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2010上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself
上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself
1、What kind of person are you?
2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)
3、Why are you proud of yourself?
要求:至少60字
范文: I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running .But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up .but my parents encouraged me: “Impossible is nothing, ” “you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them,,I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line ,I felt proud of myself,though I didn‟t get the good mark, I knew ,I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
2009年上海中考英语作文试题评析
(以“I want to do something for my school(我想为学校做一件事)” 为题写—篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)(注意:短文中
不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) 学生习作1
I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean. "But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?
评析
此文分三层,先提出自己的观点,然后写出自己怎么做的,最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我,结尾紧扣全文,写出我会怎么做。
全文立意新颖,区别于传统的作文,有自己的生活背景,写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程,没有重大的语法错误,是一篇值得参考的好文章。
中考作文给力预测
假期利弊★范文2008年政府取消了五一黄金周(May golden week),但是,最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假。同学们也在校园网的自由论坛上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息,写一篇短文,谈谈恢复长假的
假期利弊
★ 范文
2008年政府取消了“五一”黄金周(“May golden week”),但是,最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假。同学们也在校园网的“自由论坛”上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息,写一篇短文,谈谈恢复长假的利与弊,并简述你的观点,给出一至两条理由。 AdvantagesDisadvantages
have a good rest
spend more time …with …
…cause a lot of trouble…
be crowded everywhere…
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In 2008, „May golden week‟ was canceled, but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew „May golden week‟ or not.
Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important. Firstly, we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work. Secondly, we could spend more time staying with our family. Thirdly, we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries. However, other people hold the opposite view. They think it causes a lot of problems. It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded. As a student, I prefer a 7-day holiday. Not only can I sleep well and do exercise, but also I can read some interesting books. How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then!
公共规则
★ 范文
It‟s not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places. Everyone should obey the rules. Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude. Remember not to do anything that
might make other people uncomfortable. We should stand in line when we are waitiing for the bus. Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones. We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely. Especially, we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus. I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life. Please cherish the public property.
使用手机
★ 范文
关于中学生使用手机
赞成意见:1.现在是信息社会,手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故,可立即拨打手机求助。
3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机,紧跟时间并无过错,追求时尚可以理解,但学习是首要任务。 反对意见:1.学校已提供了公共电话,因此手机并不能带来更多的方便,而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信,将无法集中精力学习。
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. T
上海市历届中考语文和英语作文题目
上海市历届中考语文作文题目
2011年:悄悄地提醒
2010年:黑板上的记忆
2009年:在学海中游泳 2008年:我眼中的色彩 2007年:记住这一天 2006年:我们的名字叫_____ 2005年:充满活力的岁月 2004年:我们是初升的太阳;我的视线 2003年:我想唱首歌 2002年:为自己竖起大拇指 2001年:有家真好 2000年:我也衔过一枚青橄榄 1999年:生活中的发现 1998年:我的欢乐 1997年:良师 1996年:变了 1995年:母爱 1994年:课后 1993年:我终于_____ 1992年:忘不了他(她)
1991年:题目自拟,但必须包含"我"、"第一"这两个词,如:我的第一位老师、我第一次看彩电、得第一名的是我、我家第一次旅游等等。
1990年:在_____影响下
1989年 我
1988年 我和XX
1987年 从来没有这样_____
1986年 这堂课真_____
1985年 同桌
1984年 给我带来了欢乐
1983年 家乡的变化
1980年 看图作文:谁家的衣服掉了
上海市历届中考英语作文题目
2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼
2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦
2007 A Story about My Parent(s)” 一个关于我父/母的故事
2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边 (当年为这篇文章绞尽脑汁。。。) 2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么 2010 I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪
上海近几年中考英语作文范文
09上海中考英语作文题I want do sth for my school
I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean."But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?
10年上海中考英语作文I'm proud of myself
I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know,The students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment,I just wanted to give up.but my parents encouraged me:"impossible is nothing,""you could challenge yourself!"so with the encouragement of them,I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line,I felt proud of myself,though I didn't get the good mark,I knew,I won.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
11年上海中考英语作文I am a member of ...
In this world , every family has a mother.a father.a daughter or a son.For plenty of people ,families are very important .when you are very said ,you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness ,this is you family .
I am very gold to become my family member,beacuse i have a pertty good parent and a fairly younger brother . when i come back,i always feel freedom and relaxed.My mother is a kind cook ,she has lots of experience in cooking ,so my brother and i are heathly.
As a daughter,l shouldn't make my parents worry .As a sister ,l should look after my brother .l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family.
12年上海中考英语作文 a letter to
Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.
上海中考英语作文专题指导
上海中考英语作文专题指导
一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意”写作法
“四审”:
一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作,如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础; 二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you 或第三人称she, he, it或they为主;
三审时态。一般而言,写作时文章应多以现在时(包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时)或过去时(一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时)为主,切忌时态混乱; 四审内容。如有提示,应尽量按照所给提示来写,不可偏题乱发挥,可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述,不可遗漏,这是很重要的一点,一般文章按who,when,where,what,how,why等要素展开。
“四注意”:
一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾,一定要写开头结尾。当然,开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套,要有一定的新意,一般一两句即可,结尾要点题,有所立意;
二注意句式要富于变化,不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调,否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分,如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句,I think / I hope / I believe that 等宾语从句,如用定语从句必须有绝对把握;
三注意适当运用连接词,如on one hand, on the other hand; what’s more; however等,这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性,若语言和内容没问题, 做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。
四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型,尽量运用课本所学词句,坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”,更不能乱“发明”, 一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。
最后需要提醒考生的是,中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得, 以80词左右为宜。另外,书写一定要认真、工整,以免造成不必要的失分。
二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析
1. 时态错误
2. 时间状语错误
3. 名词单复数错误
4. 动词误用
5. 语态错误
6.词性误用
7. 介词误用
8.某些搭配和惯用法误用{上海历年中考英语作文题}.
中考英语总复习专项训练题
写作专项训练
A. 中考英语热门写作话题{上海历年中考英语作文题}.
1. 关于学习
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “How to learn English well”. (以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● When did you start learning English? (in ... / ... years ago)
●How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day ...) ● What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)
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2. 关于兴趣
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My interest”. (以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What is your interest?
● Why do you like it so much?
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3. 关于写事
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Unforgettable memories”. (以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What is your unforgettable memory?
● Why do you think it is unforgettable?
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人教版历年中考英语作文题目集锦
人教版历年中考英语作文题目集锦.
请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇日记。
1. 写作要点提示:
1) 汶川发生地震,李华来襄樊和叔叔住在一起,成了我们的新同学。
2) 我们对他十分友善。送他爱心卡,鼓励他坚强;与他一起做游戏;带他参观学校……
3) 我们竭尽所能给予帮助。捐出书包、作业本、字典……;他英语学习有困难,我帮他复习功课,教他学习方法……
4) 李华激动地说,我们不仅是他的同学,也是他的兄弟姐妹,这里就是他的家。
2. 写作要求:
日记内容应包括所提示的要点,语言要流畅,可适当增加情节,以使短文意思连贯;日记字数90词左右,日记开头已给出,但不记入总词数,也不得抄入答题卡。
Monday, May 21st Fine
A terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.
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短文写作。(本题12分)
同学们很快就初中毕业了。马上要迎来快乐的暑假和精彩的2008北京奥运会,你的心中是否充满期待?请用英语写一篇90词左右的短文,和大家分享你心中的暑期计划。 内容要求:
1. 主要选择通过电视或现场观看哪(几)种比赛项目?最喜欢哪(几)位体育明星?为什么?
2. 主要安排哪(几)项体育锻炼活动?(包括时间、地点和目的意义等)
书面表达(满分20分)
假如你是李明,你的美国笔友Jack给你发来email,想在暑假到北京看奥运会期间来芜湖参观旅游。请根据下表提示,为Jack制定一份“芜湖一日游”计划,并发email给他,介绍相关内容。
上午 游鸠兹广场、镜湖公园,去步行街购物
下午 爬赭山,参观芜湖长江大桥并拍照
晚上 在美食街吃晚饭,谈论各自校园生活
注意:1. 词数80~90。开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;
2. 参考词汇:鸠兹广场Jiuzi Square 步行街 the Walking Street
镜湖公园 the Mirror Lake Park 美食街 the Food Street
芜湖长江大桥 Wuhu Yangzi River Bridge
Dear Jack,
I’m so glad to learn that you will come to Wuhu during the summer vacation.________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to meeting you!
Yours,
Li Ming
书面表达(15分)
根据中文大意和英语提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
汶川地震(Wenchuan Earthquake)发生后,9岁学生林浩(Lin Hao)救了两名同学,然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。
请你就林浩同学的事迹,以“Learn from the Hero”为题,给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学事迹简介,你对这件事的感受,以及你要向他学习什么。
提示词语:a student, nine years old, happen, save , walk, to safety, be deeply moved, brae, give up
(B)5月12日,四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震,那里的人们痛失亲人及家园。全国人民众志成城,抗震救灾。作为一句中学生,请谈谈你的做法及感受。要求:文章语言流畅,逻辑清晰,用词准备,80~100字左右。
提示:可能用到的词或短语:earthquake地震,sorrow悲痛,be deeply moved受到感动,comfort安慰,rebuild重建,volunteer(自愿)to do …
书面表达(满分20分)
假设你是李明,你的澳大利亚朋友Dick得知你校正在推行素质教育,你现在的周末生活与过去相比发生了很大变化。请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一封信告诉他发生的变化。 过 去 现 在
白天 6点起床、上课(上午4节,下午4节) 不必去上学,可以做自己喜欢的事(举例) 晚上 做家庭作业或复习功课 可以看电视、上网、读课外书等
就寝 10:30 9:30
注意:1. 词数:约100词;
2. 信的开头已写好,不计入总词数。{上海历年中考英语作文题}.
Dear Dick,
I’m glad to hear from you again. My life at weekends has changed a lot since last year.
写作(满分15分)
2008年5月12日14时28分,四川省汶川发生了特大地震。请根据下面的图画,用英语写一篇80~100词的短文,简单描述全国人民抗震救灾的情况,可适当发挥;并谈一谈作为中学生如何帮助地震灾区的众。
(参考词汇:collapse v. 倒塌;rescue v. 营救)
山东省潍坊市
书面表达(满分15分)
好学生的标准是什么?考试成绩的高低是唯一的标准吗?大家都来说说看!请先回答下列调查表中的问题(划√),然后以What is a good student?为题,用英语写一篇短文,表述自己的观点。
Are you a good student?
Questions Yes No
1. Do you often get high marks? ( ) ( )
2. Are you hard-working? ( ) ( )
3. Do you like reading? ( ) ( )
4. Are you helpful to others? ( ) ( )
5. Can you get on well with your classmates? ( ) ( )
6. Have you got something that you are good at? ( ) ( )
要求:1. 文中不能出现作者本人的真实信息;
2. 词数80左右。
假如你要接受一家英文报纸的采访,记者提出的问题是“How can you be a good child?”。请你根据下面所给提示及要求,准备一段应答稿。(文稿的开头已给出,不计入总词数) 提示:(1)What should you do at school?
(2)What can you do to give help at home?
(3)How do you show your love to your parents (or grandparents…)?
要求:(1)文稿必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数:60~80个
Well, to be a good child, I ______________________
.(浙江丽水)Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待,感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况,以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题,并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。
范文:English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
2.(浙江金华)Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间,他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动,兴趣广泛,友爱互助,师生之间关系融洽,人与环境和谐相处(如:保持环境卫生,爱护花草树木,不随地乱扔废弃物等)。(15 分)
①请你以Tom 的名义,给远在美国的父母写一封信,介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。 ②文中不得出现真实的姓名,校名或地名。词数80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出,不记入总词数。
③以下词汇仅供参考:build up建立,创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给……留下印象
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our
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Yours,
范文:Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.
The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.
In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.
Yours,
Tom
4.09中考英语作文范文:1.How to make friends
It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.
Don’r be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best.
Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.
Be a good listner. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.
Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed. That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.
5.( 2005 广东河源)中国加入 WTO 后,有一大批外国人来我市——河源参观。假设你是导游,请根据以下内容,向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。
要求: 1. 100 词左右; 2. 要点包括: a. 有悠久的历史,位于广东的东北部,离广州 198 公里,人口约 324 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹,如苏家围( Sujiawei );万绿湖( WanluLake )等等;万绿湖是一个很美丽的地方,湖水清澈,无污染;湖中有各种各样的鱼;你可以到那里划船,野餐,钓鱼,是度假的好去处。你也可以去参观河源市博物馆,在那里你可以看到许多恐龙化石( fossil )。c. 祝大家在河源玩得愉快。
中考满分作文欣赏:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.
There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.
上海中考英语作文
上海中考英语作文学习资料
一.评分标准
上海中考英语作文总分为20分,其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。 以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准:
1.内容分8分。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚完整。
2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误,词汇拼写正确,句型使用恰当。首先是字数,少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
3.组织结构分4分,也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。
二. 注意点:
每少5个词扣0.5分,拼写错误每处扣0.5分,标点,大小写错误每2处扣0.5分 3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上,得2~3分 内容和语言总分13~14分,如确有好句型或表达用语,可酌情给1~2分 通篇句型,句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,也不给分 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。
先划档次:A档 18~15分 B档 14.5~12分 C档 11.5~8分 D档 3.5~0分 然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。
三.学生常出现的问题:
1. 内容空洞,没有清晰的思路,表达能力不强,总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达,所
以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假,当然也就得不了高分。
2. 议论过多,描写不足。大多数情况下,我们把议论当成的作文的重点,所以常常会跑题。 应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像,不能只翻译了事。
3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子,重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达,比如:I must learn English well. 就可以换成:It is important for me to learn English well.
4. 结构散漫,想哪儿写哪儿,乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。
5. 都是简单句,缺少复合句。多用状语从句,宾语从句,定语从句及一些重要的句型,也 人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导(一)初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。
6. 连词的使用较少,句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些:比如: to my surprise (让我惊 讶的是), what’s more(而且,还有)等,让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。
四. 中考写作高频使用词组、句法
1.作文开头的有用句
As we all know, As it is known to all, It’s known to all that… It’s common knowledge that… It’s commonly accepted that… There is no denying that… How time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.
2、中间分层部分的有用结构:
分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand 分两点:For one thing, For another, 分三点:Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least
3、结尾部分
All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的说,简单的说 Last but not least
组织语言 发表观点的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not,
表示递进的 In addition Furthermore More importantly What’s more Moreover 其他与“我”有关的写作材料 1、重点句型 It`s+a. for sb.to do sth. So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that too„to do Not„.until That’s why+句子 那是。。。的原因 It’s said that +句子
There’s no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问··· It goes without saying that+句子 毫无疑问··· There’s no need to do 没必要做··· There’s no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 2、 提建议 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why don`t+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话,我会做``` It’s best to do 3、表示喜欢,感兴趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth. Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in 4、努力做``` Try to do/strive to do Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try one’s best/do one’s best to do Do what/everything sb can to do 5、打算做···/计划做··· Intend to do/plan to do Be going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one’s mind to do 6、表示想/希望 Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 7、其他有用的短语 From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn„by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in„. 8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, People’s view on„vary from person to person
4、增添亮点 使用复合句和谚语 谚语举例 I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.” It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”
五.2002-2013 上海中考英语作文题目集锦{上海历年中考英语作文题}.
2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物
2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人
2004 Leave School 毕业时分
2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼
2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦
2007 A Story about My Parent(s) 一个关于我父/母的故事
2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边
2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么
2010 I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪
2011 My Favourite Thing(s) 我的心爱之物
2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信,并给予建议。
2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”.(以“如何保护自己”为
题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文)
六.近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享
2009命题作文
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”. (以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
l What do you want to do for your school?
2 Why do you want to do it?
3 How are you going to do it?
例文1:
I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean." But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now,
do you think it is simple?
2 One possible version
I want to do something for my school I'm leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.
2010命题作文
上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself
1、What kind of person are you?
2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)
3、Why are you proud of yourself?
要求:至少60字
范文:1
I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me: "impossible is nothing," "you could challenge yourself!" so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew, I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
2. I am proud of myself
The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. By looking backwards, I’m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud I’m of being a strong-minded person.