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2014上海中考英语作文范文和点评
中考作文点评
今年的中考英语作文题是“明年此时”(This Time Next Year ),黄浦区初中英语教研员周加有分析,这道题比较抽象,给予了考生一定的想象空间,可以说是在“意料之外,又在情理之中”。周加有表示,前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受,或者对一些事情进行评论,比较容易套题。但今年的这道题不是很具体,加上时态是将来式,因此对学生来说不太容易套题,要写好必须有自己的想法,所以有一定难度。不过,今年的这道作文题依然延续前几年的特点——以“我”为出发点,谈的还是学生自己,这点方便了学生有话可说、有情可抒。 2014年中考英语作文:
题目:This time next year
This time next year I will be enjoying my senior school life 1.which I have expected for a long time. The life then will be 2.as colorful as flowers.I will take an active part in all kinds of activities in high school 3.because the saying goes ”All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. In addition, making friends 4.will be on top of the list since a real friendship5.is of great importance to me. As for me, I will be definitely6.turning a new leaf of my future life this time next year, and I’m really looking forward to it. 精彩亮点分析:
亮点一:定语从句修饰对高中生活的向往
亮点二:用as...as的比较级结构,抓人眼球
亮点三: 用到了idiom,而且用的极为恰当
亮点四: on top of the list永远放在第一位
亮点五:be of great importance 名词结构更高端
亮点六: turn a new leaf of my future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章
写作小Tip:
今年中考是篇看似记叙却要叙中带议的文章。全文的时态应全部运用一般将来时,对未来生活进行展望。全文应表达积极阳光的信念。
2014年上海中考英语范文1 This Time Next Year
It's exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.
At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.
Life will be totally different, but I'm really looking forward to it.
【解析】
这篇作文需要涉及三个方面:变化、期望和自己的作为,因此文章中需要涵盖着三点。
第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化,第二句是期望及第一个作为,紧接其后的是第二个作为,而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态度。
2014年上海中考英语范文2
This Time Next Year
Life is changeable, and that's why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.
Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Then, I will benefit from reading
English books. What is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English endlessly.
Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.
(110 words)
文章的标题告诉我们文章内容应该是与未来的生活相关的,生活在变化,一年后我将进入高中,但是学习还在继续,所以我仍有自己的目标。文章主要立足于两点,我对未来的计划或者期待,以及我要如何去实现。作为一名英语学习者,我会从三点去提高自己的英语。英语学习是一个持续的过程,只有不断努力才会有收获
06-10年上海中考英语真题附答案
2006年上海市初中毕业生统一学业考试
英语试卷
(满分150分,考试时间100分钟)
Part 1 Listening (第一部分 听力)
Ⅰ. Listen and choose the right picture (根据你听到的内容,选出相应的图片): (共6分)
A B C
D E F G
1. ______ 2. ______ 3. ______ 4. ______ 5. ______ 6. ______ Ⅱ. Listen to the dialogue and choose the best answer to the question you hear
(根据你听到的对话和问题,选出最恰当的答案): (共10分)
7. A) Jack. B) Linda. C) Mr White. D) Miss Green.
8. A) The fish. B) The soup. C) The meat. D) The chicken wings.
9. A) 6:00. B) 6:30. C) 5:30. D) 5:00.
10. A) A pilot. B) An engineer. C) A fireman. D) An astronaut.
11. A) Sunny. B) Rainy. C) Windy. D) Cloudy.
12. A) On Tuesday. B) On Friday. C) On Saturday. D) On Sunday.
13. A) Do their homework. B) Watch the football match.
C) Go to the cinema. D) Watch the movie on TV.
14. A) In England. B) In America. C) In New Zealand. D) In 上海市教育考试院 保留版权 学业考试(2006)英语试卷 第1页(共71页)
China.
15. A) In a restaurant. B) In a shop. C) In a school. D) In a library.
16. A) They are having a meeting. B) They are fishing.
C) They are making a phone call. D) They are talking about the time.
Ⅲ. Listen to the passage and tell whether the following statements are true or
false (判断下列句子是否符合你听到的短文内容, 符合的用“T”表示,不符合的用“F”表示):
(共7分)
17. Sandy went to visit his cousin in London with his brother.
18. They took a train and arrived at 6 o‘clock in the morning.
19. Sandy often played tennis and was very good at it.
20. Sandy‘s brother bought some new clothes in Oxford Street.
21. They had dinner in a nice restaurant on Saturday evening.
22. Sandy and his brother stayed in London until Sunday.
23. Sandy enjoyed his trip to London very much.
Ⅳ. Listen to the dialogue and complete the table (听对话,完成下列表格): (共7
分)
Presents on Father’s Day
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Part 2 Vocabulary and Grammar (第二部分 词汇和语法)
Ⅴ. Choose the best answer (选择最恰当的答案): (共20分)
31. The old lady teaches children to play ______ piano at a weekend school.
A) a B) an C) the D) /
32. It‘s getting warmer and warmer ______ spring, and plants start growing.
A) to B) in C) of D) for
33. Taiwan is ______ island of China. I hope to visit it soon.
A) big B) bigger C) biggest D) the biggest
34. It‘s time for sports. Let‘s ______ bowling, shall we?
A) go B) to go C) going D) goes
35. Millions of Shanghai citizens are learning to ______ English for the 2010 World
Expo.
A) tell B) speak C) say D) talk
36. Zhang Yining is ______ favorite table tennis player.
A) I B) me C) my D) mine
37. Teenagers are very fond ______ cartoons.
A) in B) among C) with D) of
38. A good friend always gives you a helping hand ______ you‘re in trouble.
A) when B) before C) until D) though
39. My mother ______ make rice dumplings. She‘ll teach me how to do it.
A) must B) need C) should D) can
40. The 2007 Special Olympic Games ______ in Shanghai.
A) will hold B) will be held C) were held D) held
41. Mr Smith is quite busy today. He has ______ meetings to attend.
A) little B) a little C) few D) a few
42. The lake looks ______ in the moonlight. I often take a walk around it.
A) wonderfully B) famous C) beautiful D) well
43. Jenny ______ with a Chinese family for two years. Now she‘s used to the life in
China.
A) stays B) would stay C) is staying D) has stayed
44. The Russian President paid his first visit to Shaolin Temple last March. He had ______ been there before.
A) never B) often C) usually D) always
45. To ______ his sick mother, David goes to the hospital after work every day. 3
A) take charge of B) take hold of C) take care of D) take the place of
46. Obey the traffic rules and learn to protect yourself. ______ is more important than
life.
A) Nothing B) Something C) Everything D) Anything
47. Most people ______ when the big earthquake (地震) took place in that area.
A) are sleeping B) were sleeping C) slept D) sleep
48. ______ exciting event the 2006 World Cup is!
A) What an B) What a C) What D) How
49. Our class teacher asked the monitor ______.
A) why didn‘t Bill come to school B) why doesn‘t Bill come to school
C) why Bill didn‘t come to school D) why Bill doesn‘t come to school
50. – Sorry, Tommy. I‘ve lost your book.
– ______ I‘ve got another copy.
A) You‘re welcome. B) That‘s all right.
C) I hope so. D) Of course not.
31.C 32.B 33.D 34.A 35.B 36.C 37.D 38.A 39.D 40.B
41.D 42.C 43.D 44.A 45.C 46.A 47.B 48.A 49.C 50.B
Ⅵ. Complete the sentences with the given words in their proper forms(用括号中所给单词 的适当形式完成下列句子): (共8分)
51. I received some Christmas ___________ from my pen pals. (card)
52. The young man works as a ___________ in a five-star hotel. (wait)
53. The children were ___________ excited when they saw the two pandas, Tuantuan
and Yuanyuan. (real)
54. To be lovely Shanghainese, we should be helpful and ___________ to others. (friend)
55. Our new flat is on the ___________ floor, and we have a good view of the park. (ten)
56. It is ___________ to improve our English without enough practice. (possible)
57. The situation in that country is ___________. You‘d better not go there. (danger)
58. It is ___________ of Peter to pay so much money for clothes. (fool)
Ⅶ. Choose the word or expression which is closest in meaning to the
underlined part in each sentence(选择与下列各句中划线部分内容意思相近的单词或短语,用A、B、C、D 等表示): (共8分)
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59. 60.
61. 2010.
62. 63. 64. When the summer camp the students felt sorry to say goodbye to each other.{上海06-13中考英语作文}.
65. – Excuse me, how many books can I borrow at a time?
–66. Ⅷ. Rewrite the following sentences as required(根据所给要求,改写下列句子。
每空格限填一词): (共10分)
67. Sam wants to look for a job in London after he graduates from university. (改为否定句)
Sam _________ _________ to look for a job in London after he graduates from university.
68. Tom didn‘t take part in the after-school activity yesterday. (改为反意疑问句)
Tom didn‘t take part in the after-school activity yesterday, _________ _________?
69. The students‘ projects will be on show 对划线部分提问)
_________ _________ will the students‘ projects be on show?
70. Can you tell me when I should water the flowers? (改为简单句)
Can you tell me _________ _________ water the flowers?
71. Laura spent one week finishing reading the book Harry Potter. (保持句意基本不变)
It _________ Laura one week _________ finish reading the book Harry Potter.
Part 3 Reading and Writing (第三部分 阅读和写话)
Ⅸ. Reading comprehension (阅读理解): (共36分)
(A)
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上海历年中考英语写人 类作文
作文写人题材汇总
06-13年天津市中考英语满分作文
1、作文开头的有用句式 Do what/everything sb.can to do
As we all know,As is known to all,It’s known to all 5、打算做。。。/计划做。。。
that„It’s common knowledge that„It’scommonly Intend to do/plan to do
accepted that„There is no denying that„How time Be going to do
flies !In a blink of an eye,Time flies like a speeding Decide to do
arrow,Time goes like the the flowing water. Determine to do=be determine to do
2、中间分层部分的有用结构: Make up one`s mind to do
分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand 6、表示想/希望
分两点:For one thing, For another, Want to do=would like to do
分三点:Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least Hope to do
3、结尾部分 Expect to do
All in all, Wish to do
In a word, Consider doing
In conclusion, 7、其他有用的短语
In brief, From now on/sooner or later/in the near future In short, Have positive attitude towards/enrich my
To put everything in a shell, 概括的说,简单的说 knowledge/learn„by heart/
Last but not least Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties
一、组织语言 bravely/overcome the difficulties
发表观点的In my opinion,From my point of view,In my Play an important role/part in„.
eyes,As far as I am concerned,Believe it or not, 8、其他有用的句式
表示递进的In additionFurthermoreMore For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly importantlyWhat’s more speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Moreover Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows,
1、重点句型 People`s view on„vary from person to person It`s+a. for sb.to do sth. 四、增添亮点谚语举例
So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that too„to do I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in Not„.until the struggle of life”.As a famous saying goes, “A man That`s why+句子 那是。。。的原因 becomes learned by asking questions.”It`s common It`s said that +句子 knowledge that the road to success is not always full of There`s no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问。。。 roses.An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a It goes without saying that+句子 毫无疑问。。。 willing heart.”
There`s no need to do 没必要做。。。 环境保护问题典型句子
There`s no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 1. It’ our duty to save wate 2. As we know , water i
2、 提建议 s very important to man, 3.we can’
Had better do/not do t live without water.
How/what about doing 4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is lessWhy not do/why don`t+句子 and less. 5.But some people don’ care about it . 6.I think you should do Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. SomethinI suggest that you should do g must be done to stop the pollution. 7. It's our duty to If I were you,I would do 我要是你的话,我会做。。。 protect our environment。 8. It is very important to take It`s best to do care of our environment 9. We should not throw litter
3、表示喜欢,感兴趣 onto the ground 10. We should not spit in a public Like/love/enjoy doing place/ cut down the trees 11. We should plant more Be fond of/be keen on sth. flowers and trees。 12. We must pick up some rubbish Prefer to do A rather than do B and throw it into a dustbin 13. If everyone makes
Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in contribution to protecting the environment, the world will
4、努力做。。。 become much more
Try to do/strive to do beautiful。 15.Trees are very helpful and important for Make efforts to do=make every effort to do us. 17.We should plant more and more trees in order toTry one`s best/do one`s best to do
live better and more healthy in the future. it’s everyone’ Li Hua
s duty to love and protect the environment. 參考范文:
参考范文: Hello,Everyone! Here are two important activities April 28th Saturday Fine that happened this week. These days,Li Jia,our
It was Saturday, just before May Day. My classmate,has kept practising spoken English hard with classmates and I went to the park nearby, we didn't go the teacher's help. On Wednesday afternoon,she won the there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor. first prizein the English speech contest. How exciting it We got there at 9:00. We were divided into three is!We should learn from her. Yesterday,we donated 200 groups and then began working. The students in Group books, 50 backpacks and 4200 yuan for the students in One planted trees and watered flowers. The task for Sichuan. He Li alone donated 500 yuan,the most of all. Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists That's good. I think that as a student,we needn't care how and cleaning the benches. The group I was in got to the much we should give. Showing our love is the most Children's Playground and wiped all the equipment clean. important.
We worked very hard. At 11:00, when all the work was That's all,thank you!
finished up, all my classmates met again. Although 參考范文:
everyone was in a sweat, yet we felt happy because we Mr. Griffin,
had done good job. Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways 參考范文: for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class At present, a number of middle school students have One Grade Two . (As we study too long every day, every picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations. student should choose ways to relax.) In his opinion, the There are three main reasons. First, schools have best ways are watching TV and playing computer games. given students too many exams, some of which are too He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working isn't a bad way.
and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they However, I'm not quite agree with him. In my
waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. good way to help us relax. I think listening to music and Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and playing sports are good ways because they can help us parents happy. keep healthy. I often play Pingpong after class and I find In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to it really helpful to both my health and my study. Besides, our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and I think chatting with our friends isn't a bad way. I think it only in this way can we improve our study and make can help me get on better with my friends.
progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer Terry
exams and more time to study for ourselves. 參考范文:
參考范文: Dear Mum and Dad,
Dear Linda, Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very I'm very glad that you'll come to China to watch the pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The Olympic Games. I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign students in our school work hard at their lessons. They language, but I have some ideas that may help. Firstly, take an active part in activities that help to improve their it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and class and make some notes so that you can go over your always ready to help each other.
lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love practice speaking, both in and out of class. Don't be their students. They work hard and do what they can do afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read to help their students. And the students respect their more in Chinese. What's more, you'd better plan your teachers. They get on well with each other. The students time well and study it regularly every day. in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean Above all, you should be confident in yourself and and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty. I'm sure flowers.
you will succeed through your hard work. In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in atmosphere in this school. I love my new school. China. Yours,
Yours, Tom
參考范文: So we should try our best to do something to help English is one of my best subjects and I started them, just like giving them
learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very school things, clothes and so on. We believe if we beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I work together, we can make
have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as a better future for them.
listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I Thanks for your joining!
found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more Students' Union
helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy 3. 关于环境保护(水资源节约)的话题
singing English songs and I want to join an English club Our environment is very important for our lives . We or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I need the fresh air, the clean water and so on . In the past, believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and into it. the river was clean.But now,people cut down many trees. 參考范文: Air pollution and water polloution are very serious . The Last week,our school had a discussion about environment around us becomes very terrible . We whether junior students could ride electric bycycles to go should protect our environment. First, we should plant to school. 25 students of our class agreed with it, because many trees to keep water. Second , we can ride a bike or they say it was convenient for them and it could take less walk to the school and work.. Third , we shouldn’t throw time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn't the dirty water into the river . Fourth, we shouldn’t use agree with them. They said it was not safe for the junior the plastic bags. Finally, we can ask more people to join students to get to school by electric bycycles, for they us.
were too young. They also said in the morning the traffic 中考英语作文范文 人与环境
was very busy and the students couldn't ride electric Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, bycycles quickly. who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as 演讲稿 the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and Hello,everyone. Today my topic is about Project the mountains on Earth, the animals. Plant human cells, if Hope. What a sad and serious topic it is! it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the
When you sit in the big and beautiful classroom, eradication of mankind. Therefore, the environment must have you ever thought of the poor children who dropped be linked with social ethics, character education and out of school When you throw away your useless books, practice acts as an important element of it. Everyone why not give them to the poor children in the countryside must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect Maybe your answer is “Sorry, I’ve never thought the environment
of that.” To tell you the truth, I didn’t know anything 4. 中考英语作文范文 节约水
about the poor children until my teacher told me last It’s our duty to save waterAs we know , water is very week. I was shocked when I heard of that. I realized that important to man, we can’t live without water. The
we should try to help them. So I went to the post office amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. and gave away all my pocket money to Project Hope. But some people don’t care about it .They waste a lot of So my dear friends and classmates, let’s do water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty something to help them. Then the world will be nicer and water in to rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers , too. nicer. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something That’s all for today. Thank you! must be done to stop the pollution. Only in this way can 参考范文: we live happily.If we don’t save water, the last drop of Dear students, water will be a tear-drop of us.
In some parts of our country, there are many 5. 中考英语作文范文 保护我们的城市
children out of school. Because It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. their family can't afford to send them to school. At Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly. Or it the same time, children may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute the air and don't have enough money to buy school things and water. People may get ill when they breathe the polluted clothes. In myopinion,each air or drink the polluted water.
child should have the right to go to school, but there Our city has started to face the problem. Some rubbish is are few chances for them. sorted and sent to a certain place .Waste gas is cleaned
before it goes into the air. Waste water is also cleaned problem. I sincerely hope that the whole society could before it is poured into rivers. attach much importance to this issue.
People should be prevented from throwing rubbish Thanks!
everywhere. We should try our best to take care of our Yours,
environment and fight against pollution. Julie
初中英语热点话题作文 留守儿童 初中英语作文范文 压力好不好
Dear Mayor: “I can't stand the pressure and competition,” explained I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you one friend of mine when asked why he decided to quit his something aroud us. Nowadays, there are many highly-paid but demanding position in his company left-behind children whose parents work away from their recently. My friend may have his own reasons, but I hometowns. Most of them are from the coutryside, you don't think his decision is wise in reality.
know, they have many problem. They are always lonely It's true that my friend's case is not unique. In the last few and stressed out because they are short of their parents' years quite a number of men and women have chosen to love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes do something less competitive at the cost of a
even do some thing against the laws, because they're comfortable, easy life a highly-paid job can obtain. short of their families' care. They are afraid that the stresses and strains of work will How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the rob them of joy and happiness and do them harm both government can set up a parents school for these children physically and mentally. In fact, however, stress isn't on holidays, you can organize" hand-in-hand" activity to the bad thing it is often supposed to be. Unless it gets out call on more people to help them. You can also raise of control, a certain amount of stress is vital to provide money to donate to these children. As the song says:"If motivation and challenge, and to give purpose and everyone gives their love, the world will be better." It's significance to an otherwise meaningless, idle life. very important for us to pay more attention to these People under stress tend to express their full range of children if we want to build a harmonious society. potential and to actualize their own personal worth—— Best wishes to you! the very aim of a human life.
Sincerely, Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no Li Hua way to avoid it. What we can do is to develop our
【初中英语作文范文】 adaptive abilities to deal with it rather than to escape
A Letter to a Publishing House on Food Safety from it.
June 15th, 2010 【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam, A Letter of Appeal June 13, 2008
Thank you for taking time to read this letter. As the Dear friends,
problem of food safety has been becoming worse and I am writing this letter to call on everyone to pay worse nowadays, I am obliged to write to you. attention to the present disasters caused by human
Several days ago, one of my classmates came back activities. As some of you may know, over the past years, from supermarket with a large bag of food. Because of floods, droughts, landslides, and dust storms have
having found a new style of tinned?ish in the frequented our planet. Not long ago, tsunami swept the food store, she was very glad. Several other Southeast Asia, which caused enormous damage. All roommates were invited to enjoy the “mouth?atering these have sounded an alarm to human beings. So it is chicken”. Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of high time that we join efforts to save our planet。 my three friends had stomachaches and vomited, their Above all, a task of top priority for us is to plant faces having become paler and paler. Due to sensitivity to trees as many as possible, especially in the arid areas. At that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer. At that the same time, we should stop deforesting in large
time, my mind went blank. I dialed the emergency amount. And we can save our planet through many other number with my trembling hand, therefore they were ways, such as saving water and using recycled paper。 quickly sent to hospital. The doctor said they were lucky So don’t hesitate to act out these measures. Even a to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of small action is meaningful to our planet. Please join us in that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time. the action of protecting our planet. If you are willing to This is the matter that happened around me which do something to save our planet, please start from the made me realize the seriousness of the food safety little thing right around you. Thank you!
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming with a car.7. after deep consideration adv.在深思熟虑之
【 满分文展示 1 1 】 后After much thought he decided not to buy the car.4The In our daily life, we should learn to share something with proposals are still under consideration.8. work out vt. 算others. Only in this way can we live a happy 出,解出;想出See if you can work this bill out.I can't life. I still remember the story that Ishared a book with work out what to do.9. exchange vi. 交换10. approach n.my friend. When he called on me one day, I took 方法; 途径 vt.接近,靠近This isa new approach to out my favorite book and shared it with him. After language teaching.11. in groups adv.一组组地;以小组reading the book, we both thought the book was very 为单位in pairs adv.一对对地12. to one’s surprise adv.excellent. We exchanged our thoughts happily. As a 令„吃惊的是13. solve vt.解决,解答14. feel proud of result, both of us had a better understanding of the vt.对„感到自豪 =take pride in15. through this
story and benefited a lot. experience adv.通过这个经历16. share with„ vt.与„As far as I am concerned, sharingis a good way to get 分享17. be of great importance to„ 对„是非常重要along well with others. Therefore, every one of 的 =be importantto18. not only„but also„ 不仅„„us should learn to share. 而且„ (连接两个分句时,第一个分句部分倒装)19.
1. in our daily life在我们的日常生活中2. learn to do sth. build up vt.增强,增加20. build up one’s confidence vi.vi.学会去做某事3. share„with„ vi.与„分享„ 增强某人的自信21. cooperate with vt.与„ 合作
4. others 其他人5. Only in this way canwe„ 只有这样【 标准范文 】
我们才能„ (倒装句)中考考题:Only by practicing a I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I fewhours every day _____ be able to master the had to go to a new school and study in anew class. The language.A you will B can you C will you6. in thisway first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried adv.以这种方式8. call on vi.拜访(某人)call at vi.拜访and felt helpless untilone of mynew classmates came up (某地)9. one day 某一天;有一天10. take out vt.取出to meand asked softly if Iwas OK. After I told him about
11. excellent adj.卓越的12. exchange our thoughts vi.交my problem, he gaveme some advice. From then on, we 换我们各自的看法13. As a result adv.结果是14. both got to know each other and shared our ideas, problems(,) of„ 两者都„15. have a better understanding of„ vi.andhappiness. Webecame good friends. Sharing with 对„有了更好的理解16. benefit a lot vi.受益匪浅friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit benefit from vt.从„中获益17. As faras I am concerned inwith others.
就我而言18. a good way to do sth. n.做„的好方法19. 6. come up to vt.来到„近旁A mancame up to him and get along well with„ vt.与„相处得好20. therefore adv.askedfor alight.7. softly adv.轻柔地8. tell sb.about sth. vi.因此,所以21. every one of„ „中的每一个 告诉某人有关„的某事The man is telling the police
【 满分文展示 2 2 】 aboutthe accident.9. from „ on adv.从„时起From Sharing isa kind of good behavior which can bring us a then on she knew she would win.From now on you can lot of benefits. One day, our teacher asked usa very work on your own.She never spoke tohim again from that difficult mathproblem. day on.10. get to know vt(.( 开始/ / 逐渐/ / 去) ) 了解, , After deep consideration, I worked it out finally. Then 熟悉know vt.了解,熟悉;知道The new neighbours were theteacher asked usto exchange ourapproaches in groups. getting to know each other.6I'd like to get to know her To my surprise, there was more than one way to solve the better.The best way to get to know Venice is by boat.She problem. We all feltvery proud of ourselves. doesn’t know London very well.11. each other pron.彼此,Through this experience, I understand that sharing with 相互(两者之间)one another pron.彼此,相互(三者或三others is of great importance to us. Not onlycan it build 者以上之间)12. happiness n.幸福; 高兴sadness n.悲伤up our confidence, but also it can help us learn to 13. bring back 使(某人)恢复(某状态);带回MPs cooperate. voted against bringing back the deathpenalty.Don't forget
1. a kind of„ 一种„all kinds of adv.各种各样的kind to bring something backfor the kids.14. fit in with vt.of adv.有点2. behavio(u)r n.行为3. bring sb. sth. vi.带给与„融洽相处;适应;与„一致I wasn't sure if she 某人某物=bring sth. to sb.4. benefit n.益处,好处It is would fit in with my friends.Most people who come from said Yogo is of great benefit to(=is beneficial to) human other countries seem to fit in with the wayof life ealth. here.Your ideas fit inwith mine.15. others 其他人 Yogo is said to be of great benefitto human health.5. 7. 【 满分文展示 1 1 】
provide sth. forsb. vi.为某人提供某物The hotel Dear Betty,
provides a shoe-cleaning service for guests.6. provide Nice to get your letter about how to deal with test anxiety sb.with sth vi.提供给某人某物The firm has provided me yesterday. It’s common that most
10年上海市中考英语作文精选
2010学年作文范文
1.静安区
Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Where there is a will, there is a way.” (请以“有
志者事竟成”为题写话。词数不少于60个。要求内容连贯,表达清楚。标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
What do you think of this famous saying?
Give example(s) to support your idea(s).
Do you have any suggestions to others?
Possible version 1:
I think the key to success is not so much money as a strong will. I used to be poor at Physics.
So I made a will to learn it better. I worked hard and tried my best on it. Finally, I made progress.
I think it is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world. As long as you make up your mind
to do it, you will certainly fulfill your dream.
Possible version 2:
I disagree with this old saying because I think when there is a will; there should be an opportunity or a suitable
surrounding to enable the man get success. Mao zedong and his army failed in the first revolution war because they don't
have good weapon supports.
But in 1947, they are not only well supported but also get the help and hope from all the Chinese people. So they
succeeded. That shows when there is a will, there may not be a way. However, we should
try to find it, and realize the will in a proper time.
2.长宁区
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Traffic in our city”. (以“我们城市的交通”为题写一篇不少于60
个词的短文,标点符号不占格。){上海06-13中考英语作文}.
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
What do you think of the traffic in our city?
Why do you think so? (Give at least two reasons)
What is /are your suggestion(s) to improve the traffic in the city?
Possible version 1:
In my opinion, the traffic in our city is heavy and terrible. Every Friday, I see the underground station full of
people. It’s quite hard to get on the train, as well as to get off. On the ground, the traffic is also terrible as traffic
accidents are reported almost every day. The main reason is that there are too many private cars and people are
violating the traffic rules all the time. I suggest that more public transport vehicles should be put into work to
improve the heavy traffic.
Possible version 2:
Nowadays, traffic in our city becomes better and better. There are more and more cars on the roads. The number of both taxis and buses are
increasing. In addition, the underground system in shanghai seems to be very
convenient. In every corner of our city, an underground station can be found easily. However, there’re still some
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problems. For example, there’re too many private cars on the roads. Since the public transportation system is so
modern, I suggest private car owners drive less and go to work by bus or underground more often.
3.浦东区
Write at least 60 words about the topic “The subject I dislike most”. (以“我最不喜欢的学科科目”为题
写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
Which subject do you dislike most?
Why do you dislike this subject? (You’d better give two reasons.)
How can you improve this subject in future?
Possible version 1:
I dislike painting lessons most. Frankly speaking, I haven’t any talent in painting at all. The colors, shapes
and shadows are nightmare for me. Actually, I often draw pictures in a dreadful mess. Although painting is difficult for me, I like enjoying myself in a museum. Gazing at masterpieces is not bad. After all, I can’t draw a good one but I can improve this subject by enjoying those masterpieces.
Possible version 2:
My favorite subject is Math and I dislike Physics most. I dislike it because it is so hard and complex that I
never get a satisfying score. I will work hard and try my best on it. I might say that success is won by three things:
first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort. I think It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in
the world. As long as I make up my mind to do it, I will certainly make progress. And Physics won’t be the subject
I dislike most any longer.
4.虹口区
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Homework in our study”. (以“我们学习中的家庭作业”为题写一
篇至少60字的短文,标点符号不占格)。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
What do you think of homework in your study?
Why do you do your homework every day?(At least two reasons)
Is there too much homework in your daily life?
What do you want to say to your teacher or your parents?
Possible version 1:
Every day, we are busy with our studies. Our teachers often give us a lot of homework to do. After a day's
hard work, we all feel tired. We want very much to have a rest. But when we get home, we still have to do a lot of
homework. It is really a hard job. Most of the students in our class become short-sighted.
If teachers would give us less homework, we can enjoy our life more and be more willingly to go back to
school to study.
Possible version 2:
I do all my homework every day because I think it’s a students’ duty to do so. However, sometimes I feel
doing homework is a waste of time since it both boring and useless. In my opinion, truly useful homework acts as
a wonderful tutor. It summarizes the key points in our study. I would be more familiar with what I have learnt and
thus be good at them. I hope teachers would only give us homework like his and omit anything unnecessary.
Therefore, we can study more efficiently.
5.黄浦(嘉定)
Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Dream Life of Senior High School”. (以“我向往的高中生活”
为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。首句已给,不记入60个词。) 2{上海06-13中考英语作文}.
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)
What senior high school life do you like?
What do you hope to do in the senior high school?
What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have?
(You may begin your passage with:)
My dream senior high school life is …
Possible version 1:
I am looking forward to entering a senior high school. I like a modern and active school. There I can enjoy
myself very much. I hope to take a lot of lessons which I am interested in. I also want to do a lot of experiments.
Do