专四2017便条范文

专四2017便条范文篇一

专四便条写作范文与整理

Sample of Note-writing

A Letter of Apology

A Letter of Thanks

A Letter of Greeting

Cover Letter

A Letter of Recommendation

Note for Leave

专四2017便条范文篇二

英语专业四级便条写作评分标准及范文

英语专业四级考试写作评分标准(便条)

便条的评分标准

通过以上的标准列表，我们可以看出，便条的写作主要注重的是格式、内容

和语言。

考生需要做到格式正确、内容完整、表达得体、字数符合标准。下面我们以

2010年的考题为例，对便条的评分标准进行具体的说明：

Directions:

Your good friend, John, is thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party.

Write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to help him. You

have to be specific about how you can help him.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.

1．格式：（占2分）

包括日期、称呼和结尾两部分，每部分完全正确得1分，出现任何错误都不

得分。分数扣完为止，不倒扣。

1．日期( Date)：1分

正确：April 17th, 2010; April 17,2010; April l7 2010; 17 April 2010; 4/17/2010; 17/4/2010 (Apr也可以，任何

一个日期都可以)

位置在右上角或左上角。

2、称呼( Heading)：

正确：(Dear)John:(，)缺标点或标点位置错都扣一分。

位置在日期下面一行左侧。

3．结尾( Ending)：

正确：Yours sincerely,／Yours，／Sincerely yours，，Sincerely,（大小写和

标点不计）

Mary（或其他人名）

没有Yours sincerely,／Yours,／Sincerely yours，，Sincerely也可以，不扣

分；但是凡是上述词拼写错误，都扣一分；

人名和结尾语必须分成上下两行写，写在一行扣一分；

人名必须写，不能写成xxx，否则扣一分。

II．内容：（占2分） 本便条必须包括如下内容：

1．赞成想法

2．具体的建议（至少写出一点）

III. 语言：（占6分）

1．慎重打5分和6分。

2．如果格式内容得满分，但语言较差，语言分最多2分。

lv.评分总体要求：

1．语言没有严重错误，格式正确，内容完整，语言得体优美，字数符合要求(<80，>50)，语言最多可给5分。

2。便条总字数（包括两部分格式在内）要求在50-60字；不到50或超过80字（9行或9行以上）扣1分（扣在语言里）。

3．便条总分为IO分，6分为及格线。

4．阅卷教师需要输入三部分的小分。

Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

One of your foreign friends Ann plans to go sightseeing in China. You have just come back from a place which you think she might enjoy. Write a note to advise her to go to this place.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 范文

April 09, 2010

Dear Ann,

I heard that you are planning to go sightseeing in China, and I want to

recommend you a good place. I just came back from Lijiang, which has beautiful landscape, kind people and interesting custom. Two ethnic minorities are living there,

so you can buy many goods made by them and in the riverside bars you can watch shows given by them. You will have a lot of fun there.

Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You have heard that your friend, Jim, wishes to sell his bike. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 范文

April 12, 2010

Dear Jim,

I have heard that you wish to sell your bike. At the moment I just need a bike by which I can go to do my part-time job on the weekend. Would you please tell me what color your bike is and how well it works? And is it possible that I buy it at the cost of 50 yuan?

Yours,

Mary

Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Your friend, Ann, just lost her grandmother, and is feeling very sad about it. Write a note to comfort her.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 范文

April12, 2010

Dear Ann,

I am really sore] to hear that your grandmother has passed away. I know your feeling because 2 years ago I lost my grandfather, and I was very sad at that time.

Please pull yourself together and try to be strong. Your grandmother knew you loved her very much and that will be enough. She will rest in peace.

Yours,

Joa

Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You have heard that there will be a fancy ball next week on the campus, which you are very interested in. Write a note to ask your friend Mike, one of the organizers of the ball, for the details of the ball.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 范文

April12, 2010

Dear Mike,

I have heard that there will be a fancy ball next week on the campus, and that you are one of the organizers. I am really interested in the fancy ball and want to

attend it very much. Would you please tell me the time and place of the ball? And do I need an invitation to attend the ball?

Yours,

Joan

Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Last Saturday you went to Mike's home as a house guest. He and his family gave you a warm welcome and made delicious food for you. Write him a note to thank him and his family.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

范文

April 12, 2010

Dear Mike,

What a happy day I have had last Saturday in your home! You and your family were most kind to me and gave me such warm welcomes. The food made by your mother was so delicious that I can hardly forget it. Thank you so much for having invited me! And please remember me to your family!

Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You just heard that your friend Danny has gained admittance to Tsinghua University as a graduate student. Write a note to him, offering him your sincere congratulations.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 范文

April 12, 2010

Dear Danny,

I just heard that you had gained admittance to Tsinghua University as a graduate student. How happy I am to hear that! I know that it's your dream to go to Tsinghua University for further study. You are always studying so hard that I believe your dream will come true one day. Congratulations to you!

Yours,

Joan

专四2017便条范文篇三

专四作文12种便条类型范文

专四作文12种便条类型范文

1.邀请便条： ①发出邀请

a April 20, 2008

Dear Fiona,

I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours. The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy time together. Please let me know whether you can make it.

Yours,

Amelia

发出邀请b

April 20, 2008

Dear Fiona,

Here is a piece of good news for you. The * will give a performance in the * tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it .The performance will begin at seven o‟clock sharp. I will wait for you at the theater entrance. Please let me know whether you can make it at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Amelia

发出邀请c

April 20, 2008

Dear Professor Zhou,

I am Amelia from class 052; I need you to give me some suggestion on my project. If it doesn‟t trouble you too much, shall we have a meet at your office tomorrow? Time is up to you.

Respectful yours,

Amelia

发出邀请d（通知）

April 20, 2008

Dear girls and boys in Class 0403,

This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m. to 9 p. m., at Singeing dining hall, there will be a ball held by Class 0301. We warmly invite you to take part in it. There you can enjoy yourselves with dance, music and various games. And we‟ll have a chance of communication, which will enhance the friendship between us. Come and enjoy ourselves together.

Yours,

Mike{专四2017便条范文}.

Monitor of Class 0301

②接受邀请

April 20, 2008

Dear Amelia,

It‟s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to come. I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m. this evening. (如果是办在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Fiona

③拒绝邀请

April 20, 2008

Dear Amelia，

It‟s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to but I have a meeting to attend this evening, please give my best regards to them all and I hope my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience, have fun.

Yours,

Amelia

2．请假条

April 20, 2008

Dear Ms. Jiang,

I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two periods of English Class （I„m terribly sorry to apply for ten days‟ leave from the Aug. 23rd to Sep. 3rd）due to a bad cold and high fever. I will show you the certificate from the doctor to support my application. I will go back to school as soon as I recover.（I promise I will do my best to catch the missed lessons on after I come back.）Wish for your allowance.

Yours respectfully,

Amelia

3．请求便条

a．讲清事情的因由（为什么请求）

b．请求行为

c．请求实现方式

d．致谢

套句：{专四2017便条范文}.

请求帮助： Would you do me a favor? Would you be so kind as to…?/ Could I trouble you to send this book for me?/ I wonder if you would tell me…?/ If it is not too troublesome, could you…?/ I hope this request will not trouble you too much.

请求允许：Please give me a few more days./May I have a look at your dictionary? / Would you mind if I opened the window? / I wonder if I could open the door. / Would it be possible to have a talk with you?

请求做事(要求与暗示)：Let‟s go to the bookstore this afternoon./ I want to have a look at your book. / I wish you could…/ I would like ask you to clean the room./ You are making a big mess./ I feel a bit hungry now. What time is it now?

范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Professor Hu,

I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American

Literature”. But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout. Your lecture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the handout to the address:

zhang123@yahoo.com.cn .Heartfelt thanks.

Respectfully yours,

Amelia

4．抱怨投诉便条(关键词complain, dissatisfaction){专四2017便条范文}.

a．抱怨投诉行为

b．投诉内容具体描述

c．要求弥补纠正赔偿

d．抱怨投诉者对弥补纠正赔偿等的敦促或威胁

套句：

行为描述I‟m writing to bring your attention to the problems I have had with … Here‟s the problem…

解决方式的要求：It would be very kind( considerate) of you to…address this problem soon. / take steps to rectify this situation soon. / turn it down a little? / 敦促或威胁: Frankly, I really can‟t put up with the situation any more. You must rectify the situation, or I will take it to the court. / If you can‟t give me a satisfactory answer, I will complain it to the Consumer Association.

范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Sir or Madam,

I went to your store to buy a Radio watch last Sunday. When I mentioned the high price, the No. 5 saleswoman replied in a sarcastic tone, “You can go ahead and buy a cheap fake from other stores”. She didn‟t know how to treat a prospective buyer!

I hope you can improve your service and give me a face-to-face apology. My telephone number is 010-12345567.

Sincerely yours,

Amelia

5.道歉便条

a道歉的行为与内容，

b具体理由，

c弥补方法，

d进一步致歉。

套句：

道歉行为： I‟m writing to show my apology for…/ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to…/I‟m sorry to say that I‟ve not finished reading it through, and have to keep it until next Sunday. / Excuse me for my delaying in turning in my assignment.

道歉理由：I had a minor accident./ I had a minor operation.

弥补纠正及其承诺：I am sure I can make up the loss by…/ I promise it will never happen again. / It would be very kind(considerate) of you to give me another chance to…( to give me another two days

进一步致歉： Many apologies. / Do please forgive me.

范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Fiona,

I am writing to you to apologize for the abrupt way I departed just after the

exams finished. It was terribly rude of me to have left without saying good-bye to you. The fact is that I was so excited when I learned I had passed the exams with high marks that I couldn‟t wait to get home and tell my parents. I am sure you will understand my feelings. Please accept my sincere apology, and with you a really happy holiday.

Yours truthfully,

专四2017便条范文篇四

专四便条基本格式

基本格式

Tues. Feb.11 Dear Prof. Li,

I’m sorry I couldn’t make our 3 o’clock appointment. Prof. Huang’s lecture lasted a lot longer than I had expected. I could meet you in the department office tomorrow at 3 p.m., if that is convenient for you. If not, please leave a not in my mailbox, #529, tomorrow morning. Thank you.

Sincerely yours,

Niu Jindao • Date 日期

• Salutation 称呼

• Body 正文

• Complimentary Close 署名

英文便条和信件有两种常用格式：一，和中文书信一样，日期右上角，称呼左上角顶格，署名右下角末尾。二，全文采取左对齐格式，所有的段落和称呼开头都做左对齐处理，这是后来人们为了方便而通行的简便格式

Date

英欧：日/月/年 美国：月/日/年

April 17th, 2010; April 17, 2010; April 17; 17 April 2010; 4/17/2010; 17/4/2010 (Apr.也可以，任何一个日期都可以）注意：21st, 22nd, 23rd

月份：Jan. Feb. Mar. Apr. Aug. Sept. Oct. Nov. Dec. May(没缩略） Jun. Jul.（最好写全June July）

星期：Mon. Tues. Wed. Thurs. Fri. Sat. Sun.

时间：点：分 a.m.或AM p.m.或PM

Salutation称呼

左上方，末尾逗号。

(1)不熟悉的人，表示尊重：Dear Madam, Dear Sir, Dear President, Mr. Smith, Dear Prof. Wang

(2) 相识：Dear Shirley, Dear Xiaodong. (3) 亲近或家人：Dear Mom, Dear Mary,

(Yours sincerely, Yours, Sincerely yours, Sincerely ）没有也可以，但凡是拼写错误，都扣一分。

Mary

结尾和套语

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正式：Faithfully yours, Respectfully yours, Sincerely yours, Truly yours, Yours truly, Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Yours.

一般情况下：Liu, Xiaodong, Liu Xiaodong

其它注意事项 1：标点符号

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• 月份、星期缩写用句号 月/日/年格式，逗号，Sep. 23, 2010 称呼后面一定有标点：逗号或冒号 结尾客套语后面一定是逗号 签名后面一定不能有标点符号

其它注意事项2：布局

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• 向右靠：时间、结尾客套语、签名 向左靠：称呼 正文段落：建议采用折中式段落，即：段首空4个字符，两端对齐 结尾客套语和签名不能写在同一行

其它注意事项3：字数

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• 50-60单词 少于50词或多于80词扣一分

便条的分类

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• 功能：邀请、祝贺、感谢、道歉、举荐、倡议（建议）、申请、告示、通知等。 TEM4考试的内容肯定和学生的生活相关，因而出现较强的实用性。因为字数要求在50-60字左

右，因此要求考生必须开门见山，直接进入话题，切记啰嗦。

1. 邀请

1. 诚挚邀请对方参加某一活动；

2. 概括介绍活动的内容和安排；

3. 再次表示诚意。

邀请例——晚宴

May 5, 2010 Dear Mrs. Wang,

We should be very much pleased if you and Mr. Wang would dine with us on Wednesday at 7 o’clock. It will be quite a small party, as we have only asked Mr. and Mrs. Anderson and Miss Chang Ling, all close friends of ours. We trust you will be disengaged and able to give us the pleasure of your company.

Truly yours, Tom

邀请例——学术讲座

May 5, 2010 Dear Professor Ma,

We would be very grateful if you could give us a talk on “The Skills for TTEM-8 Writing” on this coming Friday, 3 p. m. If this subject does not suit you or that time is not convenient for you, and other similar topic and time would also be welcome. If you have any decision, call me at the cell phone number:1384669878768.

Thank you.

Respectfully yours,

Shan Yang

Chairperson of Students’ Union

邀请例——妙语锦句

•{专四2017便条范文}.

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• I am pleased to invite you to… Is there any chance of your coming… I was wondering if you could come… I would like to invite you to… I would be very happy if you could come… I hope you’re not too busy to come… We sincerely hope you can attend.. Would it be possible for you to come to…

2. 接受邀请

1. 感谢；

2. 明确表示赴邀；

接受邀请——例

May 5, 2010 Dear Mr. Tom,

Please accept our hearty thanks for your kind invitation to your home dinner on Wednesday. Thank you for including us among the limited number of your guests. You may be sure we will join you on that day and we are looking forward to the pleasure of being with you.

Yours sincerely, Wang Hong

接受邀请——锦言妙语

We are delighted to accept..

It is with great pleasure…

We are sincerely happy to join you…

3. 婉拒

4. 收到邀请；

5. 表示感谢；

6. 阐述不能赴邀的原因；

7. 表示遗憾和良好的祝愿{专四2017便条范文}.

婉拒——例

May 5, 2010 Dear Mr. Tom,

We are appreciative of your so warmly including us among your selected guests for Wednesday. Most unfortunately, however, we shall not be able to avail ourselves of your kind invitation on account of a previous engagement for the same day. I have ordered the Xinxin Department Store to deliver you a trifle

which please accept as a humble token of our felicitation on the party.

With best wishes for a very jolly home diner.

Yours sincerely, Wang Hong 婉拒——锦言妙语

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• I shall have to say no to your kind invitation… Very regretfully… Unfortunately, it will be impossible…

Because of…, we find we cannot…

4. 感谢

1. 对于收信人的帮助、给予的接待或赠送的礼品表示感谢；

2. 解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处；

3. 再次表示诚挚谢意，并可表示希望回报对方；

感谢——例

May 5, 2010 Dear Mr. Wallash,

I am sincerely grateful for your generous recommendation, I am now a post-graduate of the History Department of California University and I will begin my study here tomorrow. The Dean of our department, Prof. Hopkins, did read your letter carefully and said he was glad to have a student of yours in his department. He especially mentioned his pleasant experience of working together with you in Zhejiang University and expressed his wish to invite you a visiting scholar to our department. Thank you again for your help in recommending me a post-graduate.

Yours sincerely, Zhang Hong

感谢——锦言妙语

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5. 祝贺

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• 祝贺的便条有多种，如节日、生日、乔迁、病愈、入学、毕业、就业、比赛、考试等等； 将祝贺的内容写简练，要掌握几种表示祝贺的特殊句型。

祝贺——例

May 5, 2010 Dear John,

I just write to express my heartiest congratulations on your moving into your new house. It is really good news you have at last a house of your own designing, located on a scenic hillside. I can imagine how happy you and your family are. I do wish to call to see you and your new house one of these days.

Yours sincerely,

Jerry

6. 道歉

由于违约，或做错了事，说错了话，或是因为服务不周造成了某种不良后果，当事人必须为此道歉。表示道歉的便条要求写条人态度一定要诚恳、真实。

道歉——例

Mar. 6, 2009 Dear Wang ling,

I am terribly sorry you have been fined by the library for not having returned the book on UFO on time. It is all my fault, which caused you so much trouble. I took the book away without letting you know. I am writing to express my apology and I will give you the money the amount you have been fined. I sincerely hope this incident will not destroy our friendship.

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Lan

7. 申请

申请的目的可能是申请入学、申请奖学金、申请就业等。一封申请函必须标明申请的目的，申请的原因以及对自身情况的介绍。

申请——例

Mar. 6, 2009 Dear Sirs,

With reference to your advertisement in the China press this morning I beg to offer myself for the position as a salesman.

I am 22 yeas old and expect to get the bachelor’s degree on Business Management this summer. During my for years college life, I served as the chairman of Students Union of the university for two years. I had three years experience as a salesman in the house of Mothercare. I am punctual, energetic and ready to be contributive to your company.

I hope you may arrange an interview with me soon. Dial 13025664688 if you need to contact me. I will be always available to this number.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Lili

8. 举荐

举荐或是介绍某人做某事，在日常生活中是比较常见的一件事。举荐或介绍既要实事求是，又要做到举荐或介绍有力。内容要略述被举荐人或被介绍人的智力和能力却能胜任某项工作。

举荐——例

Mar. 6, 2009

Dear Ling,

It is my pleasure to recommend Liu Gang for your consideration as he applies for the post as a market