中考话题作文怎么写

中考话题作文怎么写篇一

中考作文写法

中考作文写法

凤头

开头是文章结构的一个重要组成部分。古人把文章开头称为“凤头”，就是说文章的开

头要小巧、亮丽、引人注目，给人以先声夺人之感。好的开头要有利于围绕主题拓展作者的

思想，有利于吸引和引导读者读完全文。一篇文章不管如何开头，作者都要想到如何更好地

表现文章的主题内容，为正文作自然的铺垫。在写作实践中一般不孤立考虑开头，而要从文

章的整体构思出发，全局考虑成熟，开头也就水到渠成了。

一、 开门见山法

这种开头简单明快，单刀直入，一下子就把读者引入到文章的中心。

例：《苦与乐》 “我们的苦如滔滔江水，倒也倒不完，我们的乐如满天星星，数

也数不清，特别是到了初三，更是苦中有乐，乐中含苦…”

二、 对比法

内容一正一反地进行对比，泾渭分明，既使行文条理清楚，便于读者把握，又可巧妙地

运用欲扬先抑手法，使文章波澜迭起。

例：《生活给我勇气》 “在生活中难免遇到这样那样的坎坷和挫折，有人怯懦地倒下，

永远起不来了；有人勇敢地站起来，成为强者。说实话，我也曾像前者一样，一碰到困难、失败就灰心、就退缩，记得…”

三、 排比反复式开头

排比、反复式开头，富有文采，语势不凡，可以先声夺人。

例：《我说“减负”》 “书本，一叠叠堆起来；书包，一天天重起来；眼镜，一天天厚

起来。沉重，沉重，沉重…”

四、 抒发感情

这种开头可以直接抒发作者浓烈的感情，以情动人，让读者情不自禁地融入其中。

例：《母爱，让心中阳光永驻》 “如果我是一艘小船，妈妈就是温馨的港湾，让我幸福

停靠；如果我是一棵种子，妈妈就是那一方热土，让我茁壮成长；如果我是一片白云，妈妈

就是那蔚蓝的天空，让我驰骋翱翔。母爱，伟大的母爱，让我的心中阳光永驻。”

五、 古诗引入

这种开头别具韵味，雅致而富有诗意。

例：《立志》 “问渠那得清如许，为有源头活水来。”这句诗包含了多少深刻的哲理，每

个人都会对”源头‟、”活水‟有不同的理解。就我们21世纪的中学生而言，我们学习、生活

的”源头‟、”活水‟是什么呢？我认为是祖国的强盛，是民族的繁荣，是人民的幸福。”

六、 富含哲理

这种开头含义深刻，给人以启迪和回味。

例：《坎坷》“有些东西，当你拥有时，不懂珍惜；当你懂得珍惜时，不再拥有。人生就

是这样充满矛盾，人生就是这样残酷，人生就是这样无奈…人生匆匆，你懂得珍惜吗？”

七、 比兴手法

这种开头先借动物或其他景物叙述故事，最后揭示主题。

例：《寻找幸福》在一棵古树上，一只刚出生不久的小鸟，躺在妈妈的怀抱中，无忧无

虑，望着蔚蓝的天空对妈妈说：“妈妈，昨天我从课本中学到了一个新词，叫幸福，可是什

么叫幸福呢？”妈妈笑着说：“幸福啊，无处不在。不信妈妈带你去找”。于是，小鸟在妈妈

的带领导下，踏上了寻找幸福的路程。

八、 自述式

这种开头可以化抽象为具体，化呆板为灵活，化平凡为奇特。

例：《“分”的自述》我，考试的独裁者，命运的把握者，知识的衡量者。我，0，1，2，

3„„9，组成了可敬又可怕的东西——分…

九、 童话式

用童话式开头，手法比较灵活，便于作者在广阔的时间和空间中尽情地发挥。

十、 提示线索

例：《记一辆纺车》我曾经使用过一辆纺车，离开延安那年，把它跟一些书籍一起留在

蓝家坪了。后来常常想起它。想起它，就像想起旅伴，想起战友，心里就充满深切的怀念。

豹尾

中考作文时，结尾写得如何，对整篇作文影响很大，结尾写得好，能使文章增辉，反之，

使文章减色。因而结尾的好坏也影响着作文的分数。那么，中考作文时如何写好结尾呢？

分析近三年满分作文优秀的结尾，可以归纳出下列几种方式：

一、“卒章显志”式的结尾——这种结尾方式也叫“画龙点睛”式，也就是在结尾点明文章

的中心思想。这是用得最多的结尾方式。而“点睛”的方式又可分为下面几种：

1、用抒情式点题结尾。如“老师，无论我走到哪里，我都走不出您的视野。感谢您的一路

呵护，一路鼓励！”（《感谢恩师》）抒发了对老师的感激之情。

2、用希望式点题结尾。如“把理解带给别人吧，尽量给别人减少一分痛苦，增添一分快乐！”

（《最爱的人，别伤他最深》）

3、用表决式点题结尾。如“可以确定的是，无论前路阳光明媚，或是崎岖陡峭，我都会坚

定地——痛并快乐着。”（《痛并快乐着》）既点明主题，又回应文题，可谓一箭双雕。

4、用展望式点题结尾。如“我相信：我的未来不是梦！”（《我的未来不是梦》）

5、用感悟式点题结尾。如“她让我懂得了宽容，学会了宽容。”（《宽容》）

6、用号召式点题结尾。如“友善的微笑可以压倒一切，无论来自亲人还是陌生人，关键在

于真诚和友好。让我们以友善的微笑面对人生，面对生活，面对别人。那么，世界将会变成

更美好的明天。”（《友善的微笑》）

二、“呼应开头”式结尾——先看《战胜自己》的开头和结尾：

开头：善于战胜自己，这是我的长处。这个“自己”，是害怕困难缺少勇气的自己，成

功时很得意洋洋的自己。中间：……结尾：善于战胜自己，这就是我的长处。困难前面不失

掉信心，要有勇气战胜它：成功时不趾高气扬，要看到缺点，保持冷静的头脑。

这种结尾方式能使文章首尾呼应，结构完整，浑然一体。

三、“记叙事件”式结尾——这种结尾方式能使文章显得含蓄，使读者有回味的余地。

如《给我一个理由》的结尾：“我走出小店，看到太阳正对着我笑。”含蓄地表达了善于

微笑而得到了好的回报的主题。

四、“描写景物”式结尾——这种结尾方式能对主题进行烘托、突出的作用。

例如《我经历的一次小波折》的结尾：“雨依旧下着，但变得温柔起来，天空明亮了许

多，西方还出现了美丽的彩虹，我的心也轻松了许多。这次小小的波折我怎能忘怀呢？”以

美景衬托经过这场思想感情的雨水洗礼之后的“轻松之情”。

总之，结尾应像豹尾那样，漂亮而有力。

猪肚

中考作文正文除开头和结尾外，便是中间的主体部分。人们爱把作文的中间部分比喻为

“猪肚”，即要求中间部分要写得像猪的肚子那样饱满、圆实。因为只有这样，文章的中心

才能得到具体生动的表现。这也是作文得分的主要因素之一。中间饱满则高分，干瘪则低分。

那么，如何把这部分写得像猪肚那样丰满呢？现介绍几招如下：

一、多事实少空泛

即中间材料要丰富，少写空洞的议论。要用事实说话。这在篇幅字数都很有限的中考作

文显得更为重要。你少用一句空话，中间就多了一些事实。记叙文要多写些事例；议论文要

多举些论据；说明文要多作些介绍。

二、多细节少概括

即主、次处理须恰当。重要的材料要细致写。因为细节是文章的生命。有细节则文生，

无细节则文死；有细节则文丰，无细节则文松。记叙文要对人、景作详细的描绘。

三、多新奇少陈旧

人们吃东西，新则爱吃，旧则厌食。人们读文章也一样，新则爱读，旧则厌看。所以，

作文应多选新奇事，少取陈旧物；多讲新奇语，少说陈旧言；多立新奇意，少抒陈旧情；多

构新奇思，少造陈旧形。这方面，鲁迅是我们学习的榜样。单举鲁迅的选材，时而是杨二嫂

偷手套，时而是阿长摆开“大”字睡大觉，令人忍俊不禁。

四、多真情少假意

感人心者，莫先乎情。但这个情应是真情。真情十句也嫌少，假意一句也嫌多。要写使

自己深受感动的事，让自己切实佩服的理，令自己确实动容的物。

五、多角度少单一

在表现主题时，应尽量用两三个角度去反映，不要单从一个方面去反映。其方法很多：

或正面或反面；或集体或个人；或学习或生活；或古代或现实；或天上或地下；或国外或国

内。如此等等。

例如魏巍写《谁是最可爱的人》，主题是歌颂志愿军的崇高品质的，但他在选材和表现

角度就多样。作者从“英雄主义”“爱国主义”“国际主义”三个角度去表现，又从集体、个

人、前线、后方等方面去选材，因而文虽短却物丰。

再例如朱自清写《春》，描绘了春草、春花、春风、春雨、迎春五幅图画，色彩鲜明、

生机勃勃，给人以美的享受。

六、多句式少雷同

文章的语言形式要多样。这也能使文章显得充实。或整句，或散句；或陈述，或感叹；

或叙述或抒情；或调侃或幽默；或俗语或英文，如此等等。

例如毛泽东的文章，笔调就多样：时而记叙，时而抒情，时而陈述，时而感叹，时而拟

人，时而比喻，令人百读不厌。不少同学写文章最大的失败是语言太单调，几乎全是陈述句；

而成功的同学写的文章语言异彩纷呈。

七、多波澜少平静

文似看山不喜平。文章要引人入胜，内容就要写得有波澜，有矛盾。方法有：

1、先抑后扬法。如鲁迅写的《〈山海经〉》先写阿长怎样使自己讨厌，后面又写阿长怎

样使自己敬佩。

2、设置悬念法。如《智取生辰纲》这篇课文，树后影的人是谁？那帮贩枣子的客人真

是商人吗？他们到底是谁？怎么下的药？直到文章的最后才使读者明白。总之，中间部分要

写得多姿多彩，善于变化，这样就显得丰满了。

考场作文拿分技巧：{中考话题作文怎么写}.

1、充分发挥自己的优势去选择文体。

2、精写前几段，给评卷老师留下一个好印象。要精雕细刻，要出彩。比如，可开门见

山，直奔主题（“我与父亲不相见已二年余了，我最不能忘记的就是他的背影。”）；可制造悬

念，引人入胜；可提出问题，引人注意；或巧用排比、比喻、拟人等修辞手法。（“盼望着，

盼望着，东风来了，春天的脚步近了。/一切都像刚睡醒的样子，欣欣然张开了眼。山朗润

起来了，水涨起来了，太阳的脸红起来了。”）；或巧用题记，揭示主旨；或巧用诗文彰显诗

意。再就是要写好结尾和过渡段。阅卷老师一般是S型的扫描全文。结尾可画龙点睛，发人

深思；或总结全文，照应开头；或虚笔拓展，扩大容量；或精辟议论，深化主旨。

3、要给自己充足的构思时间，不要急于动笔，“宁停三分，不争一秒”，一旦构思已定，

就不要轻易改变。

4。要谨慎对待修改。修改一般只着眼于字词方面的，可

轻轻划一道横线。结构方面不能修改。要保持卷面的整洁美观，要努力做到改动少而效果好。

5、如果偏题或者离题，作文的主要分数就失去了。

为防止跑题，可从如下几点做出努力：一是将材料、引语和话题联系起来思考，不可单

看话题； 二是看自己确立的观点能否用话题所给材料来证明。

6、一定要写完整篇。俗话说，好文章是凤头、猪肚、豹尾。没有豹尾，老鼠尾巴也要

有一个，绝不能写半拉文。

7、特别要注意不能缺题目。缺题影响远不止2分，这样做正好给了评卷老师扣分的理

由。注意：千万不要以话题做标题。拟题是显示你才气的一个好的平台，不能轻易放弃。

8、文章要有一至两个亮点。如果是记叙文，应该用引人注目的情节和生动的描写表现

你的真情，记叙文不能没有描写。如果是议论文，就一定要有1--2个典型的事实论据，就

应该有纵横捭阖，很深刻的见解。 这个亮点还可以是一句富有哲理的警句，也可以是一个

精彩的比喻，也可以是一个超常的搭配。总之，要能使评卷老师精神为之一震。

9、行文中要多次扣题，要一路扣题一路歌。

材料、引语和话题中的相关文字至少在文中出现三次以上。开头三句话内应点题一次，

结尾应回扣标题，“回眸一笑百媚生”。中间至少扣题一次。几次扣题事实上也是在不断地提

醒自己不要跑题。有球场上叫暂停的效果，可以调整思路和写法。

10、思想要健康。恋爱题材是考场作文的禁区。网络小说、网络语言（热词、流行语除

外）、火星文等也是考场作文禁止的。

11、临场写作时可以根据题意和你的表达需要想像一个或一类读者就在你的面前。

如《未曾说出的心里话》可想像父母就在身边，就好像误解过你的人正在听你倾诉。即

使所写文章没有明确的阅读对象，你也可以想像此文是写给你的语文老师的。你要知道，你

的文章的惟一读者就是那位跟你的语文老师非常相似的人。写记叙文，最好将主人公设定为

自己。

12、写法上可以求新，要考虑，怎样表现更有智慧，更具艺术，更有可读性；但更要

求稳。确有把握之后才写创新文体，如果没有把握的话，就选择比较稳妥的习惯的文体，使

用老的写法，走稳妥路线。若本没有这方面的能力，却硬要剑走偏锋，会一不小心伤到自己。

13、苦于材料缺乏时则可以突出自己的爱好。你如果喜欢体育，那你就像体育记者一

样，叙体育、议体育，只要切合题意就好。你如果喜欢听××的歌、看××的书、爱好上网…

你就可以将自己这一方面的经历和感受与命题联系起来。那样就不愁内容贫乏、文思枯竭。

千万不可瞎编乱造。

14、要美化自己，而不是丑化自己。要显现自己的高境界、大抱负、多知识、同情心，

要显现自己以天下为己任的豪情。

15、字数以600-900字为宜。不能给人凑字数的感觉，但也不能拖得太长，更不允许加

纸条。喜欢写长文的同学，开篇要注意不要放得太开，开口不要太大，能跳过去的就跳过去，

要相信读者的理解能力。要注意节省篇幅，要防止高潮来了没地方写了。4-6段为宜，切忌

三段文。要突出的句子(扣题的、表现主旨的、文眼、点睛之笔、抒情议论、议论文的分论

点等)最好单独成段。

16、看到题目后，可先搜索一下自己以往所写的优秀作文，看有没有可以再利用的。

必须要注意的是一定不要太牵强。

六个大忌(莫丢冤枉分)

一忌潦草涂改：书写要端正，千万别连文题都改，只改明显的错别字（轻划一道斜线），将错就错，能不改的就不改。

二忌过短过长：字数一定要足，字数不足，写得再好也很难及格；字数不能太多，不要超出试卷中的作文纸，万般无奈之下，也只能在2行以内。

三忌开头议论：还不如开门见山、直接点题开头的好，能来点环境描写，就先来点描写。 四忌分段太少：4-6段为好，千万别少于3段。

五忌文不对题。文章内容与题目不符。

六忌选材太俗：别总是发烧，父母背“我”上医院等等。

中考话题作文怎么写篇二

2015中考热点话题作文范文

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Li Hua spent too much time playing computer

games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.

Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 2. 如何减压让生活更美好

许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:

(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;(2) 我的压力是什么; (3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, and others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That’s all. Thank you!

3. 阳光体育运动的好处

I like sports

I feel \ think that taking exercise is good for our

health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term(学期） I keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible .

4.怎样保持健康的生活习惯

为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。

信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。

要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。

I think healthy habits are very important for us.All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have\eat the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up ( 强健）our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once. 5. 毕业感想

三年的初中生活就要结束了，在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请用英语写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. What’s the biggest problem you met in the school or at home?

2. How did you solve the problem? 总次数。 3. What can you learn from it?

要求：1. 字数：不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入 2. 内容须包含所提示内容，可适当发挥。

则不予评分。 3. 不要涉及真实的人名和校名及其它相关信息，否 My middle school life is coming to an end. During the

three years not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems.（开头） My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day, but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better, even the best in my lessons.

How can I deal with the problem? On one hand, I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand, I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent-minded（心不在焉）, as a result,（最终） I spent less time on homework, and I wasn’t frustrated any more.

As we know, practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can’t help. So we should be active to face our problem.

6.节约用水

水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。

Save Water Water is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, to cook and to wash. Water is necessary for all plants. They need water to grow. People can’t live without water. Plants will die without water. However,

many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time ,we should save as much water as possible. For example, we must turn off the tap（水龙头） at once after we use it. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me!

7.幸福

幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。

Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark （分数）at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: ―It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.

8..爱好 My Hobby

I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am busy with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet. One of my favorite hobbies is reading. . It can not only kill the time（打发时间）, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability（理解能力）. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xun, I come back to the old time of China.

9.校园安全

生， 建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身作为一名学安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。 澡内容提示：;(3)不打架;(4)(1)不带管制刀具到学校上学放学的途中应该注意安全;(2)不私自下河洗;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。

参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things;洗澡：have a bath;打架：fight;紧急情况：emergency;交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。 Dear students,

As we know,（众所周知） safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission（.允许） And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is not allowed We should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. and, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.（平安生活）

Yours, Li Hua 10..我的理想职业

I want to be an inventor

TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient（便捷的）. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.

11.我最好的朋友 My best friend

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is alway glad to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him.

12交通问题

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢? 请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右) 内容包含： 1. 遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。2. 别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3. 劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。 参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马

线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.（开头已写好）

Traffic safety is everybody's business( (交通安全关系到每个人）. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink

before they drive, we shouldn’t run through red lights, or talk and laughwhen we are driving. 13.开展有意义的活动

为配合我市开展―创建文明城市(build a civilized city)‖活动，学校举办以―How to Behave Well‖为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。

提示：1. 衣着整洁;2. 保持环境卫生 3. 待人有礼，乐于助人;4. 遵守交通规则;

要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;

How to behave well?

As a Middle School student , we should behave well. First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules. Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life. 14.发表观点类

―蛋奶工程‖惠及我省千百万学生，可是，在我们周围，有许多同学把吃不完的鸡蛋牛奶乱扔乱弃。对此，你有什么看法和好的建议？假设你是张伟，请用英语给你的同学Tom写一封邮件和他交流自己的想法。 要求：

1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。 ，

（开头已写出）a few students throw the left eggs and milk everywhere. I think we shouldn’t waste the food and that’s not a good habit. As we know, in many poor areas（贫困地区）, people have little to eat, and food is produced by farmers with hard work.

So we should save the food especially the free food from government. I think we should eat up the eggs and milk. If we can’t eat up them, we should take them home to feed the dogs or cats. If we don’t want to eat the eggs and milk, we should give them to others who don’t have. Or we must tell our teacher to give them away to students in poor places.

Saving food is our duty. Let’s take actions!

15..站举办以母爱情深，母爱无价列思维导图提供的信息，―My mother”为题的英语征文活动。;你们的真情故事。写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和请你根据下 行文连贯，段落分明 提示：1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，

;

2.3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。词数不少于60，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though（尽管） she didn't have much money. She sent me to learn playing the piano at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. Most importantly,（最重要的是） I will stay with her when I have free time. That's what she wants most, I think. 16.“分享(Sharing)”

生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法如分享一本有趣英文报纸举行…….现在，某描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。―分享(Sharing)‖为话题的征文，请你投稿。 合逻辑，不少于 要求：根据中文和英文参考词汇，

校名等相关信息。60写出意思连贯、符

词的短文。文中不得出现真实人名和

参考词汇：share…with…;experience; interest; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident

I had an experience（经历） of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on,（从那开始） we got to know each other（逐渐相互了解） and shared our ideas ,problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.

17.雾霾(thick haze)假如你是Li Lin，你的英国笔友Eric来信询问你家乡是否有雾霾(thick haze)，情况如何。请按提示写一封不少于60词的电子邮件回复他。要求卷面整洁书写工整;内容可在包含要点的基础上适当发挥。 提示：1. 感谢他的关心;

2. 介绍:(1)去年冬天有多次雾霾; (2)空气被严重污，危害：车祸，生病等; 3. 正采取各种举措减少其发生。

Dear Erik,

I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked if there is thick haze in my hometown. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health.

There was heavy haze last winter. The air is badly polluted. Many traffic accidents happened and more and more people have to go to see the doctor because of the smog.（烟雾） People have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment. The government suggests people to go to work or school with the public traffic, such as the bus and the underground. Also we should plant more trees. According to me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste anywhere.

Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.（期待你的回信） Yours, Li Lin 18：假设你是Linda，你想加入学校的―爱心俱乐部 (Helping Hands Club)”作一名志愿者，请根据下面的表格信息，用英语写一封自荐信。开头和结尾已给出, 可自由发挥，80词左右。

Dear Chairman,（主席）

I am a student from Class 1, Grade 9. I’d like to be a

volunteer of the Helping Hands Club. I’m healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the street. On the bus, I always give my seat to old people and women with babies. When I see children weren’t happy, I usually cheer them up. Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park and clean up our school. If I join the club, I will be able to improve myself as well as make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others.

I’ll be glad if I’m accepted. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Linda 19：为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校将开展以―安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示和要求写一篇演讲稿。

help, ...

慎重交友遇险报警make friends, be careful, especially on line, ... be in danger, keep calm, call the police for and dates, go bad, ...

安全饮食buy and eat food carefully, read instructions the street, ... 遵守交通规则obey the traffic rules, keep to the right in ......

挥 要求：1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发 ;

2. 3. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。;

How to Keep Safe

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must keep calm（冷静） and call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Third, we’d better buy and eat food carefully. If the food is in bags, we should read instructions and dates（说明和保质期） before eating it. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Fourth, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street.

Besides, summer is coming and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.

In a word, safety must come first !（总之，安全第一）

中考话题作文怎么写篇三

中考话题作文范文总结

中考作文出现的常规错误:

1、卷面出现涂改，字迹不工整。

人是情感动物，卷面整洁从某种意义上讲甚至比内容更重要。

无耐心读下去，势必影响得分。

不超过20秒，评分12以下。 即使有再华丽的辞藻也是徒劳。

2. 中考作文也不是你新句型的练兵场，是关乎你前途命运的一次大考。所以务必确保自己写上的每一句话都是正确的。不拿中考作生僻表达的试验田。

3. 不是语文作文，更不是演讲稿，不需要你自由发挥，感慨万千！

4.细节问题：

1）三无：无段落、无结构、无明显主题

2）语法错误太多

大量明显拼写、语法错误是分数“毒药”

最常出的错误就是：

名词复数、介词缺失、句子结构混乱（单三/时态）。

5. 细节问题：提示词不理解，没有全部用到

2008年是有中考以来第一次出现夹叙夹议的文体，因此出题老师已经尽力将所有能给

之提示悉数奉上，只要按部就班按照中文句子和提示词将句子翻译出来即可。可惜有的同学并不领情，依然故我，舍提示词于不顾，非要尝试长难句。殊不知大智若愚，大巧若拙这个道理

作文提分我能做什么？

明确作文新趋势：

• 提示

• 提示作文也称之为提供材料，它要求根据汉语意思和英语提示词语，写出

意思连贯、符合逻辑的英语文段。这种提示已将所要叙述的事情列出，并且有的提示给出了英语词汇、句型，只是要求学生根据所给的提示，利用合理的想像，运用一定的语言逻辑，使用正确的语法和句法，将整篇的文字用英语表达出来。

•

1.根据题目要求列出写作提纲，打草稿。

切忌直接在卷面上写作文，写作前要先构思文章的主旨，段落，时态。

1）首先，应认真阅读汉语和提示，理解写作要求；将相关组合起来。

2）明确时态，理顺思路，

根据提示的内容，确定时态、人称，在此基础上，确定适当的词汇、句型。

3）写作内容：写人就要从外貌、性格、爱好、年龄、职业、心理活动和人物相关的主

要事件等角度考虑；写事（经历）要交代时间、地点、人物、事情发生的顺序等，提建议用建议句型 另外，注意应用文的格式，如信件E-mail等。

4）写完草稿后，要仔细阅读全文，看文章是否扣题，是否涵盖全部要点，单词拼写是

否准确，有无语法错误，草稿修改好后，抄写在试卷上，抄写时字体要规范整洁。

试卷上务必不要出现大段的涂抹、勾画。

2. 选用自己熟练掌握的句子组织语言。设计好文章的开头和结尾，结构层次要清晰，可按题目的要点分段，并有适当的过渡。

1) 句型为王 句子是表达完整含义的最小单位。

• 自造句+ 模板句

• 考试中尽量使用见过/背过的句式和短语，注意中表达的差异，避免使用中式英

文。我们在课本中学过的句式都可使用在作文中，

• 如：It is … for sb to do sth.

• It is necessary for us to make a plan for our study.

• It is a good habit for us to exercise every day because it can help us

• keep in good health.

个人观点：I hink…；I believe…;In my opinion，…I prefer to do sth rather than

do sth because…I等，我们可在原句型的基础上举一反三利用所

知识准确的表达出自己的观点。

2）另外在适宜的情况下也可使用一些平时积累的很经典的句子，等起到画龙点睛的作用。

• Do well and have well

• Practice makes perfect

• 但求无过，用熟不用生

3）巧润色，细检查。

学会使用过渡词，避免重复使用同样的短语和句型，在需要的地方加上表示转折、因果、并列、比较、时间顺序的过渡词或短语，使文章更加自然、流畅，也会使文章增色不少。

• 临场检查六注意

• 一篇优秀的应符合以下要求：

• 1.审题争取，要素齐全（不全，降档）

• 2.单词拼写错误，语法时态及句子结构错误是否影响了内容的准确性。

• 3.能否使用恰当的关联词或者复合句使文段内容完整，层次清楚。

• 4.运用丰富的词语和句子，增加句子的多样性

• 5.句子开头大写及句尾的标点符号。

• 6.卷面是否整洁。

考前总结常犯错误

• 小提示：

• 1.不会表达，另辟蹊径。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办

法，化难为易，化繁为简。

• 2.小词大用。汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在中常可用一些常用词来{中考话题作文怎么写}.

表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中有用：take，have，get，make，come，go，do，see，show，happy，nice，kind，help等。

• 3.注意使用复合句。

中考作文归类总结范文：

第一大类提建议：

Beginnings:

i. There are many things you can do to help you...

ii. I’m sorry to hear that. I would like to help you deal with your

iii.

iv.

Engdings:

• 1. In a word, nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

• 2. I hope to receive your good news.

• 3. I hope you can feel better soon.

• 4. Easier said than done. Let’s start from now.

• 5. I am sure you will…

Structures:

1. You should/could + do---You shouldn’t/couldn’t +do

2. You’d better do… You’d better not do…

3. Why not do…? Why don’t you do…?

4. Why not consider doing …?

5. You are supposed to do…

6. Don’t do…

7. If I were you, I would do…

8. If possible, I would do

（1）学习 problem. There is nothing serious. I’d like to give you some advice. I know it isn’t easy to... But I have some ideas that may help.

A. how to become a good learner

To be a good leaner, we should have good habits and ways in learning.

First, it's important to get ready for our lessons before class and listen carefully in class. After class, we’d better go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. Second, we need to help each other and study in groups. It can not only help us solve problems but also provide us the opportunities to learn to work with others.

Above all, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I hope all of us will become good learners.