有许多不相关的内容;
语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复;
语言错误多,有碍读者对内容的理解,语言运用能力差;
未使用任何衔接手法,内容不连贯,缺少组织、分段;
无格式与语域概念;
未能传达信息给读者。
零档(0分)
所传达的信息或所用语言太少,无法评价;内容与要求无关或无法辨认; “差作文”的种种“劣迹表现”:
1.无话可说,难以下笔;
2.文章安排,极不合理;
3.结构混乱,缺乏关联;
4.语言表达,错误众多;
5.用词贫乏,句式单一;
6.时间限制,无法完成;
7.字迹不清,影响阅卷。
2017考研英语写作怎么写
2017考研英语写作怎么写
来源:智阅网
考研英语的写作部分怎么复习,很多小伙伴们,都不能有一个清晰的认识。所以,我们在复习写作时,首先应该掌握的就是,如何写好作文。
首先,审题很重要。
审好题是写出优秀作文的第一步,下笔之前考生要仔细阅读试题的相关要求及信息,如图画、图表、数字等,准确把握命题老师的出题意图。作文最忌讳上来就写,想到哪里写到哪里,不明确考点,凭自己的主观臆断来编故事。以2011年考研英语一大作文为例,漫画部分显示,有两个游客坐在一只小船上,边游览边往河里扔垃圾,附近河面上漂浮着大量的垃圾,漫画下面有四个字:旅程之“余”。很明显,漫画立意在发展的同时要保护好自然环境。有的同学如果草草审题,盲目下笔,一旦出现文不对题,后果不堪设想。
其次,尽量列出提纲。
考研英语的答题时间是很紧张的,因此要尽量压缩答题时间,考生们在平日的备考中也十分注重速度的练习。在作文的写作中,从构思到成稿时间有限,无法将大量时间放到列出详细提纲上,但是在最短时间内列一个粗略的关键词提纲还是相当有必要的。对原始材料分析归纳后形成一个基本的结构框架:如漫画所要表达的主题是什么,directions中的要求包含了哪些内容,文章段落应该如何组织,这些都要心中有数。只有在基本框架确定了的基础上,考生将具体内容填充完整时,才能思路清晰、行文流畅。可以说,列出提纲对考研英语作文写作起着事半功倍的效果。
最后,写作时,应该注意的问题。
(1)语言的连贯统一。要选择那些最能体现中心思想,最具代表性的材料,而且这些材料要表达一致的意思,切忌堆砌词汇,注意语言前后的逻辑关系,关联词要使用到位。
(2)词汇、语法的正确。成文中要特别注意语法、词汇以及标点的运用,不要一味追求华丽的词汇而写自己没有把握的单词和连自己都不知道对错的长难句,造成不必要的失分现象。考试时要选择自己最有把握的词汇、句式,冲刺时多背诵闪光句型、词汇。
(3)卷面整洁。有了前几步的答题,考生到这里还需要注意保持卷面的整洁,有些考生没有在动笔前观察答题卡答题空间的大小,造成小作文答题空间不够,内容写不完而导致失分的情况。所以各位考生一定要根据答题空间及时调整自己的字体大以及内容长短。卷面书写工整,让阅卷老师读起来“赏心悦目”。
一篇优秀的考研英语作文,最重要的一点是文章内容紧扣主题,同时文章的结构合理,在语言方面,语法、拼写、标点使用正确。
理解了以上内容之后,建议同学们使用谭剑波老师的2017《考研英语(二)写作高分特训》。本书例文丰富,讲解清晰,让我们能更好地掌握写作部分。
2017考研英语:英语小作文格式及篇章布局
2017考研英语:英语小作文格式及篇章布局
作文:
一.书信(感谢、道歉、建议、求职/离职、申请、投诉、倡议、询问、慰问、推荐)
1.格式
称呼:位于作文第一行,顶格写,后面加逗号。
不知道对方姓名、职位等信息时称呼可以用 Dear Sir or Madam, 或To Whom It May Concern;知道对方的身份或姓名时,称呼可以用Dear Mr./Mrs. + 姓,或Dear+ 职位,如:Dear Professor, Dear Mr. Smith, ; 如果是给熟悉的人则可以用Dear + 名,如:Dear Jim/Betty.
正文:可采用齐头式,即每一段每一行都顶格写。或者采用缩进式,即每段首行缩进四个字母。
结束语:位于正文右下角,第一个单词的首字母要大写,后面要加逗号。常用结束语有: Yours,/Yours truly, / Yours sincerely, 等
署名:位于结束语下方。考研作文不允许署真名,题目中一般要求签名为“Li Ming”或”Zhang Wei”
2.篇章结构
第一段:表明身份,写信目的(1-2句)。
第二段:针对题目中的要求进行写作(描述事情的经过、缘由、以及提出的建议)(3-4句)。
第三段:表示感谢、期待回信或表达希望。(1-2句){2017英语考研作文范文}.
范文一:
Dear President,
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Being a senior student in this university, I am writing this letter with the hope of improving the students’ physical condition, as a growing number of students are getting much fatter, according to the latest survey.
Here are some suggestions I would like to put forward. First of all , greater attention should be attached to the physical condition of college students, and I hope you could play a vital role in spreading such an idea. Mean while, more sport apparatus and sport fields may be needed, as more students have enrolled in this great university year by year.
I do hope you can take the above suggestions into consideration and thanks in advance.{2017英语考研作文范文}.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
范文二:
Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf of the Student Union, I am sending this e-mail to you to invite you to act as our judge of English speech contest to be held in our university on June 5.
To be more specific, our contest is on the topic of how to embrace tough challenges in this digital era. During this competition, ten participants will deliver their speeches with respect to this topic. It is widely acknowledged that you are a top expert in this field, so we sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation. For further information, please call me at 9999999.
We are looking forward to your reply and arrival.
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Yours truly,
Zhang Wei
二、备忘录
1.格式
备忘录主要由两部分组成,一是信头,包括To, From, Subject, Date,信头部分需要顶格写; 二是正文部分,一般用缩进式,即每段首行缩进四个字母。
2.篇章结构
第一段:第一句话交待目的,简明扼要、准确清楚地交代事情或要通知的信息。
第二段:一句总结,强调对方要尽快做出回应。
范文一.
To : Staff
From: John Smith
Date: May 1st, 2015
Subject: the modification for existing promotional mode
I’m writing this letter to inform you that we are scheduled to modify our company’s existing chief promotional mode. The poor performance resulting from newspapers and magazines we previously employed to advertise our products, coupled with the mounting competitive pressure from our rivals in the market, has forced us to make some changes. As from next Monday, the Internet will serve as the main promotional channel to boost our items’ sales. Plus, a string
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of advertising campaigns will be launched in a bid to lure consumers.
If you need further information, please call me as soon as possible.
三、通知
1.格式:
通知一般由三部分组成:标题,正文和落款。标题位于正文上方居中,正文每段首行一般缩进四个字母,落款不可用真名,题目中会提供落款名称。
2.篇章结构
第一段:表明通知的事项、目的,可以在本段写明相关活动的时间(1-2句)。
第二段:详情(根据题目中的要求写)(3-4句)。
第三段:联系方式(1-2句)
范文一.
Notice
In an effort to better students’ ability and enrich their extracurricular activities, the Postgraduates’ Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization to be held from June 4th to 7th in Peking University. First of all, applicants should be easy-going and have a cheerful personality. In addition, candidates must have outstanding skills at English listening comprehension and the ability to speak both Chinese and English fluently. Finally, students with relevant professional knowledge are preferred.
Those postgraduates who are interested in taking part in it may send
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yourresume to PA@163.com before June 1st. Your applications are welcome.
Postgraduates’ Association
范文二.
Notice
Welcome to our university ! As a librarian, I would like to provide you with some detailed information about our library.
The University library opens at 8 a.m. and closes at 10 p.m. from Monday to Friday, but from 9 a.m. to 9 p.m. on weekends. Secondly, if you need to borrow books, bring your student card and register first at the librarian’s office. At most six books can be borrowed once from the library. But keep in mind that you can keep the books you borrow just one week. If you exceed the limited time, some fine should be paid.
If you have any questions about borrowing or returning books, send an e-mail to university@163.com. We sincerely hope you all enjoy the study and life in our university.
Li Ming
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