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2017年深圳一模作文分析
22.【写作】(60分)
2017深圳一模作文审题解读及阅卷指导 【原题】22.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)
小朱向父母坦陈了自己酝酿很久的一个想法:辞职回家和父母一起养螃蟹。父亲觉得小朱好不容易读完大学,当了大公司的网络工程师,待遇又好,工作又体面;如果回家养螃蟹,这些不都白费了?母亲则建议小朱先跟着他们到蟹塘去体验一下。小朱抓了一天螃蟹,才真正体会到父母养蟹的辛苦。不过,他仍然觉得发挥自己的专长,做“电商”卖螃蟹也很有前景;如果成为镇里第一个卖螃蟹的大学生,也是挺光彩的。
要求结合材料内容及含意,选好角度,确定立意;明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭,不得泄漏个人信息。
第一部分:题型解读与内涵解析
一、这是一篇情景型+叙事体+新材料驱动+隐含性驱动任务作文题目。 .....................
情景型+叙事体
1. 情景片段与叙事流程
材料由三个情景片段、前后有因果联系的叙事体故事组成。
情景一:小朱向父母交流就业与创业的想法。父母发表不同的意见。(故事的开端与发.....
展)
小朱向父母坦陈了自己酝酿很久的一个想法:辞职回家和父母一起养螃蟹。
父亲觉得小朱好不容易读完大学,当了大公司的网络工程师,待遇又好,工作又体面;如果回家养螃蟹,这些不都白费了?
母亲则建议小朱先跟着他们到蟹塘去体验一下。
情景二:小朱听取并实践母亲的意见的收获。(故事的再发展)
小朱抓了一天螃蟹,才真正体会到父母养蟹的辛苦。
情景三:小朱经过和父母交流以及自己劳动体验后坚持了自己的想法。(故事的结局) 不过,他仍然觉得发挥自己的专长,做“电商”卖螃蟹也很有前景;如果成为镇里第一个卖螃蟹的大学生,也是挺光彩的。
2.叙事体中的人物
小朱、小朱的父亲、小朱的母亲。
3.叙事体的主要内容
小朱就业与创业与父母的交流、自己亲身实践以及选择的结果。
新材料
选取的材料不是名言名句、诗词寓言故事等,而是现实中正在发生的、有矛盾冲突的、不同价值观碰撞的时事热点或现实故事。
叙事性新材料驱动作文,需要我们全面综合理解材料的内容及含意,建立驱动任务。具体操作上,需要把握叙事性材料的主要情节与事件(或者关键句)、重要细节以及它们的延伸拓展内涵、并在全过程扫描事件中提取相关要素去建立驱动任务。在写作过程中,无论从哪个角度审题立意,主要情节与事件(或者关键句)及其拓展延伸内涵必须涉及,否则属于偏题离题。
隐含性驱动任务
驱动任务不是明确的,题目中并没有出现“对以上事情,你怎么看?”或者“比较、权衡、思考”等明确驱动任务的要求。但是“结合材料内容及含意”表明需要对材料总体把握,
概括分析其原意与内涵,提出驱动任务,完成写作。
角色驱动:驱动作文有对象意识、交流意识,情感意识。写作中有这三种意识说明驱动任务角色表达到位。
在此说明
隐含性驱动作文和材料作文并不矛盾,而是有内在关联,不过审题立意与写作着力点不同而已。材料作文可以不同角度、不同话题立意,在材料内容及含意范围即可。隐含性驱动作文也可以不同角度、不同话题展开驱动任务,但每个话题产生的驱动任务必须紧扣材料的主体与核心,并且在分析中针对材料隐含的潜在矛盾冲突和社会现实进行比较、思考和权衡。也就是说,隐含性驱动作文和非隐含驱动作文区别在于非隐含驱动作文驱动任务的单一性和明确性;隐含性驱动可以就材料内涵的多元性产生多种驱动任务,这点和材料作文多角度立意相同。不同的是,在审题与写法上,隐含性驱动作文强调问题冲突的呈现与分析比较权衡。
作文写作立意概说
本材料隐含性驱动,大体有五个主要方面立意:
1.小朱创业想法与实施(知与行等);
2.小朱创业和父母的沟通(平等尊重接纳思考、代际沟通等);
3.小朱对就业创业的认知(选择职业创业的价值与标准);
4.创业与专长相结合。
5.家庭教育的开放性与和谐度对人的成长
从小朱角度、创业就业标准角度、父母角度、知与行角度等均可。
二、叙事体材料细节、要素及背后的内涵解析
1.情景细节、要素的详细解读与内涵解析
情景中人物及关系一:
“小陈;小陈和父母坦陈”
内涵解析:小陈和父母关系平等而友好、能够交流和分享不同的意见。
“酝酿很久”
内涵解析:小陈是一个有自我独立想法、思想相对比较成熟的青年。
“辞职回家和父母一起养螃蟹”
内涵解析:小陈有独立思想和行动的决断力,看好父母养螃蟹的职业(经济上、事业发展上、家庭生活上),也可能有些年轻人的不成熟的盲目与冲动。
小陈喜欢和父母在一起的生活,希望事业发展和照顾父母共同生活兼顾。
父亲:
“父亲觉得小朱好不容易读完大学,当了大公司的网络工程师,待遇又好,工作又体面;如果回家养螃蟹,这些不都白费了?”{2017广东高考作文题目分析}.
内涵解析:父亲不同意的理由:①担心农村孩子能通过读书上大学并获得来之不易的工作,如果失去这“铁饭碗”,读书的辛苦可能是白费了;②担心大学的专业知识是否浪费,已经获得的职业工作带来的现实的身份地位与经济价值以及背后体现的真正专业能力创造出的社会价值与个人价值是否会完全失去;③读书成功获得有保障的职业,收入待遇好,工作体面,这应该是物质与精神上的双重满足,而辞职回乡,在父亲看来,是对过去的否定,并且在家乡其他人看来,是没有面子的事。
父亲是一位有丰富社会经验和对现实有充分考量、对在一个好单位工作、获得不错的待遇、体面地工作十分关注的老年人。在儿子的事情上有自己的主张和看法并试图左右或者引领孩子,甚至用体面来给孩子压力。
母亲:
“母亲则建议小朱先跟着他们到蟹塘去体验一下。小朱抓了一天螃蟹,才真正体会到父母养蟹的辛苦。”
内涵解析:母亲性格比较柔和,不会直接支持或者反对儿子(或者儿子父亲)的意见,而是平等尊重儿子的想法,并提供实践的建议来完善或者修正儿子(或者儿子父亲)的想法,或者是把选择权交给儿子。母亲身上有一种矛盾调和的色彩,同时,母亲也是一位社会生活经验丰富对现实有充分考量的女性,但是在和儿子与丈夫的关系中,以一种调和与柔和的方式为人处事。有生活的智慧,角色的担当。
情景二:
“小朱抓了一天螃蟹,才真正体会到父母养蟹的辛苦。”
内涵解析:小朱听取了母亲的意见,说明家庭亲子关系平等与和谐所带来的家庭教育的成功(这里暗含也听取了父亲的意见,在实践中进一步思考。)
“抓了一天、真正体会”
内涵解析:说明小朱和母亲一样,也是一个注重知与行的结合、用实践检验自己想法的人。同时说明母亲的教育目的达到了:做任何一件事都不是轻而易举的,好的想法或者不成熟的想法都需要实践检验并在实践中不断的修正完善。
情景三:
“不过,他仍然觉得发挥自己的专长,做“电商”卖螃蟹也很有前景;如果成为镇里第一个卖螃蟹的大学生,也是挺光彩的。”
内涵解析:①实践(行)后的思考(知)更为成熟(或坚持)。小朱在听取父母意见并通过劳动实践检验以后,坚持了自己原来的想法,并且比原来的想法更成熟。②发挥专长并通过创造实现自我价值。一开始只是“养螃蟹”,现在变成“做‘电商’卖螃蟹”,一开始只是辞职和父母一起养螃蟹,现在是“觉得发挥自己的专长”,紧跟时代的发展。③在自主创业中让自己获得更大的满足。“成为镇里第一个卖螃蟹的大学生,也是挺光彩的”,父亲所担心的专业价值和社会价值以及职业带来的社会身份地位的东西并没有丧失,反而有可能更加荣耀。④充分听取他人意见,让选择更加成熟而坚定。说明他已充分听取了父母意见并进行了自己的思考和实践体验,真正认识到职业(创业)背后的个人与社会价值,专业如何在创业中更好的发挥作用以及由此带来的身份地位经济收益等的变化,有了自己的结论与选择。
3.关键词
职业(创业)与人生规划(选择标准与过程及价值)与实施
相关的意见的交流、分享
敢于“第一个吃螃蟹”,实现人生的精彩
小朱(年轻人) 父母 (长辈)
第二部分:驱动任务与审题立意{2017广东高考作文题目分析}.
材料本身并没有提出明确的驱动任务,属于隐含驱动任务的材料作文。需要我们“结合材料内容及含意”,建立驱动任务,完成写作。
一、综合上面的材料分析,我们可以产生这样一些驱动任务:
1.小朱(年轻人)勇于职业规划与人生道路的选择(一定包含材料提供的具体选择过程),你怎么看?
2.小朱(年轻人)和父母(长辈)就职业与人生规划问题的交流,你怎么看?
3.知与行的结合在小朱(年轻人)的职业规划与人生道路的选择上所取的作用,你怎么看?
4.父母(长辈)在小朱(年轻人)职业规划与人生道路的选择通过交流所发挥的作用,你怎么看?
或者:父母(长辈)在小朱(年轻人)职业规划与人生道路的选择该如何发挥自身的作用?
5.父与母在小朱(年轻人)职业规划与人生道路的选择上该如何发挥自身的角色优势与作用?
6.和谐平等的家庭关系与教育对孩子职业规划与人生道路会产生怎样的影响?
二、不同角度的审题立意与驱动任务
小朱的角度
1.受过大学教育有着良好专业应用职业的人辞职另行创业,你怎么看?
2.小朱在辞职另行创业的想法过程中和父母的交流,听取父母的意见,你怎么看?
3.小朱在辞职另行创业的想法实施过程中,知与行的结合,你怎么看?
父亲角度
4.父亲对小朱辞职另行创业提出了不同的看法,你怎么看?
5.父亲对小朱辞职另行创业提出了不同的看法的这一角色行为,你怎么看? 母亲角度
6.母亲对小朱辞职另行创业提出的建议,你怎么看?
7.母亲对小朱辞职另行创业提出了不同的看法的这一角色行为本身对小朱的产生影响,你怎么看?
综合与拓展延伸角度
8.怎样看父母(或孩子)与孩子(与父母)在辞职就业等问题上产生不同的意见?该如何正确处理?
9.父母(或孩子)与孩子(与父母)在辞职就业等问题上的交流,该怎么看? 其他拓展延伸角度
10.好的家庭教育氛围与孩子的职业与人生道路的选择。
11.父亲、母亲不同角色的担当对孩子职业与人生道路选择的影响。
综合以上一两个驱动任务审题立意也可以。本材料既可以写成驱动作文,也可以写成时评类型。文体不限。
三、一些基本的审题立意示例
(一)符合题意得审题立意
1.勇于改变职业规划、实现人生最大价值(职业选择价值角度)
2.走好职业规划的每一步(职业抉择、知与行角度)
3.从小朱的选择看创业幸福((职业选择多元价值—事业亲情生活兼顾-角度)
4.和父母一起创业,不亦乐乎(职业选择多元价值—事业家庭生活兼顾—角度)
5.规划 交流 成长(个人职业规划成长角度)
6.从父母那里习得人生智慧(孩子接受父母建议与实践角度)
7.亦师亦友感父母 辞职创业觅人生 (个人职业选择和父母交流作用角度)
8.做孩子职业人生规划的朋友与导师(父母和孩子交流角度)
9.请以平等尊重的态度对待孩子的人生抉择(职业选择与父母交流角度)
10.就业与创业,贵在自我实践认知(个人职业选择角度)
11.寻找职业的价值与快乐(职业价值认知的途径角度)
12.网络工程师能“卖螃蟹”吗?(职业价值认知角度)
13.创业请知与行相结合(知与行角度){2017广东高考作文题目分析}.
14.人生大事需要父母的参与沟通(或学会与父母沟通)(年轻人角度)
15.请给职业人生道路上的孩子加油(或尽己所能)(父母给孩子建议角度)
16.当好孩子职业人生的参谋(父母给孩子建议角度)
17.认知自我,做孩子人生的倾听者与建议者(父母给孩子建议角色角度)
18.良好的家庭关系是孩子人生规划最好的平台(从家庭和谐平等关系角度)
17.母(或父)亲与孩子的创业(母(或父)亲角色角度)
(二)容易跑偏或离题的审题立意
1.勇于创业
2.职业无贵贱
3.谈就业与创业
4.三人行,必有我师
5.两代人之间
6.请不要阻拦孩子实现自己的梦想
7.给孩子自由的天空
8.孝顺父母乃创业之本
9.父母在不远游
10.论代沟
11.如何处理亲子关系
12.严父慈母
13.平等尊重每一个人
第三部分:评分标准及注意事项
一、评分标准
(1)总体标准
1.基准分42分。
2.不同文体根据审题切合度和文体表达特点予以相应等级分数。
其他参考《广东高考作文评分标准及细则》
附:广东高考作文评分标准及细则
一、基础等级50分
一等(50—41)切合题意
中心突出;内容充实;感情真切;结构严谨;语言流畅;字体工整;符合文体要求
广东专用-2017高考英语作文范文背诵
2017高考英语作文范文背诵
一、如何提建议—— 给交友有困难的同学提建议
I am sorry you are having trouble in making friends.
【引出建议】Here are some tips to help you.{2017广东高考作文题目分析}.
【列举建议】First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own. I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,【理由】which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally, you should try to join in a discussion, 【理由】letting people know how friendly you are. I hope you will find these ideas useful.
二、列举个例 —— 良好饮食习惯
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, some students have formed a variety of bad eating habits, such as not having breakfast, loving eating snacks, being particular about food, eating and drinking too much and so on, which will surely do harm to their health. To keep healthy, we should have healthy diets. Not only should we have various foods, like fish, meat, vegetables, fruits as well as rice, noodles, but also we should have the foods regularly and properly. Personally, I think it is important to keep a healthy diet, which contributes to building up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
三、举例说明 —— 和谐师生关系对你的影响
【要证明的观点】Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school. 【引出例子】Take me for example. 【例子】My teacher is my good friend. When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps m to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate.
【重申主题】But for(要不是) the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress. 套语背诵
1.There is no denying that confidence plays an important role in our life.
A convincing example that jumps into my mind is about speaking English.
2.Such example can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is …
这样的例子在生活中很容易见到,一个很好的例子就是……
四、讨论或辩论 —— 禁止乞丐在地下人行道行气留宿
【引出主题】Recently, Guangzhou has passed a law to ban beggars from begging and sleeping in the subways and our class had a discussion about it last Monday.
【反对及其理由】56% of the students don’t agree with the idea because they think some beggars really have difficulty in making a living and have to play music in the subway to survive.
【赞成及其理由】However, 44% of the students favour the idea because they think beggars bring a lot of trouble for the city. What’s more, some beggars are just taking advantage of people’s compassion to make easy money.
【个人看法】Personally, I think it is a good idea to forbid beggars in public places and we should take some measures to help them.
五、利弊对比 —— 网购的利弊{2017广东高考作文题目分析}.
【点明主题】Nowadays many people prefer to shop on line. 【罗列益处】
Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, it’s convenient for us to shop on line. Secondly, it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things. 【罗列弊端】But just as the saying goes, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent. One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are in good quality. 【你的观点】Through the above analysis, I believe that positive aspects of shopping on line for outweigh negative ones. Therefore, I would like to shop on line.
六、采访类 —— 中学生英语单词拼写的问题
Last Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr Wang, an English teacher, concerning the issue of English word spelling among middle school students. According to Mr Wang, slightly more than half of the senior middle school students’ English handwriting is very poor and about 45% of them can not spell words correctly although they are able to speak. He also pointed out that the causes for spelling problems are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams, and there is not enough training. Worse still, the students are lazy to memorize word spelling. He suggested that we should raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, we should master skills while we are training ourselves.
七、调查类—— 21世纪最令人担忧的问题
Last week, we made/did a survey among 500 Senior Two students about the most worrying problems in the 21st century. The survey shows that 32% of the students think that they worry about the natural disasters(自然灾害)most, for earthquakes and floods have taken many people’s lives. Besides, 29% of the students hold the opinion that environmental pollution(环境污染)is the most worrying problem while 17% of the students consider the housing problem(住房问题)to be the most worrying one. The percentage of the students who worry most about employment(就业问题) is the same as that of the students who worry most about food safety(食品安全). As for myself, food safety is the most worrying problem because it is linked closely to our health.
八、心得体会 —— 诚实/ 勿以善小而不为
1. After reading the story, I am so touched by Alan, whose behavior is worth praising. There is no doubt that honesty still plays a very important role in people’s life and only those who are honest will be trusted and respected by people. (诚实)
3.After reading the story, I was lost in thought. I came to realize that people should never ignore the deed of small kindness. Your small good deeds sometimes will get big returns or make a great difference! (勿以善小而不为)
九、记叙事件经过或过程 —— 日记或游记
【总述】Today we visited Qinghua University.
【过程】 Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Qinghua University, where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor, who then showed us around the campus. In the library, we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading rooms. After that, we came to the lab building. At the end of the visit, the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon, which interested us very much. Time passed so quickly that before we knew it, it was time that we had to say goodbye to the professor.
【结果】Since then, I have worked harder at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University.
十、人物简介 ——用英语简介李敏同学
【姓名职务与特点】 Li Min, monitor of Class 1 Grade 2 (同位语), is healthy and lively. 【成绩与爱好】 She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. 【事迹】 When she came to school, she had much difficulty with English, but through hard work she made great progress. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Min is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help others.
相关短语:
1. be admitted into a key university 考上重点大学
2. major in law主修法律
3. get a master’s degree 获得硕士学位
4. graduate from Harvard University 毕业于哈佛大学
5. win the first prize 获得一等奖
6. win a gold medal 赢得一枚金牌
7. become a world champion 成为世界冠军
8. set a good example to us 给我们树立了良好的榜样
9. be highly thought of 受到好评
10.be awarded a medal for 因……而获得奖章
11.be awarded the title of 获得…称号
12.devote ...to ... 把…专用于/奉献给
13. born of a poor clerk ’s family 出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中
十一、假设处境 —— 假如你当时在场,你会怎样做?
If I had been on the spot, I would have jumped into the river to rescue the child on the condition that I could swim. If not, I would have first called the police and then persuaded the people on the boat and the swimmers nearby to help. (湖北大学生为救溺水小孩死三人事件)
十二、说明异同 —— 古典音乐与流行音乐的异同
【同】From the point of many people, there are many similarities between classical music and pop music. Both of them can make people relax and enjoy life as well. 【异】 However, the differences are also obvious. Classical music can remind them of the sweet memories in the past. Besides, classical music, which was made by the famous musicians like Beethoven is in high class and can last long, while the words of pop music are often concerned with modern life, even true love between friends or lovers. What’s more, pop music is easy to sing. 十三、图表作文
1. 【总述现象】 From the chart, we can see clearly that there has been a sharp rise in the average income of Chinese farmers in the past 30 years. (从上表可以清楚地看出, 在最近30年里中国农民的人均收入急剧上升。)
2.【数据变化】 As early as 1978, the average income of Chinese farmers was only 193 yuan . Then only 16 years later, it increased to 2181.52 yuan. And by 2010, the average income of Chinese farmers had reached 7890 yuan, which was 40 times as much as 30 years ago.
3.【解释原因】There are many reasons accounting for this change. Firstly ... Secondly ... Finally ...
有许多原因可以解释这种变化。第一……第二……最后……
4. 【阐述观点】 As far as I’m concerned, I firmly support the policy of reform and opening up, which is the exact way to make China powerful.
(就我来说, 我坚决支持改革开放政策, 改革开放是强国之路。)
十四、地点简介 —— 介绍广州
Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as Five-lamb City, Flower City and so on, serves as the capital city of Guangdong Province. This city covers a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers with a population of more than ten million. Guangzhou, a famous city with a history of more than 2, 200 years, is a starting port of the Silk Road on the sea in history. With the Pearl River winding its way through the city, Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. The beautiful city, well-known for its beautiful scenery, is also abundant in traveling resources. 十五、邀请信 —— 邀请外籍老师参加学校新年晚会
Dear Mr. Green,
On behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing this letter to invite you to participate in our New Year Evening. The party is going to be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 p.m. to 9:00 p.m. next Friday. Many wonderful performances, presented by the teachers and students in our school, will be shown on the stage, such as the
Chinese folk songs and dances, Chinese musical instruments, short plays of traditional style and so on. So it will surely offer you a good opportunity to obtain a clearer picture of Chinese traditional culture. We should be very delighted if you could come; meanwhile, our evening would be more cheerful if you could give a performance. We are looking forward eagerly to your participation.
Yours,
Li Ming
十六、节日简介 ——介绍端午节
[时间] The Dragon Boat Festival, a traditional Chinese festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. It dates from over 2000 years ago, which falls on June 6th this year. [方式] On this day, Chinese people prepare Zongzi — glutinous(粘黏的) rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves. As the festival name shows, people have dragon boat races to celebrate it, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. [意义] The Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China.
十七、兴趣爱好 —— 我最喜欢的运动是游泳
My favorite sport is swimming. 【喜欢的程度】I first became interested in swimming when I was eight in primary school. Now I am a member of my school swimming team and I keep on swimming every day in the river near my home even in winter. 【喜欢的原因】I like swimming because it can not only help me build up my body, but also enrich my life. 【最喜欢的运动员】In this sport, although I like Liu Yu, I admire Michael Phelps, who is one of the best athletes in the world and got 8 gold medals in Beijing Olympics. 【愿望】How I wish to be an Olympic champion some day!
十八、通知 —— 举办“中学生才艺大赛”的通知
Notice
A “High School Students Talent Show” will be held in Guangzhou Television Station on May 1. There will be eight kinds of talents, including speeches, songs, dances, and musical instruments playing etc. One 1st prize, three 2nd prizes and five 3rd prizes for each type of talent will be offered at the show. If you’d like to have a try, please go to the TV station to sign up before April 30. It’s a good chance for you to show your special talent.
The Students Union
十九、分析原因 —— 分析极端天气出现的原因
[指出现象与引出原因] Reasons for extreme temperatures are varied. [分析原因] For one thing, human’s activities like burning fossil fuels produce carbon dioxide, which make the globe warmer, causing the global temperature to go up. For another, people’ s cutting down trees that can absorb large quantities of carbon dioxide for furniture also contributes to the warming of the earth, which gives rise to extreme temperatures.
二十、问题解决 —— 建设绿色校园
In order to build a green campus, we need to take the following steps. (学校) On the one hand, the school should make rules and regulations to prevent students doing something harm to our green campus.(学生) On the other hand, students should take some classes to raise their awareness. I don’t doubt that our campus will be more beautiful if we work together.
二十一、说明重要性 —— 责任心的重要性
[提出观点] Responsibility is essential to us. [论证] (正面)It not only represents one’s noble quality, but also enables one to be steady-going. Being responsible, you will gain many precious things, such as true love. (反面) Without responsibility, however, you will be an annoyance and can’t do anything successfully. What’s worse,people will lose belief in you if you are irresponsible. [总结] In short, only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others.
二十二、发表看法 —— 假期外出旅游
Nowadays, more and more people are in favor of travelling during vacation. [表明观点] To be frank, I can’t agree more with it. [说明理由] There are several factors contributing to my point. In the first place, journeys can widen
our knowledge of geography, customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries and enrich our experiences. In the second place, it is a good way to relax ourselves in my opinion. Furthermore, we can develop better relationship with our friends or family. [得出结论] Therefore, it goes without saying that we can benefit a lot from travelling.
二十三、观点对比 —— 说说人们对幸福的理解
[引出不同观点] Opinions are divided on the feeling of happiness. [观点一] Some people believe that if they have much money or many things, they will be happy. With great wealth, they will be able to do everything they want, with which they will be happy. [观点二] On the other hand, some people regard their intelligence, or their health as their great happiness. [观点三] Still others maintain that happiness is closely tied to their family, for they believe that they feel happy when all members of their family are happy and healthy.
二十四、经历感受 —— 拔苗助长
The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three times a day. However, he failed to follow the doctor’s advice and took them 6 times a day. To his great surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes, “more haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something.
二十五、概况记叙文的内容要点
The author tells a story about (某人)a Chinese student with an excellent academic achievement who (做某事) couldn’t find a job in Germany (原因) because of his stealing rides at the subway, (启示)which shows honesty is the best policy.
二十六、概况说明文的内容要点
A survey made in Australia shows (现象) that many teenagers lack one hour’s sleep (原因) due to organized activities and homework, (结果)which results in such serious problems as slow progress in study, weight problem, depression, illness and so on.
二十七、概况议论文的内容要点
The passage tries to tell us (论点) that getting up early in the morning (论据) will benefit us a lot, including a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.
常见英语谚语50句
【勇气篇】
1. No cross, no crown. 不经历风雨,怎么见彩虹?
2. Life is not all roses. 人生并不是康庄大道。
3. All things are difficult before they are easy. 凡事总是由难而易。
4. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。
5. Let bygones be bygones. 过去的就让它过去吧。
6. Never too old to learn, never too late to turn. 亡羊补牢,为时未晚。
7. Never say die. 永不言败。
8. Adversity makes a man wise, not rich. 逆境出人才。
9. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
10. No gains without pains. 吃得苦中苦方为人上人。
11. Success belongs to the persevering. 坚持就是胜利。
12. He laughs best who laughs last. 谁笑到最后,谁笑得最好。
【惜时篇】
13. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。
14. It is never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
15. Time flies. 光阴似箭。
16. Lost time is never found again. 岁月既往,一去不回。
2017高考语文全国卷各地模拟作文题100题(附立意参考)
2017高考语文全国卷各地模拟作文题100题(附立意参考)
1.阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。(60分)
古人说“言为心声”“文如其人”。性情褊急则为文局促,品性澄淡则下笔悠远。这意味着作品的格调趣味与作者人品应该是一致的。
金代元好问《论诗绝句》却认为“心画心声总失真,文章宁复见为人”。艺术家笔下的高雅不能证明其为人的脱俗。这意味着作品的格调趣味与作者人品有可能是背离的。 对此你有什么看法?写一篇文章阐明你的观点。
注意:①题目自拟,观点自定。②明确文体,不得写成诗歌。③不得少于800字。④不得抄袭、套作。
【结束】
3.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)
哈尔滨工业大学校长周玉在《让记笔记成为人生的必修课》一文中说,随着计算机和网络的普及,学习方式越来越多元化,笔记却记得越来越少。上课,我们可以下载相关课件、拷贝老师的PPT、上网搜到需要的内容。看起来学习的方式更加轻松了,但并没有经过系统深入的学习和思考,有些知识变得似是而非,有些观点变得人云亦云,有些宝贵的想法一闪而过。海量信息的冲击淹没了我们对知识的选择与吸收,许多知识还没有好好消化就成了过眼云烟。该文提倡互联网时代大学生仍要拾回课堂记笔记的传统。对此,你有什么看法?
要求:选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。
4.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
一天动物园管理员发现袋鼠从笼子里跑出来了,于是开会讨论,一致认为是笼子的高度过低。所以他们决定将笼子的高度由原来的10米加高到20米。结果第二天他们发现袋鼠还是跑到外面来,所以他们又决定再将高度加高到30米。
没想到隔天居然又看到袋鼠全跑到外面,于是管理员们大为紧张,决定一不做二不休,将笼子高度加高到100米。
一天长颈鹿和几只袋鼠在闲聊,“你们看,这些人会不会再继续加高你们的笼子?”长颈鹿问。“很难说,”袋鼠说,“如果他们再继续忘记关门的话!”
要求:选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。
5.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)
几个同学聚在一起谈论家训。学生甲说,我赞同诸葛亮《诫子书》中的“非淡泊无以
明志,非宁静无以致远”。学生乙说,我赞同《增广贤文》中说的“枯木逢春犹再发,人无两度再少年”。学生丙说,我赞同陈毅《示儿女》中的“应知重理想,更为世界谋”。
你认为谁说的家训更有现实意义?请综合材料内容及含意作文,体现你的思考、权衡与选择。
要求选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭。
6.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)
大鹏、小安和阿曼就读于北京著名高校的同一个专业,毕业后,三人一同留在北京打拼。五年过去了,大鹏在一家世界五百强公司力克竞争对手,升任部门经理,成为公司最年轻的中层管理人员;小安和阿曼面对大城市里快节奏的工作、高昂的生活成本,感到压力太大。小安选择离开北京,回到家乡小县城,听从父母的安排,考入一个工资很低,但很安稳的事业单位;阿曼选择收拾好背包,践行“在路上”的梦想,过上不问房价高低,不问油盐琐碎,一边打工挣钱,一边游历世界的畅意生活。
以上三位年轻人的选择,你怎么看?我们该选择什么样的生活?要求自选角度,自定立意,明确文体(诗歌除外),自拟标题,不要脱离材料内容及含义的范围作文。不得抄袭,不得套作,不得泄露个人信息。书写规范,正确使用标点。
7.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)
去年冬天,我在做一个关于旅游的项目,需要找个实习生。有一个女孩,除了没有办公室工作经验之外,其他方面都很不错。于是,我把这个女孩招了进来。工作一段时间之后,我有些沮丧地发现,实习生的办公室经验为零是多么重大的问题。又过了一段时间,她依然不行———很努力,有进步,但没我想象的那么大。
有一天晚上,我跟那个女实习生谈到了离开的问题,她很难过。我知道这滋味,几个月来,我能看到她所付出的巨大努力。可就在同一天晚上,我看到一个辞职去创业的前同事发了一个招聘启事,这简直就是为我的实习生量身定做的职位。我赶紧把这个信息转给她,并鼓励她去面试。又半年过去了,我经常能收到她在世界各地游历的照片,听到她的各种开心的好消息。她终于重新回到当初面试时她自己的样子了,而不是勉强待在我这里努力适应工作。
节选自《中国青年报》(2014年10
月14日)
即将步入社会,我们也会遇到类似的问题,上述材料给了你怎样的感悟? 要求自定立意,联系现实,写一篇文章,自拟标题,除诗歌外文体不限,不要套作,不得抄袭。 8.阅读下面的漫画材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
要求:结合材料的内容和寓意,选好角度,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭。
9.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)
《社区英雄》是央视的一档公益节目,节目每期选择两位“社区英雄”展示他们的志愿服务项目,然后评选出一位并给予公益基金支持。2016年3月9日,致力于资助陕西省贫困女大学生圆大学梦的公益项目“红凤工程”,与致力于旧衣物回收再利用的“益心益易”闲置物品循环使用公益项目同台比拼,结果“红凤工程”胜出。
你支持这一评选结果吗?请表明你的态度,阐述你的理由。
要求综合材料内容及含意,选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭。
10.阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。(60分)
欲望是哲学研究的重要问题,欲望是生存的动力,也是毁灭的根本。对此许多学者都有着自己独到的见解。
对知识的渴望如同对财富的追求,越追求,欲望就越强烈。
——斯特恩
生活中有两个悲剧:一个是你的欲望得不到满足,另一个则是你的欲望得到了满足。
——肖伯纳
欲望是人遭受磨难的根源,诚然,欲望可以使人得到欢乐和幸福;但这欢乐、幸福的背后却是苦难,乐极是要生悲的;一切欲望实现之后,却也免不了灾难。
——尤素福.西巴伊
综合上述材料,结合你的所思所感,谈谈你对“欲望”的理解,写一篇不少于800字的作文。
【注意】①自拟题目,选好角度,确定立意。②不得脱离材料内容及含义的范围作文。③明确文体,但不得写成诗歌。④不得抄袭、套作。
11.阅读下列材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的作文。(60分)
某报推出“最佳公益行动” 评选活动,下列三项公益行动被推荐参加评选:
一、医院附近的饭店倡议来店就餐的顾客自愿购买“爱心饭菜”,并将“爱心饭菜”的菜单贴在墙上,家庭贫困的患者或其家属可根据需要取下菜单领取免费食物。“墙上的餐桌”既为助人者提供了方便,也维护了受助者的尊严。
二、某公益组织制作了主题为“动物也是易碎品”的绘本书,书中绘有十几种已经灭绝动物的卡通图像,这些动物共用一个易碎品标志形状的鼻子,巧妙而有趣的传递出“动物也是易碎品”的公益理念。
三、网友通过qq群和微信群发起了“众筹扶贫”公益行动,在网上推销贫困山区出产的绿色农副产品。这项公益行动让更多的山区老百姓脱贫致富,也让城市居民能够买到放心食材,实现了双赢。(众筹:大众筹资,指用团购加预购的形式,向网友募集项目资金。)
上述三项公益行动,你认为哪一项“最佳”?请综合材料内容及含义作文,体现你的思考、权衡与选择。 要求:选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容或含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。
12.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800 字的文章。(60 分)
母亲节到了,一早打开朋友圈、微博,到处都是祝母亲节日快乐的信息,还夹杂着晒自己和母亲的照片,转发各种讴歌母爱伟大的文章、故事等。
对此,有人表示怀疑。当问及这些刷屏者“你在网上这么孝顺,你妈妈知道吗?”他们却认为这种表达方式并非为了让母亲知道,而是为了在社交网络上让同学、同事、朋友看。
面对材料中的“晒孝顺”以及现实生活中的各种“晒”你怎么看?
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13.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
在《挑战不可能》首期节目中,撒贝宁在“足迹专家”这个项目的原有规则基础上增加难度,让周华健混迹于足印参与者中,不但与人临时换鞋,左右脚反穿,甚至改变着力位置留下脚印。董卿当场直言“于心不忍”,周华健则大呼“实在太难!”,而李昌钰早已一脸不相信说“要是这样都能猜出来,我拜她为师!”。第二轮挑战,难度再升级。挑战者董艳珍需从三十位体貌相似的模特中,找出唯一足迹的主人。经过一个多小时的观察,正确答案却早已被挑战者排除,小撒果断提出终止挑战进程,而此时的李昌钰在评委席已经坐不住了。当导演再次确认比赛规则时,李昌钰终于忍不住冲上台打断录制,为社区女警抱不平,并要求再给她一次挑战机会。
10月25日晚,《挑战不可能》总决赛播出。“足迹专家””董艳珍进行升级挑战,仅凭足迹识别同卵四胞胎,并一一对应,最终,震撼的挑战让她从众多挑战者中脱颖而出,获得“年度挑战王”的桂冠。
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14.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)
对于远方,很多人都有着独特的思考和感悟。许巍在歌中唱到:“生活不止是眼前的苟且,还有诗和远方的田野。”而诗人海子在迷惘中吟唱:“更远的地方,更加孤独,远方啊,除了遥远,一无所有。”作家韩寒在《永远的远方》中说:“每个人都向往远方,不同的是,有的人只向往而不往,有的人向往而往。”
以上材料引发了你怎样的思考?请结合自己的体验和感悟,写一篇文章。
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15.阅读下面的材料,根据自己的感悟和联想,写一篇不少于800字的文章。
我们到河边仔细去看游鱼。凡是水流较急的地方,鱼口都面对着流向,不肯随波逐流而下。身为一条鱼,只有如此