中考看图作文模板

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中考看图作文模板篇一

2016年中考英语备考:作文万能模板

中考英语备考(五)—作文万能模板

教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮你拿到一等文。

问:“哪十字?”

允泽老师答:“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!”

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!

要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。 亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了,那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定!

英语高分作文必备杀手锏—三段四步法

中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准:

1)结构2)内容要点 3)语言(词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词)看结构和内容要点定分数档,看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。

三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏

知己知彼,方能百战不殆,既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化,相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享,笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。

1 “三段”(三个段落)——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点,让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。

中高考情景是作文,无论是那种文体,都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试,(SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试,故被叫过美国的高考)。

我们管这样的文章叫做Hamburger Writing(汉堡写作)

顾名思义,就是无论是记叙文、还是议论文、或者08年中考以及09一模西城的夹叙夹议文章,都可以通用。简单解释如下:

第一段 记叙文 议论文

开篇背景介绍(时间、地点、人物、事件)

发表观点

第二段

故事发展 论据、论点支撑

第三段

结局 总结观点

2 “四步”

有了框架就相当于有了骨骼,而真正的血肉要靠四个步骤来实现。

步骤一:审题

审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生,我要说的是审题一定要做到五个方面:一审主题(写什么),二审体裁(记叙、说明、议论、

夹叙夹议),三审时态(时态中考两个扣一分,三个降一档),四审人称(别犯低级错误),五审内容要点(一定要在试卷中画出,免得写的时候忘记,导致跑题)

步骤二:打草稿

中考一定要打草稿,两大优势

1中考不准在试卷更改,涂改带、橡皮、胶条(囧)、小刀(我小时候想都没想过),而中考时落笔错误是难免的,涂改就会后卷面分,打草稿就可以避免这个情况了。

2 正式写作是对草稿的在梳理,语言的在锤炼。

步骤三:正文写作

做到两点,一要凝练,而要变化。文章80—100字为宜,一定要注意使用过渡词、从句、50个句型和词组搭配。

步骤四:检查:

很多学生考试都会检查,但总是不能找到自己的错误。原因很简单,方法不对:

英语写作检查的原则:

1 内容要点:缺少一个内容要点,文章直接降到第三档

2 语法错误:名词查单复数和冠词问题,动词查时态语态和三单问题。

3 变换句式:过于简单的结构要试着变化

高频分析

书面表达是每年中考的必考题型,考查同学们用英语以书面的形式来传递信息并进行交际的能力,分值一般为10~20分,其题型多样,主要可分为两大类:一是命题作文,如 My School/Family/Hometown等;二是材料作文,根据给出的书面(中文或英文)材料,按照要求作文,包括英文书信(E-mail?感谢信)?日记?英文请假条?便条?英文演讲稿?发言稿(或值日报告)?介绍?英文通知?看图说话等?此类题型属主观性试题,具有较大的灵活性,是对同学们更高层次的能力的考查,是不少同学的薄弱环节?

背诵秘诀

中考书面表达的取材范围越来越广,涉及的内容也越来越丰富?近年来各省市的中考英语作文大多是材料作文?因此,我们在日常学习中要加强写作训练,扩大课外阅读,多搜集?积累英语作文素材?例如可搜集有关三鹿奶粉的英语作文素材?同时在写作中要做到:1. 认真审题,提炼要点;2. 紧扣主题,扩词成句;3. 表述准确,连句成文;4. 通篇检查,确保无误?

■ 中考真题

1. (2008年江西)发明改变了世界?改变了我们的生活?比如,电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利?请你以“Inventions”为话题,根据提示写一份值日生报告?先介绍电视和自行车的用途,再发挥想象,说说你想发明的东西,并说明其用途或发明的理由?

提示:(1)电视机:信息丰富,开阔视野,休闲娱乐,辅助学习?

(2)自行车:价格便宜,方便出行,有利环保,有益健康?

(3)你的发明?(说明其用途或发明的理由)

注意:(1)报告应包括以上所有提示的信息,但不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;

(2)发明的东西可大可小,有其特殊用途即可;

(3)词数不少于80个?开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数?

Good morning, everyone! Today I’m going to talk about inventions. Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier. There are famous inventions like ______________________

__________________________

That’s all. Thank you very much.

2. (2008年湖北黄冈)背景设定:为了保护环境,节约能源,中国政府出台了一条禁令:从2008年6月1日起,禁止在超市和商店中使用超薄塑料袋?针对这条禁令,某学校组织了一次讨论会,请同学们畅所欲言,发表自己的看法?

下面是汪进峰同学的发言内容:

姓名:Wang Jinfeng

请你根据汪进峰同学的发言内容,以他的名义写一篇书面发言材料? 发言及中心内容:

(1)禁令内容:禁止使用超薄塑料袋;阻止超市?商店向顾客提供免费塑料袋;如果提供,需要付费?

(2)个人认识:对我们有益;能帮助保护环境?原因:a. 引起白色污染;b. 污染土壤和水;c. 生产塑料袋浪费能源?目的:贯彻执行该

禁令,改善环境?

(3)今后做法:鼓励家人和朋友购物时自带布袋?竹篮;不乱丢垃圾,对塑料瓶?易拉罐进行回收„„

要求:(1)围绕汪进峰的观点和意愿进行表达,所表达的内容可以适当拓展;

(2)所表达的内容必须包含上述3个要点;

(3)词数80个左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)?

提示词汇:ban(禁令), provide, free(免费), protect, cause, pollute, soil(土壤), energy, carry out, improve, recycle, soft drink can(易拉罐)

Hello, everyone!

China has put a ban on the use of much thinner plastic bags starting on June, 2008.

__________________________

__________________________

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!

建议

书面表达一直是中考的重头戏,所占分值根据各地中考试卷的结构不同而有所差异,约占15~25分?就体裁而言,中考作文一般分为四类:记叙文?说明文?议论文以及应用文?其中记叙文包括以记人为主或记事为主?中考书面表达多为提示作文,有的是看图作文,有的是根据表格内容写作,还有的要根据提示信息写作?另外,需要注意的是,书面表达越来越倾向于和时事挂钩?在2008年的试卷中,就有许多市地的书面表达是围绕“地震”而展开的?所以,考试前要多注意近一年来的国家大事,这样遇到时事性的作文题,才能有备而战?

中考英语作文必备万能句型10个

1. 不用说„„ It goes without saying that „ = (It is) needless to say (that) „

= It is obvious that „

例:不用说早睡早起是值得的。

It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

2. 在各种„„之中,„„ Among various kinds of „, „ /= Of all the „, „

例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。

Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.

3. 就我的看法„„;我认为„„

In my opinion „

= To my mind „

= As far as I am concerned „

= I am of the opinion that „

例:In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.

就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。

4. 随着人口的增加„„With the increase/growth of the population, „

随着科技的进步„„With the advance of science and technology, „

例:With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。

5. „„ 是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that „

„„ 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that „

„„ 是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that „

„„ 是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that „

例:It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.

我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

6. 花费 spend „ on sth. / doing sth. „

例:我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。

We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in.

7. how 引导的感叹句

例:那至少可以证明你很诚实。

At least it will prove how honest you are.

8. 状语从句

A)如果你不„„,你就会„„ If you don't „, you'll „

例︰If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance.

如果你不坚持努力工作,你就会失去这次机会。

B)如此 „„,以至于„„ so „ that „

例:At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.

当时,我非常伤心,最后都想放弃了。

C)每当„„就„„

每当我听到„„我就忍不住感到兴奋。

Whenever I hear „, I cannot but feel excited.

每当我做„„我就忍不住感到悲伤。

Whenever I do „, I cannot but feel sad.

每当我想到„„我就忍不住感到紧张。

Whenever I think of „, I cannot but feel nervous.

每当我遭遇„„我就忍不住感到害怕。

Whenever I meet with „, I cannot but feel frightened.

每当我看到„„我就忍不住感到惊讶。

Whenever I see „, I cannot but feel surprised.

例:Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.

= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.

每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。

9. 宾语从句

我认为,„„ / 我认为„„不 I think / I don't think that „

我想知道是否„„ I wonder whether „

例:He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club.

他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。

10. Since + S + 过去式, S + 现在完成式。

例:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自从他上高中,他就一直很用功。

英语作文万能段首句

1. 关于„„人们有不同的观点。一些人认为„„

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.

2. 俗话说(常言道)„„,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.

3. 现在,„„,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,„„;其次,„„。更为糟糕的是„„。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.

4. 现在,„„很普遍,许多人喜欢„„,因为„„,另外(而且)„„。

Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.

5. 任何事物都是有两面性,„„也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6. 关于„„人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)„„,在他们看来,„„

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.

7.„已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。 has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

8.„在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用。它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well

9.人类正面临着一个严重的问题„,这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ( ) which is becoming more and more serious.

10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出„。很显然„,但是为什么呢?

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that 。.Obviously, ,but why?

11.如今,人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...。

Nowadays,it is generally/commonly believed that , but I wonder that

12.如同硬币的正反面,...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。

Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...

13.近来,...的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”

Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention

14.随着...的快速增长,...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。

Along with the rapid growth of ...,...has become increasingly important in our daily

15.由汽车(或xx)引起的空气和噪音污染对我们的健康造成了危害。”

Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.

中考英语作文万能格式佳句11句

1. We ' re often told that ......But is this really the case ?

我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗?

2. People used to ......however , things are quite different today .

过去,人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。

3.some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that ......

一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到......

4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution .

认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。

5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face .

这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。

6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place .

简而言之,为了把世界变成更美好的地方,我们必须勤奋工作。

7.Lost time is never found again.

岁月既往,一去不回。

8.Everybody should have a dream.

每个人都该有个梦想.

9.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.

抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。

{中考看图作文模板}.

10.Failure is the mother of success.

失败乃成功之母。

11.Let's look on the bright side.

中考看图作文模板篇二

中考作文范文分类汇总-图片作文

中考作文之图片作文专题

作文1

1. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "____ makes me learn a lot". (以“„„使我学到了很多”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。) (2012闵行二模) Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题与图片仅供参考) ...........

写作构思

根据图片提示选出一个让自己学到很多的主题,例如作为一名志愿者让我学到很多:首先能够做一名志愿者是一件很光荣的事情,其次要给出两个例子说明自己 通过志愿者学到的东西,比如:通过帮助别人明白每个人的生活都不是一帆风顺的所以自己没必要再抱怨生活了,通过志愿者也教会了自己要有责任心耐心同情心等重要的品质。最后总结号召大家都可以去做一些有意义的事。

注意点:

1.时态一般现在时

2.一定要给出至少两个例子证明自己学到的东西

3.文中不得出现任何人名,校名及其他相关信息。

★参考范文1(适合110

分以上使用)

being a volunteer makes me learn a lot

Nowadays volunteering is becoming more and more popular.(非谓语做主语) I feel honored to become a part of it.(系动词接形容词)

Volunteering gives me a chance to stop complaining about my own life, and realize exactly how lucky I am.(adj/adv,宾语从句) I am able to see the people who really need help.(定语从句) What’s more, volunteering teaches me more about responsibility, patience, giving and above all, compassion.

To sum up, volunteering makes me learn a lot and I hope more people can take part in this meaningful activity.

★参考例文2(适合110分以下使用)

Now volunteering is becoming more and more popular. (非谓语做主语)I feel pleased to become a part of it.(系动词接形容词)

Volunteering gives me a chance to stop complaining about my own life, and realize exactly how lucky I am.(adj/adv,宾语从句) What’s more, volunteer teaches me more about responsibility, patience, giving and above all, love.

To sum up, volunteering makes me learn a lot and I hope more people can take part in this meaningful activity.

作文2

1.Write at least 60 words on the topic "A story on a rainy day" according to the pictures given.

(根据所给图片写一篇关于“一个雨天的故事”的短文。短文不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。) (2011闵行二模) Use the following phrases as a reference. ( 以下短语仅供参考)

wait for a bus; rain suddenly; hold an umbrella; get on; drip to the floor; offer a plastic bag.

写作构思 这篇文章相对比较好写一些,根据文章给出的提示词写出对应的一篇文章 注意点

1、注意时态以过去时为主。

2、注意适当使用文章给出的提示词

3、注意各个要点之间连接词的使用,语义通顺,句子衔接得当。

4、文中不得出现任何人名,校名及其他相关信息。

★ 参考例文1(适合110分以上使用)

A story on a rainy day

Since the whether in Shanghai is very changeable,(since引导的原因状语从句) I always take an umbrella with me.

One day, while I was waiting for a bus, it rained suddenly. (adv修饰v.)I felt so lucky and took out my umbrella at once. Then came the bus.(倒装) Noticing others being caught in the rain,(非谓语做主语) I held the umbrella for them to get on the bus. Later, when my umbrella dripped to the floor, a kid was so warm-hearted that(so.....that句型) So you can see, if everybody is willing to give, our world will be full of love.

(主将从现){中考看图作文模板}.

★ 参考例文2(适合110分以下使用)

A story on a rainy day

Since the whether in Shanghai is very changeable,(since引导的原因状语从句) I always take an umbrella with me.

One day, when I was waiting for a bus, it rained suddenly. (adv修饰v.)I felt so lucky and took out my umbrella at once. In a while,the bus came.

Noticing others being caught in the rain,(非谓语做主语) I held the umbrella for them to get on the bus. Later, when my umbrella dripped to the floor, a kid was so kind that(so.....that句型)

So you can see, if everybody is willing to give, our world will be full of love.(主将从现)

作文3

同学们,看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后,你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

要求:

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述,不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;

⒊ 词数 80 ~ 100。

参考词汇: 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.

气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day. 写作构思:

这道看图作文题,主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说,虽是看图,实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点,选择的余地还是很大的。

注意点:

1.认真读题。注意,题目虽然给了四幅图,但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

3、结合所给的提示。提示中,对每种污染都进行了阐述,考生可以这些描述进行写作。

4、注意字数,语法,拼写等,避免错误。

★参考范文1

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can't live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals.(nor的部分倒装) More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

中考看图作文模板篇三

中考语文看图作文答题技巧

中考语文看图作文答题技巧:学会析图

看图作文的“图”,主要有图表、画图和漫画三种,出现在中考作文题中的,主要是漫画。

做中考看图作文,具体的操作程序是读题、析图、立意、拟题、构思、修改、定稿。“与众不同”的关键之处是要仔细观察画面和准确理解画“意”,先抓好读题和析图两步,然后才构思成文。

第一,读题。

读看图作文的题目,主要是了解文题中所提出的要求,明确所规定的体裁,以便有目的有重点地去看图。

第二,联系题目析图。

做看图作文要学会读图。当图映入你的眼帘,你应该马上有这样的意识:这一幅图是一个故事;这一幅图是一篇说明文;这一幅图是一篇寓言;这一幅图是一个比喻……于是,你便可以就像材料作文、命题作文、自由命题作文一样开始写作。

在看图作文中,析图是关键的一环,就像“析材”是材料作文的关键性环节一样。因此,我们应该学会从如下角度去“析图”:

1、看“情节发展”

这适用于对多幅有内在联系的组合漫画的审读。

2、看事物变化

适用于画面中立体事物变化鲜明的漫画材料。

3、看人物对比

适用于阅读以多个人物活动为主的漫画。

4、看背景映衬

适用于人物活动中环境设计鲜明的漫画的阅读理解。画中的景,画中的物,往往有不可忽视的烘托、反衬的作用。

5、看比喻手法

适用于整体构思有明显而强烈的寓意漫画的审读。

6、看整体意念

适用于理解含蓄的令人回味的漫画,作者在这样的漫画中往往运用比拟、象征的方法表现主题。

析图并理解其含义是看图写议论文的重要关隘,考生要掌握一定的方法才能顺利通过。因此考生要尽可能多地掌握“析图”的方法。除上面所介绍的以外,还有类比联想法、喻义探求法、比较排除法、对号入座法、寓言点题法等都可以运用。

中考看图作文,在看懂画面之后,第二关便是构思、写作了。就写作的过程讲,看图作文与其他形式的作文一样,离不开立意、构思、表达的程序。另外说明一下,看图作文有一个重要的过渡性环节,就是必须对图进行一番说明、介绍或描绘。看图作文的特殊性表现为,材料中所给的单幅漫画、多幅组合漫画,以及用来说明、评论对象的摄影作品、美术作品、科学图画等,不可能作为材料直接引进文章。它们需要一次“再处理”,由作者在观察、理解、提炼的基础之上,用文字叙述出来。这些叙述文字,如果放在记叙文的开头,就成了一种解说性的铺陈;如果放在议论文中,这种开头就往往于解说中顺势带出作者的观点。

中考作文下笔前应该如何审题

一、确立准确的内容

看到作文题目后,我们该写些什么?这是所有命题作文首先要解决的问题。

1、思维的发散:具体到考场作文,我们可以从以下几个方面发散自己的思维:

①把握话题作文,仔细审题,充分利用作文题中的提示性语言,来获得写作内容。

②围绕话题展开多层次联想,多角度拓展写作内容。

A.类似联想:由话题出发,联想到与话题同类或相似的事物,从而确定写作的内容。

B.内敛式联想:给一些宽泛型的话题添加一些限制成分,缩小话题的外延,明确写作的范围。

C.逆反式联想:从话题的反面着手,确定写作的范围和内容。

D.虚实转换联想:有些作文话题往往是从缤纷繁杂的现象中抽象出来的一些概念,既有虚的一面,也有实的一面。

2、思维的归纳:即表现内容的确立过程,在这一过程中,我们要注意下面两点:

①要写自己熟悉的内容;

②要写自己驾驭得了的内容:由同学们的认知水平、思想深度乃至于语言表达能力所决定。

通过思维的发散和思维的归纳,一篇文章的表现内容得以最终确立。

二、突出明确的中心

1、表现中心的确立存在一个是否符合题意的问题

有些同学在审题时能够注意准确把握话题的范围和内涵,但是在写作过程中没有围绕中心铺展渲染的意识,结果是要么中心涣散,要么表现中心偏离题意。

2、我们还要注意培养自己明确点明中心的意识{中考看图作文模板}.

为了明确点明中心,我们可以在文章内容构思好以后,围绕中心编写几段话,将它们安插在文章的开头、结尾或是文章的过渡、转折的地方,既提醒自己不要偏离中心,也提醒阅卷老师你有明确的中心意识。

3、表现中心的确立有品位高低之分{中考看图作文模板}.

①要有深刻的思想:对科学的世界观有必要有所了解,掌握发展的观点、全面的观点、联系的观点,提高自己对事物的认知能力,使自己作文的立意做到深刻。

②要有小中见大的眼光:对平凡的生活现象进行深刻的思考,有独到深刻的见解,才能够使文章中心的确立不同凡响。

③要有化实为虚的能力:在立意时展开联想和想像,跳出材料的束缚,运用隐喻、象征等手法,借助于虚拟的"形象"来表达思想,就可以迅速打开思路。

④要有时代意识:恰当地联系时代内容,就能有效地提高文章中心的品位。需要提醒的是,话题的时代特色是融在文章之中的。 ⑤要有新颖的角度:通过跳出思维定势,采用逆向思维,来求得与众不同的立意。

中考看图作文模板篇四

新目标中考看图作文指导

主题:书面表达之看图看表作文

教学内容:

看图作文要求考生按照所给图画,通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于,它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力,还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。

写好看图作文应注意的事项

1、结合文字提示,正确理解图意。一般情况下,看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示,我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意,得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。

2.写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节,就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节,就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。{中考看图作文模板}.

例题分析(例题1)

同学们,看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后,你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

要求:

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述,不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;

⒊ 词数 80 ~ 100。

参考词汇: 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.

气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

这道看图作文题,主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说,虽是看图,实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点,选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面:

1.认真读题。注意,题目虽然给了四幅图,但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

3、结合所给的提示。提示中,对每种污染都进行了阐述,考生可以就这些描述进行写作。

4、注意字数,语法,拼写等,避免错误。

下面是两个例文,大家可以参考一下。

One possible version:

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can't live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We'd better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

Another possible version:

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can't sleep well if there is too much noise. That's why so many people prefer to live in the count

ryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn't make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn't allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can't make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

例题分析(例题2)

右图是Gina对班上同学的周末活动进行调查后得出的结果,同学们的周末活动真是丰富多彩,想想你和你的同学是如何度过周末的?写一篇名为“Weekend Activities”的文章谈谈你们的周末活动。

要求:1. 语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整;

2. 短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称;

3. 词数60—80; .

注意:开头已给出,但不计入总词数

参考范文:

Weekend Activities

In my class, most of my classmates have colorful weekends. In the morning, we usually study at home. In the afternoon, some of us play sports, some play computer games with friends online; others visit their friends and enjoy staying with them. I like surfing the internet on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, I usually play basketball with my father. That is my favorite time. Girls always like hanging out and going shopping with their friends on Sunday. We are very relaxed on weekends.{中考看图作文模板}.

【过手练习】

话题1

你们学校最近就“一个好朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查,调查结果如下图(阴影部分)。

{中考看图作文模板}.

请你以“What a good friend should be like”为题,用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文,报道此次调查结果并谈谈自己的看法。

………………

注意:1. 词数:80-100(开头已给出的内容不计入总词数);

2. 内容必须包括上图中的要点,可适当发挥;

3. 文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺;

4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

What a good friend should be like

Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案】参考范文一:

What a good friend should be like

Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. About seven percent/ only a few/ Less than ten percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome. About forty-eight percent/ Less than half/ Nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons. Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing, and also they should be good at sports. Ninety-five percent/ Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest. Good friends should trust each other and share joys. I think to be honest is the most important for us all.

参考范文二:

Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. Nearly all (95%) of the students think a good friend should be kind, helpful and honest. He or she should trust you and be willing to share joys with you. Sixty-seven percent of the students would like their friends to be fond of singing and dancing. Besides, they hope their friends are good at sports. Forty-eight percent of the students agree that a good friend must be hard-working and do well in lessons. Of course, there are some (7% / less than 10%) caring about appearance. They prefer to choose those with beautiful faces and slim figures as their good friends.

I don’t think a good friend has to be beautiful or handsome. I think honesty is the most important. …

中考看图作文模板篇五

1中考英语作文万能模板

中考英语作文万能模板

初中英语写作名师指点 10字原则让你写出优秀作文

教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮你拿到一等文。

问:“哪十字?”

允泽老师答:“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!”

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!

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