180字作文大全

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180字作文大全篇一

五年级数学日记180字折扣计算

五年级数学日记180字:折扣计算

五年级数学日记180字:折扣计算

今天上午,我和妈妈去逛超市,我买了一些零食和书,妈妈买了些生活用品。我和妈妈交完钱,我就把新买的那本书拿了出来。妈妈突然问我:“买这本9折书我们用了23元,那你知道它的原价是几元吗?”这个问题把我难住了。回到家后,我依旧无法想出答案。这时候,爸爸提醒了我,他说:“小数不行可以用分数啊!”我顿时想出了答案。

几分钟后,我兴高采烈的告诉妈妈:“我已经算出来它的原价可能是多少了!”妈妈问我:“为什么是‘可能’呢?”我回答:“因为按23元算出原价的话是分数啊!23除以9再乘10是25又九分之五,约等于25.5元。但也有可能是26元或25.55元。”

现在我对折扣的计算已经越来越熟练了!

180字作文大全篇二

特殊的惩罚

特殊的惩罚

上课铃已响,我快步走进教室,师生问好后,我却听到一阵啜泣声,只得先问问情况。班级马上像开了锅,叽叽喳喳个不停,我却听不清一个人的话,请两个当事人说,甲同学说:“老师他打我!”乙同学说:“老师他骂我!”“你先打的我。”“你先骂的我。”两人又争吵起来,再这样下去,正常的教学任务就完成不了,如果像往常,我肯定是 先训他们一顿,然后罚他们扫一周的地,他们肯定不服,我突然想起来,他们平时最怕作文,何不利用作文来罚他们?

“既然你们都说不清谁对谁错,这样吧,你们每人都写下来吧,把当时发生的事情写下来,注意把事情发生的过程按顺序写,越详细越好。谁写的好免除惩罚,写的不好再重写!明天下午交给我。”话音刚落,两人开始埋怨起来,却又不敢顶撞我!

第二天下午,两人按时把作业交上来,我一看,每张纸上都是干巴巴的三行字,语句还不通顺。“不行,我看不懂你们写的什么,再好好想想事情的经过,重写!”这样来来回回三次,语句才勉强通顺,大体能看懂是怎么一回事,“好吧,材料我暂且保存着,如果我这里有你三次记录,年终取消你的三好学生资格!”全班学生听说后都深吸了一口气。

因为怕写过程材料,班里同学打小报告的明显少了,毕竟是孩子,总免不了会磕磕碰碰,一个月下来,我那里也累积了八个同学的书面材料,其中一个同学让我改变了许多,他叫刘学伟,在班里是调皮大王,很少有人敢惹他,他平时的作文总是字迹潦草,内容空洞,怎么

教也改不了他的毛病。一次,他又和别人打架了,我气极了,因为和他打架的学生脑子有点智障,这样的学生他也欺负!罚他写的事情经过字数不少于180字,把当时想的、说的、做的全写出来!

第二天早上,他果真交上来两张字迹满满的纸,看了之后,我很震惊,他把事情经过写的非常详细,而且还很有条理,最让我惭愧的是我错怪他了,不是他的错。我在班上读了他的作文,告诉大家以后写作文也像他那样,按事情发展的顺序把事情写清楚,不一定用多华丽的词,真实具体就行了。他刚才还愤怒的脸渐渐有了笑容。以后他很少和别人打架了,作文水平也提高了许多。

同学们依然不喜欢我的惩罚方式,他们说情愿扫地都不愿意写作文,因为这样的作文没法抄袭的,而且不能作假,写起来很费脑子。我听了笑了,写作文本来就很费神的啊。你随便凑合几句话倒轻松,但那不是我们要的作文啊。

现在的学生作文最喜欢写假话,记得台湾有一年中考,作文是“难忘的一棵树”,结果老师在阅卷时发现有许多学生都写“我外婆家院子里有一棵大树”,有委屈时都在树下和大树说话,这样的作文真让阅卷人苦笑不得。现在有不少专家学者开始提倡作文要写真话,不再对作文的技巧做过多要求,只要能写真话,表达清楚就可。从小就写假话,长大了就会形成说假话的习惯,对学生的成长害处颇多。前一段时间,看美国的小学教育,老师们没有人像我们国内老师那么强调作文该怎么写,老师只告诉他们,你想说什么就写出来吧,你做了什

么就写出来吧。然后就不再说什么了,结果孩子们写什么的都有,老师也不做过多评价。

同学们常常感觉无事可写,其实只要我们善于引导学生抓住身边发生的每一件事,及时的记录下来,学生的写作材料就会丰富起来。让学生写真事,说真话,我想学生的作文会有很大的进步

180字作文大全篇三

自我介绍作文150字

自我介绍作文150字

我,是一个活波的男孩,有时很爱看书,有时很活跃,下面就来听听我的故事吧。

有一次,我们老师跑步测试,老师还没把“跑”这个字念完,我就已经冲了上去。老师说完,同学才开始跑。所以,我的跑步成绩是八秒五。

我很爱看书。有一次,我正在专心地看书。但是爸爸一再叫我做作业。我放书的时候,还在看。爸爸生气了,夺了书,自己放了回去。这时,我才无可奈何地去做作业。

我就是这样的人,你呢?

180字作文大全篇四

The importance of reading 英语作文

The importance of reading

It is widely acknowledged that books which present the precious accumulation of wisdom and knowledge beyond the limitation of space of time are one of the few things men cherish deeply. Reading books plays an important part in the character development and personal growth.

First of all, reading can broaden our eyes. As we all know, books reveal to a mysterious wonderland in which we will obtain various experience we would never dream of confronting in the real life such as traveling around the globe, interacting with other people’s life. We learn to look beyond our immediate surroundings to the horizon and a landscape far away from home.

Secondly, reading makes it possible for us to be knowledgeable. China has a proverb, knowledge makes a gentleman. We are stimulated to use our brain to seek out many mystical things while reading. Reflecting on the other lives we will meet once we begin to read has a deep influence on the formation of correct outlook on life, value, world view. In the meanwhile, reading provides us with the suitable way to catch other knowledge and deal with problems.

However, more and more people become sick of reading who always neglect the importance of reading. We can’t deny that reading helps us withstand stresses and strains, clean up the misconceptions

and discover the true meaning of life in the society in which money is considered the most valuable thing. Reading reveals to us a vista of a hopeful future, so to speak. In a word, people can’t live without books. As an undergraduate, we should learn to be avid and omnivorous readers so as to become prodigious readers. Remember not to put all the energy spent on professional textbook but to leave some time to read various books.

180字作文大全篇五

CET-4作文高分技巧

第三部分 英语四六级作文{180字作文大全}.

改卷感悟

四六级改卷工作已结束。和往年评分标准一样,对作文分为以下几个等级进行打分:0分,2分,5分,8分,11分,14分。老师评分主要是进行GLOBAL READING,也就是进行整体给分,不是仔细推敲给分。鉴于此情况,就考试的一些作文应试注意事项告知大家,希望对大家即将参加的考试的作文部分有所说明。

1. 大家拿到作文题目之后,先要仔细阅读题目明确作文的类型。这一点是非常关键的因为四级相对很强调作文的结构。如果没有一个很清楚的结构,一定会失去一定的分数。四级作文一般有下面三种结构:说明文,议论文和应用文写作。说明文主要可以分为阐述主题类型的,利弊类型的,原因结果类型的,解决问题类型的以及谚语说明类型。议论文主要是就观点进行反驳类型的。应用文写作主要包括演讲词,求职求学信,邀请信,感谢信和投诉信等。所以大家必须在平时复习的过程明确各种类型的写作结构,这样在考试时候就可以在结构上不会出现任何问题,也不会因为写跑题而失分。

2. 开始写作文时一定要段落清楚,有明显的开头,主体和结论部分。也就是大家要学会分段落,不要象记流水账一样,一段到底,这样就会给老师留下很坏的印象。同时在文章写作过程中,一定要学会使用一些句子之间以及引起和结束文章时候的连接词,这样的话可以使文章很自然,流畅。比如在写文章主体的时候可以用首先,其次,再次这样的连接词,或者一方面,另一方面,等这样的词。这些都是很容易引起老师的注意,可以得分的地方。

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3. 写文章时候尽量多用一些四级词汇,这样也可以提高老师的印象。但不是说你用的词很多,而写出的句子结构,语法错误太多。这样也会很糟糕的。因此大家一定要注意,如果自己词汇不怎么多的时候,你不要用自己不明确和不会拼写的词,还有一定要确保句子的正确性,尽量避免语法结构的错误。即使你使用的简单句,但是写的很清楚,没任何错误,也可以得到不错的分数。

4. 注意文章的长度安排,短的作文一定是不可以的,也就是字数要达到要求。但是长的作文如果几乎每句话都有错误也不能得到好的分数。所以大家一定要注意,写的时候要长度适中,确保写出的句子错误很少,即使观点只是很一般,没什么新的地方。也能得到相对好的分数。

5. 卷面一定要整洁,字一定要写的漂亮,这可以在很大程度上影响你们分数的升降。印象分数几乎全部是这个决定的 ,所以大家也要主要平时HANDWRITING的练习。 决胜关键在于创造闪光点

四六级考试越来越使范本无用武之地,阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中更多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。

高分作文标志:

1、四级120-150字;六级150—180字;

2、是否长短句交叉;

3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;

4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;

这是一些建议,希望对各位同学有帮助,能很好的通过下次的考试。{180字作文大全}.

二 高分作文注意事项:

1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )

举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:

It is, therefore,high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the

service industry like that. Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

比如说:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that… 3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion等等)

比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper;approaches代替ways, implement代替

carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge代替enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

高分作文举例:

Computer and I

I never forget the very day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday pres

ent, which made me excited so that I indulged myself in searching useful information I had expected , and enjoy a great deal of beautiful classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. thrilling替换exciting

an army of替换a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincidentfashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;

Increasing popularity替换more and more popular

Coincident with…非常地道的词汇,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With…

Advancement替换development{180字作文大全}.

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter

Current ( currently )替换now

Appeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals替换more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.{180字作文大全}.

For a start替换To begin with

We can, freely, search用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动

Additionally替换In addition / Besides

Deliver替换send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语,function in the disservice of替换do harm to

Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )

Net citizen网民,属于精彩用词

velopment of people’ therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides

Computers do play,do强调

Positive替换important / good等

A slice of替换a part of

Unfavorable替换bad

Impacts替换effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入语

Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage ) Facet替换aspect

由此可见,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢!

三 四级高分作文30个最经典的替换词

1: sophomore, individuals, characters, folks代替(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的 days),promising (future) (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good

3: dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad 如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive代替

eg.

An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/bo

ys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

4: (an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many, if not most)代替many.

注:用many, if not most一定要小心,many后一定要有词。

Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,代替most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some

6: harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语,所以要加that)

7: affair ,business ,matter代替thing

8: shared代common

9: reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )

e.g. Students can reap huge fruits from social experience (benefit from, be of great benefit …) 10: for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion

11: Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.

Eg. sth has gained growing popularity.

Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

12: little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly

13: beneficial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of

14: shopper, client, consumer, purchaser,代替customer

15: exceedingly, extremely (important) 代替very

16: hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ...代替necessary, evitable

17: sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous

fascination on sb代替sb take interest in

18: capture one’s attention代替attract one’s attention.

e.g. The damage of facilities ~

19: facet, dimension, sphere代aspect

20: be indicative of , be suggestive of , be fearful of 代 indicate, suggest , fear

21: give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger代替cause.

22: There are several reasons behind sth代替..reasons for sth

23: desire代替want.

24: pour attention into代替pay attention to

25: bear in mind that代替remember

26: enjoy, possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)

27: interaction代替communication{180字作文大全}.

28: frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth

29: to name only a few, as an example代替for example

30: next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible

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四 作文常用句型一

英语写作的题材与我们日常生活息息相关,通常涉及事物间的比较,说明其相似性和相异性、事物之间的因果关系,有时要求考生分析事实,找出原因或解决问题的方法,或对一个问题提出个人看法等,所以,考生在复习写作时,要尽可能熟悉和掌握表达这些关系的常

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用句型:

1)相似性

(1)A is to B what/as C is to D(A之于B犹如C之于D).例句:

Moral corruption is to the State as physical disease is to an individual body.

Classic music is to my generation what pops are to her generation.

(2)Just as...,so....(正如...,...也如此).例句:

Just as woods are indispensable to birds,so is the earth to human beings.

Just as they must put aside their prejudices,so we must be prepared to accept their good faith.

(3)A and B have something in common(A和B有共同之处).例句:

As human beings,the Americans and Chinese have lots of things in common.

Tom and I have background in common.

(4)A is similar to B(A与B相似).例句:

My hobby is similar to his in that we both like collecting records,foreign and domestic. My problems are very similar to yours.

(5)The same is true of/The same can be said of...(…也是如此).例句

As the economies of all countries are closely interrelated no country can develop in self

seclusion.The same is true of China.

2)相异性

(1)A is just the opposite(to B) (A与B正相反). 例句:

Beijing is populous and crowded,while Canberra is just the opposite.

(2)A differs (is different)from B in that....(A不同于B在于…)例句:

China's condition differs from ours in that China has the largest population in the world. The family sedans made in China are different from/than those made by the Americans. They are more compact and energy saving.

(3)...(The case)is not the same(…是不相同的)/例句:

While it may be true that basketball and vo11eyball share certain features,the excitement each arouses in the spectators is not the same.

The development zones in the eastern coastal areas are mostly initiated and supported by governments,but the case is not the same with those in the west.

(4)Contrary to(on the contrary)...(正相反),例句:

Contrary to our estimation,the economic situation of the country is gradually getting better.

You were not boring me with the question.On the contrary,I was much enlightened on the situation from the discussion.

3)权衡

(1)The advantages outweigh the disadvantages(利大于弊).例句:

It seems safe to say that the advantages of marriage outweigh its disadvantages.

As is shown by the arguments,the drawbacks of cloning techno1ogy outweigh its promising

advances.

(2)Nothing can rival.../there is no rival to(...是无与伦比的).例句:

Perhaps nothing can rival the pleasure from reading.

There was no rival to him as a poet.

(3)...has drawbacks as well as merits(…既有优点,也有不足).例句:

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