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1999-2010近十年全国语文高考作文题目汇总
1999-2008年上海高考英语作文及范例
高考英语开放性作文的典范
——1999—2008年上海高考英语作文及范例
1999年上海高考作文及范例
一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英语;我认为„„(观点、理由)
Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language
is a weapon in the struggle of life”. Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is
nothing but a burden to them.
In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I
like English best.
There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most
widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the
world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit
me in my work. Secondly,it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and
opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an
advantage over those who cannot.
For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time
possible. (166words)
2000年上海高考作文及范例
1、我最难忘的一课 2、具体说明为何难忘 3、感想
An Unforgettable Lesson
In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable
thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she
had an accident.
One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had
had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we
were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do
whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced.
But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of
our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.
She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her
lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of
homework from her.
A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a
good teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps
liked best. (210 words)
2001年上海高考作文及范例
请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。
Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else,
private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be
listed as follows.
First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to
move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are
able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will
develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more people
buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the
automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron
and steel production, energy and technological application.
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many
cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic
accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking
spaces.
Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than
encouraged. (199 words)
2002年上海高考作文及范例
简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this
child is regarded as the treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents
usually over indulge the child.
We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the
grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the
child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.
We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall.
So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on
their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t
learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in
the future?
For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves
and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager
parent.
The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we
have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. (219 words)
2003年上海高考作文及范例
你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信,谈谈你的看法和建议。
受信人:徐海青 寄信人:黄平 写信日期:2003年六月八日
June 8, 2003
Dear Xu Haiqing,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but
you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views
on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.
Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always
remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies.
No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your
examinations.
A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand
that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with
enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every
means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will
benefit you a lot in your later life.
I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life
and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words)
2004年上海高考作文及范例
老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决
定并谈谈想法。
Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was so glad
at that. But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not.
Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think
it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing. The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.
However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies as well. Perhaps…
No! No! No! I should believe my ability. I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper… It will be an hour for me to do something for my class. I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself.
Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job. I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow. (187)
2005年上海高考作文及范例
古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent)。 通过描述你 生活中一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.
When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.
To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.
From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. (200 words)
2006年上海高考作文及范例{1999年高考作文}.
下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择,并结合个人情况说明理由。
I dream to become an astronaut. Two universities in China can make my dream become true. They are both very good, but I can only choose one.
From the Internet, I learned that there are more advantages offered by the northern university than the ones by the southern one. For example, the fee charged by the northern one is lower. And it will add 20 marks while the southern university will not. In contrast, the southern university’s good point is that it enrolls more students.
After comparing the above information, I think I will choose the northern university for the following reasons. Firstly, my parents may not be able to afford my study and living expenses. Secondly, an addition of twenty marks is certainly an irresistible attraction. More importantly, four years of independent life in the north will obviously help develop my personality required as an astronaut.
2007年上海高考作文及范例
以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容:
1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物;
2、 该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。
A Present for Father’s Day
The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.
Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends.
2008年上海高考作文及范例
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing cooipetition),班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。
你的文章必须包括以下内容:
·你是否会参加比赛
·你做出该决定的具体理由
Version 1:
A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.
For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
Version 2:
Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition
1999-2015年上海高考英语作文及参考范文
历年上海高考英语作文及参考范文
1999上海高考作文及范例
一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英语;我认为。。。。。。(观点、理由)
Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a
weapon in the struggle of life”, Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is
nothing but a burden to them.
In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I
like English best.
There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject.
First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the
Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of
English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly,it is believed that good English also leads to
greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak
English has an advantage over those who cannot.
For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words)
2000年上海高考作文及范例
1。我最难忘的一课 2。具体说明为何难忘 3。感想
An Unforgettable Lesson
In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing
which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an
accident.
One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had
an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were
planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever
we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to
our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our
classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.
She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture
quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of
homework from her.
A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good
teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps
liked best. (210 words)
2001年上海高考作文及范例
请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。
Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else,
private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be
listed as follows.
First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to
move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are
able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China
will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more
people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of
the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as
iron and steel production, energy and technological application.
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many
cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more
traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available
parking spaces.{1999年高考作文}.
Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than
encouraged. (199 words)
2002年上海高考作文及范例
2002年的作文题提供了一幅图片,图片上女儿在学骑自行车。奶奶、父亲和一手拿着急救
箱的母亲三人满头大汗地扶着车,深怕女儿摔着了。图片下面有一行字:你们让我骑好吗?
简述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is
regarded as the treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents usually
over indulge the child.
We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the
grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the
child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.
We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So
I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on
their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t
learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in
the future?
For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves
and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager
parent.
The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we
have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. (219 words)
2003年上海高考作文及范例
你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信,谈谈你的看法和建议。 受信人:徐海青寄信人:黄平写信日期:2003年六月八日
June 8, 2003
Dear XuHaiqing,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.
Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.
A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.
I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words)
2004年上海高考作文及范例
老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。
Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was so glad at that. But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not.
Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing. The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.
However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies as well. Perhaps…
No! No! No! I should believe my ability. I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper… It will be an hour for me to do something for my class. I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself.
Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job. I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow. (187)
古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent)。通过描述你
生活中一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.
When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them. To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.
From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. (200 words)
2006年上海高考作文及范例
下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择,并结合个人情况说明理由。
南方大学北方大学
学费 8000元/年 5000元年
招生人数 20人 10人
优惠政策无加20分
I dream to become an astronaut. Two universities in China can make my dream become true. They are both very good, but I can only choose one.
From the Internet, I learned that there are more advantages offered by the northern university than the ones by the southern one. For example, the fee charged by the northern one is lower. And it will add 20 marks while the southern university will not. In contrast, the southern university’s good point is that it enrolls more students.
After comparing the above information, I think I will choose the northern university for the following reasons. Firstly, my parents may not be able to afford my study and living expenses. Secondly, an addition of twenty marks is certainly an irresistible attraction. More importantly, four years of independent life in the north will obviously help develop my personality required as an astronaut.
以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容:
1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物;
2、 该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。
A Present for Father’s Day
The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.
Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends.
2008年上海高考作文及范例
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing cooipetition),班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。
你的文章必须包括以下内容:
•你是否会参加比赛
•你做出该决定的具体理由
Version 1:
A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class. For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
Version 2:
Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.
There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.
For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.
1999-2014高考英语作文
1999-2014年高考英语上海卷写作真题 参考作文
【高考试题--1999年】
1.一些学生认为学英语很重要。2.一些学生则认为不必学英语。3.我认为„„(观点、理由)
Some students think it is very important to learn English. But others don't think so. They think it is
unnecessary to study English. In my opinion, studying English is very important and necessary. First, English is English well, we will find a lob easily... In a word, English is very important. So we must try our best to study it.
考题拓展:运动有助于人体健康。有的人爱有的人爱,你认为什么是最好的运动形式。请说明理由。
With the improvement of living standard nowadays, more and more people are paying attention to physical
fitness. It has been a trend to take physical exercises. Some people choose aerobic exercises, others prefer such sports as running, tennis, swimming, etc. But to me, walking still has its advantages which cannot be taken place of.
First, walking is so convenient that you can do it whenever you want. This may happen on the way to work,
in the spare time after supper, or even when out for a newspaper. Never look down upon such kind of exercise. No other forms of sports can be practiced so frequently and freely as walking.
Next, as for its effect, walking still keeps the lead. When you're walking, all muscles from top to down are
exercised, which may not be noticed by most people. What's more, walking doesn't demand much of strength. Thus it's suitable for a wide range of people, from kids at kindergarten to senior people with grey hair. Its popularity shouldn't be ignored.
Last but not least, walking is totally free, while other sports require a lot, especially the cost. To this point,
walking is not only effective, but also very economic.
As a conclusion, walking is superior to other sports in many ways. When you want some exercises, try doing
some walking, only then can you really understand what I'm saying today.
【高考试题--2000年】1.我最难忘的一课。2.具体说明为何难忘。3.感想。
Writing 1:
Last winter I went to Santa Barbara C.A.U.S. to spend three weeks' time studying with America high school
students. There, I learned a lot of new things and I will never forget that Astrology class.
That morning we went to the local museum to have my first class abroad. During the class, we had a
discussion on whether we should go on our space project or set all the money aside for other use. With the advanced teaching materials and the experienced teacher we had a general idea of our space achievements and the failure as well. To my surprise, I first realized that with the population explosion, the energy crisis and the pollution, the earth is faced up with more difficulties than ever before. And without space project we couldn't find new energy resources, new food to eat even new planet to live.
This class is the most important one to me, not only because it's my first class abroad but also because it
made me realize how important space exploration is to us.
Writing 2:
I will never forget that English lesson which I had at Grade Two.
On that day, we took out our English books and waited for our English teacher as usual. But to our surprise,
she entered the classroom without the English book, but a radio and some paper instead. She delivered the paper and told us that we would hear an English song and she also asked us to fill in the blankets in the paper while listening to the song. How wonderful! It was the first time for all of us to have such a test. We turned very excited and listened to the song very carefully. What surprised us most was that we master the new words more quickly that ever before.
I like this lesson. It was a new way for us to learn English words. It also helped to develop our interest in
English.
I will never forget that English lesson.
【高考试题--2001年】请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。
Writing 1:
Because of the reform and opening policy, our country is developing quickly. People are richertoday than in
the past. And now many people can afford to buy their own cars. But large quantities offamilies buying cars will have disadvantages as well as advantages.
To families, cars will make people's life more convenient. They won’t have to wait for a bus or walk a long
way any more.
To the economy, producing cars will encourage the development of industry. With a highly developed
industry, our country will be more competitive.{1999年高考作文}.
But, on the other hand, large quantities of cars running in the streets will do great harm to theenvironment.
Cars will let out CO2, NO2 and some other harmful gas, most of which can do harm to theatmosphere. So enough attention should be paid to this problem.
In summary, cars will bring us great benefits but we should also try to avoid its bad effect at thesame time.
Writing 2:
Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on therise. Like everything else, private cars have
both favourable andunfavorable aspects. Generally, the favourable aspects can be listedas follows.
First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably,
safely as well as quicklyand freely. When my family owns a car, we can make extensivetravels every year. So I believe the tourist industry in China willdevelop more quickly. Second, if more people buy cars, automobileindustry will develop dramatically. What' s more, the growth ofautomobile industry can trigger the boom of other important industrysuch as iron and steel production, energy and technologicalapplication.
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are alsoapparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise
to a series ofproblems, such as serious environmental pollution and more trafficaccidents. In addition, the driver may have to drive around andaround looking for a parking Through above analysis, we may conclude that private carsshould be restricted rather than encouraged.
【高考试题--2002年】简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
Writing 1:
In the picture, we can see that the girl's parents and her grandmother are helping
the girl, whichmakes it impossible for the girl to ride bicycle on herself. What is more
ridiculous, her mother eventakes some medicine with her.
In fact, this is not a picture just for fun. It tells us that parents shouldn't help their
children toomuch. They should let their children be more independent.
Many parents share the opinion that they must get every thing ready for their
children so that theirchildren could put more emphasis on their study. They all failed to
consider that with help of thiskind, children won't be able to live their own life without
their parents in the future. Nowadays, it isoften reported that a certain college student don't know how to wash her socks! How can she competewith others after graduation?
Love and attention is needed in the growth of a child, but it should never be too much or you’ll spoil the
child and he will accomplish nothing in his life.
点评:本文内容充实,详略得当。能根据写作要求,简要描述了图片内容,并能结合生活中的实例,谈出自己的感想。具有较好的语言表达能力。虽然有些语法错误,但全文流畅,句型较多样,词汇较丰富。
Writing 2:
Due to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over-indulge the child.
We can see in the picture, when a child is learning to ride it bicycle, the parents and the grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child; for fear that she should fall and hurt herself.
We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents' protection, the children know only comfort and ease. If they don't learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in the future?
For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community, without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent.
The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century.
【高考试题--2003年】你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写封信,谈谈你的看法和建议。 收信人: 徐海青
寄信人: 黄平(不可用自己的真实姓名)
写信日期: 2003年6月8日
Writing 1:
Dear Haiqin, June 8, 2003
I'm writing to you to share my opinions on fashion with you, for I have just heard that you wereunhappy because you couldn't buy something of famous brands.
I shall say that it is natural for everyone to pay much emphasis on his own image and it is truethat fashionable clothes, shoes or something like that will make you more fashionable and eye-catching. However, everyone has own family background, and it is really extravagant for you to buy these.Besides, it will also add to the burden of your parents.
What's more, beauty is just skin deep, and there are many things which can make you popularwith others except fashion. A great amount of knowledge, noble character and a warm heart will surelywin you others' respect and admiration. Good qualities is the treasure in your life which is more valuable than anything you wear.
Never judge a book by its cover. I hope that you will remember the saying and become as happyas you used to be.
Yours,
Huang Ping
点评:能根据写作题要求,以朋友的身份,首先表示了对海青闷闷不乐心情的谅解,然后又从外表和内在的关系上开导对方,读来亲切感人。内容充实,语言较流畅。虽然有些语法错误,但整体结构合理,句型较多样,词汇较丰富。
Writing 2:
June 8, 2003
Dear Xu Haiqing,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn't afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.
Firstly, you shouldn't put too much emphasis on physicalappearance.You must always remember the most important task foryou today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matterwhat you wear, you will really look your best when you come outfirst in your examinations.
A famous saying goes, "Frugality is the mother of virtue." So,secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn to livein frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enoughmoney to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessaryfor you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of yourfamily.
You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot inyour later life.
I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take apositive attitude towards life and will be happy again after you readmy letter.
Best Regards,
Huang Ping
【高考试题--2004年】老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall paper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表达你的决定并谈谈想法。
Writing 1:
Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper for our class. I was so glad at that. But now I don’t know whether I should acceptthe demand or not.
Though in Class 4 for nearly 2 years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a goodopportunity to devote my efforts to the class if I take the job. On the other hand, I'm good at drawing.The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.
However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it willtake me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies. Perhaps...