上海英语中考作文范文

上海英语中考作文范文篇一

上海初三中考英语作文范文

2010上海初三中考英语作文范文（一）

林宏的笔友莉莉今年夏天将来沪旅游。林宏去信表示欢迎，并准备去机场迎接。

还告诉她上海有不少值得游玩的地方，他将陪同参观旅游。（用书信体写）

June 7, 2010

Dear Lily,

I’m delighted to learn that you will be coming to Shanghai during the

summer holidays. I will meet you at the airport and be your guide during

your stay.

I believe there’s a lot for you to see in Shanghai. Yu Garden and the Jade

Buddhist Temple will show you traces of our ancient architecture and

culture. The Bund — the glory of modern Shanghai, — has been an

attraction throughout the 20th century. Modern constructions are also

very popular with tourists. You will be impressed by the Grand Theatre,

where world-famous musical concerts are often held. You really shouldn’

t miss the symbol of Shanghai—the Oriental Pearl TV Tower. The bird’s

eye view of the whole city from there is really wonderful.

Excited? I am sure you will have a good time in Shanghai.

I can’t wait to see you!

Yours,

Lin Hon

2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（二）

国际青年艺术节（the International Youth Arts Festival）即将举行。作为

一名志愿者，谈谈你的打算。

The International Youth Festival will be held in Shanghai soon and I am

honoured to be a volunteer.

As a volunteer, it is my duty to do my best for the International Youth

Festival. First, I’ll help to organize the festival. For example, I can send

out leaflets and put up posters in the streets. I can offer my suggestions

to the Festival Organization Committee. Second, I have a good command

of foreign languages. I can speak English and Japanese. Therefore I am

capable of being a guide and translator for the visitors. I’d like to answer

their questions to help them solve problems so that they can have a

good time during their stay in shanghai.

Also, I can benefit from the work as it can enrich my social experience

and broaden my horizons.

I hope the International Youth Arts Festival will be a great success and

make a deep impression on the foreign visitors who attend.

2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（三）

How to make wise use of the computer

With the rapid development /fast growth of modern science /new

technology, the computer has played a more and more important role in

our society. Meanwhile, how to make wise use of the computer is also

very important.

First, I will learn what is happening / have access to immediate

international events through the internet to widen my knowledge. What’

s more, I can depend on the computer to write my blog and down load

pop music.

With the help of the computer, I find my life interesting and fascinating.

2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（四）

有些学生喜欢报刊阅读，有些学生喜欢电脑了解新闻信息，我的选择。

Nearly one-third of the students still prefer the traditional reading

pattern---newspaper while the rest have turned to the computer.

I take the newspaper. First, compared with the headline reading on the

net, newspaper covers a wider range. What’s more, newspaper reading

does less harm to eyes than on-line reading because the computer

screen flashes from time to time. Finally, we can take the newspaper to

read wherever there is no electricity or no web signal.

So, I have developed the habit of reading newspaper to learn what is

happening all over the world.

2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（五）

以假期去做一名志愿者服务为内容，字数不少于60字。

As a Junior Three student, I think I should not only study hard, but also

serve the society well if I am given a chance. The end of the junior school

life will provide me with a good chance to work as a volunteer in the

coming summer holiday.

What I most want to do is to take care of the old living alone without

relatives， I can read newspapers and interesting stories to them, help

them wash the clothes, and cook for them. Besides, I will try my best to

collect the rubbish in my neighbourhood to make the surroundings clean

and beautiful. Finally, I can follow the adult volunteers to advise those

who smoke in public not to smoke.

I believe I will have interesting experience as a volunteer.

2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（六）

以“我最难忘的一课“为题，不少于60字

Last summer I went to U.S.A to spend three weeks study with the local

students, where I learned a lot of new things and I will never forget the

Astrology class.

That morning we went to the local space museum to have my first lesson

abroad. During the class, we had a discussion on whether we should

carry out the space project. With the advanced teaching materials and

the experienced professor, we had a general idea of our space success

and failure as well. I first realized how serious the population explosion

and the pollution was. What’s more, I learned the earth was faced with

more difficulties than ever before.

This class was not only my first class abroad but also helped me learn

how important space exploration was to us.

2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（七）

化名李明向李老师写一个请假条，因淋雨感冒发烧下周不能参加学校的春游。时

间为4月6日

April 6,2011

Dear Mr. Li, I’m very sorry that I can’t follow the class to go on a trip next week. I

have to ask for a sick leave because I was caught in the heavy rain on my

way back home yesterday. When I felt uncomfortable, my mother took

me to the hospital. The doctor there took my temperature and told me I

got a high fever. So the doctor asked me to have a good rest at home

and have some medicine.{上海英语中考作文范文}.

I hope my classmates will have a good time while travelling. What a pity I

can’t go with you.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

2012上海初三中考英语作文范文

上海英语中考作文范文篇二

2016中考英语作文题目(热门话题)大全

一、 学术文化篇

1.沉迷网络游戏

题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

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Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.

Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

2.怎样学好英语

世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。

要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

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How to learn English well

English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.

First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.

In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.

二、 素质教育篇

3.如何减压让生活更美好

许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:

(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;

(2) 我的压力是什么;

(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。

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Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

4.学做好人好事

今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：―我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。‖

请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。

在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。

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Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character.

Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan ―learn from Leifeng, our decent idol‖, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.

To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.

I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit.

三、 现代生活篇

5.怎样保持健康的生活习惯

健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。

信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。

要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。 ★ 范文

I think healthy habits are very important for us.{上海英语中考作文范文}.

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and

vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

6.毕业感想

初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。

提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry ★ 范文

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

四、 社会经济篇

7.低碳生活

现在全世界都在倡导―低碳生活‖(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse

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Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.

8.节约用水

水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。

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As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty

water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.

五、 人生哲理篇

9.幸福

幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。

要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，80-100词。 ★ 范文

Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: ―It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!‖ I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.

10.感恩

对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我生命，让我健康成长;对老师心存感恩，因为他们给了我教诲，让我抛却愚昧;对朋友心存感恩，因为他们给了我友爱;对社会心存感恩，因为社会给了我智慧和力量。自从国家实施义务教育以来，书本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困助学金等。面对这些，我们应该心存感恩，感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。让我们永远记住：感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会!请以―感恩‖为话题写一篇80—100字的作文。

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What should we thank?

The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for. The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life! The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us. The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life. The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and

food. Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man.

六、 环境保护篇{上海英语中考作文范文}.

11.保护环境{上海英语中考作文范文}.

6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日, 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重......如何保护我们的环境? 请以― How to protect/save our environment/world? ‖为题写一篇短文。

提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重;2.砍伐森林严重;3. 大气污染严重;4. 白色垃圾等。

要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面, 80字左右的。

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How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted; we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, the population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it but also has a great affection in the future. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.

We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle, reduce, reuse things .Don’t waste things. This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags. We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world becomes more and more beautiful.

12.拯救地球

地球是我们人类共同的家园，人类只有一个地球。―低碳、环保‖已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以―Save(拯救)our earth‖为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文参评。

1.重要性：只有一个地球

2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难

3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然

参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V. 保护

注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;

(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数;

(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

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Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.

So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the

上海英语中考作文范文篇三

上海中考英语作文指导范文

作文目录

1. A good way to study English 学习英语的方法

2. A good way to study well 努力学习的方法

3. Travelling (7篇) 旅行

4. Haze weather in Shanghai（3篇） 上海的雾霾天气

5. My view on comic strips 漫画之我见

6. My way to school （2篇） 上学路上

7. My views on an English Festival （2篇） 英语节之我见

8. Using the Internet makes our life convenient 运用网络使生活更便利

9. Let’s learn to smile 学会微笑

10. Growing up with good books （2篇） 好书伴我成长

11. The best gift I’ve received （3篇） 我收到的最好的礼物

12. Encouragement brings me power（5篇） 鼓励带给我能量

13. Being a polite person 做一个有礼貌的人

14. How to protect myself 2013上海中考满分作文

15. Write a letter 写一封信

16. This time next year 明年此时

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My way of studying English is to read lots of English books. It is very efficient.

When I read English books, I can learn lots of extra-curricular words （which enable me to write better sentences as well as understand articles better.）Besides, it can set examples of writing articles for me. So I think reading books is a good way. It enables me to learn better with less time. However, there is no doubt that there are still some better ways. But no matter how we learn, the idea of using good methods never changes. A good method can always improve the quantity and quality of what we do, not only for studying English.

A good way to study well

In my opinion, reading widely is a good way to study well.

On one hand, reading widely can bring us lots of powerful knowledge which we can’t learn in class as well as give us much fun. Reading is like stairs of a high mountain. The more you read, the higher you will go and the better you will learn. On the other hand, reading can also open your mind, which will help you easily solve the problems which are so difficult that few people can work out. How useful the way is!

To sum up, if you read a book every day, you will study better and better.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As tourists, we ought to pay attention to our behaviors. First, respecting local customs is of great importance. We should learn some traditions of the place before we travel so that we won’t do things that make local people unhappy. Also, wearing a smile is a good way to show our politeness. Wherever we go and whatever we do, smile is a great passport that shows kindness and friendliness. When we are abroad or in other cities, we should always be friendly and kind to local people. In a nutshell, l hope you can follow my tips when you travel.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Many students plan to travel with their parents on holidays. But when we are travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors and travel politely. Firstly, we should keep quiet when we’re travelling. Secondly, it will be terrible to draw some pictures on famous buildings.

I think that if we do these things well, we’ll have a good time when we are travelling.

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Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As a tourist, we must pay attention to our behaviors. First of all, we must obey the rules. Next, we must keep the environment clean. For example, we should leave rubbish in rubbish bins. A clean environment can make us feel happy . we must respect local customs so that we can give them a good impression. More importantly, it will be very bad to hurt the ancient buildings because they are very precious and they should be protected . in a word, it is important for us to control ourselves when we are going for a trip.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Quite a few people go abroad to spend their holidays. We should pay attention to our behaviors. First, we should put rubbish into rubbish bins instead of leaving it everywhere. Second, when we have a walk along the lakes, we shouldn’t throw stones into the lake. What’s more, we shouldn’t shout or smoke in public places. We should give others a helping hand when they are in trouble. Last but not least, it will be necessary not to draw here and there. I think if we do these,our travelling will be better.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. While travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors. It is as important as enjoying the views. First, when we travel to another country, we should respect local customs. If we don’t, we may be not popular among the people in that country. Second , it will be terrible to leave rubbish in the river or on the road. It may make the view less beautiful. Finally, we should be quiet in public p places. If we are noisy, we may make others unhappy. As a result, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors while travelling .

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. When we travel to other places, we should pay attention to our behaviors. Firstly, we must respect local customs. We shouldn’t draw or write on the wall. What’s more, it will be terrible to leave rubbish. Instead, we ought to put it into rubbish bins. Last but not least, we mustn’t take photos if it isn’t allowed.

I hope that everyone can behave well during the trip. In this way, our life will be better.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As students, it is common that we go travelling with our parents when we are free. But we must pay attention to our behaviors when we travel to other countries and local places.

Firstly, we should respect the local culture. Every country has its own culture and it’s precious. So we can’t be rude to their culture. What’s more, when we ave arrive at a famous scenery spot, wee can take photos with it so that we can have a nice memory about it . but we can’t destroy any of it. Instead, we

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上海英语中考作文范文篇四

上海市历届中考英语作文题目

上海市历届中考英语作文题目

2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人

2004 Leave School 毕业时分

2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼

2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦

2007 A Story about My Parent(s)” 一个关于我父/母的故事

2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边

2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么

2010 I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪

2011 I’m a member of .... 我是……的一员

2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议

2013 How to protect myself 如何保护自己

2014 This time next year 明年此时

上海英语中考作文范文篇五

上海中考英语作文

上海中考英语作文学习资料

一.评分标准

上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。 以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：

1.内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。

2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。

二. 注意点：

每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分 3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分 内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分 通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。

先划档次：A档 18~15分 B档 14.5~12分 C档 11.5~8分 D档 3.5~0分 然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。

三.学生常出现的问题：

1. 内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所

以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。

2. 议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。 应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。

3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：I must learn English well. 就可以换成：It is important for me to learn English well.

4. 结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。

5. 都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也 人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。

6. 连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如: to my surprise (让我惊 讶的是), what’s more（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。

四． 中考写作高频使用词组、句法

1.作文开头的有用句

As we all know, As it is known to all, It’s known to all that… It’s common knowledge that… It’s commonly accepted that… There is no denying that… How time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.

2、中间分层部分的有用结构:

分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand 分两点：For one thing, For another, 分三点：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least

3、结尾部分

All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的说，简单的说 Last but not least

组织语言 发表观点的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not,

表示递进的 In addition Furthermore More importantly What’s more Moreover 其他与“我”有关的写作材料 1、重点句型 It`s+a. for sb.to do sth. So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that too„to do Not„.until That’s why+句子 那是。。。的原因 It’s said that +句子

There’s no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问··· It goes without saying that+句子 毫无疑问··· There’s no need to do 没必要做··· There’s no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 2、 提建议 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why don`t+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话，我会做``` It’s best to do 3、表示喜欢，感兴趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth. Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in 4、努力做``` Try to do/strive to do Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try one’s best/do one’s best to do Do what/everything sb can to do 5、打算做···/计划做··· Intend to do/plan to do Be going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one’s mind to do 6、表示想/希望 Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 7、其他有用的短语 From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn„by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in„. 8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, People’s view on„vary from person to person

4、增添亮点 使用复合句和谚语 谚语举例 I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.” It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”

五．2002-2013 上海中考英语作文题目集锦

2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人

2004 Leave School 毕业时分

2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼

2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦

2007 A Story about My Parent(s) 一个关于我父/母的故事

2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边

2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么

2010 I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪

2011 My Favourite Thing（s） 我的心爱之物

2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。

2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”．(以“如何保护自己”为

题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文)

六．近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享

2009命题作文

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”. (以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)

l What do you want to do for your school?

2 Why do you want to do it?

3 How are you going to do it?

例文1：

I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean." But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now,

do you think it is simple?

2 One possible version

I want to do something for my school I'm leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.

2010命题作文

上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself

1、What kind of person are you?

2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)

3、Why are you proud of yourself?

要求：至少60字

范文：1

I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me: "impossible is nothing," "you could challenge yourself!" so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew, I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!

2. I am proud of myself

The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. By looking backwards, I’m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud I’m of being a strong-minded person.

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