2017广州中考英语作文范文

2017广州中考英语作文范文篇一

广州中考英语作文话题资料

学生自己：

1. 我的爱好：七上U4 Hobbies

① Norman Parkinson was a famous English photographer. He liked travelling to interesting places and taking photographs. It was his hobby as well as his job.

Taking photographs is a favorite hobby of many people all over the world. It can help us remember things. We all love to take photographs of each other, especially when we travel to new places. We also like to have a photograph of everybody in the group together. When we want to be in the picture, we need to ask someone to take the photograph for us. Having photographs is important because people and places always change. It is very sad, for example, if children cannot look at photographs of their parents or grandparents. What did Grandfather look like? Where did he use to live? If we do not have photographs, children may not know the answers to these questions. Photographs help us know and understand our history.

② Fishing is fun, too. Fishing takes you to beautiful places. You can catch fish in small rivers, big lakes or the sea. You can go with friends or, if you like, you can go alone. You can make a lot of new friends when you go fishing. You can catch fish with just a net, or with a long piece of string, a hook and some bread. Everybody gets excited when someone catches a big fish. Catching fish is great fun, but eating them is even better!

③ Making models is my favorite hobby. I have made a few model planes. At the weekend, I fly my planes at a park near my home. If they crash, I have to mend them. I like mending things. It teaches me a lot about real planes. I hope I can work with real planes when I grow up. It is very interesting to make things.

2. 我的基本情况：七上U1 Making Friends

① My name is Simon. My Chinese name is Li Peichun. I am twelve years old. I am 163 cm. I have short black hair and brown eyes. My hobby is playing chess.

I live with my parents in the UK. They are from Beijing. My parents own a Chinese restaurant in Newcastle. We live in a house near our restaurant. I can speak Chinese, but I cannot write it very well. I have a brother. His name is Edwin. He is 23. He works as an accountant in London.

I am in Year 7 at Walker School. It is near my house, and I can walk to school. I like my school.. The teachers are very friendly. I am keen on sports. I enjoy playing rugby and badminton in winter, and tennis in summer. My best subject at school is maths. I want to be an engineer.

与他人的关系：

1. 与家人的关系：八下U5 Family lives 3. 我喜欢的科目：七上U2 Our Daily Life ① I usually get A grades in all my subjects. ② Zhen Hui loves English very much, and always gets an A. She usually gets a B in her other subjects.

① My parents gave me a generous amount of pocket money every month.

② I hardly ever do the housework. Sometimes my mother asks me to clean my room if she’s very busy, but

she always give me money or a present for helping her. After all, the housework is the job of the parents, isn’t it?

③ I get a little pocket money every month. My parents say I have to learn to look after my money and live

within a budget. I’ll have to do that when I become independent.

④ My parents never pay me for doing the housework. It’s the responsibility of the whole family ⑤ They often say “No” when I ask for things. They say it’s bad to expect things for nothing.

⑥ Like many children today, she is a big fan of pop music. Her parents care a lot about her, but sometimes

they get angry with her bahaviour. Her parents were unhappy about her listening to pop music all the time.

⑦ Her parents understand that endless homework is tiring and causes stress sometimes, but they think she

should think more about her future.

⑧ Perhaps there’s a generation gap developing in many families nowadays.

2. 与学校的关系：九下U4 All about learning

① My teachers are all competent and helpful. At first, I could not say anything to my foreign teachers.

However, later I became more fluent in English. I have a lot of confidence in using English now, and I’m proud of my achievements.

② The teachers were just teaching us to memorize things. I often asked questions about grammar but my

English teacher could not answer them.

与社会的关系--环保：

1. 树：七下U2 Protecting our environment

① Trees are natural air conditioners. They cool the air and clean it. Three trees can do the job of 15 air conditioners.

② Trees are in great danger. We cut down and burn millions every year. We are destroying our best pollution fighters.

③ Do you often see a blue sky above our city? Is the air in our city fresh? Is the water in our river clean? The answer to these questions are all “No”

My grandfather often tells many interesting stories about his childhood. At that time, the sky was blue, the air was fresh and the water was clean. When my grandfather and his friends played in the forest, they could hear birds sing. When they swan in the river, they could see many fish. It was a happy time.

However, today, the air and water are becoming dirtier. People are killing animals, and cutting down and burning trees. Some animals and plants are now disappearing. Earth is in trouble.

We need to protect earth because it is our home. We do not need to do big things – we can start out small.

Do not throw any rubbish onto the ground. Do not waste water. Use both sides of paper when you write. Stop using plastic bags for shopping.

2. 节约用水：七下U6 Water

① If there’s no water, we’ll die of thirst. If there’s no water, we can’t brush our teeth, take a shower, wash our clothes or wash the dishes. Then our life will be in a mess.

Farmers need water to water the crops on their farms. If there’s no water, the crops will die. We’ll have This is our world. Let’s do our best to make it more beautiful. no food to eat. If there’s no water, cooks in restaurants can’t cook food. We can’t live without water. People should save water instead of wasting it, because it is valuable.

③ We can do many things to keep water clean. We can stop polluting water in our daily life.

Whenever you see litter, such as cans, plastic bags and cigarette ends on the street, pick it up. When rainwater washes over the litter, it becomes polluted. This polluted water flows into rivers and the sea. Do not throw paint, oil or litter down your sink or toilet.

Pick up your dogs waste. When they are washed into water in rivers or the sea, they increase bacteria levels.

Take household chemicals, waste oil and batteries to the specific places at official landfill sites.

Do not throw litter on nearby beaches. We can organize a project with our school or join a group to help clean the beaches instead.

3. 环境保护：八下U7 Environment

① Without it, Earth would be as cold and lifeless as the surface of the moon.

② The trouble is that our atmosphere is changing because we are polluting it chemicals – in the form of

gases – and it is keeping in too much heat. This will cause the sea level to rise and drown cities and even whole countries.

③ The burning and cutting down of trees is making the greenhouse effect worse because trees take in

harmful gases. It will also cause floods because trees can help hold soil together, and soil absorbs water when it rains.

④ Many of our habits causes pollution, especially our habit of using things once and then throwing them

away. This creates mountains of rubbish and it pollutes our land and seas. For example, people throw away as many as seven billion cans in the UK every year. That is enough to reach from Earth to the moon.

⑤ In order to save out world, we should only buy and use “environmentally friendly” things. These things

will not damage the environment.

4. 胶袋：八下U7 Environment

① --Your parents go shopping without any bags with them. Then they bring home as many as ten plastic

bags. Later, they throw the bags away. What will you do?

-- I think I’ll buy my mother a big shopping bag for her birthday. I’ll help my parents with the shopping and take some old bags with me to use again. I think I’ll ask them to recycle the old bags..

5. 空气污染

① Thick smog is covering most of South-East Asia. Thousands of people have eye or breathing problems. Some people may die. Doctors believe living in this smog is s dangerous as smoking 600 cigarettes a day.

2017广州中考英语作文范文篇二

广州中考英语作文题目2009-2012

2011年

2012年

09年

2010年

09

2012{2017广州中考英语作文范文}.

2011

It’s our duty to save water

As we know , water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it . They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers , too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us

2010

2017广州中考英语作文范文篇三

广东省中考英语书面表达之写作

读写综合之书面表达{2017广州中考英语作文范文}.

一. 题型攻略

题型解读

书面表达是中考中的主观题，分值为15分。培养写作技能，训练语言表达能力是新教

材英语语言教学的主要内容之一。《新课标》要求学生能在所学词汇、语法和句型的基础上

造简单的句子；能仿照学过的题材和所给的范例写简单的书信、便条、通知等。书面表达

是中考英语测试的一个重要方面，综合考查学生运用所学英语知识进行语言表达的能力。

考查角度：

（一）考查考生能力：

1.观察能力

2.思维能力

3.综合分析能力

4.运用语言知识的能力

5.用英语组词造句，连句成篇的能力

6.书写能力

（二）考查考生基础语言基础知识：

1. 词类常识

2. 词类的句法功能

3. 动词八种时态用法

4. 动词不定式及动名词的用法

5. 情态动词的用法

6. 形容词和副词比较等级及最高级的用法

7. 主谓一致

8. 被动语态

9. 从句的用法

方法点睛

1. 仔细审题，理清作文要点，确定时态文体。

2. 列提纲。

3. 写作。确保用有把握额词汇和句型，注意文章的连贯性。

4. 通读全文，检查复核。

1.是什么构成一篇好文章？

1.高级的词汇及短语。

Eg. I like basketball and football.

-» I am fond of basketball as well as football.

He is a good student.

-»He is an excellent student.

2. 复杂的句型。

Eg. I can’t go with you tomorrow. I have no time.

-» I can’t go with you tomorrow because I have no time.

3. 好的连贯性。

使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，

 并列 and; as well as ; also; too,

 选择or; either...or;

 原因because (of) ;owing to; due to ; thanks to

 结果so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result

 转折but ; yet; however ;

 递进besides ;

 举例for example; such as ;

4. 好的内容

2.如何写好简单句？

句型1：S+V（主谓结构：S=主语；V=谓语）

The students listened carefully.

He runs quickly.

My parents work day and night.

句型2：S+V+P(主系表结构：P=表语)

The story sounds interesting.

He becomes a teacher when he grew up.

句型3：S+V+O(主谓宾结构：O=宾语)

We found their home easily.

You should look after your children well.

句型4：S+V+O1+O2(主谓双宾结构：O1=间接宾语；O2=间接宾语)

He gave a book to me.

My brother brought a computer to her.

句型5：S+V+O+C(主谓宾补结构：C=宾语补足语)

The teacher made the girl angry.

We all found her happy that day.

3.如何写好复合句？

句型1：主语+及物动词+that（宾语从句）

He found that his English was too poor.

He decided that he must work hard.

句型2：主语+whether/if从句（宾语从句）

I wonder whether he will come.

I don’t know whether he will arrive on time.

句型3：主语+连接代词/连接副词+从句（宾语从句）

No one knows what he’s doing.

Can you tell me when we are leaving?

句型4：主句+when/while/as/before/after从句（状语从句）

Please keep silent when/while he is writing.

When my mother came in, I was doing my homework.

句型5：主句+until/till从句（状语从句）{2017广州中考英语作文范文}.

I didn’t sleep until/till eleven o’clock last night.

I do my homework until/till ten o’clock every night.

句型6：主句+since从句/It is+...since从句（状语从句）

We have lived here since we moved to the city.

It’s four years since we met last night.

We have been good friends since we were at school.

句型7：主句+as soon as从句（状语从句）

Please call us as soon as you arrive at the airport.

I will tell your mother the news as soon as I see her.

句型8：主句+because从句

He didn’t pass the exam because he didn’t study hard.

Because you are here, I am here.

句型9：主句+so that/in order that 从句

Can you speak louder so that/in order that I can hear you?

I get up early every morning so that/in order that I can arrive at school on time.

句型10：主语+be/v.+so+adj./adv+that从句（状语从句）

The child is so lovely that everyone loves her so much.

He ran so quickly that I couldn’t catch up with him.

句型11：though/although从句+主句（状语从句）

Though/Although you are a child, I will still punish you.

My grandfather is very strong though he is old.

4.如何处理句子的衔接？

表时间的过渡词语：now, than, soon, before long, just now, just then, suddenly, immediately

等。

范例：

一天下午，一些男孩在操场上踢足球，突然有个孩子跌倒了且伤了腿。

One afternoon some boys were playing football on the playground. Suddenly one of them fell over

and hurt his leg.

=One afternoon some boys were playing football on the playground when one of them fell over

and hurt his leg.

= One afternoon when some boys were playing football on the playground, one of them fell over

and hurt his leg.

表顺序及过程的过渡词语：first(ly), first of all, second(ly), at first, then, next, at last, finally

等。

范例：

每天早晨起床后我有很多事要干，首先刷牙洗脸，接着读书，最后吃饭。

I have a lot of things to do after I get up every morning. First I brush my teeth, wash my face, then

do some reading, at last/finally have breakfast.

= I have a lot of things to do after I get up every morning. Firstly I brush my teeth, wash my face,

secondly do some reading, finally have breakfast.

表转折和让步的过渡词语：but, (and) yet, instead, however, although, though, otherwise, or else,

in spite of等。{2017广州中考英语作文范文}.

范例：

爸爸虽然很忙，但他总是乐于帮我学英语。

Though/Although my father is very busy, he always likes to help me with my English.

=Though my father is very busy, yet he always likes to help me with my English.

= My father is very busy, however, he always likes to help me with my English.

表结果和原因的过渡词语：thus, therefore, so, so...that, so that, as a result, because等。

范例：

我认为学好英语很重要，因为世界上许多国家都使用它。

I think it is important to learn English well because it is used in many countries in the world.

=English is spoken in many countries in the world so I think it is important to learn English well.

表总结的过渡词语：finally, in a word, in short, in the end, in all等。

范例：

你知道，在我的老师帮助下，我在学习方面取得了很大进步。

As you know, with the help of my teachers, I have made great progress in my studies.

= As you know, I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers.

二. 典例分析

1.应用文

应用文包括启事、通知、书信、日记、电子邮件等形式。下面举例说明其写作思路和方

法。

例1.2009年海珠一模

假如你的朋友Juliana从美国来你的学校．期末将一起参加考试，她有点紧张。作为朋

友．请你写几条建议给她，告诉她注意事项：

1．要制定一个复习计划；

2．考试前要早早上床，要有充足的睡眠；

3．考试前要吃好早餐；

4．自由发挥一两条建议。

注意：不要逐条翻译，可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的词语和连接词，使所写内

容

连贯。所写内容必须包括以上所有内容，开头和结尾已写好。

Dear Juliana，

I'm sorry to hear that you’re worried about your exams．Here’s some advice．

Good luck！

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Jie

写作指导：

本文是一封书信，属于应用文。内容是你要向你的朋友Juliana提些建议，让她避免因为

考试而紧张得心理。从内容上看，我们可以发现提建议，我们最好采用情态动词，同时可

以运用had better do 的句型。另外，我们应当避免对要点的直译，我们可以多使用连贯

词如besides，能够使文章更具连贯性。

范文：

Dear Juliana，

I’m sorry to hear that you’re worried about your exams．Here’s some advice．I

think one of the most important things to do is to make a plan．Then you can have enough time to

revise everything．You should go to bed early and have a good sleep so that you will feel good

the next morning．Every morning，you’d better have a good breakfast and you can eat some

bread，milk fruit and so on，because food gives you energy．What is more。I think you mustn’t

be too nervous about the exams，and it can help you think clearly．

I hope my advice is of some help to you．

Good luck！

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Jie

例2.2010花都一模

假如你是李华。5月1日你被邀请参加广州“迎亚运，学英语”的英语晚会活动。那天活动

非常丰富，请你按要求写一篇英文小报道，发表在《21世纪中学生版teens》上。内容包括：

1. 当天活动的安排；

2. 你参加的一至两项活动及原因；

3. 你对活动的感受。

“迎亚运，学英语”英语晚会安排表

6：30p.m-7：30p.m： 听讲座：如何用英语介绍亚运 （全体参加）

7：40p.m-8：40p.m： 观看表演和参加游戏（自由选择）

1. 英文歌

2. 英语小故事

3. 英语游戏

注意：

1． 词数80左右（开头已写好，不计入词数）

2． 可适当添加细节，但不能透露个人的任何信息（例如：具体的学校和姓名等），否则不

予评分。

On May 1st, I took part in an English party which was held to welcome the 2010 Guangzhou

Asian Games.

2017广州中考英语作文范文篇四

英语中考真题作文及范文

1.2015年广东广州中考英语作文

书面表达（共1题，满分15分）

你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. …

注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making

2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；

3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

【参考范文1】Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. Students who want to have strong bodies as well as develop their teamwork spirit can choose to attend the football course because this course encourages students to work together. Those who look for a chance to practice their oral English can attend the English drama course. What‟s more, it will provide them chances to act out some interesting plays. Besides, for those who want to know more about science and increase their interest, we will also have a model making course.

In my opinion, I strongly suggest that we should have an International course as well. It is a good opportunity for us to broaden our horizons and I think it is a good chance to improve our foreign language skills.

【参考范文2】Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. First of all, the football course is the best choice if you like playing football. When you play football, you can take regular exercise and build up your body. At the same time, playing football can develop your teamwork spirit because you can learn how to help each other.

What‟s more, English play course is a good choice for the students who like English. In the class, it is a good chance for the students to learn acting and improve oral English. If you want to develop an interest in science, you‟d better choose model making course. When you make some models, you can learn more about the science. In my opinion, we should have a reading course as well, because we can learn plenty of knowledge from books. If we read more books, we will become smarter and smarter.dim-sum, seafood and so on. The more I knew about the food culture of Guangzhou ,the prouder I felt about being part of Guangzhou.

2. 2015广东佛山中考英语作文

书面表达

请根据写作要点和要求完成作文，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置上。 假设你是Li Shan, 读了Stephen Williams的博客（blog）后，想在他的评论栏（Comments）分享自己的童年趣事。请根据以下写作要点，用英文写一篇短文。

I still remember my experience of Start of Summer, one of the 24 Chinese solar terms. ……

I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms!

Li Shan, China

参考范文：

I still remember my experience of Start of Summer, one of the 24 Chinese solar terms. I went to my grandparents‟ home in the country when I was six years old. On the day of summer, every one ate tea eggs , wishing for a happy life and good health. My grandma hung an egg in a bag on my chest. She said that it could prevent summer diseases. What‟s more, we played a game of hitting eggs. If one‟s egg was not broken, he would win. And we enjoyed it very much . It was very interesting and unforgettable! I miss my grandparents and my childhood friends.

I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms!

Li Shan, China

3. 2015广州茂名中考英语作文

书面表达(满分25分)

暑假期间，越来越多的外国人到中国旅游。请你用英语写一篇短文，向外国游客简单介绍一下中国的情况，内容包括：

1.对外国游客表示热烈欢迎；

2.中国地域辽阔，南北气候差别大；

3.旅游景点众多，高山大河，美丽如画；

4.人口最多，国家日益强大；

5.人民勤劳、善良，热爱和平。

【写作要求】

1.信息完整，内容合理。

2.句子结构准确，篇章结构连贯，字数不少于80个单词。{2017广州中考英语作文范文}.

3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

4.作文必须写在答题卡的指定区域内 。

参考范文：

One possible version:

Ladies and gentlemen, you‟re warmly welcome to China. Now let me tell you something about the country.

China is so large that its climates are quite different from the north to the south. There is a good many wonderful scenic-spots. The high mountains and long rivers are as beautiful as delightful picture. China has the largest population in the world and she is becoming stronger and stronger. Chinese people love peace and they are kind and hard-working. I „m sure you will have a good trip in the country.

2017广州中考英语作文范文篇五

广州市中考英语“书面表达”评分标准及备考

广州市中考英语“书面表达”评分标准及备考

一、试题及评卷标准 评卷标准

1、综合性评价原则 1）、本题总分为15分。

2）、评分时，先根据短文的内容、语言的准确性和流畅性初步确定各项目的所属档次，然后以该档次的评分标准衡量，确定或调整考生应得分（详见“分项分等评分表”）。 （1）内容——指是否切题；是否包括邮件所有的要点，并有所发挥；

（2）准确性——指词汇的数量和适度与拼写、语言结构和书写格式的准确性等； （3）流畅性——指书信的结构、上下文的连贯性、用词造句的流畅度和表达的得体性等。 3）、考生写出自己的姓名、学校名等个人信息的，评卷员应及时报告评卷总负责人。 2、分项分档评分表

3、各项目的评分标准 1）内容（Content） （1） 要点

1人物：林海（Joe）和John。 2对英语学习班有兴趣。 3希望可以练习英语，交接朋友。

4询问英语学习班的上课时间、地点、内容及费用。

邮件应有一定的表示有兴趣等的内容；考生可以增加描述英语学习班的内容。

（2）评分标准

1覆盖所有内容要点，并能围绕回信内容适当地发挥，给分（点击“内容”栏的评分版第9档）；

2虽然漏掉一个次要的内容要点，但基本上表达了回信的主要内容，给5.5~5分（点击“内容”栏的评分版第8~7档）；

3漏掉3个内容要点，但基本上还是围绕回信所提示的内容进行，给4~3分（点击“内容”栏的评分版第6~5档）； 4因未能正确理解回信的要点提示，而漏掉或未写清楚主要内容，写了一些无关内容，给2~1分（点击“内容”栏的评分版第4~3档）；

5只传达了个别信息，或内容太少（只出现有一个句子或个别单词、短语，但与内容有关），给0.5分（点击“内容”栏的评分版第2档）；

6未能传达任何信息，或内容太少（只出现有一个句子或个别单词、短语，与内容无关），给0分（点击“内容”栏的评分版第1档）； 2）准确性(Accuracy)

（1）无语法错误，语言表达准确，卷面美观，有个别拼写和标点符号等错误。给6分（点击“准确性”栏的评分版第8档）。

（2）所运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，卷面书写清晰，有两至三个拼写与标点符号等错误。错误的主要原因是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。给5.5~5分（点击“准确性”栏的评分版第7~6档）。

（3）语法结构单调，词汇较贫乏，有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的表达，自己基本清楚，拼写和标点符号错误较多。给4~3分（点击“准确性”栏的评分版第5~4档）。

（4）语法结构单调，词汇量少，有较多的语法结构或词汇的用法错误，不能正确表达回信内容，自己难以辨别，单词拼写和标点符号很多。给2~1分（点击“准确性”栏的评分版第3~2档）。

（5）只写出个别句子或单词，词不达意，不成文，字迹不清（或中英文混杂），卷面混乱。给0分（点击“准确性”栏的评分版第1档）。 3）流畅性（Fluency）

（1）书信结构组织严谨，应用了较复杂的语言结构，上下文意思连贯，完全达到了试题的写作要求。给3分（点击“流畅性”栏的评分版第7档）。

（2）书信结构组织比较紧凑，应用了较简单的语言结构，上下文意思基本连贯，基本上达到了试题的写作要求。给2.5分（点击“流畅性”栏的评分版第6档）。

（3）书信结构组织有些混乱，应用了较简单的语言结构，上下文意思有些不连贯，但表达不大流畅，给2分（点击“流畅性”栏的评分版第5档）。

（4）书信结构组织较混乱，语句间使用了一些连接成份，内容缺少连贯性，只能描述部分要点，给1.5分（点击“流畅性”栏的评分版第4档）。

（5）书信结构组织较混乱，较少使用语句间的连接成份，内容缺少连贯性，只能描述部分要点，给1分（点击“流畅性”栏的评分版第3档）。

（6）书信结构组织混乱，没有使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性，只能描述，给0.5分（点击“流畅性”栏的评分版第2档）。

（7）只写出个别句子或单词，缺乏语句之间的连接成分，谈不上文章中句子之间的联系。语无伦次，不知所云，无法成文或传递完整的信息的，给0分（点击“流畅性”栏的评分版第1档）。

二、举例说明

下面借助随机抽取的2006年中考中几位同学的作品，来具体谈一谈评分标准。 内容：5.5~6分；准确性：5~5.5分；流畅性分：2.5；共得分：14.5分 内容：5~5.5分；准确性：5~5.5分；流畅性分：2；共得分：12~13分 内容：4.5~5分；准确性：4~4.5分；流畅性分：2~2.5；共得分：11分 内容：3~4分；准确性：2~3分；流畅性分：1~1.5；共得分：9分 内容：3分；准确性：3分；流畅性分：1.5；共得分：7.5分 内容：2~3分；准确性：1分；流畅性分：0；共得分：3~4分

三、常见弊病列举 1、中心不明，切题不准； 2、文法生硬，内容单薄； 3、层次不清 颠三倒四 4、生硬造词 弄巧成拙 5、文化差异错误； 6、表达障碍性错误； 7、其他常见语言错误或弊病：

四、阅卷过程中的琐碎感受

1、评卷采用“整体+要素”评分原则，其中：内容6分；准确性6分；流畅性3份； 2、评卷是误差多于2分则须重评。

3、评卷大致评分标准为：优秀（13~15）、良好（12~13）中等（9~12） 内容方面：

1、内容部分有七个要点（兴趣、练习、交友、时间、地点、内容、费用、人物等），齐全且有适当发挥，则6分，（注意：内容即使全有，也未必得6分，因为还要有适当发挥，使为行文连贯而写的）；只写4个，则得4~5分；只写3个，则得3~4分。总之，内容部分的合格分值是4分； 2、最好使每一个点都踩得突出一点，否则也可能使老师1+1＝1； 3、文章短，字数不够，则在内容栏扣分；

4、审题不清，写成了你要练习、感兴趣等，则内容分照给，但准确性对半给； 5、文不对题，如写了“想念”等等瞎扯的话，踩不到点不给分； 6、只强调英语的重要性，忽视了其他内容要点，也得不了高分； 7、无需解释感兴趣的原因；

8、随意找一篇阅读文段写上去，跟题目无关则是0分。 准确性：

a、时态误用；

b、非谓语动词使用错误； c、动词搭配错误； d、句子不够简练； e、介词误用； f、单词拼写错； g、主谓不一致。

1、首句话很关键，一定要斟酌。

2、句法错误，则不可得满分，但满分作文可以有个别次要单词拼写错误出现； 3、写字要认真仔细，有很多同学写一半字，如time写成了tim等；

4、没把握干脆别写，或者采用迂回策略写，切忌写那些连自己都没把握的词句，如for my pronunciation isn’t very good中的“pronunciation” 写成了proneusation；

5、尽量写出简洁而又完整的句子，如，When will the class begin? (全对);where？(可能只能算是半对) 流畅性：

文章的结构，即流畅性和连贯性要求不高，表达的思维不跳跃，有逻辑，用一点连贯词即可，（连接词如by the way、for example 、 such as等很重要，到后来就只找这些连接词了，因为它们是流畅性的标志）。 总体上来讲：

1、答题时，必须在所给的位置范围内写，因为阅卷老师看不到范围外的内容，会影响得分；

2、注意不能有试卷标识，如，不能暴露学校及电话号码，如85523787，否则先扣1分，然后再登记、调查，若该生确实是属此学校，则此卷作废；

3、用笔的颜色要注意：可能扫描以后颜色太浅，影响得分；字也不可太小，否则扫描后看不清； 4、卷面整洁很重要，书写规范，别让老师感到模棱两可，如e\a不分，feel写成了fael等；

5、应突出重点，发挥部分适可而止，应为老师改卷是踩点给分，看半天找不到内容要点，可能会影响得分。

五、几点教学建议 1、训练方法

（1）认真系统复习、背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，忽略了中英文差异。背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，至少可供模仿。

（2）练。可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。

（3）写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出80个词以上的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。 2、应试策略

（1）审题目：看到考题后，要仔细看清题目要求，根据所提供的资料和信息来审题，构思出一个框架或画面，确定中心思想，切忌匆匆下笔。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 （2）圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素，所以要在下笔前将各个要点逐条列出。 （3）列提纲：根据文章要点，将短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。 （4）定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 （5）写全文：写短文时要做到以下五个方面： a、避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。 b、多用简单句型。

c、注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致；注意人称代词的宾格形式；注意冠词用法等。

d、上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性、流畅是评分的一条原则。可适当运用一些连接词，如and, but, so, or, however, for example , such as等。

e、不会表达，另辟蹊径。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。 （6）、改病句：考试中，因为时间紧、内容多，心理紧张，同学们出错在所难免。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、流畅性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花一定时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误可以从以下几个方面入手：

a、看字数是否达到要求。看有无遗漏要点； b、看文体格式是否正确规范；

c、看词语使用是否正确，有无语法或用词上的错误；

d、看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等； e、注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。

（7）、考试中，书面表达应做到先打草稿，写完后多读几遍，检查是否有误，然后再抄到试卷上，注意字迹要工整，不涂、不画、不勾不抹，避免不必要的扣分。

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