小学作文 点击: 2012-09-12
泉州中考英语作文备考范文
中考英语备考范文
A life without a friend is a life without the sun. So everyone needs friends. If we want to have friends, we should learn how to get on well with others.
First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. I think we can get on well with others in these ways 4.读书篇-好书伴我成长
Growing up with good books
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. What's more, it makes our work and study better.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or playing games on line. It takes up much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially the classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
As the saying goes "Books are the ladder of human progress". So let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
5.当今社会,学生遇害的事故频繁发生,因此作为学生的我们,应该学会如何自我保护。 (此篇也可以套用Safety must come first)
How to Protect Ourselves
Nowadays, a lot of accidents happen to students. What's worse, many students lose their lives in the accidents. So it's very important for us to learn to protect ourselves.
我市近年来书面表达全部围绕着“学生日常学习、生活”展开,要求学生从“自己身边人、身边事”出
发,题目中要求“谈谈自己的感受”,要求考生应对日常生活有所体察,让考生在有限的时间里有话可说。 【备考策略】:1.写三段式 2.谋篇时能注意统一性与连贯性,能做到过渡自然 3.尽量写复合句,恰当地使用名言或谚语,使文章增添亮点 2015泉州质检满分范文
Learning Makes My Life Wonderful
Learning plays an important part in our daily life.
Last summer vacation, my parents taught me how to cook in detail. I listened to them carefully, and then I tried to do it by myself. At first, I didn’t do well in cooking, but after practice, I could make a dinner for my family. I felt so happy not only because all of them enjoyed the dishes, but also because I got a new living skill. Because of learning to cook, now I never worry about what to eat when I stay at home alone.
As the saying goes, it’s never too late to learn. So I’ll keep learning in order to make life wonderful. 点评:本文结构严谨,句式优美,前后呼应,紧扣主题,当同龄人一味埋头苦读时,或在埋怨学习很烦躁,很累人时,该考生却以异于同龄人的眼光表达自己的见解--学习做饭,并且用实际行动证明自己学习过程和亲身体验。因为学煮饭给考生带来的生活影响多多,现场的作文能够做到选词考究、过渡自然,足可见该考生平时用工之深,本文属于上等佳作。
热点话题
1.勤俭节约,实现美丽中国梦
Don’t waste any more
Food is important to us. It’s everyone’s duty to save food. But at school not everyone can realize this. Many students waste much food.
For example, some students buy more food than they need. They leave much on the plate and then pour it into the rubbish can. Some students even throw the food everywhere for fun. Our country is a developing county. In order to make China dream come true, we should save everything as well as the food in our life.
What’s more, lots of people are short of food in the world. They live a hard life and many of them, especially some children, die of hunger. We should have a good habit. Let’s take an action part together!
2.保持健康方法:(1)合理的饮食 (2)多做锻炼 (3)充足的睡眠 (4)学会放松
How to keep healthy
As we know, it’s very important to keep healthy. But how to keep healthy?
First, we should have a good diet. That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Second, exercise will keep us active and strong, so it’s good for us to take more exercise, such a s running, walking, ball games and so on. Third, staying up late is bad for our health. In order to have a good sleep, we had better go to bed early and get up early. At last, we ought to learn to relax ourselves by listening to music or chatting with others.
In short, to keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot. 3.与他人友好相处(Be kind to others也可以套用此篇)
Get on well with others
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First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd with each other when we go upstairs or downstairs. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. Let’s start from today. 6.互联网
The Internet
As we know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news at home and abroad and get as much information as we can. We often send e-mails to our family as well as to our friends. Besides, we can use the Internet to study and download useful information. We also enjoy movies and music on the Internet. Going shopping online is easy and interesting.
But not everything on the Internet is good for us students. If we spend too much time on the Internet, we won’t study well. So we must use it properly.
7.相信自己,不断努力,梦想就会实现!(此篇也可以套My Dream)
Believe in Myself
Everyone has his own dream, so do I.
I wanted to be a writer when I was very young. I dream of writing famous books which are popular with people. Some people may laugh at my dream but I believe if I keep my goal in my mind and practice reading and writing every day, my dream will come true in the future.
Maybe we can't get what we want at once. But believing in myself is the most important, it will make myself confident. Also, I must take actions and work hard for it from now on.. I am sure I will succeed at last.
8.经历了九年的学习和成长,,你对于好学生的理解是什么?你认为好学生应该具备怎样的条件和素质呢? 提示(学生需具备的素质):1.尊敬师长,礼貌待人 2.帮助他人,与同学友好相处 3.保护环境,不要踩踏草坪和乱扔垃圾 4.努力学习,学习他人的优点 【建设文明城市,作为学生的我们该怎么做也可套用】
How to Be a Good Student
Everyone likes to be a good student. So do I . But how to be a good student? Here is some advice .
First of all, we must respect our teachers and be polite to others. Second,we should help those who are in need and get on well with classmates. Third, protecting our environment is very important. We mustn’t step on the grass and throw litter around. Last but not least, study as hard as we can and try our best to learn from others who do better.
To be a good student is not so difficult. If we follow the above advice, we will do it.
9.时间都去哪儿了?这是许多成年人的感慨,也是一些中学生的烦恼,没有时间做作业,没有时间从事个人爱好..... 其实,时间就在我们的掌握之中,关键是能否合理利用。
提示(如何合理利用时间):1.学习方面:计划、听课、作业 2.爱好方面:类型、好处、时间 其它方面:交流......
How to spend our time properly
Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan for every day. Most of all, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to make a list and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we don't need to spend so much time on it. So we should achieve a balance between our study and our hobbies.
In other ways, we need time too. For example, we often spend a lot of time talking with our friends at lunchtime and watching too much TV at the weekends. If so, I'm sure we will live a happier school life.
10.生命的意义并不在于富裕, 物质上的虽然必要, 但是生活中有很多比挣钱更有价值的东西。
More to life than being rich
Money is really important to us all, and most of people wish to be rich. They work hard in order to earn more money. However, we must know clearly that money doesn’t mean everything. There is more to life than being rich.
I am a common girl(boy) from a small village. My parents are both workers. Although my family is not rich, I feel very happy because I can feel love in my family, friendship in my school and beautiful scenery in my hometown.
So we wish more and more people could pay more attention to life than being rich.
11.前央视主持人柴静主持拍摄的纪录片《穹顶之下》成为当前网络热议话题,“关注雾霾,应对空气污染”,已经引起整个社会的高度重视。因此我们应该如何保护环境,减少空气的污染呢?
Fight Against Air Pollution
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As we know, pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world, especially the air pollution. It has caused people’s high attention. As students, what shall we do to fight against air pollution?
First of all, we had better ride a bike or walk to school instead of taking cars. It’s a good way to reduce pollution. What’s more, we can write to newspaper to call on stopping the chemical factories pouring waste into the air. At last, trees are also important. We should plant more trees.
In short, let’s work hard to fight against air pollution. I think we will beat it and make our environment better and better.
【注意】关于环保篇,请同学们背下几点关于环保的措施
12.保持好心情的方法:(1)运动或散步 (2)通过阅读或听音乐来放松 (3)遇到困难时,向老师或朋友求助
(4)吃健康的食物和穿亮色的衣服
How to be in a good mood?
It’s very important for us students to be in a good mood. We can study or work well in good spirits, especially when we meet with difficulties. I think there are many ways we can do.
First, we can do exercise or take a walk. Second, we can do some reading or listen to some music to relax ourselves. Third, we can turn to our teachers and friends for help when we are in trouble. Fourth, we can eat healthy food and wear bright-colored clothes to cheer up.
In these ways, we can deal with pressures(压力)and difficulties in our study, and we can do better and be happier. 13.互相帮助
Helping Makes the World Wonderful
In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So everyone needs help. Helping makes the world wonderful.
In the past three years, I got a lot of help from my classmates and teachers. I still remember I did badly in my math when I was in Grade Seven. With the help of my math teacher and classmates, I made great progress. From them, I also learned to help others. When I help my classmates with their study and other things, I feel very happy. In my opinion, helping others is helping ourselves. So let’s help those who need help from now on. 14.笑对人生
Smile at Life
In our life, there may be something unpleasant. Sometimes they may make us sad. Then what will you do? Why not learn to smile?
Smiling to yourself can bring you hope and confidence. It will make you braver to face difficulty. Most important of all, smiling is good for your health.
We should also learn to smile to others. It shows you are friendly and you can get on well with others. So smiling is very helpful. It can make our life better and better. Have you smiled today?
2017中考必考的15篇英语作文
第一篇:
[写作要求] 现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生,我们应节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起,做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题,写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括: 1。地球的污染越来越严重,我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。 2。你是怎样从身边小事做起,做到“低碳生活”的。如:每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3。号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。 作文要求: 1。不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2。语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出,不计入总词数。 My Low--carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today。
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My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today。 Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted。 As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution。
Firstly, I often walk to school。 It can reduce air pollution。 Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom。 Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water。 I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful。
第二篇:
[写作要求] 每当朋友之间即将分手的时候,耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我,如果你正享受幸福,请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,可以围绕主题适当展开,阐述交友的重要性和好处。
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Friends
What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others。 I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble。 Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed。” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to。 You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends。 Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend。” So I think friends are very important to us。 I would like to make as many friends as possible。 第三篇:{2017泉州中考英语作文}.
[写作要求] 最近,你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息,以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题,写一篇短文。
原因 帮助他人是美德;
赞成
反对 帮助他人就是帮助自己; 怕陷入麻烦;
怕被误解;
你的观点?(至少两点)
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3)词数:100左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 参考词汇:美德virtue
Should We Help Strangers? Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions。
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Should We Help Strangers? Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions。
Some think we should try to help strangers。 Helping others is a virtue,and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and{2017泉州中考英语作文}.
need others‘ help some day.If everyone isn’t willing to help us just because we are strangers to them,it‘s hard to imagine what our world will be like。 However,some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness。
In my opinion,we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help,but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness,our world will be full of love。
第四篇:
[写作要求] 某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛,请你根据提示的内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下: 1。 尽管我们常常感到有压力,但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松;
2。 我们应该足够细心,因为“失之毫厘,谬以千里”; 3。 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡,试着安排好自己的空余时间; 4。 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习,我们会取得大的进步。
2017中考英语作文
1.为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率,《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以“How to be a good learner?”为题的征文比赛活动,请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our freetime. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student,working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.I think all these above will be helpful to us.
2. 亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study”为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求:①要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟;②词数80左右。
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many
difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases.For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the
teacher and my classmates,I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
3.父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
提示:
①如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些实用但不贵的东西,如领带;
②还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶。
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father.
Different people like different kinds of gifts.If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day.Don’t you think so?
4.请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
提示:
①春节是中国最重要的节日;
②人们大多回家过年,家庭成员团聚;
③家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);
④孩子们喜欢春节。
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in
China.People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
5.假设Linda是你的好朋友,你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来,你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示,简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示:
①外貌:以前个子矮,短发;现在个子高多了,长发。
②爱好:以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
③性格:以前外向;现在有些内向。
要求:①不要逐字翻译,适当发挥;②层次清晰,语言流畅;③80词左右。
Linda is my best friend. She has changed a lot in the past two years.She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now.She used to be out going. Now she is a little
quite.I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
6. 背景设定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件,想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏,请根据以下提示,给Miachael回一封电子邮件。 过去生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系不便......现在生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住得舒适,手机普及......
要求:
①围绕以上内容进行合理表述;
②所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;
③词数80词左右,开头语以给出(不计入词数)。
参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯),telegram, thanks to,rapidly, mobile phone, policy
Dear Michael,
You want to know the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house.Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.Thanks to the government, our home town has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Somepeople have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses.Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely Kang Min
7.随着网络的发展,人们消费观念转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。 优点:
①足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累。
②价格通常比较便宜。
③可供选择的范围广,品种多。
缺点:
①只能看到图片,看不到商品本身。
②容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。
注意:
①所表述的内容必须包含以上所有方面;
②80词左右,开头文章已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.
8.假如你是李华,今年上初三了,现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数:60-80。
I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few
weeks.I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.I really miss my old days.
9.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点:
①父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;
②你对这些问题的看法;
③你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some house work.
10.今天是母亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。
要点如下:
① 表述你与母亲间的情感;
②为母亲制作一张卡片;
③帮助母亲做点事;
④陪母亲散步等。
注意:
①词数80左右;
②请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
③邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it? I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening.Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her,for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,Li Hua
11.英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷,成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表分析它会是谁的。
要求:①设想当时的情景,适当扩展细节;②书写工整,100词左右。
参考词汇:top student优等生;handwriting笔迹;full marks满分
We had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy.The paper must belong to a girl
because its hand writing is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.
12. 现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果,写一篇80词左右的短文。 kind reasons:
2017中考英语复习:英语写作三部曲
2017中考英语复习:英语写作三部曲
英文书面表达是中考试卷中的最后一部分内容,分值设置通常为十到十五分。它考查考生的英语表达能力,看是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。通常,该题对写作的目的、内容、体裁及字数都有明确的要求,会提供一些材料,如文字、图画和图表。因此,中考英语书面表达题不同于汉语写作,做到以下几点即可:审清题目要求,能读懂题;组织好所提供的材料;连词成句,连句成篇,用明白、通顺、恰当、得体的英语表达出来。毕竟是初级写作,篇幅和难度方面要求并不高。
写作的过程应当是有计划、有步骤地展开。可以把这一过程划分为三部曲,即写作前、写作中、写作后。
一、写作前
不可急于动笔,要先审题,列出要点,写出提纲。接下来,脑海中确定文章的体裁与时态。初中阶段所接触的体裁主要有:记叙文、应用文、议论文及说明文。其中,应用文又包括信件、电子邮件文稿、寻物启示、失物招领、请假条、留言条、通知等不同的形式,这些都是生活中常用的。至于时态,要依据表达的内容来灵活应用。初中阶段较常用的主要时态有:一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。其他时态多为必要时穿插使用。平时有必要积累一些有代表性的,与生活贴近的文章,用以参考。
二、写作中
动笔前要有清晰的轮廓,即上述的要点、体裁、时态,并可回顾一下已学过的类似篇目。但在考试时,最好不要直接写在试卷上,以免修改时涂改太多。先写在草稿纸上为宜。写作中应注意三大问题:文章所要求的格式,逻辑顺序和遣词造句。以下主要谈格式的运用与过渡性和连接性词汇的运用。
(一)常见格式
信件的格式:
[Dear Betty,
Thank you for your last letter. Here are…
Love,
Lucy\&]
电子邮件的格式:
[Subject:My dog From: Thomas\&Nancy,
Good news! I have a new pet…
Thomas\&]
日记的格式:
[Friday,April 10th Fine
Today our school held a sports meeting on the playground…\&]
(二)、写作中的遣词造句
1、使用熟悉的,已掌握的词汇和句型;少用难拼写的词及复合句,多用容易词、简单句。
2、学会用同义词及同义句替换不会写的词句。{2017泉州中考英语作文}.
3、使用过渡性、总结性的词汇。
如:文章及段落起始的用语:to begin with, first of all
表示先后次序的词:first, second, then, next, finally
表示因果关系的词:so, because, as
表示并列关系的词:and, or
表示转折关系的词:but, however
表示举例的词: for example , such as, on the one hand, on the other hand
表示总结性的词:in fact, in a word, in general
4、多用固定词组,为文章增色。
5、直接用英语表达,避免用汉语思维。
6、简单发挥,不能脱离中心。(下转第18页)
(上接第16页)
7、符合字数要求。
三、写作后
在草稿纸上完成文章后,不要立即誊写在试卷上,以下几步也极其重要。
(一)再次查看题目要求,看有无遗漏。
(二)看语言是否通顺,语法是否正确。包括大小写、标点、时态、语态、主谓一致及词语搭配等。
(三)查看字数是否符合要求。通常要求为100字左右。
(四)认真书写于试卷上。字迹规范、美观,卷面整洁。
经历了这样的三部曲,写作任务基本结束。
此外,学生还应了解老师怎样把握评判尺度。以满分为15分为例,可参看以下五个档次的评分细则。
一级(13-15分)
1、所写内容符合所提供的各种信息,有创意;
2、句子正确通顺,或只有个别小错;
3、单词拼写错误不超过4个。
二级(10-12分)
1、所写的内容与所提供的各种信息基本符合;
2、句子基本正确。表达错误较少,表达较通顺;
3、单词拼写错误不超过6个。
三级(7-9分)
1、所写的内容与试卷所提供的信息基本相符;
2、句子表达错误较多,但尚可读懂;
3、单词拼写错误不超过10个。
四级(4-6分)
1、所写内容与试卷提供的信息不符; 2、只有少数句子表达正确; 3、拼写错误在10个以上。 五级(3分以下) 只有个别词语可读,但通篇不知所云。
2016-2017中考英语作文指导及范文
2016-2017中考英语作文指导 如何写好一个句子? --如何写好复合句。
复合句是由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句构成的句子,我们在写作时,要学会使用宾语从句,状语从句和定语从句等。下面就谈谈有关这方面的一些句型。
句型 1 主+谓+that从句-- We’re sure that we’ll win the first prize.我们肯定能得头奖。He found that his English was too 他发现他的英语太差了。She decides that she is going to be a nurse.他决定要当个护士.I don’t believe that he has finished his work.我相信他还没有做完他的工作.
句型点评:在动词say,think,hope,believe,expect,explain,hear,know,find,regret,remember,decide后可接that引导的宾语从句,that常可省略。
句型2 主句+whether/if+从句.我不知道他会不会来。。我问他是否有字典。I don’t know 句型点评:if和whether可引导一个表示疑问的宾语从句,二者一般情况下可通用。
句型3 主句+疑问词+从句--No one knows what he is doing.没有人知道他在干什么。Take back what I said just now.我收回刚才说的话。Could you tell me where the booking office is?你能不能告诉我售票处在什么地方?I must thank you 我一定要谢谢你为我所做的事。
句型点评:连接代词who,whom,whose,what,which等和连接副词when,where,why,how等都可以用来引导特殊疑问句充当宾语从句。注意:从句中要用陈述语气。 句型4 主句+when/while/as/before/after+从句(时间状语从句)
We took notes as/while/when we were listening to the teacher.我们一边听老师讲课一边做笔记。Please keep silent while/when she’s writing.她在写作,请保持安静.I was speaking when a policeman came in.我正在说话,这时,突然进来一个警察.You must finish the work before I go home.你们必须在我回家以前把工作做完。
句型点评:时间状语从句通常由从属连词when,while,as,after,before等引导,使用时必须注意他们之间的词义和用法区别。
句型5 主句+until/till-从句--Last night,his parents waited for him till/until it was 12.昨晚他父母一直等他到12点。 我们练唱一直练到下课。The child 这个小孩看完电视剧后才开始做功课。He did not go home until/till he finished his work.他一直把工作做完之后才回家。
句型点评:在使用本句型时要注意until/till的用法,若主句中的谓语动词是“keep,remain,stay,wait..”等延续性动词,则用动词的肯定式,until/till的含义是“一直到....为止”;若主句中的谓语动词是“arrive,come,finish,go,reach,start”等瞬间性动词,则用动词的否定式,这时的until/till的含义是“直到....才....” 句型6 主句+since-从句/It is+.....since.....
自从我们来到这个城市,就一直住在这儿。 句型点评:since是从属连词,连接时间状语从句表示“自从....以来”。从句中的谓语动词通常用过去时,主句中的谓语动词通常用现在完成时,以表示从过去某一时刻开始,一直延续到现在的动作或状态。
句型7 主句+as soon as/the moment.... ---Please call us as soon as you arrive at the airport.请你一到机场就给我们打电话。I’ll tell your mother the news as soon as I see her.我一见到你母亲就把这个消息告诉她。As soon as the students got they began to help the farmers with their work.学生们一到农场,the children stopped talking.老师一进来,孩子们立即停止谈话。
句型点评:as soon as表示“一...就...”的意思,它引导的从句所表示的动词几乎跟主句的动作同时发生,相当于the moment that引导的从句。
句型8 主句+where/wherever(no matter where)从句 --Get up where you fall.哪里跌倒就在哪里站起来。She phoned to I always follow you.不论你到哪里,我总是跟着你。Wherever you go,you may find friends.不论你走到哪儿,你可能找到朋友。 句型点评:where和wherever都可引导表示地点的状语从句,不过wherever的语气较强,相当于“no matter where”意思是“不论/无论......在/到哪里....”。
句型9. 主句+because从句;Since/As从句+主句
He didn’t pass the English examination last term .因为他学习不努力,所以上学期英语考you’d better put on a coat.今天天气很冷,you can begin your experiment.既然一切都准备好了,现在你们可以开始做实验了。 句型点评:表示原因的状语从句通常用从属连词because,since和as等引导。 句型10. 主句+so that/in order that-句型
他大声喊,为的是让别人听见。We had to 为的是参观长城和其它名胜。
句型点评:so that/in order that意思是“以便;为的是”,引导表示目的状语从句,其从句中的谓语动词通常要与一些情态动词“may,might,can,could”等连用。另外,“so as to/in order to/to+do”也可引导目的状语。 句型11 主语+be/v+so+adj./adv.+that从句
她唱得很动听,所以受到了听众的高度赞扬。 珍妮是这样一个可爱的孩子,所以每个人都喜欢她。She did so well in the office that she was praised by the manager。她在办公室里
干得很出色,受到了经理的表扬。
句型点评:表示结果的状语从句,通常用“so/such....that”表示“如此...以致”来引导。 句型12 主句+as+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 主句+not/so(as)+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 黄河不像长江那样长。他不像我所想的那样聪明。I hope you will start as early as you can.我希望你们尽早动身。 句型点评:“as+adj./adv.+as”这个结构中,其中的形容词或副词要用原级;“not as(so)+adj./adv.+as”意为“不如....那样;不像....那样”,其中的形容词或副词也用原级。
句型13 主句+adj/adv比较级+than+..... 主句+(the)+adj./adv.最高级+...... 卡车比自行车跑得快多了。It’s 这是我读过的最好的一本小说。In autumn,the weather of Beijing is much cooler than that of Wuhan.秋天北京的天气比武汉凉爽得多。 句型点评:表示甲>乙(或甲< 乙),要用“形容词(或副词)的比较级+than”句型;表示最高级时,常用“(the)+adj/adv.最高级+.....”等句型。
句型14 Though/Although-从句+主句 Although you are very clever,you are unable to work out the problem.尽管你很聪明,你也不可能解出这道题。He made little progress although he studied very hard.尽管他学习很用功,但是他取得的进步很小。
句型点评:though和although引导的让步状语从句可以置于句首,也可以置于句末。注意“though/although”不与不but同时使用。
句型15.主句+if/unless-从句 We will go and visit the museum if it is fine tomorrow.如果明天天晴,我们将去参观博物馆。I won’t let you leave unless you promise to return tomorrow.=If you don’t promise to return tomorrow,I won’t let you leave.除非你答应明天赶回来,否则我就不让你离开。 句型点评:if/unless引导的条件状语从句可以放在句首,也可放在主句后面,其从句常用一般现在时表示将来。(即主从句要遵从:主将从现的原则)
句型16 先行词+关系代词who(that)/whom/whose+从句-- The child who is reading is my daughter.在那儿读书的那个孩子是我的女儿。The man(whom)you met at the gate is my teacher.在门口你碰到的那个人是我的老师。The boy whose mother died in the accident works hard.其母亲在事故中死去的那个孩子学习努力。 句型点评:在定语从句中,如果先行词是人,要用关系代词“who,whose,whom,that”等引导,其中who在定语从句中作主语或宾语;whose在定语从句中做定语,whom在定语从句中作宾语。 句型17 先行词+关系代词that/which+从句
The book(that/which)you lent me yesterday is very interesting.你昨天借给我的书非常有趣。The film which/that is about animal is wonderful.关于动物的那部电影好看极了。
句型点评:在定语从句中,如果先行词是物,要用关系代词“that,which”等引导。在定语从句中that,which作主语时,不能省略;若作宾语时则常省略。 附2015年各省中考满分作文---
1.上周五,你们班举行了《我们的梦想》的主题班会,在班上同学们踊跃发言;有的想成为老师,有的想成为一名警察,有的想当医生.....请你根据下面的表格的提示以“Our Dreams”为题,写一篇英语论文,报告这次班会的情况,并谈谈你自己的梦想。
Our Dreams Last Friday,our class held a class meeting about
our dreams.Here is my report.Liu Wei’s dream is
to be a teacher,so he decides to study education.Li Ming,he does sports every
day,wants to become a policeman,for he thinks
that without physical exercise,he can not make his dream come true.Susan wants to be a movie
dreams one day.
2.某校开展“我是课堂小主人”建议征集活动,各班就此展开讨论,同学们纷纷发言:“我希望能有足够的自主学习时间....”“我喜欢的课堂是每个人都有一台笔记本电脑,方便网上查询.....”“课堂上我们能自由的讨论,充分展示我们的学习成果.....”等等。请你结合同学们讨论的结果,给以电子邮件的形式写一封信,建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱,也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容包括以下要点:
1)What is your favorite class like? 2)Please tell us an unfotgettable experence you’ve had in your class. 3)Please give at least two suggestions. My favorite class is an open and free class where we can learn by myself and discuss in groups,it is good for my development,I think.
I still remember an unforgettable experiencein my math class.Several days ago,I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,