为家长减负高考作文

为家长减负高考作文篇一

高考作文

高考作文——自然灾害和自然保护

【2011·福建高考】

为纪念汶川大地震三周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提

示，以“Great Changes”为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下：

1.某中学灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等；

2.发生变化的原因；

3.你的感想。

Great Changes

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past

three years. ________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Great Changes

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past

three years.

As we know, Wenchuan and other counties in Sichuan Province were hit by a severe

earthquake on May 12, 2008. Most schools, including our school, were damaged completely.

However, if you go into our school today, you may be amazed at what you are seeing. Many tall and

strong buildings, such as classrooms and laboratory buildings, a big library, have been put up. There

is also a newly-built standard playground. In the beautiful campus, teachers and students are living

happily and working hard. There are smiles on everyone’s face. Our school is taking on a new look,

full of life! How does it take place in such a short time?

Obviously, all is owed to our party, our motherland and the whole warm-hearted people all

over the world. Without their help, there would be no new and beautiful school today. The

government took immediate measures and appropriated large amount of money for us. Most kind

people donated their money and things to us. Of course, our local people helped each other and

united as a big family. Thus we work wonders. So unity is strength. Love can move everything!

高考作文——环境

【2012·福建高考】

假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者,以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英

语短文投稿。

内容要求:

1.描述漫画内容;

2.发表个人感想。

注意:

1.短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数；

2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯；

3.词数120左右；

4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇:告示牌sign

Mind Your Behavior in Public Places

Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.

【参考范文】

Mind Your Behavior in Public Places

Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What’s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame!

Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.

【2011·浙江高考】

假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100～120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：1.说明写信目的；

2.对这些行为进行批评；3.提出建议。

June 8, 2011

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Yue, a student from Class 1, SeniorⅡ. __________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

【参考范文】

June 8, 2011

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It

is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

【2011·湖南高考】

假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：

1. 简要描述下图内容，并点明主题；

2. 联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。

【参考范文】

One drop of water is easily disappeared, while the sea will never dry up; billions of drops form a river, and all the rivers run into sea. One tree cannot stop the fierce sand storm or conserve water and soil, but the forest is composed of millions of trees, which can give creatures a home. One person’s ability is limited, but human society has endless wisdom. And the masses have great creative power. In a word, unity is strength.

The picture is simple but very instructive. It tells us a truth that society consists of individuals and individuals live in society. We are a huge family. Just as a proverb goes, “united we stand, divided we fall.” Therefore, we should work together harmoniously and try our best to make a contribution to human society.

高考作文——现代科技

【2010安徽高考】

假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?”为题，写一篇英语短文。

注意：1.字数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.

However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there’re too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.

As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.

高考作文——热点

【2012·重庆高考】

某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在,你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换(exchange)。请你用英文在该网站上发帖,发布物品交换信息。内容应包括:

·你将拿出什么物品进行交换 ·具体介绍该物品

·你希望换回什么物品·请愿意交换的朋友给你留言

【参考范文】

I have a collection of English-Chinese bilingual readings—the Bookworm Series V, which is suitable for the students in Senior 2 or Senior 3. It is made up of six world-famous novels and with it is an MP3 CD which can provide you with excellent pronunciation. I have greatly improved my English by reading and listening. Besides, I am a book-lover and the books are so well kept that they are as good as new.

Now I’m graduating from senior high school and the book is not fit for me, so I want to exchange it for a Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English which I think will be good for my college study. I don’t care whether it is new or not as long as it is intact.

If anyone wants to exchange, leave message here, please.

【2011·江苏高考】

下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你

对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容：

1. 描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；

2. 结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；

3. 举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

注意：

1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想．．．．．．．．

象。

2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

【参考范文】

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.

The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother’s daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a

good

daughter than a “good” student.

高考作文——个人信息

【2012•全国卷I】

假定你是李华,从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);

2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);

Dear Sir or Madam,{为家长减负高考作文}.

Regards,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Li Hua

【2012·江西高考】

某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动,你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文:

1.你为什么喜欢读书;

2.你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如:历史、科学、文学等)?请给出至少两个理由。

。

【参考范文】

I Like Reading

Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. As we know, books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal from reading.

There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like history books, science books, literary books and so on. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those by famous writers. For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?

【2011·辽宁高考】

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：1.年龄；2.学习情况及英语水平；3.兴趣和特长；4.性格特点。

June 8

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. __

为家长减负高考作文篇二

江苏高考英语满分作文

2007-2015江苏高考英语满分作文

2007年江苏高考英语满分作文

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时· 健康工作五十年· 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1.发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2.词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.参考词汇：阳光体育活动—a national student sports program;

教育部—the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

Thank you!

参考范文：

Good afternoon, everyone,

On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students fromprimary,middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sportsprogram. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program.

The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hope thatthey will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.

Personally,I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although wetake an hour a day for exercise,it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our bodyand keep a clear mind. Therefore,we can work more efficiently.

Thank you!

2008年江苏高考英语满分作文

实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。

为何倾听 表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系

谁来倾听 家长倾听孩子 理解孩子，消除代沟，……

老师倾听学生 了解学生，满足需求，……

同学相互倾听 增进友谊，互帮互学，……

怎样倾听 （请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）

注意：1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”...........

Thank you for your listening!

参考范文：

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect,promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they willunderstand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listenmore to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a goodrelationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they willhelp and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respectand never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silenceor a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In aword, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. (151)

Thank you for your listening!

2009年江苏卷高考英语满分作文

【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……

鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……

收发邮件，选购商品……

点播音乐，下载电影……

如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)

注意：

1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

81.假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇

注意：

1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。

3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you.

Thank you for listening.

Dear teacher and schoolmates, It’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you. I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally. it’s very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricking a building .I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio .Besides ,I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned ln order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening. (150words)

81.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片

的理解用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容：

描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的

感想；3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

注意：

可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。

词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children.

2012年江苏高考英语满分作文

2012 第五部分: 书面表达(满分25 分)

81. 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请 你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens冶专栏投稿。{为家长减负高考作文}.

注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。 2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started

shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.

To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and

stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.

Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.

2013年江苏高考英语满分作文

2013 第五部分: 书面表达(满分25 分)

81. 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以 “Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。

参考词汇：

banner (横幅)

stump (树桩)

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；

2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；

3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。

注意：

1. 可参照图片适当发挥；

2. 作文词数 150 左右；

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Actions Speak Louder than Words

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Actions Speak Louder than Words

People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.

The message conveyed here is clear: “ Actions speak louder than words.冶 Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer

为家长减负高考作文篇三

学生减负家长问卷调查表

新源县则克台镇中小学生减负问卷调查表 学生姓名： 班级：

1.中午家庭作业你需要做多长时间（单选）？ （ ） ①没有 ②半小时 ③一小时 ④一小时以上

2.你们晚上家庭作业需要做多长时间（单选）？ （ ） ①半小时 ②一小时 ③无 ④一个半小时以上

3.哪几个学科的晚上作业最多（多选）？ （ ） ①语文 ②数学 ③英语 ④科学 ⑤音乐

⑥体育 ⑦计算机 ⑧美术 ⑨品德

4.你们老师有没有占用“两操一活动”时间讲课或做作业现象（单选）？（ ）

①有 ②偶尔有 ③没有

5.学校存在下面哪些收费现象（多选）？ （ ） ①教辅资料费 ②补课费 ③试卷费 ④订报费

⑤教材费 ⑥作业本费 ⑦校服费 ⑧保险费 ⑨存车费 ⑩无

6.你孩子晚上的家庭作业需要做到几点（单选）？（ ） ①八点 ②九点 ③十点 ④无家庭作业

7.你们老师有没有按时上下学（单选）？（ ） ①有 ②偶尔有 ③没有

8.你们老师有没有让你参加他的补课班？（ ）

②偶尔有 ③没有

为家长减负高考作文篇四

2010-2013年江苏高考英语作文

2010 第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）

81.假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用

注意：

1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。{为家长减负高考作文}.

3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my

Thank you for listening.

第五部分

8l. Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my

experience of learning English with you.I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally lt’s very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows

vocabular is an important part of language, just like bricksin a building .I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio .Besides ,I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned ln order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally，1 suggest we have{为家长减负高考作文}.

more Endish activities，such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening. (150words)

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81.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照

片的理解用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容：

1. 描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈

你的感想；3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

注意：

1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。 ．．．．．．．．

2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children.

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81. 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请 你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens冶专栏投稿。

注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.

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81.{为家长减负高考作文}.

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

To be honest, it was Su爷s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.

To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and

stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’place.

Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.

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81. 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以 “Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。

参考词汇：

banner (横幅)

stump (树桩)

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；

2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；

3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。

注意：

1. 可参照图片适当发挥；

2. 作文词数 150 左右；

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Actions Speak Louder than Words

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Actions Speak Louder than Words

People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.

The message conveyed here is clear: “ Actions speak louder than words.冶 Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.

Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.

为家长减负高考作文篇五

减负作文

“减负”后感

现在的学生负担太大了！甚至连我都玩不了（liao）了（le）。我们本来应该有很好的学习时间和玩耍时间。可是家长和老师，却改变了我们的生活规律。怎样才能把负担减小呢？

我觉得应该给老师提出一些建议。

比如，“家庭作业”。现在有一些学生的负担就是“家庭作业”。作业被分为两类，一是“课堂作业”，有的学生就是拖拖拉拉，非要把课堂作业拖到下午放学，一看老师没有注意，就偷跑回家。有的还好，回家写完了，第二天大不了就被批评几句。可是有的更厉害，回家不写，就知道玩，第二天就是挨打，不厉害了，就是用书敲几下脑袋，厉害了，就是用尺子打几十下手。二是“家庭作业”。有的学生就是不想写“家庭作业”，第二天如果被老师发现，那麻烦可就大了。不是留在学校补，就是回家把家长叫来。有的学生遇到不了挫折，觉得作业又多，又难做，就自杀了。老师，您们能给我们放松一下吗？ 我建议，回家作业布置少一些，最好布置一些与探索有关的作业，不但有趣，而且好做。这样的话，就没有学生不做作业了！ 我代替全西安市的中小学生呼吁：“老师，减少我们的负担吧！

学校：汉城楼阁台小学 年级：五年级 姓名：鲁程程 性别：男

谈“减负”

“减负”即减轻中小学生课业负担过重的问题。这个问题喊了多年了，做为一名学生家长，我始终很困惑。

中小学生课业负担过重，书包沉，这几年是有目共睹的，家长感同身受。每天做完作业，家长检查辅导完已经九、十点，甚至十一点。孩子也困了，睡意袭来，只能睡觉，家长如释重负。如此这样，日复一日，年复一年。我常感叹现在孩子读课外书的时间几乎太少了，即使家长有这个念头，看看孩子的辛苦也就打消了。

是有必要减轻中小学生课业负担，我也很赞同，可也很担忧。课业负担减轻了，是否意味着学习不扎实，学习成绩有可能下降？考试成绩下降了，老师难堪，家长也难受。基础教育就得夯实基础，基础打不好，怎么建上层？

减轻学生课业负担，要说也很简单，尤其在我们国家，一纸行政命令即可。无非是老师少布置一些作业，不重要的课可以不重视，可终究怎么办？孩子还得面对中考，在以考试为选拔人才和进入好学校的制度背景下，成绩尤其显得重要，而要提高学习成绩，又似乎跟减负有些矛盾，家长也很困惑。

我个人感觉，要减轻学生负担过重的问题，应先从课改和应试教育制度上探索改革。再提减负问题，这是一个系统工程。不从这两个方面着手，减负似乎意义不大，甚至倒退。最终导致学校负担减轻了，家长、社会负担加大了，家长为应对考试，不得不去参加各种补习班，

甚至奥数班，学生负担没减反而加重了。

改革开放总设计师邓小平说的好：教育要面向世界、面向未来，面向现代化。我们期待着更为科学的减负方案，学生负担减轻了，成绩提高了，家长、老师负担也轻了，何乐而不为呢？

作者：楼阁台小学学生家长：鲁军锋；学生姓名：鲁程程

2012、12、3

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2011年江苏高考英语作文

第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）

81.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情

景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容：

1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；

2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；

3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

注意：

1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作

必要的发挥想象。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for

years, but the load of parents has received little

attention, especially from their own children.

此次的书面表达是一篇漫画类作文,是考纲中一直出现,但是首次露面的题型。这篇漫画类作文的话题很传统，体现的是学生所熟悉的“感恩”的内容，但是图中的提示，与其他省市以往的中文提示不同，这次使用了英文提示，但是英文提示不难。本解析将从谋篇，遣词，造句，逻辑四方面展开。

(一)谋篇——三步走

学生拿到漫画类作文，首先精读文字部分，确定写作主题是”感恩”，感情是“褒义”的，其次根据中文提示，按照“描述图片”“联系生活”“个人见解”三步走战略来谋篇。

1.“描述图片”应该包括何人，何事和何感受。

何人：a little girl and her working mom

何事：A little girl comes to greet her working mom happily. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work ,the little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder .Meanwhile,her mom kneels down .

何感受:The mom is thankful and delighted .Seeing this ,we are all touched .

所以第一段可以写成：The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom happily. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work ,the little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder .In response ,the mom kneels down to show how thankful and delighted she feels .

2.“联系生活”段落中，可以写两方面。一：反应了何种人，二是该人的做法是什么。以“感恩”为主题的作文，学生可以结合自身实际，说一下，自己有没有做到给父母减负。所以：

何人： my mom and I

该人的做法（一般是贬义）:Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels ,and always think studying well is the only thing I could

do in return.

3.“个人见解”则是根据“该人的做法”给出相应的解决方式。这边可以说一下自己将来准备怎么给父母“减负”

可以参考：I will spare no effort to help with the everyday washing ,bedroomcleaning.In addition ,I’ll try my best to prepare breakfast myself ,so as to share mother’s daily burden .

最后来一个升华句：“Being a good daughter outweighs being a good student.”

（二）遣词———三原则

高考写作中的遣词可以遵循三原则：复杂原则，多变原则和温暖原则。复杂原则是指可以用一些“牛词”来代替一些“土词“比如说，“忙于做某事”，一般的说法是：be busy doing sth,使用复杂原则后，我们可以用be engaged in doing sth.;be absorbed in sth;be buried in sth 等。多变原则就是当文章中要写两处相同中文意思的词时，善于用不同的词或者词组代换，比如最后一段，两处写到“努力”就可以使用不同的短语“spare no effect”和“try one’s best”。温暖原则就是，任何一个名词都可以用一个形容词，或者定语从句，或者是同位语从句来修饰，比如这边的working mum,就比“mum”形象得多;任何一个动词或者形容词都可以由一个副词来修饰，如：“a little girl comes to greet her working mom happily”中的happily 就对该剧中的come这个动词起到了温暖的作用。

（3）造句——三套路

书面表达中的句子也很讲技巧，可以遵循三套路：适当拉长，英式思维，闪光句式。首先适当拉长，可以运用定语从句，并列结构，插入语等方式使得句子变得更加的丰满。“In response ,the mom kneels down to show how thankful and delighted she feels .”这边的“in response”就是一个插入成分。其次是英式思维，要做到不是一直以人作为主语，宁否定不肯定以及宁被动不主动等。如 “Being a good daughter outweighs being a good student.” 就用了动名词做主语。最后是闪光句式，就是用一些比较出彩的句式，比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中，运用到了非谓语动词，分词作状语的形式。

（四）逻辑——八联系

好的文章除了合理的篇章，出彩的字词，还离不开好的逻辑，这个时候，新东方课堂上总结的八大逻辑词就派上了用场。比如说表示让步我们可以用but, yet, however,转折 although,though, despite,in spite of;表示并列我们可以用both„and, as well as, neither„nor,递进：in addition, besides, moreover,因果：because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, on account of等词。

很多同学提到高考英语写作都会谈虎色变,因为有无数的高考猛士都惨败在它的手下,失分很严重。其实高考英语英语写作并没有想象中的那么难，只要我们细心品题，精准的使用词和短语，恰到好处的套用句型，合理的安排篇章，高分也不是特别的遥远。当然高考英语写作想有质的飞跃，还是需要大家在平时不断积累的。