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我的家乡新吉安-家乡发展变化
我的家乡新吉安
我的家乡吉安市地处江西省中
部,位于赣江之滨。吉安古称庐陵、
吉州,自古人杰地灵,素有“江南望
郡”、“金庐陵”的美誉。元初取“吉
泰民安”之意改吉州为吉安,“吉安”
之名自此始,并一直沿用至今。
吉安,在历史上因“隔河两宰相、
五里三状元”而享有美名。新时期下,吉安市,随处可见到这样的标语牌:做大吉安市,崛起银三角。它代表了吉安人民改变家乡面貌的心愿和决心。的确,吉安市这几年发生了很大的变化,各方面发展都是蒸蒸日上,吉安的变化就像日历,每天都翻出崭新的一页,我为吉安的崛起而喝彩!
一、数字中的新吉安
世界500强企业落户,4.3寸单色液显总产量全国第一,自主研制的数控凸轮轴磨床填补国内空白,江西的第一台自主品牌手机“盛泰”、笔记本电脑“紫光贝贝”诞生于此,拥有江西唯一生产真彩液晶显示屏的厂家„„。
江西省委书记苏荣在一份批示中称吉安“不声不响,只做不说„„如此干下去,必将产生大的变化。”江西省省长吴新雄在吉安调研时称赞吉安“变化大、工作实、班子好。”2008年,吉安在江西经济社会发展综合考评中排名第二。这
里正在上演一场“静悄悄的急行军”。
——全市生产总值完成283亿
元,增长15%,增幅达到历史最好水
平。财政总收入27.54亿元,增长
21.4%;地方财政收入17.83亿元,
增长20.6%。全市超过两亿元县(市、
区)3个、亿元县(市、区)12个。
全社会固定资产投资完成122亿元,增长22%
,其中城镇固定资产投资首次突破
百亿元。全市城镇居民人均可支配收入达到
8604元,增长22.4%;农民人均纯收入达到
3266元,增长14.3%。
——全市规模工业实现增加值49.8亿
元,增长31.7%;上缴税收7.7亿元,增长25%。
全年粮食总产量295.5万吨,增长8.7%。实
现旅游收入34.4亿元,增长39.6%;实现旅
游创汇845万美元,增长67.8%。全市三次产
业结构调整为27.92:34.63:37.45,其中二
产比重提高2.1个百分点,三产比重提高0.6个百分点。
——全市签约5000万元以上工业项目56个,引进亿元以上重大项目13个,实际进资42.1亿元,增长74.5%;实际利用外资1.87亿美元,增长23%;外贸出口8800万美元,增长67.5%。
——吉安市、井冈山市同时入选2005年度中国特色魅力城市200强,全省获此荣誉仅有4个城市;中心城区创建省级园林城市顺利通过省政府检查验收;渼陂村晋升为"中国历史文化名村"。
二、视觉中的新吉安
2000年,吉安刚刚撤区建市,那时的吉安路面窄小坑洼,交通不便,路面绿化很少,城市卫生状况也很不好。十多年后,吉安围绕“文化庐陵、山水吉安”的城市定位,大力推进城镇建设和美丽乡村建设。全市实施重点城建项目258个,完成投资125.2亿元,城镇化率提升2.03个百分点,达到39.62%。中心城区建设步伐加快。建成区面积达到59.6平方公里,新增2.9平方公里。
——改造后的沿江路、井冈
山大道焕然一新,成为一条条花{二年级作文《吉安》}.
团锦簇、一街一景的景观大道;
白鹭洲公园、滨江公园和体育场
新姿迸发,山环水绕、藏风得水,
涌动着城市的灵气;长虹卧波的
吉安大桥飞架东西,使市中心两
区浑然一体,其投资规模之巨、
造型之美堪称“千里赣江第一桥”;后河上一桥一景,两岸组团式的新景观、新社区延绵十里,尽现"半苏州"的风光;新体育馆等一批城建重点项目建设如火如荼,进展顺利。一批县城公园改造、城镇供水项目和城区道路工程相继竣工。城市规划得到加强,城市框架迅速拉开,城镇功能有效提升。
——全国第一条环保高速——泰井高速建成开通,直入景区;井冈山机场完成扩建,新增了航班航线;首次开通了始发列车,吉安至北京、深圳、厦门始发列车正式开通;吉井铁路动工兴建;县乡公路建设加速推进,"公路三年决战"全面完成,54.6%的行政村通水泥路,初步形成了融"铁、公、水、空"为一体的立体交通网络。吉安成为长三角、珠三角、闽三角和大西南经济辐射的最佳半径。
三、风貌中的新吉安
——吉安旅游景点众多,独具风姿,不但
文化古迹多,革命遗址聚集,而且自然风光和
人文景观融为一体,是一个文化的家园,一个
红色的摇篮,一个绿色的宝库。庐陵文化旅游、
井冈山旅游和绿色生态旅游构成了吉安旅游观
光的独特魅力。
——高校建设。井冈山大学是一
所综合性普通本科院校,是江西省人
民政府和教育部共同重点支持建设
高校,
也是同济大学对口支援和南京
军区委托培养军队干部的高校。党和国家领导人多次到井冈山大学视察并指导工作,指出要高起点高标准建设井冈山大学,要把井冈山大学建设成高水平大学。井冈山大学国防生学院坚持以井冈山精神培养新一代的革命军人,受到中央军委的高度评价。
——广大吉安人民思发展,议发展、促发展,凡事以发展为重,处处以发展当先,焕发出不甘落后、艰苦创业的勇气,众志成城、一往无前的士气,敢闯新路、锐意创新的底气。全市上下形成了"干事业一条心、抓工作一盘棋、搞建设一股劲"的大氛围。
——政府搭台推动创业、干部领头带动创业、能人崛起领跑创业、百姓齐心共谋创业,全民创业潮起潮涌。围绕全民创业,市直52个部门单位奋勇争先,推出了许多"干货"不少、"含金量"颇高的扶持、服务措施。
四、家乡的未来——我相信!
——良好的区位优势。吉安位处香港、广东经江西到中原的核心地带,既是沿海腹地,又是内地前沿,北与长江三角洲对接,东与闽江三角洲毗邻,南与华南经济圈呼应,是至关重要的“黄金走廊”。近年来,吉安的交通区位条件得到根本改善。航空方面有井冈山机场,铁路方面有京九铁路,水运方面有赣江航道,
公路方面,赣粤高速、泰井高速、武
吉高速公路相继建成通车。快速便捷
的立体交通网络己经形成。
——丰富的自然资源。吉安市水
力资源丰富,发展水电事业有着良好
的前景。境内河流众多,流域总面积
约29000平方公里,水资源总量为
196.75亿立方米,全省最大的水力发电厂万安水电厂就在吉安。地下矿藏方面也资源众多,探明的矿产资源就达50多种。全市森林覆盖率达66 %,有4000余种植物和1000多种动物,是国内杉木、湿地松、毛竹、油茶等经济林的重要生产基地。
——旅游资源潜力巨大。吉安
境内山清水秀,生态优美,红、绿、
古三色旅游资源十分丰富。井冈山
被誉为“天下第一山”,属首批国家
级风景名胜区,是全国旅游胜地四{二年级作文《吉安》}.
十佳和中国优秀旅游城市;市内还
有武功山、青原山、玉荀山、白水仙等4个省级风景名胜区,有当今世界保存最大最完整的古窑遗址吉州窑,以及白鹭洲书院、新干商墓遗址、永丰西阳宫等一大批人文古迹。
——完备的基础设施。吉安全市公路总里程达9000公里,形成了市至县“一小时交通圈”;水、电网络健全,邮电通讯发展迅速,交通、能源、通讯等基础设施日臻完善。全市现有12个县级工业园区。1个市级高新技术产业开发区。规划面积72.5 平方公里,己实现“七通一平”和硬化、绿化、亮化,己具备了承接沿海产业转移的坚实基础。
盘点吉安,丰硕的成果,迭出的亮点,凸显出一个发展的越来越好的新吉安。我相信,随着吉安在市场潜力、资源禀赋、土地供应、人力条件、环境容量等方面具有明显优势,一个开明开放、经济稳定、舒适宜居的新吉安将在江西中部迅速崛起,吉安逐步成为产业基地、旅游胜地、开放高地、宜居福地的美好蓝图也将会顺利实现,吉安人民也将一起为家乡的发展全力以赴,我相信我的家乡的未来会是一片光明!
吉安大桥
吉安大桥
是天降的彩虹,
是飞舞的巨龙,是崛起的丰碑,是久盼的图腾!一桥飞架,沟通了千年阻隔,连接了两岸繁荣,实现了多少代人的梦想。 多么雄伟壮丽的吉安大桥!真想到桥上去走一走。
我怀着激动的心情来到桥上,迈开轻松的步伐,从西到东,走了整整四十分钟。
这是怎样的一种感觉啊!我仿佛骑在了巨龙的背上,随着龙身翻滚,飞腾升空,;又象登上了彩虹架成的天桥,一步
一步的走进天宇,居高临下地饱览美丽的城市。吉安大桥是在2002年11月开工建设,历时两年建成通车。主桥长536米,宽28米;主跨188米,矢高58米,东西次跨各138米,矢高28米,边跨各36米。吉安大桥的
建成,不仅为我市织就了一个便捷、通畅的交通网络,更为我市增添了一道宏伟、靓丽的城市风景线。 桥下就是我们的母亲河——赣江!那滚滚流淌永不干凅的是母亲醇香甘甜的乳汁,哺育着世世代代祖祖辈辈的
吉安人,浇灌出名震华夏的文章节义之帮。
走过吉安大桥,就象走过了千年历史,走出了贫穷落后。如今,吉安人再也不怕被江水阻隔,再也不会因过江困
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GRE作文范文
"The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished."{二年级作文《吉安》}.
观点陈述型作文/[题目]
"被置于媒体审视下的任何人,其名誉终将受毁损。"
Sample Essay
The intensity of today's media coverage has been greatly magnified by the sheer number and types of media outlets that are available today. Intense competition for the most revealing photographs and the latest information on a
subject has turned even minor media events into so-called "media frenzies". Reporters are forced by the nature of the competition to pry ever deeper for an angle on a story that no one else has been able to uncover. With this type of
media coverage, it does become more and more likely that anyone who is subjected to it will have his or her reputation tarnished, as no individual is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. The advances in technology have made much
information easily and instantaneously available. Technology has also made it easier to dig further than ever before into a person's past, increasing the possibility that the subject's reputation may be harmed.
范文正文
当今媒体报道的力度,由于当今时代所能获得的媒体渠道那前所未有的数量和种类,从而被极大地增强。围绕着对最具暴露性的图片及对某一题材最新信息所展开的竞争,使哪怕是次要的媒体事件也转变为所谓的"媒体疯狂"。由于竞争的本质,记者们被迫就某一项报道作深度采访,以其窥探到一个任何其他人都无法揭示的视角。随着这类媒体报道的出现,任何被置于媒体报道之下的人,其名誉越来越有可能被玷污,因为"金无赤金,人无完人"。每个人都有可能犯错误。技术进步使大量的信息在第一瞬间便被轻易获取。技术也使媒体得以比以往任何时候更深入地去挖掘一个人的过去,从而更增加了当事人名誉受损的可能性。
The above statement is much too broad, however. "Anyone" covers all people all over the world. There are people whose reputations have only been enhanced by media scrutiny. There are also people whose reputations were already so poor that media scrutiny could not possibly diminish it any further. There may very well be people that have done nothing wrong in the past, at least that can be discovered by the media, whose reputations could not be diminished by media scrutiny. To broadly state that "anyone" subjected to media coverage will have his or her status sullied implies that everyone's reputation worldwide is susceptible to damage under any type of media scrutiny. What about children, particularly newborn children? What about those people whose past is entirely unknown?
然则,上述陈述涵盖面过于宽泛。"任何人"涵盖了世界上所有的人。有些人的名誉反而会因为媒体的聚焦而陡然显赫起来。也有些人,其名声早就如此之糟糕,以致于媒体的聚焦再也无法让它受到更坏的毁损。笼统地陈述受媒体报道的"任何人"均会使其地位被玷污,这暗示着全球每个人的名声在任何种类的媒体聚焦下均易于遭诟病。那么,对于天真无辜的孩子们,尤其新生婴儿,情况会如何?对于那些其过去根本无人知晓的人来说,情况又会是什么样呢?
Another problem with such a broad statement is that it does not define the particular level of media scrutiny. Certainly there are different levels of media coverage. Does merely the mention of one's name in a newspaper
constitute media scrutiny? What about the coverage of a single event in someone's life, for example a wedding or the birth of a baby? Is the media coverage of the heroic death of a firefighter or police officer in the line of duty ever going to diminish that person's reputation? It seems highly unlikely that in these examples, although these people may have been subjected to media scrutiny, these individual's reputations are undamaged and potentially enhanced by such exposure.
对于这样一项笼统的陈述而言,它的另一个问题是没能明晰界定媒体聚焦的具体程度。媒体的报道毫无疑问存在程度上的差别。只在报纸上提及一个人的名字,是否算作媒体聚焦?对某人一生中单独一次事件(如婚礼或孩子出生)的报道这也算媒介聚焦吗?媒体对消防队员或警官因公而死的英雄壮举进行报道,难道也会毁损该人的名声吗?在这些实例中,其名声受损的事情极不可能发生。虽然这些人可能被置于媒体审视之下,但其名声却会完好无损,且潜在地可因这些披露而得以提高。{二年级作文《吉安》}.
Without a doubt, there are many examples of individual's whose reputations have been diminished by media scrutiny. The media's uncovering of former U.S. President Bill Clinton's affair with Monica Lewinsky will most likely overshadow the entire eight years of his administration. Basketball superstar Michael Jordan's sterling reputation has been
tarnished more than once by the media; first by media coverage of his gambling habits, then most recently (and in a much more harmful manner) by news reports of his marital infidelities and the divorce from his wife of thirteen years. Fame and fortune can turn an ordinary individual into a media target where reporters will stop at almost nothing to "dig up dirt" that will sell more newspapers or entice more viewers to watch a television program. It could even be
argued that media scrutiny killed Princess Diana as her car sped away from the privacy-invading cameras of reporters in Paris. There is no doubt that there are a large number of people who have been hurt in one way or another by particularly intense media scrutiny.
毫无疑问,也有许多例子能证明一个人的名声会被媒体审视所毁损。媒体对美国前总统Bill Clinton与Monica Lewinsky的风流韵事的揭露极有可能会将其八年的执政生涯置于阴影之中。超级篮球明星Michael Jordan一世英名也被媒体不止一次地玷污,首先是被有关其赌习的媒体报道,其次是最近--且以一种更具致命性伤害的方式--被有关他婚姻不忠以及与其结婚13年的妻子分道扬镳的报道。当媒体记者不择手段去挖掘某些可促使其报纸销量大增的"猛料"时,或去诱惑更多的观众观看某一电视节目时,名和利就会将一个普通人转变为媒体追踪的目标。我们甚至可以提出这样一种论点,即正是媒体的审视将Diana王妃置于死地,随着她的汽车去竭力逃脱巴黎街头的记者们那侵犯隐私的相机镜头。毫无疑问,肯定有许多人被极其强烈的媒体聚焦以一种方式或另一种方式所伤害。
In summary, it seems impossible that for every person that is subjected to media scrutiny, his or her reputation will eventually be diminished. Millions of people are mentioned in the media every day yet still manage to go about their lives unhurt by the media. Normal individuals that are subjected to media scrutiny can have their reputation either
enhanced or damaged depending on the circumstances surrounding the media coverage. The likelihood of a diminished reputation from the media rises proportionally with the level of notoriety that an individual possesses and the
outrageousness of that person's behavior. The length of time in the spotlight can also be a determining factor, as the longer the person is examined in the media, the greater the possibility that damaging information will be discovered or that the individual will do something to disparage his or her reputation. But to broadly state that media scrutiny will diminish anyone's reputation is to overstate the distinct possibility that, given a long enough time and a certain level of intensity of coverage, the media may damage a person's reputation.
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归纳而言,对于每个被置于媒体审视的人来说,其名声将最终受到毁损似乎并不可能。每天,有数百万人被媒体提到,但他们仍设法我行我素,不为媒体所伤害。被置于媒体审视之下的普通人,其名声或可得到提高,或可蒙受毁损,取决于围绕着媒体报道的具体情况。一个人的名声受媒体毁损的可能性,与所其拥有的臭名昭著的程度,及其行为的令人厌恶程度成正比。受媒体关注的时间长短同样也是一个决定性因素,因为一个人被媒体审视的时间越长,于他名声不利的信息越有可能被抖落出来,或者该人越有可能去做出某些于其名声不利的事情。但只是笼统地陈述媒体的审视终将毁掉一个人的名声,即是过分夸大这样一种显著的可能性,即在足够长的时间和一度程度的报道力度这两个条件下,媒体是有可能毁掉一个人的名声的。
Another example is that by studying history, parents can help to improve the lives of their children in the future. Lessons learned by generations of their ancestors before them could help show them the way to properly raise a child. What worked for others can give guidance to the parents of today and tomorrow to make sure that children are prepared for their own futures beyond their daily lives.
GRE作文范文
Issue
"People work more productively in teams than individually. Teamwork requires cooperation, which motivates people much more than individual competition does."
Sample Essay
Teamwork as a whole can naturally produce an overall greater productivity through the concept of "synergy", where the total of the whole is greater than the sum of its individual parts. But the idea that people work more productively in teams rather than as individuals is going to vary greatly between the types of teams that are organized, the end reward or motivation for both the team and the individuals, as well as the individuals themselves.
Regarding individuals, some people are born with the desire to succeed, no matter what the situation or task that they are facing. These people may evolve into the classic "Type A" personalities that work ferociously because they are driven by an internal fire that says they must always be doing something, whether individually or as part of a team.
Other people may desire to be less socially involved or are very highly competitive with other people. For these people, their work is most productive as individuals, because the very idea of cooperating with other people limits their
effectiveness and efficiency because they simply do not want to be a part of the team. Whether this mindset is innate or developed over time does not matter, it is merely the state of their being and neither motivation nor rewards can generate inside them the desire to work collectively as a team.
Some people are highly motivated by social interaction and the desire to work with others towards a collective effort. Obviously these individuals are at their most productive when working as part of a team. Organizational behavioral
studies have shown that Asian cultures are much more likely to develop this type of collective behavior as opposed to the more individualistic behavior associated with Western cultures. It could naturally be assumed then that there may be cultural values that can determine whether people are at their most productive individually or as part of a team.
Another variable is the end reward that is involved with the task at hand. Will the rewards be greater if the team
works together towards a common goal, or are the rewards more geared toward individual performance? To the extent that the individual is motivated by the end reward, obviously his or her performance inside of a team may be more or less productive with respect to the entire team, depending on how the performance is rewarded. Individual goals may interfere with the group performance. Synergies may not be achieved because the individuals are not working towards a whole "sum" but rather towards an individual reward. Productivity thus will vary for each person as a team member or as an individual depending on the degree to which that person is motivated by an individual or overall team reward.
Finally, the degree of productivity of a person will depend upon the type of team that is organized. Is the group composed of equally contributing individuals? Does the group have an outstanding leader that can motivate both the individuals and the team as a whole? From a pure productivity standpoint, the presence or absence of a charismatic and exceptional leader can make all the difference whether a person would be more productive as a part of a team or as an individual. Personality types that work well together can prove to be much more productive as part of a team than as individuals, and vice versa.
Fundamentally, measures of productivity depend greatly on the individuals themselves. The dilemma facing leaders in all areas of life is how to best assess these individuals to determine how to best harness their capabilities to reach their ultimate productive capabilities. Whether a person is more productive alone or while working in concert with
others is one of the great challenges that leaders and managers must face to accomplish tasks effectively and efficiently.
观点陈述型作文/[题目]
"当人们以团队的形式工作时,要比以孤军奋战的形式来得更加富有成效。团队的协同工作需要相互合作,它比个人竞争更能激励人们。"
范文正文
总体而言,团队的协同工作自然能通过"增效作用"(Synergy)这一理念而带来更高程度的整体生产效率,因为在这里,整体大于个体相加之总和。然则,"当人们以团队的形式工作时,要比以孤军奋战的形式来得更加富有成效"这一观念注定会产生巨大差异,取决于所组织起来的团队的类别,团队与个人所能获得的终极回报或激励,以及个人本身。
关于个人,有些人天生就具有获取成功的欲望,无论他们所面临的情形或任务是什么。这些人会演变为工作狂这一经典的"A类"人格,因为受到一股内心的热火所驱使,这股热火时刻告诉他们必须不停地"有所事事",无论是作为个人抑或是作为团队的一分子。另一些人则可能希望不必那么多地介入社会,或者他们倾向于与其他人激烈竞争。对这些人而言,作为个人,他们工作起来会最富有成效,因为由于他们根本就不想成为任何团队的一部分,与他人合作便会限制他们的效率。这一思想倾向是否与生俱有,还是随着时间的推移而形成,这都无关紧要。这仅仅只是他们的一种生存状态,无论是动机还是回报,都无法在其内心深处激发起作为一个团队集体工作的欲望。
有些人,由于社会互动以及与他人协作去实现某种集体努力的欲望,而具有极强的动机。显然,这些个人在作为团队的一部分进行工作时,他们便会处在其最富有成效的状态。组织行为学研究表明,亚洲文化更有可能
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我们常说“well began ishalf done”,好的开始就是成功的一半。托福写作的开头是一篇文章的门面,也是给读者留下的第一印象。学会更好地优化托福写作开头段的内容,能够帮助考生提高文章水平。学会使用不同的开头方式非常重要,智课教育和大家分享吉安托福作文开头模板。
托福作文的开头怎么写?
托福作文的开头可以使用一下形式:
1. 用副词开头,常见的情形有:
(1) 副词修饰全句
Luckily, he didn’t know my phone number; otherwise, he would bother me.
Incredibly, Helena got straight A in her school report this semester.
Interestingly, cats and dogs can hardly get along well in a house.
修饰全句常用的副词有:
obviously undoubtedly
apparently fortunately
clearly unfortunately
incredibly luckily
unluckily surprisingly
frighteningly
这些副词大多数表示说话人对全句的看法,在意思上相等与 “It is ... 形容词that ...” 。 e.g:
Obviously,he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test.
Unfortunately,he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud.
(2) 强调副词
Hurriedly,the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction.
Dangerously,the drunkard sped down the street.
Slowly and gently,snowflakes were drifting down from the sky.
(3) 副词表示某一地域或某一领域
Geographically,Canada is the biggest country in the world.
Financially,she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent.
2. 用插入语开头,表示说话人的态度,或使句子的意思更加准确:
Strangely enough,Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.
Generally speaking,winter in Vancouver is gloomy.
类似的插入语有:
no wonder no doubt
in other words in my opinion{二年级作文《吉安》}.
in conclusion in fact
as a matter of fact
3. 用形容词、并列形容词或形容词短语开头,修饰句子的主语,表示主语的特征或状态:
Frantic,the young mother rushed out the door with the baby in her arms.
Tasty and crisp,potato chip are a favorite snack for both children and adults.
Happy at his good marks at school,the little boy skipped on his way home.
Desperate and hopeless,the poor man committed suicide.
4. 用分词、分词短语开头:
(a) 修饰句子主语,表示主语所处的状态或主语同时进行的另一个较谓语动词次要的动作:
Scared,the girl moved timidly and cautiously into the dark room.( 状态)
Chased by my dear pet cat, the mouse dashed into a small hole.( 状态 )
Spoiled by his parents,the naughty boy always insists on things he wants.( 状态)
Puffing and hugging,he finished his run.( 另一动作)
Looking at herself in the mirror,she fingered her silk scarf on her shoulder.( 另一动作)
(b) 修饰谓语动词,表示原因、时间等
Lying down on the couch,he felt much relaxed.( 时间)
Feeling bored,she turned on the TV and switched from channel to channel.( 原因)
Wanting to find out the business hour,she called the store.( 原因)
Having completed the form,he mailed it out immediately.( 时间)
托福作文开头段写作方式
1、托福写作方式——观点对立
观点对立的方式就是指文章开头首先引出人们对要讨论的问题的不同看法,然后提出作者自己的观点,或者偏向的哪个看法。对立法的句型多用于有争议性的主题。比如:当问起世界现在最大的问题是什么,许多人说是严重的能源危机。他们担心人类不久会用完石油、发生食品短缺。但有些人则持乐观的看法,他们把能源危机看成是经济发展的自然结果,而且只有随着经济和技术的进一步发展才能得以解决。使用观点对立的开头方式,是对写作题目一个很好的阐释,虽然题目的内容都会有人支持,但是,考生却能够明确提出自己支持的观点,说明考生一定有充分的理由去论证自己的观点。
2、托福写作方式——背景引入
在托福写作的很多话题之中,可能会涉及到一些社会问题或者是教育问题。在遇到类似的问题的时候,考生可以首先选择站在大背景下来阐述这个话题,从而能够用大背景来支持自己的后面的观点,使得观点一开始就比较有说服力。例如:父母如果没有时间陪孩子,可以将孩子送到儿童保育中心或者是个人护理中心。一看这个题目就是一个社会类或者是家庭教育的问题,针对这个题目,考生可以首先讲解一下现代社会压力大,尤其是做了父母的人,身上的责任会更大,所以就会更加努力地工作或者寻找挣钱养家的途径,因此陪伴孩子的机会少。从而引出如何安顿孩子的方法,提出自己的观点。利用背景引入的方式,还能够保证考生不偏离主题,能够确保话题展开的准确性。
3、托福写作方式——提出问题
托福写作开头运用提问的方式,可以让你的开头段与众不同的托福写作方法。提问法是以问题为导向,引起读者兴趣,引导你的读者跟随你的思路走进你的思维世界。利用提问的方式,还能够引发读者的思考,从而让读者能够对这个问题产生共鸣。此外,提问的表达方式有时还能够起到强调的作用,利用反问的方式,能够帮助考生强调自己的观点。例如:There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money. A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority,compared to X percent only a few years ago. Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness?从这个开头段中可以看出,首先也是题目要讨论的话题,但是最后一句用一个“反问”的方式,提出要讨论的话题,还起到了强
调的作用,能够引起读者共鸣,引发思考。
Looking at herself in the mirror, she fingered her silk scarf on her shoulder.( 另一动作)
托福作文经典开头20例
1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that
______________.
2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.
3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.
4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.
5、 ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.
6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.
8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.
9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.
10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to
______________.
12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.
13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First,
______________ second, ______________.
14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.
15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.