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凯文老师,2015年上海高考英语作文题目(作文解析和范文)
2015年上海高考英语作文解析,及,作文范文
II. Guided Writing (25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:
1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
作文解析:
今年的英语作文题目同样重点考察了主观理由型作文的写作手法,这篇文章要求学生在三幅学校读书节宣传图片当中选出自己最喜欢的一幅,对图片进行描述并说明原因。这也是继2013年和2014年连续两年考察书信体与主观理由型文章的结合体之后出现的第三篇主观理由型文章。
整体来看,今年的作文题目似乎与往年没有什么区别,但细细分析,我们会发现今年英语作文的难度,不管是在文章内容、还是在形式上面,都有了大幅提升。因为考生需要同时兼顾三个难点:1、书信体正确的的书写格式;2、对图片内容进行细节的描述;3、找出恰当的理由(2-3点)进行论证,说理充分,同时注意论点和论据相结合,以及文章语句之间的逻辑严密性。可以说,近三年来英语作文虽然都在考察主观理由这个大的方向,但是考察的难度确实是在逐年递增。
对于考生来说,要想在短短的20分钟之内写好这篇作文,首先需要拿捏好这篇文章的结构。一般来说,文章第一段用来引出话题,第二段可以对所选择的图片进行描写,描写时要格外注意的地方是对细节的详细描述,基本内容讲清楚就可以开始第三段的理由阐述了。
写好重头戏理由之后,在尾段我们无需过多笔墨,基本上通过三句话就可以收尾了。也就是总结加升华,由于这是一篇征集建议的书信体文章,所以需要最后有一句客套话,考生可以通过Looking forward to your reply或者I will appreciate it very much if you can take my suggestions into consideration进行文章自然收尾。这样整篇文章便达到了内容统一,结构完整,说理充分了
作文范文:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.
In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiam about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of particiation and common interest.
I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Pan Yang
近年上海市英语高考作文范文参考
近年上海市英语高考作文范文参考
2002年高考英语作文
看图作文
For many child, learning to bike can be a fun experience, but this is not the cases with the girl in the picture, who obviously has no fun at all. For fear that she may fall off the bike, her parents are holding the handle, with her grandmother giving a hard push from behind. The three adults are dripping with sweat while the gitl is sitting on the saddle wondering who actually is learning to bike a bike. They have without doubt gone too far protecting the gitl.
Today's parents seem to be too protective of their children, which can de a barrier to their growth and development. Rather, children should be encouraged to learn to do things on their own. Of course, they are likely to run into setbacks, but it is these setbacks that can teach them to be mature and independent. Don't you think so ?
2003年高考英语作文
你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写封信,谈谈你的看法和建议。
Dear Haiqing,
How're you doing? Are you still in low spirits just because you couldn't afford the desigher clothes you wanted to but last week? As your good friend, I musy give tou some advice, and I hope I'm not offending you.
Designer clothes may look fancy, but they are expensive. Buying the simply means placing an additional burden on your parents, who are both ordinary workers. Besides, you do not look all the more handsome just because you are wearing desigher cholthes. As the saying goes, "A book is not judged by it cover." Likewise, one is not judged by one's appearance. Don't you notice that all your classmates thing highly of you because of your excellent performance and helpfulness at school? It is your hard work and kind heart that make you so popular with us. Cheer up, buddy! Call me any time if you feel like talking to me.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Huang Ping
2004年高考英语作文
老师要求你负责班级墙报工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈看法。
I felt very happy tpday when my teacher asked me to be in charge of a wall
newspaper for my class. I consider it an honor and a challenge, an honor because my teather has confidence in my ability, and a challenge beacause editing a wall newspaper is totally a new experience to me.
As a wall newspaper consists of both content and design, I plan to divide the whole class into two groups: one dealing with writing and the other dealing with designing. To make the wall newspaper informative, interesing and educational, I will get the writing group to collect the latest science reports as well as human interest stories and rewrite them in simple words. Iwant to make sure that each and every article in the wall
newspaper is fun and easy to read. I will also get the designing group to come up with a layout that is vivid and eye-catching. For this purpose , I will use more pictures than words. I believe a wall newspaper designed in such a way should meet my teacher's expectations.
2005年高考英语作文
古人云:“天生我材必有用” 请你描述你生活中的一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
Many people, especially those who think they are not as talented as others, tend to give up in their undertakings and thus complain about life. Such people will certainly end up getting nowhere. Notice that most successful people are not unlike us. What makes them stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing, which is typical of the story of Li Dahua, a neighbor of mine.
Dahua was brought up in a poor family. Since he didn't do well in school, he joined his father in collecting garbage for a living soon after he graduated from elementary school. His neighbors shook their heads whenever they saw him, thinking that this boy would by no means carve out a bright future. Years passed by, and Dahua kept collecting garbage, but he took one step further. Through books he knew how to sort out the waste he had collected and have it recycled. You know what? He has set up a recycling factory and
become the richest man in town! His success proves the ancient Chinese saying: "There must be a use for my talent."
2006年高考英语作文{上海高考英语范文}.
下表提供了你心仪的两所大学的招生信息。通过比较做出选择,并结合个人情况说明理由。 范文A
Of the two universities listed above, I prefer the one in the north. The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year, compared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south. This makes a big diference for a family like a mine, because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family. Studying at the northern university can save my father big money.
Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern
university offers. Any candidate wo chooses to study there may gain an extra 20 points, which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university. Of course, it doesn't mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance exam because this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only. However, I have been doing quite well in school, so I believe I can pass the entrance exam with flying colors.
范文B
Compared with the northern university, the southern one is more to my liking. It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter. However , that's not a problem to me because I can work my way through college once I get
admitted. What counts is the reputation it has. Once I enter this school, my future career is guaranteed.
Also, the university in the south recruits 20 news tudents instead of 10, which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted. The competition is very keen, though, as you can see because this university doesn't give candidates any extra points. So all I can do now is study hard, pass the tough entrance exam, and qualify as a student of the university of my choice.
2007上海高考英语高分作文(gift) Confidence, which may contribute to one’s success, is regarded as one of
the most important qualities in human beings nowadays. Hence, I intend to make it a present to send to my dear sister. My sister, three years junior to me, will be faced with her entrance examinations to senior high schools. As a less confident girl, it might be a little difficult for her to show her best in the tests. As we all know, confidence lays a vital role in one’s performances and enables people to behave better. With confidence brought to her, she will be more confident of herself. As a result, she can perform her best in the exam and enjoy good marks. In addition, filled with full confidence, she will believe in her own ability and try her best to solve all the problems. Moreover, confidence
will bring a lot of benefits to her whole life.
Given the factors I have outlined, I have made up my mind to send the unusual and precious gift --- confidence, to my sister. (174)
9+8+4=21
2013高考上海卷英语作文范文以及点评
名呈教育个性化学习中心 Famedu Personalized Learning Center
2013高考上海卷英语作文点评
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;
2. 说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比) Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum is to hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re collecting public suggestions about which location to hold it. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far I’it is more reasonable to hold the painting exhibition in than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.
What’s more, Shanghai than community libraries, providing visitors with a environment to appreciate the famous paintings.
’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.
Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.
Yours,
Wang Min
名呈教育个性化学习中心 Famedu Personalized Learning Center
赏析:
今年上海市的高考英语作文话题贴近学生的生活实际,用书信的载体呈现,让考生对画展感觉到有话可以说,但是想要达到A类作文,不仅需要有扎实语言功底,还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆及画展等生活类的语言应用娴熟,更需要学生从专业一点的角度,深入分析其选择的理由,这个层面很多学生很难用专业的语言区描述,学生平时学习时间紧张,没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动,而且在紧张的时间里,更别提用一些复杂的语言结构区展示自己的理由,所以学生写到高分不是很容易,大部分学生得到15/16分是没有问题的。采取这样的命题思路对英语教学有较好的反馈作用,学校和家庭不仅仅督促学生的学习更要提供机会让孩子走出课堂,走向社会,培养学生创造性和批判性思维。
提示:
生活类词汇: museum library painting high- tech monitor security guard
分词的应用:located providing 句型:主语从句 标语从句 倒装等
上海高考英语全真范文
上海高考作文
2010年上海高考作文及范例
下图是小学新生的课堂一脚,对照你当时的上课情况,作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括: ●描述图片里学生上课的场景
●比较你同时期的上课情况
●简单谈谈你的感受
As is described in the picture, a group of foreign students are raising their hands to
give answers to the question in a joyful and active way. The purpose of the picture is to
show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.
Compared with the class performance in local China, the difference is quite obvious.
We Chinese students stay quiet in class, keep taking notes and listen to what teacher is
talking in a careful way.
I ask myself what causes lead to the phenomenon? Why class performance of Chinese students is quite different from that of foreign students? Possible reasons can be listed as follows. Most important of all, education system in China is the key reason. The first day we become the primary student, our teachers tell us to obey the rules in class. We put our
hands back and stay quiet in class. Lecture-model teaching is the traditional way in Chinese class. Teacher is the leading actor or actress and student is always the supporting roles.
Gradually we get into the habit of staying quiet in class and lose the ability to raise
questions and give the answers.
The second point to be mentioned is that Chinese students hold different attitudes
toward study. In our minds, we always think what we should learn instead of how we should learn knowledge in a smart way. We behave us as a passive listener, but foreign student act as a active learner.
As a saying goes, it is better to teach to fish rather than give a fish. Taking what has
been discussed above into account, there is no doubt that we need to think it over whether we are supposed to be a leaner or a quiet listener.
问题: 题目强调了入学新生,能不能从刚入学时,我们还对上课充满热情,然后和高中时的课堂沉闷情况相比较,从而发现问题?
2009年上海高考作文及范例
某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺(gardening),烹饪(cooking),防身术(self- defence),护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名),写一封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括:
1、你感兴趣的课程
2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么
3、为什么想学这些内容
实在没找着范文啊!
2008年上海高考作文及范例
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing cooipetition),班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。
你的文章必须包括以下内容:
·你是否会参加比赛
·你做出该决定的具体理由
Version 1:
A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.
For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
Version 2:
Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.
There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.
For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.
2007年上海高考作文及范例
以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容:
1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物;
2、 该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。
A Present for Father’s Day
The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.
Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends.
2006年上海高考作文及范例
下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择,并结合个人情况说明理由。
Version A
Of the two universities listed above, I prefer the one in the north. The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year, compared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south. This makes a big difference for a family like a mine, because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family. Studying at the northern university can save my father big money.
Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern university offers. Any candidate who chooses to study there may gain an extra 20 points, which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university. Of course, it doesn't mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance exam because this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only. However, I have been doing quite well in school, so I believe I can pass the entrance exam with flying colors.
Version B
Compared with the northern university, the southern one is more to my liking. It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter. However, that's not a problem to
me because I can work my way through college once I get admitted. What counts is the reputation it has. Once I enter this school, my future career is guaranteed.
Also, the university in the south recruits 20 new students instead of 10, which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted. The competition is very keen, though, as you can see because this university doesn't give candidates any extra points. So all I can do now is study hard, pass the tough entrance exam, and qualify as a student of the university of my choice.
2005年上海高考作文及范例
古人云:“天生我材必有用” 请你描述你生活中的一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
Many people, especially those who think they are not as talented as others, tend to give up in their undertakings and thus complain about life. Such people will certainly end up getting nowhere. Notice that most successful people are not unlike us. What makes them stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing, which is typical of the story of Li Dahua, a neighbor of mine.
Dahua was brought up in a poor family. Since he didn't do well in school, he joined his father in collecting garbage for a living soon after he graduated from elementary school. His neighbors shook their heads whenever they saw him, thinking that this boy would by no means carve out a bright future. Years passed by, and Dahua kept collecting garbage, but he took one step further. Through books he knew how to sort out the waste he had collected and have it recycled. You know what? He has set up a recycling factory and become the richest man in town! His success proves the ancient Chinese saying: "There must be a use for my talent."
1999-2015年上海高考英语作文及参考范文
历年上海高考英语作文及参考范文
1999上海高考作文及范例
一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英语;我认为。。。。。。(观点、理由)
Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a
weapon in the struggle of life”, Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is
nothing but a burden to them.
In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I
like English best.
There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject.
First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the
Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of
English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly,it is believed that good English also leads to
greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak
English has an advantage over those who cannot.
For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words)
2000年上海高考作文及范例
1。我最难忘的一课 2。具体说明为何难忘 3。感想
An Unforgettable Lesson
In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing
which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an
accident.
One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had
an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were
planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever
we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to
our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our
classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.
She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture
quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of
homework from her.
A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good
teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps
liked best. (210 words)
2001年上海高考作文及范例
请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。
Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else,
private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be
listed as follows.
First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to
move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are
able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China
will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more
people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of
the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as
iron and steel production, energy and technological application.
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many
cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more
traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available
parking spaces.
Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than
encouraged. (199 words)
2002年上海高考作文及范例
2002年的作文题提供了一幅图片,图片上女儿在学骑自行车。奶奶、父亲和一手拿着急救
箱的母亲三人满头大汗地扶着车,深怕女儿摔着了。图片下面有一行字:你们让我骑好吗?
简述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is
regarded as the treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents usually
over indulge the child.
We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the
grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the
child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.
We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So
I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on
their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t
learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in
the future?
For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves
and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager
parent.
The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we
have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. (219 words){上海高考英语范文}.
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你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信,谈谈你的看法和建议。 受信人:徐海青寄信人:黄平写信日期:2003年六月八日
June 8, 2003
Dear XuHaiqing,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.
Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.
A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.
I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words)
2004年上海高考作文及范例
老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。
Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was so glad at that. But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not.
Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing. The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.
However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies as well. Perhaps…
No! No! No! I should believe my ability. I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper… It will be an hour for me to do something for my class. I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself.
Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job. I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow. (187)
古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent)。通过描述你
生活中一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.
When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them. To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.
From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. (200 words)
2006年上海高考作文及范例
下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择,并结合个人情况说明理由。
南方大学北方大学
学费 8000元/年 5000元年
招生人数 20人 10人
优惠政策无加20分
I dream to become an astronaut. Two universities in China can make my dream become true. They are both very good, but I can only choose one.
From the Internet, I learned that there are more advantages offered by the northern university than the ones by the southern one. For example, the fee charged by the northern one is lower. And it will add 20 marks while the southern university will not. In contrast, the southern university’s good point is that it enrolls more students.
After comparing the above information, I think I will choose the northern university for the following reasons. Firstly, my parents may not be able to afford my study and living expenses. Secondly, an addition of twenty marks is certainly an irresistible attraction. More importantly, four years of independent life in the north will obviously help develop my personality required as an astronaut.
以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容:
1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物;
2、 该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。
A Present for Father’s Day
The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.
Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends.
2008年上海高考作文及范例
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing cooipetition),班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。
你的文章必须包括以下内容:
•你是否会参加比赛
•你做出该决定的具体理由
Version 1:
A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class. For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
Version 2:
Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.
There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.
For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.
历年上海高考英语作文(题目汇总)
1999年
一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英语;我认为……(观点、理由)
2000年
1。我最难忘的一课
2。具体说明为何难忘
3。感想
2001年
请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。
2002年
你们让我骑好吗?
简述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
2003年
你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信,谈谈你的看法和建议。 收信人:徐海青
寄信人:黄平
写信日期:2003年六月八日
2004年
老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。
2005年
古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent)。
通过描述你生活中一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
2006年
下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择,并结合个人情况说明理由。
南方大学 北方大学
学费 8000元/年 5000元/年
招生人数 20人 10人
优惠政策 无 加20分
2007年
以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容:
1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物;
2、 该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。
2008年
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing cooipetition),班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容:
·你是否会参加比赛
·你做出该决定的具体理由
2009年
某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺(gardening),烹饪(cooking),防身术(self- defence),护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名),写一封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括:
1、你感兴趣的课程
2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么
3、为什么想学这些内容
2010年
下图是小学新生的课堂一脚,对照你当时的上课情况,作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括:
●描述图片里学生上课的场景
●比较你同时期的上课情况
●简单谈谈你的感受
2011年
假如你是启明中学(Ming Qi Middle School)的李明,想申请一个扶贫项目,帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事,写一封申请信(信中不能提到真实姓名和学校)。
2012年
上周一,你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课(如图所示),回家后你用英语写了一篇日记,内容包括:
● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述;
● 你从中获得的启发。
2013年
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;
2. 说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)
2014年
学校英语报正在改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。