中考英语作文套路与秘诀
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中考英语作文套路与秘诀篇一
中考英语作文拿高分的8个技巧
外教一对一
中考英语作文拿高分的8个技巧
用哪些招数能让作文多得几分?小编整理出八招技巧，供大家参考学习。
从审题到衔接到句式每一招都有助考生得分
第一招：审题细心。
审题好比驾驶员打方向，方向对了，哪怕开得慢点，也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清，书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备，包含以下四方面：
1)审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。
2)审结构。明确开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分，定好段落。
3)审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。
4)审内容。弄清什么必需写，哪些略写，尤其是图画式书面表达，要学会连贯性，读懂图的意思。
5)审人称和时态。弄清书面表达要求用何种人称，根据材料确定短文的基本时态。
第二招：衔接流畅。
恰当使用逻辑词语，使各要点间连贯，行文通顺。
比如表并列或递进: and, both„and,neither„nor, not only„but also;
表选择:or, either„or;
表转折或让步:but,although, though, however, even though, in spite of, on the contrary;
表对比:like, unlike, while;
表举例:for example, such as, that’s to say;
表强调:in fact, of course, besides;
表时间顺序:when, after, before,as soon as, soon after;
表因果关系:because, since, as, for, for this reason，as a result;
表结论:in a word, to sum up. In summary, in conclusion, on the whole;
第三招：短语地道。
外教一对一 如果能多用短语，则可回避书面表达中的中式英语，同时也能减少错误几率。尤其在考试时，如果使用短语，会使文章增加亮点。 第四招：句式丰富。
一篇可读性强的文章，通常能较好体现学生对英语语言结构、词块、句式的运用。因此各类句式的多元呈现往往可以提升书面表达的成绩。
初中阶段英语写作常用的句式如下：There be„;the more„the more„;It’s adj for sb. to do something;I
think/believe/suppose„(宾从); It can’t be put into real experiment.(被动)等。尤其是复合句的适恰运用对提升文章的层次很有帮助。对大多数同学来说，仿写很重要，在教材和很多的阅读书籍中都蕴含着丰富的好词佳句。
第五招：情感真实。
同样的话题，有些文章没什么情感，冷冰冰;有些文章很有温度，有真情实感。情感真实主要可通过如下方法实现：
1)内容的呈现。比如：2012年的中考英语书面表达My dream，大部分的作文都还是停留在表面上。但这个例子：I want to be a good father because my daddy was always so busy when I was a little boy.He had no time with me and my mum„虽然文章的文采并不是很好，但很有真情实感，令读者有心动的感觉，也是好文章。
2)副词的运用。在句子的某些位置，添加副词，可以使句子和文段更有人性味，更有情感性。如：I really enjoy the beauty of the sea in the sun.加了一个really，就有味道了。
第六招：思维多元。
从近五年中考书面表达命题情况看，书面表达话题虽多元，但在设题上基本为半开放形式，因此半控制部分学生需要涵盖题目所给信息并进行适当发挥，而半开放部分，则要求学生根据话题内容、自己的生活阅历、个人思维层次结合自己的英语表述自己的个人看法。有些学生的英语水平比较好，但因为在思维上比较局限想不出比较有深度、宽度和广度的观点，这也会在一定程度上约束书面表达的质量。 第七招：整理独到。
进入八年级以来，在平时写作、单元练习、期中期末考试中，考生已积累了一定量与教材同话题的自己写的英语小短文，建议在临考前的最后阶段把自己八年级以来写的不同话题的文章进行修改，润色、整理、汇编成册，制作一本个性化私人定制的“书面表达秘籍”，以备中考前高效复习用，以不变应万变。
第八招：卷面美观。
1)不做涂改。需要在平时的书面表达中养成简列提纲、打草稿，再誊抄到答题卡的习惯。
2)及时补救。如果对答题卡上的书面表达有修改，建议用斜线划掉相应部分。
3)勤练规范。临考前一个月，以中考答题卡的行距和长度为参照，设计自己字的大小，字的间距，每行的字数，以看起来舒服为准。
中考英语作文套路与秘诀篇二
从2015英语一真题谈考研大作文的基本套路
从2015英语一真题谈考研大作文的基
本套路
亚里士多德在《诗论》中曾经写过这么一段话：There are, of course, five grounds on which a passage can be censured: it is impossible; it is irrational; it is immoral; it is inconsistentand it is technically at fault. 简而言之，其实就是老师傅为作文是否低劣，给出了五大评判标准：不可能、不合理、不道德、前后矛盾、技术有缺陷。 反映在考研作文的评分标准上，这五个标准同样适用。不少考生背的范文不少，但是得分不高，其中原因主要包括以下几点：1）走题、2）内容空洞、3）逻辑混乱、4. 搭配语法错误多。
要想搞定考研英语写作，说白了就是要解决这四大问题，喵哥（微博@鬼谷一喵）在这里就结合2015年最新的大作文真题，给各位2016的考研小猫们支支招。
在哥看来，这考研英语的作文，有点像古代的那种八股文，每一段写的东西都很模式化的，都很固定的，纵观这十好几年的真题，本质上其实就分为三种：
a）积极类，比如你我一起走南闯北，半瓶水等。
b）消极类的，比如旅行之余，温室花朵，养老足球赛。
c）中性类，文化火锅，网络的近与远等。
但是这三种模板的三段谋篇布局是一样一样的。描述图片+解释图片+我们该怎么办。有时候他会让你举一个人物的例子，这就更简单了，都是提前准备好的。别着急，后面都会说到，先说说这第一段。
第一段的话，80%的作文书，第一句准是as vividly+你看到图中的东西，都用烂了的！喵哥不用，喵哥的弟子就是与众不同。第一句怎么写，按下不表，哥先说第二句。这句一般大家会写，中文的意思是：这个东西对我们的生活产生深远的影响。
示例：
Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones, it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.（64 words）
第二段一般是要介绍这个PP的深远意义或者产生的原因，写三条。第二段一共五句话，第一句说这个主题意义，2~4句阐述意义或者解释原因，第五句一个总结搞定。 参考示例：
The symbolic meaning of the photo is the effect of the mobile phone on people’s way of life. Undoubtedly, the phone provides us with considerable convenience, making many things possible which are beyond our dreams. As a communication tool,
the phone makes us closer than ever before by providing immediate communication. What’s more, according to a recent statistic conducted by CASS, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the idea that mobile phone does exert such a profound effect on our life from 21% to 78%. （96words）
最后这个例子肯定是杜撰的，但是可以放心用，不仅所有话题均适用，毕竟只要有观点，就会有态度！就像网易说的，我们做的是有态度的新闻！而且7是人们最喜欢的数字，武当七侠，江南七怪，全真七子等，三七二十一，外加1%的误差，赞我！赞我！
第三段很简单了，基本上全是模板上去就行了，但是要华丽丽的模板，拒绝千篇一律的垃圾模板。对于积极类的，我们要怎么让他做得更好；消极类的，我们怎么改变这一现状。 总结起来！
全文如下：
Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones, it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.
The symbolic meaning of the photo is the effect of the mobile phone on people’s way of life. Undoubtedly, the phone provides us with considerable convenience, making many things possible which are beyond our dreams. As a communication tool, the phone makes us closer than ever before by providing immediate communication. What’s more, according to a recent statistic conducted by CASS, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the idea that mobile phone does exert such a profound effect on our life from 21% to 78%. Joint efforts are needed to ensure people to have face-to-face communication! I believe a harmonious relationship between friends is awaiting us if we set aside our mobile phones and enjoy the untouched meal!（193 words）
完毕！
这就是我对今年的考研作文进行的一个简单分析，欢迎各位来我的班级进行更加深入的学习。最后，往者不可谏，来者犹可追！嘱托15的考研党们一定要坚持战斗到底，祝愿2016的考研党来年好运！
虽然有突破口、也有规律可循，但这并不意味着我们可以一劳永逸、高枕无忧，要知道，想要精通世界上任何一门语言，除非有天生的语言天分，否则偷不得半分懒，只能勤勤恳恳反复练习。一遍不懂读两遍，默念不行就大声念出来，遇到不认识的单词就查，不懂的句子就静下心来拆分结构。总之，读书百遍、其义自现，英语学习之路上没有笨蛋，只有懒人。
综上就是小编给大家提供的高分技巧，技巧就是牢固的知识点和强悍的答题思路，预祝所有考生2016考研有个好成绩。
小提示：目前本科生就业市场竞争激烈，就业主体是研究生，在如今考研竞争日渐激烈的情况下，我们想要不在考研大军中变成分母，我们需要：早开始+好计划+正确的复习思路+好的辅导班（如果经济条件允许的情况下）。2017考研开始准备复习啦，早起的鸟儿有虫吃，一分耕耘一分收获。加油！
中考英语作文套路与秘诀篇三
高考英语作文套路和句型(本校绝密)
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第一部 套路
（一）
段首句
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?
（二）
中间段落句
1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.
2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.
3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
______is necessary and important to our country"s development and construction. First，______.What"s more, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______
5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，
Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______
6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.
7. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……
Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.
9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
10. 完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
（三）{中考英语作文套路与秘诀}.
结尾句
1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……{中考英语作文套路与秘诀}.
But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.
4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.
5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……{中考英语作文套路与秘诀}.
For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____.
7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……
In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______.
8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______.
9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.
10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……
If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.
第二部分
句型 (1).Accordingtoarecentsurvey，
fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾玻
2.Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。
3.NoinventionhasreceivedmorepraiseandabusethanInternet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
4.Peopleseemtofailtotakeintoaccountthefactthateducationdoesnotendwithgraduation.人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
5.Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethateducationisnotcompletewithgraduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。
6.Whenitcomestoeducation，
themajorityofpeoplebelievethateducationisalifetimestudy.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。
7.Manyexpertspointoutthatphysicalexercisecontributesdirectlytoaperson'sphysicalfitness.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。
8.Propermeasuresmustbetakentolimitthenumberofforeigntouristsandthegreateffortsshouldbemadetoprotectlocalenvironmentandhistoryfromtheharmfuleffectsofinternationaltourism.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。
9.Anincreasingnumberofexpertsbelievethatmigrantswillexertpositiveeffectsonconstructionofcity.However，
thisopinionisnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmorecityresidents，
whocomplainthatthemigrantshavebroughtmanyseriousproblemslikecrimeandprostitution.越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和卖淫。
10.Manycityresidentscomplainthatitissofewbusesintheircitythattheyhavetospendmuchmoretimewaitingforabus，
whichisusuallycrowdedwithalargenumberofpassengers.许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。
11.Thereisnodenyingthefactthatairpollutionisanextremelyseriousproblem：
thecityauthoritiesshouldtakestrongmeasurestodealwithit.无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。
12.Aninvestigationshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetowardretirement.一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。
12a.Aproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudents'toomuchtime.Infact，
itisunhealthyforthemtospendalloftimeontheirstudy.Asanoldsayinggoes：
AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时
中考英语作文套路与秘诀篇四
初中英语满分作文必备短语和句型
一.满分短语
1.打算做… / 计划做…{中考英语作文套路与秘诀}.
intend / plan to do 打算做… be going to do 打算做… decide to do 决定做… determine to do决定做… be determined to do决定做… make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做…
2.想.../希望...
want to do = would like to do 想做… hope to do 希望做… expect to do 期待着做… wish to do 希望做… consider doing 考虑做… look forward to doing 盼望做… dream of doing 梦想做…
can’t help doing 情不自禁地做…
3.表示喜欢和感兴趣 like / love doing喜欢做… enjoy doing喜欢做… be fond of doing 喜欢做… be keen on n/doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B be interested in n/doing对...感兴趣
show/ take interest in n / doing 对...产生兴趣
4.其它短语
keep on doing 坚持做…
keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做… be busy (in ) doing =be busy with + 名词 忙于做…
spend time / money (in )doing =spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做… have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 或 with + 名词 做…有困难
二.满分句型
1. It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说是…
2. … so … that …如此…以至于… … too … to do 太… 而不能… such … that … 如此… 以至于…
3. not…until… 直到…才…
例： I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back.
4.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
例：The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。
5. That is why + 句子 那是…的原因
6. That is because + 句子 那是因为…
7. It is said that + 句子 据说…
It is reported that + 句子 据报道…
8. There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问…
9. It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻/毫无疑问...
10. There is no need to do没必要做…
11. There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
12. You had better (not) do... 最好(不)做
13. How about / what about doing …怎么样?
14. I think you should do 我认为你应该…
15. I suggest that you （should） do 我建议你做…
16. If I were you, I would do…我要是你的话，我会做…{中考英语作文套路与秘诀}.
17. It’s best to do 最好做…
18. Why not do / why don’t you do…? 为什么不…
三.初中英语作文万能格式佳句
1. We ' re often told that ...But is this really the case ? 我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗?
2. People used to ...However , things are quite different today . 过去，人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。
3.some people think that ...Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that ......
一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到......
4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution . 认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。
5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face . 这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。
6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place . 简而言之，为了把世界变成更美好的地方，我们必须勤奋工作。
7.Lost time is never found again. 岁月既往，一去不回。
8.Everybody should have a dream. 每个人都该有个梦想.
9.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. 抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。
10.Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。
11.Let's look on the bright side. 让我们往好处想吧！
中考英语作文套路与秘诀篇五
英语写作套路
英语写作要点
一、开头段：思路：描绘现状→提出问题→提出论点（提出问题→不同看法→个人观点）；开篇方法：借助过渡词，谚语格言，调查，解释定义，提问
1、描绘现状：
（the increasing number of .）
（China ）has witnessed in the past few years.
During the last few years, there has been an enormous increase in the number of becoming increasingly popular in China, as evidenced by the number of (participants to)
Most people would agree that 2、提出问题：
In recent years The rising popularity of When people’s standard of living is on the upgrade continuously, many new problems loom ahead.Among others, I think, what is noticeable is Most agree that with the increase of population, the world is facing with more and more problems.The most severe one is
3、提观点
As far as I’is In this case, the argument for (strict regulation)is compelling
One way of improving the situation is for people to Hence I’d like to say that it is a significant matter to 开头段示例：The past few years has witnessed a rapid development of , as evidenced by the increasing number of .No doubt, this process of has brought about fundamental changes in (China).More and more people now can .However, with the development of comes a problem of immediately).
二、中间段（2~3个分论点）
1、常用论证方法：因果分析、影响（正反）分析、列举、例证（事例、数据）、假设、比较、反问、换说法、谚语格言等
因果：because(of), attribute, due to, for this reason
The reasons for this are as follows
影响：therefore, as a result, consequently,result in
come into being following it.
The situation of We must not forget, either,that
The increasing popularity of
In addition to they are proving to be an environmental nuisance.
举例：According to a recent survey,
2、常用过渡句：
To start(begin)with, Moreover, What is more
First of all(in the fist place),In addition,Last but not least
On the one hand, On the other hand
For one thing, For another
三、总结段：换另一表述重复论点→建议（因此。。。）或评论或展望
,which is the best way to
A possible solution to this problem is
Regulations ,such as are essential.
中考英语作文套路与秘诀篇六
2016中考英语作文详解
一、（2016•陕西）
假如你是李明，你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩．请根据提示语，给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写一封e﹣mail，邀请他一同前往．
要求：1．参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整．
3．文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4．词数：不少于70词．（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．）
提示语：feed animals
pick fruit and vegetables
make tea
learn to cook
play games
…
Dear David，
How are you recently？
Yours，
Li Ming．
【考点】提纲作文．
【分析】高分句型：
句型一：
Would you like to go with us？would like to do sth：想要做某事，不定式to后用动词原形，go with sb陪某人一起去．
句型二：
I'm looking forward to your reply．这是现在进行时态，表示正在进行的动作，结构是：
is/am/are+动词的现在分词．主语是I，因此be动词用am．look forward to…：期盼…"回信"通常用reply．
【解答】Dear David，
How are you recently？（问好）this weekend（说明时间），my parents and I are going to nearby village（说明目的）．Would you like to go with us？（发出邀请）【高分句型一】
In the morning．We can feed animals．Then，we plan to pick fruit and vegetables in the fields．（早上要做的事情）In the afternoon，we'll watch the villagers make tea．After that，we will learn to cook meals．（下午要做的事情）In the evening，we can play games or chat with the people
there．（晚上要做的事情）I'm sure we will have a good time．
I'm looking forward to your reply．（表达请求）【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Ming．
【点评】写信时需明确写作要点，注意信中人称和时态的使用，运用所给词汇完成写作，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，还要注意写作的格式，习惯的问候语等．
二、（2016•株洲）
假如你是李华，暑假将有来自英国的三十位同学来你校交流学习，你给英方负责人Mr．Cave写封电子邮件，申请派一位同学住到你家里．开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
邮件内容要求包括以下三个方面：
（1）简要描述一下你的家；
（2）你希望你想接待的同学是一个什么性格的人；
（3）你打算向这位同学介绍中国的什么．
注意：（1）70词左右；
（2）文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息．
Dear Mr．Cave，
I am very happy to have a student in my home．
There are three people in my family，and my parents are very friendly．Also，it is just takes 15
Yours sincerely．
Li Hua．
【考点】提纲作文．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，让我们按要求写一封电子邮件，邮件开头结尾已给出，现在需要补充正文内容，内容需从这三方面去写：简要描述一下你的家；你希望你想接待的同学是一个什么性格的人；你打算向这位同学介绍中国的什么这三方面去写，可作适当拓展；其次写作时要用一般现在时及第一人称．
重点短语和句型：
introduce sb．to sb．向某人介绍某人enjoy oneself 玩得开心、愉快look forward to 期望、盼望
It is just take 15 minutes'walk from my home to school．（It takes sb．…to do sth．）从我家步行到学校只要15分钟．
I am an outgoing boy who loves sports，especially basketball and football．（定语从句）我是一个性格外向、喜欢运动的男孩，特别喜欢打篮球和踢足球．
if he comes to my home，I will teach him Chinese，tell him some Chinese culture and introduce him to my friends．（if引导的条件状语从句）如果他来我家，我会教他中文，告诉他关于一些关于中国的文化，并把他介绍给我的朋友们．
【解答】There are three people in my family，and my parents are very friendly．Also，it is just takes 15 minutes'walk from my home to school．I am an outgoing boy who loves sports，especially basketball and football，so I hope he is the same as me．Therefore，we can share a lot of interesting things and play sports together．My spoken English is quite good，if he comes to my home，I will teach him Chinese，tell him some Chinese culture and introduce him to my friends．I am sure he will enjoy himself at my home．I am looking forward to your reply．
【点评】对于提纲作文，写作时应先仔细审题，确定好时态、人称，按照提纲内容去写，可作适当发挥．其次注意句子结构要完整，语法正确，表达时可多用一些高分型短语和句型，使文章表达更连贯、流畅．写完作文后，应认真检查修改，注意单词书写等细节问题．
三、（2016•无锡）
假设你是某校九年级（1）班的学生．你校英文俱乐部正在举行"Young Star Award"的评选活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参考，内容要点如下：
1．高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀；
2．乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善；
3．去年，他…；
4．已筹款一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学生；
5．得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣．
注意事项：
1．短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2．第3要点的内容须围绕主题，用2﹣3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3．词数在90个左右，短文的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4．短文内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上．
参考你词汇：慈善（charity）
【考点】提纲作文．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是介绍你的同学李明．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀；
2．乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善；
3．去年，他…；
4．已筹款一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学生；
5．得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣．
常用到的重点短语：
be good at 擅长
take part in 参加
get ready to do sth 准备好做某事
【高分句型】
句型一：
He is one of the top students in my class．
one of+the+最高级+名词复数：最高级的使用，表示最怎样的某某之一．
句型二：
Liming is very helpful，and he often takes an active part in different activities，especially in
charities．
takes an active part in：积极参加． especially in charities作为插入语．
【解答】Young Star Award
My classmate Liming is very tall，and he is good at football．He is one of the top students in my class．（高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀）【高分句型一】Liming is very helpful，and he often takes an active part in different activities，especially in charities．（乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善）【高分句型二】
Last year，he held a charity programme for children in poor areas．（去年句型了一次慈善活动）Since last year，he has raised more than 1，000 yuan．Now he gets ready to send the money to the children in poor areas．（已筹款一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学生）
His action has won high praise from our school．He is our pride．（得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣．）
【点评】考生在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意人称和时态的使用，做到句式灵活，表达流畅．
四、（2016•包头）
假设你是Li Hua，请你用英文给你校外教Jim发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
1．今天下午，你上体育课时伤了左脚，明天不能去上他的课．
2．邀请他参加下周的英语俱乐部活动．
时间：下周五下午4点
地点：初三一班
活动内容：用英文讨论粉吸计划，并希望他能给同学们一些如何提高英语的建议．
3．如果有问题，可以打电话或发电子邮件联系．
注意：
1．文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名．
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
3．词数70﹣110，开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
I'm Li Hua，one of the students in your spoken English classYours．
Li Hua．
【考点】提纲作文．
【分析】此作文要求写一封信．通过阅读材料可知这篇作文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，题中包含了这些要点：①今天下午，你上体育课时伤了左脚，明天不能去上他的课；②邀请他参加下周的英语俱乐部活动；③如果有问题，可以打电话或发电子邮件联系．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．
高分句型一：
The reason why I ask for leave is that I hurt my left foot in the P．E．class this afternoon我请假的原因是今天下午的体育课上伤了左脚．这是Why引导的定语从句，先行词是reason，后面的that I hurt my left foot in the P．E．class this afternoon是that引导的表语从句．
高分句型二：
And we'll be very glad if you can give us some advice on how to improve our English如果你能给我们一些关于如何提高我们的英语的建议，我们将非常高兴．这是一个if引导的条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时．
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm Li Hua，one of the students in your spoken English class．I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to your class tomorrow．The reason why I ask for leave is that I hurt my left foot in the
P．E．class this afternoon【高分句型一，注意定语从句的使用】．【要点一】
Besides，I'd like to invite you to join in the activity in our English club next Friday．It'll start at 4 p．m．in Class1，Grade 3．We'll talk about the plan for the coming summer vacation in
English．And we'll be very glad if you can give us some advice on how to improve our
English．【高分句型二，if引导的条件状语从句】【要点二】Call me or send me an email if you have any questions．【要点三】
I'm looking forward to your early reply．