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2015中考作文整理(一)
28中2015中考英语作文整理(一)
一.典例剖析
A. A happy time
B. Let me tell you _______
要求:
1. 请从所给的A,B两个题目中任选其一作答,分值相同。如选B题,请把题目补充完整再作答,例如:你可以写“Let me tell you my dream”, “Let me tell you how to learn English”, “Let me tell you I love you, Mom”等
2. 注意紧扣主题,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范。
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名,如需使用名字,请用Mike, Gina等英文名字,校名统一用Guangming Middle School。
4. 词数不少于60。
【审题指导】
细读所给的文字提示,提取信息:1. 把题目补充完整,Let me tell you how to learn English; 2. 可以为说明文,也可以用具体事例来写成记叙文; 3. 注意写作时的前后顺序,使文章连贯; 4. 词数不少于60词,不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】
Let me tell you how to learn English
In our life, English is getting more and more important. But many people don’t know how to learn it. Now let me tell you some ideas to learn it.
If you want to use English well, first you should remember English words. Then youcan listen to English songs to improve your listening skills, and you can also talk with your classmates in English in order to improve your spoken English. If you do like this, maybe you’ll find your English is getting better.
If you have good ideas to learn English well, please tell me.
二.典例剖析
I Am Not a Child Any More
提示:在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是„„成长的点点滴滴,久久不能忘记。请以“I Am Not a Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事,表明你已不再是一个小孩了。
要求: 1. 请根据所给的题目,用英语写一篇短文。词数不少于60;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
【审题指导】
1. 对自己的现在和过去做比较,以此说明自己已经长大;
2. 写出自己在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事情,通过事例来证明自己的观点;
3. 作总结,再次突出主题;
4. 词数不少于60;文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
【高分范文】
I Am Not a Child Any More
I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, though it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired. I got hot water for them. When my mother put herfeet into the water, with tears in her eyes she said, “Dear, you have grown up.”
It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.
三.典例剖析
假设你叫王磊,目前,我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”,学校也提出了“垃圾不落地,校园更美丽”的口号,为了积极响应学校号召,上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动,贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。 Place: train station;
Time: from 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday morning;
People: you and some classmates;
Activities: clean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the ground; Feelings: a little tired but happy.
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:1. 文章为电子邮件,要求向朋友讲述在响应“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地,校园更美丽”的活动中,我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动(包括时间、地点、人物、 活动、感受)。2. 本文描述自己的经历,写作时用第一人称,其他人用第三人称。3. 回忆事件通常用一般过去
时,抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。语句通顺,书写规范,卷面整洁,语法正确。4.词数应不少于60词,不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】
Bob,
I’m writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. We got the train station at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier. First, we cleaned the benches, andthen we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left.
We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. Ihope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city.
Hope to write soon. Best wishes!
Yours, Wang Lei
四.典例剖析
A Talk to Myself
提示:在初中三年的学习和生活中,你有许多快乐,也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际,你想对自己说点什么呢?请根据所给题目用英语写一篇短文。
要求: 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数 不少于60个;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
【审题指导】
1. 写作的对象是“我自己”,行文用第一人称。2. 从①三年中的快乐;②三年中的遗憾;③对自己说的话及对未来生活的希望三个方面陈述。
3. 陈述“我”在学习生活中的快乐和遗憾时,用一般现在时态;如果表达对未来充满希望,则用一般将来时态。4. 短文应包括提示的全部信息:初中三年学习和生活中的快乐和遗憾;在毕业之际,要给自己说的话。5. 词数不少于60词,不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】
A Talk to Myself
How time flies! I’m leaving school soon. I really have a lot to talk to myself.
Luckily, my teachers are very friendly. They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man. And my classmates are helpful. We share happiness andsadness in our school life.
However, I’m also upset sometimes. I don’t take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework. I know it’s not good for me. I’ll try my best to join in more.
I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.
五.典例分析
许多孩子都热衷于上网,但上网对学生而言有利有弊。请你根据下表提供的信息用英语写一篇小短文,描述上网的优点和缺点,谈谈
1.词数:80左右。
2.参考词汇:disadvantage n. 缺点 cheat v. 欺骗 go online上网
Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题思路】
1.谋篇布局:通过对表格的分析可知文章可以分两部分来作。一部分写上网的优点和缺点,另一部分写自己的看法和做法;
2.时态:一般现在时;
3.人称:第一人称(表达自己的观点)。
Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are: getting a lot of information quickly, a useful learning tool and making friends (结合要点:
具体说明网络的优点). The disadvantages are: playing games and chatting can waste time and money, so it isn't good for our study (结合要点:具体说明网络的缺点). You may be cheated when you go online (when引导的时间状语从句).
I think (过渡自然,行文流畅) going online (动名词短语作主语) is good for me. I plan to go online for an hour every day (结合要点:写自己的做法). If you make a plan (if引导的条件状语从句), you can find it very useful. We use it to open the field of vision, to study knowledge, but(转折词的使用,使行文跌宕起伏) must certainly grasp the discretion(自行决定权).
六.典例分析
为了增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
注意:
1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥;
2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
3.词数80左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: be careful, on line, danger, call„for, go bad
How to keep safe?
As teenagers,we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First,__________________________________________________________
【审题思路】
1.明确主题:本文根据图片内容就“如何保持安全”这一话题进行阐述;2.写作要点:(1) 慎重交友;(2)遇险报警;(3) 安全饮食;(4)34
中考作文
中考结束后,你将怎样度过一个有意义的暑假。请用英语写一篇文章给你自
己及小伙伴们一些好的建议。内容必须包括以下要点:
1. 亲访友和家人一起共度美好时光。
2. 和好朋友一起看电影,听音乐……
3. 假期我们应该加强体育锻炼,增强体质。
4. 你还有什么别的建议(至少两条),
参考词汇:It is necessary to…, relatives, spend with, take exercise,
first….second…..third…..finally….
词数80-100。标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam{中考作文alucky}.
How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam
It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam.There are kinds of activities for us to take part in.
First we can visit our friends and relatives or spend happy time with our family.Second,seeing a film,listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful.Third,we should take more exercise to keep healthy.What's more,we had better review what we have learned in middle school.Finally,it is necessary for us to do some housework,which can help our parents a lot.
Above all,I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.
英语中考作文范文
一.低碳生活 现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即:降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处,请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。 提示词语:be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.
Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.
So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.
二.现在越来越多的人在网上购物,网购已 成为流行趋势,二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点,请参考下面的信息,并结合就的观点些一短文,谈谈你的看法。 1. 方便,可以在家买东西,不受时间限制。 2. 有很大的商品信息,可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。 3. 买货容易退货难;实物和图片有差距。 4.网络支付不安全。 提示词:实物:material object
Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of
shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shop are open 24 hours a day.
It is often to buy goods(商品) and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop . Besides, it’s cheaper . But “ Every coin has two sides.” So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects(实物) or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back.
What’s more , It’s not safe to pay through the internet.
三。目前,学生考试作弊现象严重,请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。 原因:1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴 看法与建议:1、作弊有害;2、要做人诚实,学习发奋;3、学校应减少考试。 参考作文:
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations.
There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of them are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest , and in this way we can improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.
四.许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; ●我的压力是什么; ●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That’s all. Thank you!
五.毕业感想 初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。 提示词供参考。three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
七.【网络交友】人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。 赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法 1.广交朋友 1.浪费时间 ? 2.可自由表达思想 2.影响学习 3.有利于外语学习 3.可能上当受骗
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can express their feelings more freely and even get How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am willing to share my happiness and sadness with you.{中考作文alucky}.
I had so many memories in three years’ life. I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.
I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I will try to help others when they are in trouble.
六.How to Survive(幸存,逃生) an Earthquake
If earthquake happened, firstly, calm down. Secondly, find some safe place to stay and don’t run in such a hurry. If in the room, one should hide himself/herself under something hard, such as desk, table or even bed and keep away from shelf and cupboard,and never take a lift to go downstairs. If in the open air, find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside. Thirdly, we should help each other when we meet trouble. At last, no matter how strong the earthquake is, if we never give up, we must be able to come over(克服) any difficulties.
help with their foreign language studies.
However, others say making friends on line is a waste of time, they should spent more time on study. Besides, some students may be cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can find it in our classmates and other people around us.
八。【手机利弊】关于学生使用手机的利弊
赞成意见:1.有手机很方便联系家人。2.可以在每天学习之余利用手机听歌放松一下自己。 反对意见:1.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。 2.学生们玩游戏或接发短信太频繁,而且花费较多。 3.学校以提供了公共电话(),因此手机并不能带来更多的方便。 要求:1.可适当增加内容。2.次数80-100词,标题已给出。
There are more and more people use mobile phone in the world. Many school students begin to use them as well. There are many advantages and disadvantages of this. For example, middle school students can use mobile phones to keep in touch with their parents easily. Middle school students can use their mobile phones to listen to some soft music to relax after hard work.
But it is not good for a student to use a mobile phone in class. If a mobile phone ring in the class,the teacher and students would be disturbed. Many students often use mobile phone to play games or send and receive messages. That will cost them much money.And many schools offer many public phones. So I think school students are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school.
九“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息,用英语总结出讨论情况。 70%的学生 应该每天进行体育锻炼,但不要时间过长 锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳 锻炼能增强体质,保持健康 30%的学生 锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习
锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好 锻炼中可能会受伤 Dear classmates:
I’m Li Hua. After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of 十一。现在社会普遍对90后有不同程度的误解,认为他们自私、无礼……那么作为一名90后学生,你又是怎么看待这个问题的呢?请结合你自己和周围同学的表现,分别列举至少三条优点和两条不足之处进行描述。
As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy. Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.(有效的)
On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time. They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.
十假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示,给Mike 写一封e-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
内容提示:1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)< Dear Mike,
How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days。
Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala(春晚) on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks(放鞭炮) to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck. How happy we are。
Best wishes! Yours, Liu Wei
energetic. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class. Besides we always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways. Sometimes we are a little over confident. These problems may make us seem impolite.
十二。最近,你们班就“幸福是什么”进行了一次讨论,学生们发表了自己的看法,他们认为:1. 认真学习是幸福,父母总是关心他们的生活与健康,是幸福2. 有时当他们做错了事,周围的人会帮助他们改正,他们感到幸福。3. 你同意同学们的看法,你认为当你做……你也会感到幸福。要求:①第三要点的内容需用三到四句话展开合理想象,进行适当发挥;②词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy.
Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness.
I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind to others, like congratulate them, I feel happy, too.When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.
十五。2013年1月上旬,全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾,陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成
十三。题目:请以“Everyone Needs Help”为题,写一篇不少于80单词的作文。
这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示,以“Let’s
1.Did you get any help from others? 2 Did you give any help to people when they needed? Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
3 Tell your story
Everyone Needs Help
In our daily life, we are dealing with different kinds of people, no matter at home, at
school, or in some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.
One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily. Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was very warm-heart.
十四。How to keep healthy (怎样保持健康)
We’re so busy every day that we don’t pay much attention to our health. But we can't study or work well without healthy body. I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. Now I’d like to give you some suggestions.
First of all, you should keep taking exercises every day. It is said that walking is the best sport that everybody can do. Why not walk to school instead of taking a bus if your home is not far from your school. It’s good for your health. Second, it’s also necessary to have a healthy diet. You’d better eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. They are good for your health. You should drink a lot of water instead of coke . What’s more, a healthy lifestyle can help us grow up healthily. For example,you should get enough sleep during the night. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Don’t stay up too late, it’s bad for our health. Finally, we also need friendship. You should try to get along well with people .I hope what I said can help you. I’m looking forward to receiving your good news soon.
1.重要性:只有一个地球;2.主要问题:污染、疾病、灾难 3.措施:停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇:disaster n.灾难 protect v. 保护
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
We all live in the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we harm it, it will be angry. And then we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.
It’s our duty to protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution. We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.
Protecting the nature is very important. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.
(十六)目前,许多学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文,对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。要求80个词左右。
At present many students don’t do any reading after class. Here are several reasons.
Firstly, a lot of students have too much homework so they have little time for reading. Secondly, many students don’t have the habit of reading. Thirdly, some students spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, it’s good for us to read. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can also help us think better and make our life more colorful.
In my opinion, teachers should give students more time to read. And students can join a reading club to read more.
中考作文
你认为什么样的礼物才有意义?请以”Birthday Gift”为题写一篇短文,讲述你认为最有意义的一次送生日礼物的经历。词数80左右。
例:I don’t think expensive presents are always needed.Some presents are never too small.Sometimes,cheap presents can also make people happy.I have s best friend named Wang Yan.Her family is very poor.And her mother is ill in bed.So on her birthday,I sent her a special gift.I went to her house and helped her clean the rooms and look after her mother.She was very happy that day.And Ifelt very happy ,too.This is the best present,I think,isn’
t it?
请你根据下面提供的信息用英语为刘公岛写一篇题为Welcome to Liu Gong Island 的旅游宣传材料。要点:
刘公岛概况:威海东部,距陆地船程20分钟,花草树木覆盖,历史博物馆,动物园等景点,水,陆环岛游等活动。
交通方式:(来威海)汽车,火车,飞机等,交通便利。
游览时间:一天。
要求:1.尽量包括以上要点,但不拘泥于其通顺,适当使用描述性语言,展示刘公岛的魅力。
2.词数100左右(已给出的开头,结尾不计入总数)。
Welcome to Liu Gong Island
The summer vacation is coming.Where would you like to go?Haven’t you decide?
Come to Liu Gong Island!
Wish you a good trip!
例:
Welcome to Liu Gong Island
The summer vacation is coming.Where would you like to go?Haven’t you decide?How about Liu Gong Island?
Liu Gong Island is in the east of Weihai.It will take you 20 minutes to get to the island from the travel port by ship.The history museum on the island is open to public.The zoo is interesting to visit.And it is more interesting to travel around the island either on land or by boat.There are all kinds of trees and grass everywhere.It’s very easy to travel to Weihai.You can come by bus,by train,or by plane.You can have a wonderful time on the island.It is a good place to visit.Visitors from all over the world come to visit it every year.
Come to Liu Gong Island!
Wish you a good trip!
假如你是Carol,昨天你参加了朋友Vera在家里举行的生日聚会,请根据提示给她写一封感谢信。词数80左右。
提示:1.Vera 的父母及朋友很友好;
2.蛋糕很好吃,饭菜可口;
3.影碟和好看,你很喜欢。{中考作文alucky}.
例:
Dear Vera,
Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party。I really enjoyed meeting your family as well as your friends.Your parents are so kind.The cake that your father bought was delicious,and The dishes that your mother made were delicious,too.I didn’t know any of your friends,but they were all friendly to me and the video you showed was quiet wonderful.I liked it very much.I think I had a great time at your party.
Carol
回想你的英语学习历程,丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多美好的回忆。请你以”What should we do in English class?”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈在英语课上学生应该怎样才能使英语学习更有效。
提示:1.Listen to the teacher.
2.Take part in activities.
3.Be confident in ourselves.
要求:1.文章须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.文章中不得出现真实的人名,地名和校名。
3.词数:60-80.文章的标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:take notes,work in group with...,never be afraid of...
What should we do in English class?
例:
What should we do in English class?
In English class,we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary.Try to answer questions in English.
We should take part in all kinds of activities,like reading,writing,having discussions and playing games.We need to work in groups with our classmates to learn from each other.
It’s very important to be confident in ourselves.Speak English loudly in front of the class and
never be afraid of making mistakes.In this way,we can make great progress.
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友吉姆对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封100词左右的电子邮件,介绍一下中国的传统节日----春节的情况。
要求:1.所给词不计入总词数。
2.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯。
参考词汇:decorate装饰
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to tell you something about the Chinese Spring Festival.
Yours,
Li Hua.
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to tell you something about the Chinese Spring Festival.It’s a traditional festival in China.It comes in winter.
It’s time to get new.We usually clean and decorate our house carefully before it comes.I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes.We put on chunlian on the door and chuanghua on the window.
It’s time to get together.Everyone goes home to get together with their families,though someone is far away from home.They must have dinner together on that day.They usually visit their relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them.When the kids greet their grandparents,they can get gift money.
Yours,
Li Hua
初中的生活即将结束了。请你以“How I Change”为题,写一篇短文,描述你这三年里前后的变化。写作要点包括外貌,兴趣爱好,行为习惯等方面。
写作要求:1.词数在80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数),
2.短文中不能出现校名和人名,否则不得分
3.所给的写作要点必须用上,紧扣主题,适当发挥。{中考作文alucky}.
How I Change
How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years.I was fat and short when I came to the middle school.At that time,I was interested in computer games and I spent most of the time on it.My parents were worried about me.
Now,I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school.So I become taller and stronger than before.I like reading ,too.I usually go to the library to read some interesting books.Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.My parents and my teacher are both pleased with me.
My Dream 中考作文六篇
My Dream 中考作文六篇
My Dream (1)
Different people have different dreams. So do I.
I do want to be a teacher when I grow up because I am outgoing and I like kids very much. I am also interested in reading and I like helping others. If I am a teacher, I will help my students learn more knowledge and grow up happily. I hope I am not only their teacher, but also their good friend.
To achieve my dream, I am going to study hard first, then I am going to study in a university to learn education and other subjects, such as English, geography and so on. Finally, I’m going to find a job as an English teacher.
I’m sure my dream will come true one day. I believe I can be an excellent teacher with my effort in the future. My Dream (2)
Everyone keeps a dream. Some hope to be a doctor to relieve pain; others think about travelling around the world.
My dream is to be a lawyer, for I’m an outgoing girl who cares about right and wrong. I like debating on interesting topics and have a sense of achievement if I persuade others.
To realize my dream, I’m going to study some relevant subjects really hard. Besides, I’m going to take selective courses to get familiar with basic laws, reading more books on law as well. After that, I’m going to major in law at college. Then, I will set up my own law firm to offer help to the poor in the future.
Although the dream cannot be touched, I indeed get stimulation from it. I do believe if the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
My Dream (3)
Some people think that being a writer is boring, but I don’t think so. I love both reading and writing so much that I made up my mind to be a writer when I was a little girl. I think writing is not only interesting but also meaningful.
To make my dream come true, I will take writing lessons in a college to improve my writing skills. Besides, I’m going to write as many articles as I can and send them to magazines. What’s more, I plan to go abroad to see different people and new things. Finally, I will come back to China and write a variety of books for different kinds of people. I hope my books can be not only interesting but also moving to make people find out how beautiful this world is. I know the road to my dream is full of challenges, but no matter what happens, I won’t give up my dream. I always believe my dream will come true one day!
My Dream (4)
My dream is to become a lawyer in the future. It’s such an interesting job that it can not
only broaden my perspective but also improve my speaking skills. I’m interested in communicating and I’m outgoing, so it’s a good choice for me.
How an I going to do that? First, I’m going to study hard especially the subject about law. After graduating, I’m going to study at a lawyer office to learn more skills in order to become a successful lawyer. Then, I will work hard for my own lawyer office. By the way, I’m going to improve speaking and communicating so that I can receive brilliant skills which can be used not only in my work but also in my life. At last, I plan to travel all over the world to experience something fantastic and continue to study.
I know there will be difficulties and challenges waiting for me in the future, but I will never give up trying to realize my dream.
My Dream (5)
When I grow up, I want to do what I want to do. In my opinion, I will be an art teacher in a middle school because I like drawing pictures. I’m an outgoing girl, and I want to teach others, so I think I will be a good teacher.
I should learn something about art first. I decide to learn art in a university and then find a job. Then, I must know to be a good teacher so that I can teach my students professional art knowledge. Finally, I will learn some other things about it.
When I retire, I will travel all over the world. I think England is a beautiful country, so I want to stay there for a long time.{中考作文alucky}.
My Dream (6)
People all have their own dreams and so do I.
I’m an outgoing girl and have the hobbies of painting and reading books. I’d like to show others my pictures and tell them what I think about a new book. I’m also very hardworking so I’m willing to be a teacher. Sincerely, being with people sounds interesting. I’m fond of teaching others and spending time with kids. When I stand in the front of the classroom, I can always have the feeling that I’m the teacher. To be a good teacher in the future, I should do something to make my dream come true. I should be tactful and fair all the time as it’s easy to hurt someone’s heart if you are too strict.
I’m convinced that I can be helpful and warm-hearted since I really enjoy helping the ones in difficulties.
In this case, my dream is coming towards to me with no doubt.
中考作文分析
作文分析
作文题要么大俗,要么大雅。避免假大空,具有新颖性、真实性、朴实性(学生在不同的平台上有话说)。
(2016扬州)香,有花草之香、书墨之香、品德之香„„留住香气,留下香气,濡染自我,感染他人,有益社会。
请以“留香”为题,写一篇文章。
22 .(2015扬州)生活中的趣味,有些是从苦中得来的。比如,苦涩的“柳叶儿”为作者宋学孟的童年抹上了一丝亮色,艰苦的历险将汤姆·索亚带进了神秘新世界,风雪苦读让宋濂体验到求知的兴味„„
请结合自己在生活中的体验、感悟,以“苦趣”为题,写一篇文章。
低分分析
《走出来,真好》
出错现象:前面大段写自己的失败、困惑、苦恼或者所走过的弯路,甚至占三分之二,甚至六分之五的篇幅,到最后写自己的领悟,或者受他人启发,终于从上述的失败、困惑、苦恼中走了出来。
切题分析:如果是考场作文,肯定判为不及格,其原因是:既没有详细写怎么从失败、困惑、苦恼中走出来,即没有写走出来的详细经过;也没有将中心落点到“真好”关键字上。文中只是提到“真好”两个字,至于究竟好在何处,不得而知。
《走出来,真好》
写作技法
一、词造句只有注意字斟句酌,才能准确地表达思想感情。
下面我们举几组句子作为例子:
例1:①一头动物拉着一车植物。
②一匹马拉着一车麦子。
③一匹白色的老马拉着一车金黄色的麦子。
④一匹白色的老马像一个弯腰弓背、骨瘦如柴的老人,低着头,艰辛地拉着一车金黄色的沉甸甸的麦子,在夕阳的余晖中一步一步走向前方。
将这组句子比较一下,我们就可以看出它们是由模糊到清晰,由笼统到具体,由客观陈述到在陈述、描写中强烈地抒发主观感情。如果在作文中能写出像第④句那样的句子,作文就容易做到文情并茂,使人受到感染。
二、语句升格
1.原句:时间过得很快。
改句:时光飞逝,把我们抛在身后,红了樱桃,绿了芭蕉。(引用)
2.原句:我要两个菜馅包子。
改句:我要两包子,菜馅的,两个哦!(短句)
3.原句:老师,应倾听学生的声音。
改句:老师,应聆听学生的心跳。或:老师,应聆听花开的声音。(比喻、含蓄)
三、语句扩展
一般可以用以下三种扩展方法:①加修饰成分;②加修辞手法;③加表现手法。 例如:我笑了。
扩展一:她含着泪笑了。
扩展二:她含着泪笑了,像一朵带露的玫瑰,像一弯钻出云雾的月牙。
扩展三:她含着泪笑了,像一朵带露的玫瑰,像一弯钻出云雾的月牙。花儿因她的笑变得更加灿烂,月儿因她的笑变得更加娇媚。
怎么将一件事写得一波三折、跌宕起伏、扣人心弦呢?我们就要巧用矛盾,曲折叙事。 母亲的心
①熬过六岁那年漫长的严冬,我终于从一场大病中清醒了过来。
②春日的阳光映着窗外的夹竹桃,投下斑驳的树影,母亲却明显地憔悴了,瘦弱的样子差点让我不敢认,但她的精神状态却很好,仿佛拣回了珍贵的珠宝一般小心地守护着我。 ③久病初愈的我没胃口,家人总会变着法子哄我吃饭。那一天,我告诉母亲,很想吃螃蟹,却让家人犯了难:在物质条件极差的偏远山村,怎么可能买得到螃蟹呢!
④好在爱子心切的母亲自有她的法子,她很快拎着竹篓出去了。我们村子外面有很多纵横交错的溪流,六月天若翻开小溪里一块块大石头,可以找得到螃蟹。可是,在溪水还寒冽的春天,螃蟹躲在岩洞里是翻不到的。⑤母亲不死心,沿着溪流一路上行,在一块块或大或小的石头下面翻找着。春天的溪水冰凉彻骨,却冻不住她心里涌动的希望。
⑥或许上天也怜惜母亲那深切的舐犊之情吧,在母亲双手肿胀发抖,几近绝望的时候,她终于发现了一只个头肥大的螃蟹,正在一块大石头下面迟缓地爬动着。
⑦母亲的惊喜可想而知,她赶忙迅捷地双手捞起了螃蟹,可是望着手里那只惶惑无措的螃蟹,母亲的手却止不住颤抖!因为那是一只母蟹,它鼓鼓的肚皮底下正围着无数只细如蚊子的小蟹,有的还爬到了母亲的手背上„„
⑧母亲思