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中考英语万能作文模板(超级背诵版)
百思特教育中考英语万能作文模板(超级背诵版)
中考英语作文万能模板:阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.
2. 分析并举例使其更充实. 一、中考英语作文万能模板:解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)( 这两个变换的词要记住)
Confronted with _ A, we should take a serious of effective measures to cope with the situation.(我们应该采取措施认真对待) For one thing, ---------------(解决方法
一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).( 这三个变换的词要记住)
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). In a word , I’m confident that a bright future is a waiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
二、中考英语作文万能模板:说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A(事物) because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.
----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides.(事物都有两面性) The negative aspects are also
A的第一个缺点).The other
hand,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
In a word (总之), I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
So we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, it will be better(对前景的预测).
三、中考英语作文万能模板:议论文的框架
不同观点列举型( 选择型 :你会选A还是B,说说理由)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion is different from person to person. A majority of people think (大多数人认为)that _ 观点一________. There are 2 factors as follows: firstly, ___原因一_______. Secondly , ___原因二_____.
however, People differ in their opinions on this matter. Some
people think that ___观点二_______. On the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also
because _________(不仅因为。。还因为。。). The more _harder______, the more ___better_____.(越努力越好)
四、中考英语作文万能模板:图表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure in the table
(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily
rising/decreasing from______to ______ . From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that
________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there
are
some other reasons. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)
五、中考英语作文万能模板:说明原因型
(一件事情或事物产生影响的原因)
Currently, A has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than A .
It is clear that ( 1 ). If you ( 2 ), as a result ,your dreams will come true . On the contrary(相反), if you ( 3 ).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that(总结的话) .
No one can deny another fact (没有人会否认事实)that ( 4 ) .You donn\'t have to look very far to find out the truth 。 We all know ( 5 ) .
6 ).
For me ,I think (总结全文:题目中观点——某个原因很重要 ).
终极模板:
1、一般原因、事件等:
开头 Currently, 作文题目的议题 has been the order of the day . Many people prefer A(题目中事物) ,because it has a significant role in our daily life.
中间 There are at least two reasons accounting for __题目中事物___. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ . In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.
【如果判断好坏,加上这句Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.(它很好)First -----(A的优点之一). Besides ------(A的优点之二).】
结尾 As far as I am concerned或In a word(总之) , I hold the point of view that __点题____. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)as for me I think that_______.
2、图表或图画:
开头As is shown by the figure in the table , ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (上升或下降)。 From the sharp rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) __作文题目的议题__is serious。
中间Here are at least two good reasons accounting for __点题____. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______. According to reasons, some measures should be taken for __点题____.It is believed that the above mentioned measures are commonly convincing.
结尾 As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that __作文题目的议题_____. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)
注意:一定注意每一句自己写的空格里要结合题目;
一定把字写好,不要乱涂,错了就一笔划掉;
一定把给出的单词用上。
对于提建议的题,一定针对问题中的每一项分别提建议,包括学生、老师、学校、家长
其他人等等。
附加{中考万能作文范文}.
一、英语书信的常见写作模板(注意格式)
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
举例:
1.最近,你校就学生英语阅读情况做了一次调查,结果不令人满意(见下表)。请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文,并提出一些建议。
注意:1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容,适当增加细节;
2. 建议可面向学生或教师提出,但至少写三条;
3. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数,只需接着写;
4. 词数:80—100个。
参考词汇:合适的suitable 材料material
开头As is shown by the figure in the table , __ students' English reading___ has been on decrease (下降)。 From the information in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) __students' English reading situation__is serious。
中间Here are at least two good reasons accounting for __English reading situation. On the one hand, students aren't very interested in reading. On the other hand,they can't read in right ways. According to reasons, some measures should be taken for _English reading.It is generally believed that the above mentioned measures are commonly convincing.
结尾 As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _we are supposed to spend more time in reading. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)In a word ,(总之)as for me I think that We need to practice reading every day.
原文: [Recently, our school has done a survey of students' English reading situation,(翻译题目中语句) but the results are not pleasing. On the one hand, students aren't very interested in reading. And they can find little time to read because they have too much homework. On the other hand, they can't read in right ways. Besides, there are not enough suitable materials for them to read.
In my opinion, we are supposed to spend more time in reading. We need to practice reading ]every day. As for teachers, I hope, they can give us less homework. What's more,(还有) they had better teach us how to read and provide more suitable materials for us.]
2.假如你是韩梅,对英语兴趣浓厚,但学习起来却很棘手。你知道,中国学生要想学好英语,练就听、说、读、写的技能很关键,掌握枯燥的语法更是必要。对于native speakers来说,是否也如此?因此,你打算
2013年中考作文万能材料
中考作文万能资料
A、书信开头常用语
Hello, Jane. some advice on how to… ask if you can ... inviting me to ….
B、 书信结尾常用语
Best wishes (to/for you). C、. 常见的作文类型提纲模板:
1、图表、数字比例型
(提出讨论或调查的事实)Last week, our class had a class meeting on
(how to)… Here are the results.
(表达出不同看法或观点)Most students think … While … 20% of them
choose to…. Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that… (表达个人看法) As a student, I agree to…
2、说明利弊型
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.
It has many advantages . First, 优点1… Besides, 优点2…
However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences.
On the one hand, 缺点1… On the other hand, 缺点2…
In my opinion,个人观点 …
3、不同观点型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾问题.
Different people hold different ideas.
Some believe …正方观点. First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2…
While others don’t agree. They think…反方观点. On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2…
As for me,个人观点 …
4、解决问题型
Recently, the … problem has been more and more
serious. …should do something to solve it.
Firstly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…
I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.
D、常用过渡性词语
1、叙事文常用的句子间连接词:
At first; at last; in the end…
then/next/after that…
when/while/as soon as/not… until…
at the same time; at times; once in a while;
so that
To one’s surprise/joy
Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…
in a word/in all
2、议论文常用连接词
表示并列:either…or; neither…nor; both…and; not only…but also; 表示递进的:besides; what’s more; what’s worse; (moreover);
表示原因的:because; for…; because of…; thanks to…; (for the reason that…);
表示结果的:so; as a result; so…that…; therefore;
表示目的的:so that…; in order that…; (in order) to…; for…;{中考万能作文范文}.
表示对比的:while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; prefer…to…; would rather do…than do…;
3、议论文常用连接词
表示转折的:however; but;
表示举例的:for example; for instance; such as…; like…; that is to say… 表示总结的:in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last;
表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.;
表示喜爱的:love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;
表达个人想法的:I think/believe…; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally;
其他:in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up one’s mind to do; in a way;
表达个人想法的:I think/believe…; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally;
其他:in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up one’s mind to do; in a way; E、作文万能句式
I will work hard to make my dream come true. It takes sb. +时间+to do…
Sb. spend(某种人称时态)+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth.
It’s important/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.) to v… It’s nice/kind of sb. to v..
It’s time for sb. to do sth.
It’s a waste of time to…
It’s …years/days since sb. +ved
It’s great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing
It’s a pity that…
It’s an honor to…
I’m/We’re not allowed to …
I’m afraid of making mistakes…
There be …doing…
Great changes have taken place in…
sth is/are well worth v-ing.
It seems/seemed that…
It seems (im)possible to v…
It is said that…
As the saying goes, …
…and …. are different in many ways.
too + adj./adv. to do
There are many differences between … and …
I have made up my mind to …
I am sure that…
I am not sure whether/if…
I would rather …. than …
It doesn’t matter if…
Thank you for v-ing.
If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.
F、作文万能短语
have/look for a chance to do
do outdoor activities
be/get used to (doing) sth.
learn…from…
be proud of/ take pride in…
play an important/active part/role in…
agree with sb. to do sth.
with the help of sb.=with one’s help (反义:without one’s help) be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth.
pay attention to…
take good care of …
make friends with…
get on/along well with …
wish you successful/success
as time goes by…
graduate from…
looking back to the past three years,…(用现在完成时态)
pass the (final) exam
stick to doing
keep you mind on your goals
make up one’s mind to do sth. (on sth.)
make a decision to do
work hard at English
once in a while/ at times/ now and then
from then on
in the future(将来)/ in future(从今以后)
increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabulary in fact/as a matter of fact
in the beginning/ at first
feel like giving up
have trouble/difficulty in (doing) sth.
have (no) time to do
have experience in (doing) sth.
follow one’s advice/suggestions
master some basic … skills
be required to do
ask sb. for help
can’t wait to do
be supposed to do
encourage sb. to do
deal/do with …
work out/solve the problems
all sorts/kinds of…
at home and abroad
one of …
be full of…
learn sth. by oneself
come up with good ideas
be surprised at sth.(to do sth.)
in order to
keep healthy/fit
a good way to v…
keep (on) trying
worry about…/ be worried about…
in one’s spare/free time
be kind/friendly to
be strict with
help others
say thank you to…
have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time
plenty of +C/U
worry about/be worried about
ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help/call sb. for help
be popular with…
share sth. with sb.{中考万能作文范文}.
know little/much about … do/try one’s best to v… be/feel sorry for…
help sb. (to) do sth./ with sth. in/during class
before/after class
teach sb. to do sth.
中考作文例文
中考作文讲座例文
1、不止一次,我努力尝试(2015年中考作文)
一路上,望着远处的阳光灿烂,我努力尝试,忘却砂砾带来的疼痛;一路上,面对困难和挫折,我努力尝试,穿越丛生的荆棘,想要到达山顶。
不止一次,我努力尝试。
当我的指尖触上黑键白键,我就知道,我不是一个音乐天才,我必须付出比别人更多的努力。很快,我就遇到了困难。我发现别的同学指下流淌出的,是清澈的小溪,向前向前,最终汇入大海;我的琴声却总是遇见石头和高山的阻隔,断断续续。
于是,我开始努力尝试。我尝试把一首曲子分成很多的小部分,然后一部分一部分去练。把每一小部分都练熟,最后连贯起来,就是一曲完整的歌。我努力地练,一段一段乐声融在空气里,一次一次忍着手的酸疼,一遍一遍甩过手后继续执著地练习。日复一日,终于,我的小溪,经过坎坎坷坷,居然也流入了一片汪洋。
那一次次的努力尝试,连起一个个音符,把汗水,变成了微笑。
可是后来,同学们都说我只是连贯,曲调却毫无变化。甚至还有人嘲笑我,说我根本不懂什么是弹琴。我难过,我困惑,我的琴声里好像缺了一点重要的东西。直到看着老师弹琴时忧伤抑或欣喜的表情,我懂得了什么。
弹琴,无关技艺,关键在于用心。
我再次努力尝试,去用心弹琴,去表现作者的情感。如果作者欣喜,大笑,就弹出“乱石穿空,惊涛拍岸,卷起千堆雪”的豪放;如果作者悠然,就弹出“小楼一夜听春雨,深巷明朝卖杏花”的闲适;如果作者忧伤,就弹出“泪眼问花花不语,乱红飞过秋千去”的伤感„„让心与作者的心贴近,去品味每一个音符背后的情感。
就这样,不止一次,我努力尝试。我相信,总有一天我会到达那阳光灿烂的远方。那时,一路上的荆棘化成了花朵,一路上的寒风会漾满温柔与笑意。
不止一次,我努力尝试。我坚信,终有所得。
【评点】
作者以学习弹琴的心路历程为素材,采用对比的手法,叙写了自己一次次努力尝试的艰难,但始终没有放弃,并对弹出幽默动听、和谐悦耳的曲子充满必胜的信心,这就文章所表现出来的正能量,主题鲜明突出。同时,文章非常注重点题和扣题,这是写作中、尤其是考场作文应该关注的,因为,这样做,就说明你的写作始终是以题目为主线、为核心展开的,也给阅卷老师一个清晰的线索。此外,作者能够将积累的古诗词恰当地引用到文章里,不仅体现了学以致用的目的,也为文章的语言增光添彩。
2、这里也有乐趣(2014年中考作文)
事情还要从一年前节目角色安排说起。
“小妤,你来担任女一号,小欣,你担任女二号。小玥„„”我听着老师一个个报着这次校园艺术节主角的名单,原来以为必然有我的名字在列,但却事与愿违。“小仪,你来担任路人甲。”话音刚落,我的心就沉了下来。什么?路人——甲?只有两句台词的路人甲?!我悲哀甚至有些愤怒。放学后,我没有和朋友说说笑笑地离开,而是一个人默默地回了家。
回到家我站在窗台边眺望远方,一想到老师让扮演的角色,我的泪又开始在眼眶里打转。一直以来成绩名列前茅的我扮演的都是骄人的“主角”: 朗诵比赛的领诵, 1 我以前一直希望当主角,不愿意当配角。但这次经历之后,我发现,当配角也有乐趣。
学校升旗仪式的主持人,校管乐队首席长笛„„可现在老师却让我扮演一个可有可无的配角!凭什么?难道我在老师心目中也是这样一个配角吗?哎„„ 突然,一阵清风拂来,我情不自禁地深吸了一口,风中夹杂了一丝清新之感也让我清醒了许多。就让清风来驱散我现在的坏心情吧。
我走到楼下,正是春季,所有植物都焕发出嫩绿的颜色。草坪上的小草长得郁郁葱葱,我真想用力踩断每一棵草。暮地,我发现了隐藏在众多草中的那几株小花!我俯下身子嗅嗅它们的味道,淡雅的花香似有若无,却能给人明显地舒心之感。看着这几多不起眼的小花,我似乎突然明白了什么。我起身,慢慢离开了草地。回头一看,几株小花若隐若现,似是点缀着只有绿色的草地,显出特别的美丽。我微微一笑,迈着轻快的步伐回了家。也许我就如同这些无名的小花,虽然无法成为最耀眼夺目的主角,却也有些不可或缺的意义。草地,正因有了这些花的点缀才不显单调,更为美丽。而我,也一定能通过自己的努力,为班级的节目增添一份亮丽。
我反复练习着两句台词,才发现路人甲其实是一个不能缺少的角色,正因他的两句台词,才引发了主人公发生的种种故事。表演的那一天到了,我将自己完全融入了这个角色,主角们也倾力演出。终于,我们班取得了第一的成绩。我微笑着谢幕时,身边传来一句:“你演得真不错。”回头一看,是小妤,用她微笑的眼眸看着我,我也报以最真诚的微笑。
正因那一天的小花给予我的启迪,才会让我明白不是只有主角才会散发光芒。其实很多时候,我们或许只能担任一个小小的配角,但在自己的生命与历程中,我们就是自己的主角。我们都扮演着独一无二的角色,关键是看你拥有怎样的心态。{中考万能作文范文}.
经过这次不平凡的历练,我认识到:这里——当配角——也有乐趣。
【评点】
“这里也有乐趣”是2014年的中考作文题。本文不是一般地去表现校园艺术节的乐趣,而是记叙了发生在校园艺术节上对担任节目角色的前后思想冲突,在听到老师安排自己为只有一句台词的“路人甲”这一可有可无的角色时的“悲哀甚至有些愤怒”,在感悟了大自然的启示后,思想发生了转变,认识到当配角也有乐趣。文末的议论把作者的认识提高到一个新的高度:“其实很多时候,我们或许只能担任一个小小的配角,但在自己的生命与历程中,我们就是自己的主角。我们都扮演着独一无二的角色,关键是看你拥有怎样的心态。”深刻地表现了作者的精神成长。
3、今天,我想说说心里话(2013年中考作文)
今天,我坐在考场,百感交集。回顾十多年来自己的成长之路,我想说说心里话,说说我喜爱的银色小号,说说我敬爱的曹老师,说说为实现自己的目标而辛勤地奋斗、执着地追求的艰辛历程。
那年我7岁,刚好是爱玩爱动的年纪。有时候,我甚至希望将做作业的时间也挪作“玩”用。但是爸爸要让我在学弹钢琴的基础上,再学一门才艺,他说:“学艺就是学习做一个有责任有担当的人。”带着一分无奈,我不情不愿地选择了学习小号。那一天,我终于明白,我身上肩负着特殊的责任与担当。只不过,当时我对这它是懵懂无知的,真正体会到它的含义是在一年之后。
那时候,经过了一段时间的练习,我的小号演奏慢慢流畅起来。爸爸为了鼓励我,特地买了一台游戏机作为奖励。他和我约定,每天回家做好作业后先练习一小时小号,然后才能玩游戏。一开始,我还照着约定做,但是后来我屡屡“犯规”。终于有一天, 因为我不守承诺,爸爸把游戏机送人了。在伤心欲绝中,我终于明白:责任与担当不是用来敷衍的,而 2
是用来坚守的。
进入初中后,我有幸考入了中学生交响乐团,著名指挥家曹鹏老师成了我的老师。在他的指导下,我的小号吹奏水平得到了进一步提高,运指娴熟,吐气自如,发音灵动,在比赛中屡屡获奖。不过,这时候的我还是谈不上喜欢小号,更别说自发地去练习。看到我学得这么被动,在一次乐队合练结束后,曹老师留下了我。他看着我说:“你的吹奏技法不错,唯一的缺憾就是不勤,缺乏一种责任与担当。古代文学家刘勰说,操千曲而后晓声,观千剑而后识器。晓声、识器是大家都想达到的境界,但是没有操千曲、观千剑的过程,又如何知晓其中妙处呢?”
曹老师这一番真诚的话语,字字敲打我的心。从那以后,“操千曲而后晓声,观千剑而后识器”成了我的座右铭,每当我想要偷懒的时候,我就会不自觉地想起它,因为我明白了:人生不但要有目标,还要有将之实现的执着精神,这是我的责任与担当。
一把银色的小号见证了我这些年的成长。如今,当我熟练地吹奏起小号名曲《晚霞的剪影》时,伴着那悠悠的旋律,我就会想到十多年来父母养育之恩和曹鹏老师的不倦教诲,我也深深感到,执着于做有责任有担当的人是我人生的最大收获。
这就是我心里最想说的话。
【评点】
这是一篇中规中矩的中考作文。阅卷老师打的分数出奇地一致——60分。本文主旨开掘较深。写练习钢琴、舞蹈、琵琶、体操等内容的文章并不少见,一般的立意大多是不怕苦不怕累、坚持有恒,刻苦磨炼,而本文则作了新的开掘,把学习吹奏乐器提升到“学习做一个有责任有担当的人”的高度。
每个人都可以在心中种上一朵花,种上了它就能引领我们走向成功,但种上了,就别让它枯萎。
——题记
十二月,正是一年之中最冷的时节,而我的心里却暖洋洋的,满心期待着老师那即将宣读的入围学生的花名册。平日里表现尚佳的我想必定能入围这次的演出活动。我与其他人一起双手抱膝而坐,笃定而又有些焦急地等待着,期盼着,脑海中想象着我穿上那华美的舞裙在台上翩翩起舞的样子。
老师终于来了,稍作介绍后,她开始娓娓报出一个个名字,我的心继续狂跳,迫切希望下一个报出的就是我的名字,但事与愿违。我的手心开始渗汗,心中暗自打气:别紧张,一定会有我的。可直到老师报完名字,转身离开时,我才意识到:我落选了!
一时间,沮丧、不解甚至有些许悲愤充斥着我的心头,我急忙跑去向老师询问缘由,理由竟是:“你身高太高了,这次选的学生身高不能相差太多。”没想到!我平日里甚是引以为傲的身高竟成了阻挡我入选的绊脚石,这对我来说简直是一种讽刺!
我一个人独自走在回家的路上,寒冬腊月,北风呼啸,这冰冷的天气就如同我的心,拔凉拔凉的。时不时有一两片枯叶打在我的脸上,我仿佛听到儿时种在心田上的那朵花悄然凋零的声音。想起我之前为之奋斗的无数个日夜,我鼻子顿时一酸。
我如同泄了气的皮球,回到家中,打开电视不停地换台,正巧调到了一台综艺节目,看到令人惊奇的一幕:一位女选手把自己的舞裙轻轻提起,露出一双怪异的腿,台下瞬间寂静随即爆发出热烈的掌声,仔细一瞧,竟是一双义肢。而她正是用这双腿来演绎她的舞蹈梦。离场前,这位令我肃然起敬的姑娘说:“上帝没有拿走我的生命,我还有什么理由好抱怨呢?”看到这里,我心中好似卸下了千斤重石,失去了双腿都能继续跳舞,我又有什么理由放弃呢? 接下来的日子里,我如同之前一样,压腿、压肩、推脚背,韧带的拉扯所带来的疼痛, 3 4、心里美滋滋的 (2012年中考作文)
让我时刻就如一根任人拉扯的橡皮筋一样,随时会被拉断。但我仍然不断努力、坚持着。只为了能让我心中的花朵能够再次绽放„„
我的付出总算是有所回报,我在寒假里报名参加了社区里的舞蹈比赛,代表我们小区取得了名次,去领奖的那一天,我觉得像是有一缕风吹进我的心田,让那朵花重新焕发生机。奖品很简单:一盒糖果和一张奖状,却是对我最好的褒奖。
我坚信,只有不怕挫折坚定信念,付出辛勤的汗水才能浇灌我心中的花,让它继续绽放,不再凋零。心田上的花四季常开,我的心里也美滋滋的。
【评点】
本文记叙的事情是青少年成长中经常遇到的考验——愿望与现实的冲突。显然,本文“意脉”的转折是十分清晰的:小作者盼望入围学校演出活动,却因身高原因而落选,“一时间,沮丧、不解甚至有些许悲愤充斥着我的心头”。后来在一位装着义肢而坚持跳舞的女选手的感召下,小作者坚定了继续练舞的决心,参加社区舞蹈比赛并获奖。经历了愿望与现实的冲突并适时地转变思想认识,正是青少年成长的必经的人生道路。
5、悄悄地提醒(2011年中考作文)
画一样的江南在梦里,梦里的江南在水里,水里的木橹在波中,波在我的心头漾起,可心头却在这江南阴郁,轻微的,悄悄地提醒着什么„„
又访江南。
“春在蒙蒙细雨中。”江南的春湿漉漉的,青石板间的苔藓是那么地翠绿,青灰色的瓦片与雨水一道为这江南的好时节奏乐。我梦里的江南还是那么美,撑起一把油纸伞,踏在潮湿的青石板上,看雨水打在河面,一滴一滴,荡漾出了最动人的波纹,一片更大的波纹漾了过来,噢,原来是船娘驾着乌蓬船来了,橹子在水中轻轻地搅,轻轻地搅。驼了背的老人坐在房檐下,用一把精致的桃木梳,把小孙女的头发梳成漂亮的样子,身边的竹架上放了一大块我喜爱的蓝印花布,慢慢地干„„
走在江南的雨中,我为那百年依旧的人韵水韵而欣喜,走着走着,却发现有些什么不对劲。那调皮的小孩为何把纸团扔进了水里?那游人为何折下那杨柳?那些步履匆匆的人在干什么?为什么要拿鱼网捕那安逸的鱼?那老墙上张贴的是什么五颜六色的广告?那拿着相机的人为何忍心用滚烫的烟头烫这块生灵的小树?那船上老人的网中为什么网来了那么多的垃圾?那金发的小女孩为什么随手扔下了吃剩的江南软糕„„
我的心头越来越紧,江南,我热爱的江南去了哪里?在这里,还是躺在梦里?这蒙蒙的细雨怎么还没唤得你的苏醒?你究竟去了哪里啦?
我仍是走在这湿漉漉的青石板上,又走过了一座小桥,是啊,当匆匆的脚步一批一批地光临这片土地,闪烁的闪光灯记录下的是徒有其表的美丽。而如今的江南对我而言只是一个在梦里才有群莺鸣啼的地方罢了。
还剩下了什么?物欲横流之下只有那木橹仍在摇,苔藓仍常青,蓝印花布仍在等待风干,只有这些真真实实地,悄悄地提醒我,江南还剩下了这些!该惋惜还是庆幸?
画一样的江南在梦里,梦里的江南在水里,水里的木橹在波中,波在我心头漾起,可心头却在这江之南阴郁,悄悄地提醒着我,已逝去,已逝去„„
【评点】
本文紧密联系现实、深入开掘题旨,赢得了一致的肯定。这是一个关心国家大事、环保意识很强的学生。正是因为这位考生有着强烈的保护环境的意识,才在紧张的考场上,在拿到“悄悄地提醒”的作文题后,写出了生活中经常见到而我们的笔下却很少见到的沉重话题,引发了人们深深的思考。这是本文获得高分的关键所在。
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2016年中考英语万能写作模板
2016年中考英语万能写作模板
1.解决方法题型
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状)。Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一)。 For another -------------(解决方法二)。 Finally, --------------(解决方法三)。
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法)。 Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处)。
2.说明利弊题型
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一)。 Besides -------------------(A的优点之二)。
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点)。To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)。
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)。
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)。)
3.不同观点举例
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic
varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude
as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in
the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一
或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more
4.利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive
aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To
begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same
time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
5.图表作文的框架
_______as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in
_______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
6.现象说明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________, it is true that__________.
There are many reasons explaining__________________________. The main reason is____________________.
中考作文范文
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你是尘埃也是光
他一个普通的学生,没有出众的相貌,没有显赫的背景,走入在人海中就找不到他的身影,像是天地之间一粒微小的尘埃。唯一与众不同的是他130多斤重的“伟岸”的身躯。
开学第一天,大家就记住了他。上台介绍时他就获得了一阵哄笑,肥硕的身躯让他在我们之中显得格外明显,因为名字带帅字,他被我们戏称做"帅哥"。
他,有着让人羡慕的成绩,进校以来的第一次大考就坐上了班级前三的宝座。而班名榜上却没有他,因为一千米离及格线太远,他的体育没有及格。班主任找他谈了很多次话告诉他体育不及格考不了一中。 他哭了,毕竟他的梦想是一中。
从此之后,我再也没有见过平日里他坐他爸的车回家,他每天早起半个小时从家里骑着自行车上学。盛夏里烈日展露的锋芒携着热浪召出了他一身的汗水,每当他呼哧带喘的跑进教室时,一种敬佩之情便从心底油然而生。
不知道从什么时候开始,"帅哥"的声影总是能够在操场上出现。
寒冬的傍晚,天黑的很早,五点半的天空就已经肆意弥漫了大片大片的黑墨,白天操场上的人海也成了一片黑海。我的手不时被吹过来的寒风冻得发痛,只想快点坐上载我回家的车,享受那难得可贵的温暖。白天操场上的人海也成了一片黑海,隐隐约约中仿佛瞥见有人在跑步。尽管手已经被寒风冻僵,但是我还是有点好奇,我把手揣在口袋,站到升旗台边,看见了一个高大而模糊的人影。再近些,我顿时被吓了一跳--是"帅哥"。我怀疑自己产生了幻觉,再次和我的眼睛确认,真的是他!
也许是对"帅哥"精神的一份敬佩,也许只是好奇。我开始特意放学后看"帅哥"跑步。
也不知道是哪一天,同学们惊奇的发现"帅哥"瘦了,也不知道什么时候,大家发觉他从原来要添饭转变为正常的饭量了,也不知道......
临近期末,又到考一千八百的时候了。"帅哥"跑步的时候围了很多人,我也站在一旁,看着跑在队伍中的"帅哥"我也为他捏一把汗。看着"帅哥"从队伍前段落到了后段,大家都为他着急。倒数第二圈了,"加油加油!"大家喊的特别卖力,"帅哥"在最后的一圈冲了上来,卡着及格线冲过了终点。那一刻,掌声雷动。
期末考试,变得是红榜上多出的那一个名字,不变的是他依旧坐稳班级前三。