上个周末英语作文六年级

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上个周末英语作文六年级篇一

六年级英语上学期作文

六年级上学期英语作文

姓名 班级

一、用英语介绍一下你自己,说明你的名字,年龄,是男孩还是女孩,每天用什么交通工具上学,周末经常做些什么。

Hi! I am Amy. I am a happy girl. I am 12 years old. I am tall and thin, I

have short hair and big eyes. I often go to school on foot. Sometimes I go to school by bike. On the weekend, I often do my homework and watch TV. What about you?

二、用英语写一写周末你通常是怎样过的。

I am busy on the weekend. On Saturday morning I do my homework. In the afternoon, I go shopping. In the evening, I watch TV. On Sunday morning I visit my grandparents. I clean the room in the afternoon. What about you? What do you do on the weekend?

三、用英语写一写周末John通常是怎样过的。

John is busy on the weekend. On Saturday morning he does his homework.. In the afternoon, he goes shopping. In the evening, he watches TV. On Sunday morning he visits his grandparents. He cleans the room in the afternoon.

四、用英语写一写这个周末你将会怎样过。

I am going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning I am going to do my homework. In the afternoon, I am going shopping. In the evening, I am going to watch TV. On Sunday morning I am going to visit my grandparents. I am going to clean the room in the afternoon. What about you? What are you going to do this weekend?

五、用英语写一写下周末John将怎样过的。

John is going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning he is going to do his homework. In the afternoon, he is going shopping. In the evening, he is going to watch TV. On Sunday morning he is going to visit his grandparents. He is going to clean the room in the afternoon.

六、以“My weekend”为题写一写你这个周末将要去的地方、时间及打算用什么

交通工具等。

I am going to have a happy weekend. On Saturday, I am going to the bookstore. I am going at 2:00. I am going on foot. I am going to buy a comic book and a CD. On Sunday, I am going to the KFC. I am going at 5:30. I am going there by bus. I am going to buy some hot dogs. That will be fun! What about you? Where are you going this weekend?

七、假设这个周末你想去看望你的英语老师,请你以“My Weekend”为题,用

几句话写写你打算和谁一起去,几点去,打算用什么交通工具等。

Hi! I am Amy. I am going to visit my English teacher—Miss Li this

weekend. I am going there with John. We are going at 4 o’clock. First, we are going to buy some apples for Miss Li. Then, we are going there by bus. What are you going to do this weekend?

八、用英语写一写你寒假将怎样过。

My winter holiday

Winter holiday is coming. I am very excited. On the first day, I’m going to do my homework. On the second day, I’m going to visit my grandparents. On the third day, I’m going to watch TV with my mom. On the fourth day, I’m going to go shopping. On the fifth day, I’m going to the bookstore. I am going to buy some comic books there. Then I’m going to take a trip to Beijing. I am excited.

九、描述一位你最喜爱的老师,包括性格、长相、爱好、课余活动及喜爱的食

物。

My favourite teacher

I am Amy. Miss Li is my favourite teacher. She is our Chinese teacher. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long hair. She is very active and kind. She likes reading books and listening to music. She often does sports after school. She likes fish very much. Her class is so much fun, we all like her.

十、描述一位你的朋友、同学或笔友,介绍其一些情况。

My classmate

I am 写自己的名字).I have a friend. He is a boy. He is 同学的名字).He is a student. He goes to school on foot. He is tall and thin. He has short hair and big eyes. He likes playing chess and diving. We often play chess on weekends. We are going to go hiking this weekend.

十一、描述一位你的朋友,说说你朋友会做什么、爱好、以及其父母的职业,下

个周末的计划。

My friend

I have a friend. Her name is Amy. She goes to school by car. She can play the

violin. She likes reading books. She is going to take a trip next weekend. Her father is a doctor. He goes to work by car, too. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches math. She goes to work on foot. I like my friend.

十二、写一篇描写你父母的短文,包括他们的职业,在哪里工作,有什么爱好,

怎样上班,几点下班。

My Parents

My name is Mike. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He likes helping people. He goes to work by car. He goes home at 6:00. He often reads newspapers in the evening. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She

goes to work on foot. She likes listening to music. She goes home at 6:10. She often watches TV in the evening. I love my parents, they love me, too.

{上个周末英语作文六年级}.

十三、以“My Pen Pal”为题写一篇短文,介绍他/她的年龄、爱好、家庭情况。

My Pen Pal

I have a pen pal. His name is Mike. He is 13. He likes playing football. He goes to school by car. His father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He likes helping people. He goes go work by car. He goes home at 6:00. He often reads newspapers in the evening His mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She goes to works on foot. She likes listening to music. She goes home at 6:10. She often watches TV in the evening.{上个周末英语作文六年级}.

十四、以“My mother”为题写一篇短文,介绍她的外貌特征,职业,在哪里工作,

有什么爱好, 怎样上班,几点下班。

My mother(此文也适用于My aunt)

My mother is 40 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes. She is

kind. She is an engineer. She works in a company. She likes reading books and diving. She goes to work by car, but sometimes she goes by bus. She is very busy. So she goes home at 6:00. I love my mother, she loves me, too.

十五、明天是星期天,你和你妈妈打算一起去购物,你和妈妈打算买很多东西,

你觉得很高兴。

Tomorrow is Sunday. I’m going to have a busy day, because I’m going to go

shopping with my mother. The supermarket is near our home, so we’re going there on foot. We are going to buy many things: bread, milk, vegetables, fruits, and so on(等等). I am very happy. I can’t wait

.

十六、假如本周日是你的生日,你想邀请你的朋友Sarah来参加你的birthday

party,请把去你家的路线告诉朋友,请给他们写一封信。

Dear Sarah,

Please come to my thirteen birthday at 7pm this Sunday. Now let me tell

you how to come to my home.

1. Start from the bus stop near your home,

2. Take the No. 3 bus,

3. Get off at the bookstore.

4. Turn right at the bookstore, then go straight for 5 minutes.

5. Find the yellow building on the left.

6 .Look for me on the sixth floor.

Yours

Amy

{上个周末英语作文六年级}.

十七、给你的新朋友Tom 写一封email,向他介绍一下你的家庭情况。(画线部分的内容也适合于My Family。)

To:Tom@ pen friend.com

From:Li Lei@ pen friend.com

Dear Tom,

Your new friend, Li Lei.

十八、写一写你爸爸或你妈妈的一天。

My Father’s Day{上个周末英语作文六年级}.

My father is an accountant. He works in a bank. He gets up at 7:00 in the

morning. He goes to work at 7:40. He goes to work by bus. He has lunch at 12:00. Then he reads newspapers. He goes home at 5:30 in the afternoon. He often watches TV in the evening. He goes to bed at 11:00.

十九、说说下周末你和朋友的计划

I am Amy. I’m going to have a busy weekend with my friends. On Saturday

morning, we are going to go shopping. On Saturday afternoon, we are going to the park. On Sunday morning, we are going to go fishing. On Sunday afternoon, we are going to go hiking.

二十、说说这个星期天,你和家人的安排。

I am Mike. I am going to have a busy Sunday with my family. We are going

to the zoo on Sunday morning. We are going to see elephants. On Sunday afternoon, we are going to visit my grandparents. We are going to clean the room for them.

上个周末英语作文六年级篇二

英语作文我的周末计划

英语作文:我的周末计划 I will have a happy weekend.

On Saturday morning, I’m going to do my homework. And then, I’m going out to play. I’m going to the bookstore and read some books. In the evening, I am going to have dinner with my parents outside. On Sunday morning, I’m going to the library or do my homework. And then, I’m going to listen to music. In the afternoon, I’m going to go shopping with my mother. I like shopping very much.

This is my happy and busy weekend. Do you like this weekend?

上个周末英语作文六年级篇三

Unit 3 Last weekend 上个周末

Unit3 Last Weekend

( 个案)

主备人: 谭珍香

1课时教学反思:这是词汇教学课型,一直以来我都没有很好地办法进行词汇的教学,在不断的反思---实践---反思后对词汇的教学有了进一步的认识。本节课的教学设计,结合教材,依旧带新,从Let’s start 入手,帮助学生回忆和复习以前学过的英语短语:do homework wash the clothes visit grand parents clean

the room ….以及句型:What do you usually do on the weekend? ----I watch TV….学生很快的进入了自己知识体系的再现和反馈。之后就是引入新知:学生通过听和唱唱歌谣,很快进入学习新知的氛围。教师加以点拨和启发:本课主要是介绍了英语一般过去式的语法,通过一定的示范和演示,学生能领会一般过去式的概念和意义。以及在英语单词和句子中的体现。

经验:1.通过创设情境,激活学生已有的知识,促进学生知识的自我构建和迁移。

2.复习检测的形式有:提问式,讨论式,讲故事形式,针对性练习题等

3.促进学生主动的学,有效地学。

不足:给学生的学法指导不够;对于六年级学生来说复习的知识量偏少了;可以适当设计一些游戏和任务,让学生在任务中培养解决问题的能力。

2课时教学反思: 本课时是对话课型,主要是学生能自由的进行问答:What did you do last weekend?

How ‘s the weather?之后是就个别提问:How are you ? How do you feel? 学生练习自己的实际回答,I have a fever . I have a sore throat.就具体情况给与了他们一些建议。接下来是chant 的唱读,学生们跟着录音有节奏的唱出歌谣。新授环节:Let’s try 部分,Let’s talk 部分,还是先提问,再让学生仔细听音2遍。What did Wu\John do last weekend?

新授部分是对话:What did you do last weekend? I played football. How about you?....

同样是采用学生先听录音,回答问题,学生组内练习对话,完成编写对话的任务。 经验:1,先学生学,再教师教,培养学生自主学习的能力

2,学生的独学是通过听录音,看图片和听教师说完成的。

3,对话教学就是要学生要说,能说,会说,多提供机会让他们说。 不足:1,教学设计没有创新,很老套,学生没有了新鲜感,

2,学生的小组对话没有做到人人参与,差生没有及时掌握,导致汇报难以进行。

3,学生的学仅仅停留在书本上的内容,很难联系实际生活,

4,在复习时应该体现学生要完成任务的基本的知识,激活学生的旧识,加上新授和引导,学生才能更好地完成任务。

上个周末英语作文六年级篇四

小学六年级英语毕业考作文范文(好)(1)

小学英语毕业考作文范文

小学英语作文范文(必背) 1、写一篇关于你上个五一假期做过的事情(注意要用一般过去时) I was happy on May holiday.On Monday I ate good food in Xinjiang.On Tuesday I sang and danced with my new friends.On Wednesday I climbed mountains.I took pictures on Thursday.On Friday I saw elephants.I had a good time.(What about your holiday?) 2、My Family(我的家人) There are three people in my family. They are my father﹑mother and I. I'm 12 years old. I am a student. I like playing computer games. My father is a driver. He drives a car. He likes playing football My mother is a doctor. She works very hard. She likes singing. 3、My last Weekend(我的上一个周末)(用一般过去时写) I had a happy weekend. On Saturday morning, I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes. In the afternoon, I cleaned the room. On Sunday, I played football in the park. Then I went to my grandparents’ house. Grandpa played the piano! We were so happy. This was my last weekend 4、My Friend(我的朋友)(用一般现在时写) I have a good friend. She has a small nose and two big eyes, Her hair is short and black.She is 12 years old She is tall and beautiful. She likes singing and dancing. I often play ping-pong with her. My School My school is beautiful. We can study and play there. There is a big building in our school. There are many classrooms, two computer rooms and three music rooms. There is a library in our school. We can read book in it. There is a big playground in front of the school building. We can play sports with our classmates. I love my school very much. Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They are spring、summer、fall and winter. I like spring. It is warm. It often rains. I can plant trees and flowers in spring. The spring is green. Summer is very hot. I can swim in the river. Fall is a good season. It is nice. I can fly kites in fall. I can eat many apples too. Winter is cold. I can play snow and make a snow man . I love all the seasons, because they are nice. My Weekend The weekend is coming. I’m going to have a happy weekend. On Saturday morning. I’m going to do my homework. And then, I’m going out to play. In the evening, I am going to have dinner with my parents .On Sunday morning, I’m going to the library. And then, I’m going to listen to music. In the afternoon, I’m going to go shopping with my mother. This is my happy and busy weekend. Do you like this weekend? My Room I have my own room. It is big and nice. There is a bed, a desk and a shelf. The doll is on the bed. The lamp is on the desk. The books are on the shelf. The trash bin is behind the door. The clothes are in the closet. There is an air-conditioner over the closet. Look! There are many pictures on the wall. I love my room very much. My School Day This is my school day. I usually do morning exercises in the playground at 8:10.We have six classes every day. They are English, Chinese , Math ,Music, Art, P.E. and computer class. The first class begins at 8:35 am., Math, My favorite class is English, After class, I often play games with my friends. I'm very happy in the school. My Teacher I have an English teacher. She is a young lady. She has long hair. She is short. She is very funny. Sometimes she is very active. Sometimes she is quiet. She likes reading and she often goes to the bookstore on the weekend. She goes to work on foot. She is a good teacher.

上个周末英语作文六年级篇五

六年级下学期英语作文

六年级下学期英语作文

姓名 班级

一、用英语介绍一下你自己,说明你的名字,年龄,是男孩还是女孩,每天用什么交通工具上学,周末经常做些什么。

Hi! I am Amy. I am a happy girl. I am 12 years old. I am tall and thin, I

have short hair and big eyes. I often go to school on foot. Sometimes I go to school by bike. On the weekend, I often do my homework and watch TV. What about you?

二、用英语写一写周末你通常是怎样过的。

I am busy on the weekend. On Saturday morning I do my homework. In the afternoon, I go shopping. In the evening, I watch TV. On Sunday morning I visit my grandparents. I clean the room in the afternoon. What about you? What do you do on the weekend?

三、用英语写一写周末John通常是怎样过的。

John is busy on the weekend. On Saturday morning he does his homework.. In the afternoon, he goes shopping. In the evening, he watches TV. On Sunday morning he visits his grandparents. He cleans the room in the afternoon.

四、用英语写一写这个周末你将会怎样过。

I am going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning I am going to do my homework. In the afternoon, I am going shopping. In the evening, I am going to watch TV. On Sunday morning I am going to visit my grandparents. I am going to clean the room in the afternoon. What about you? What are you going to do this weekend?

五、用英语写一写下周末John将怎样过的。

John is going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning he is going to do his homework. In the afternoon, he is going shopping. In the evening, he is going to watch TV. On Sunday morning he is going to visit his grandparents. He is going to clean the room in the afternoon.

六、以“My weekend”为题写一写你这个周末将要去的地方、时间及打算用什么

交通工具等。

I am going to have a happy weekend. On Saturday, I am going to the bookstore. I am going at 2:00. I am going on foot. I am going to buy a comic book and a CD. On Sunday, I am going to the KFC. I am going at 5:30. I am going there by bus. I am going to buy some hot dogs. That will be fun! What about you? Where are you going this weekend?

七、假设这个周末你想去看望你的英语老师,请你以“My Weekend”为题,用

几句话写写你打算和谁一起去,几点去,打算用什么交通工具等。

Hi! I am Amy. I am going to visit my English teacher—Miss Li this

weekend. I am going there with John. We are going at 4 o’clock. First, we are going to buy some apples for Miss Li. Then, we are going there by bus. What are you going to do this weekend?

八、用英语写一写你寒假将怎样过。

My winter holiday

Winter holiday is coming. I am very excited. On the first day, I’m going to do my homework. On the second day, I’m going to visit my grandparents. On the third day, I’m going to watch TV with my mom. On the fourth day, I’m going to go shopping. On the fifth day, I’m going to the bookstore. I am going to buy some comic books there. Then I’m going to take a trip to Beijing. I am excited.

九、描述一位你最喜爱的老师,包括性格、长相、爱好、课余活动及喜爱的食

物。

My favourite teacher

I am Amy. Miss Li is my favourite teacher. She is our Chinese teacher. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long hair. She is very active and kind. She likes reading books and listening to music. She often does sports after school. She likes fish very much. Her class is so much fun, we all like her.

十、描述一位你的朋友、同学或笔友,介绍其一些情况。

My classmate

I am 写自己的名字).I have a friend. He is a boy. He is 同学的名字).He is a student. He goes to school on foot. He is tall and thin. He has short hair and big eyes. He likes playing chess and diving. We often play chess on weekends. We are going to go hiking this weekend.

十一、描述一位你的朋友,说说你朋友会做什么、爱好、以及其父母的职业,下

个周末的计划。

My friend

I have a friend. Her name is Amy. She goes to school by car. She can play the

violin. She likes reading books. She is going to take a trip next weekend. Her father is a doctor. He goes to work by car, too. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches math. She goes to work on foot. I like my friend.

十二、写一篇描写你父母的短文,包括他们的职业,在哪里工作,有什么爱好,

怎样上班,几点下班。

My Parents

My name is Mike. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He likes helping people. He goes to work by car. He goes home at 6:00. He often reads

newspapers in the evening. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She goes to work on foot. She likes listening to music. She goes home at 6:10. She often watches TV in the evening. I love my parents, they love me, too.

十三、以“My Pen Pal”为题写一篇短文,介绍他/她的年龄、爱好、家庭情况。

My Pen Pal

I have a pen pal. His name is Mike. He is 13. He likes playing football. He goes to school by car. His father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He likes helping people. He goes go work by car. He goes home at 6:00. He often reads newspapers in the evening His mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She goes to works on foot. She likes listening to music. She goes home at 6:10. She often watches TV in the evening.

十四、以“My mother”为题写一篇短文,介绍她的外貌特征,职业,在哪里工作,

有什么爱好, 怎样上班,几点下班。

My mother(此文也适用于My aunt)

My mother is 40 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes. She is

kind. She is an engineer. She works in a company. She likes reading books and diving. She goes to work by car, but sometimes she goes by bus. She is very busy. So she goes home at 6:00. I love my mother, she loves me, too.

十五、明天是星期天,你和你妈妈打算一起去购物,你和妈妈打算买很多东西,

你觉得很高兴。

Tomorrow is Sunday. I’m going to have a busy day, because I’m going to go

shopping with my mother. The supermarket is near our home, so we’re going there on foot. We are going to buy many things: bread, milk, vegetables, fruits, and so on(等等). I am very happy. I can’t wait

.

十六、假如本周日是你的生日,你想邀请你的朋友Sarah来参加你的birthday

party,请把去你家的路线告诉朋友,请给他们写一封信。

Dear Sarah,

Please come to my thirteen birthday at 7pm this Sunday. Now let me tell

you how to come to my home.

1. Start from the bus stop near your home,

2. Take the No. 3 bus,

3. Get off at the bookstore.

4. Turn right at the bookstore, then go straight for 5 minutes.

5. Find the yellow building on the left.

6 .Look for me on the sixth floor.

Yours

Amy

十七、给你的新朋友Tom 写一封email,向他介绍一下你的家庭情况。(画线部分的内容也适合于My Family。)

To:Tom@ pen friend.com

From:Li Lei@ pen friend.com

Dear Tom,

Your new friend, Li Lei.

十八、写一写你爸爸或你妈妈的一天。

My Father’s Day

My father is an accountant. He works in a bank. He gets up at 7:00 in the

morning. He goes to work at 7:40. He goes to work by bus. He has lunch at 12:00. Then he reads newspapers. He goes home at 5:30 in the afternoon. He often watches TV in the evening. He goes to bed at 11:00.

十九、说说下周末你和朋友的计划

I am Amy. I’m going to have a busy weekend with my friends. On Saturday

morning, we are going to go shopping. On Saturday afternoon, we are going to the park. On Sunday morning, we are going to go fishing. On Sunday afternoon, we are going to go hiking.{上个周末英语作文六年级}.

二十、说说这个星期天,你和家人的安排。

I am Mike. I am going to have a busy Sunday with my family. We are going

to the zoo on Sunday morning. We are going to see elephants. On Sunday afternoon, we are going to visit my grandparents. We are going to clean the room for them.

二十一、写一写你最喜爱的季节,这个季节的天气如何,你在这个季节可以干什么。

My favourite season

Hi! I am ___________.There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. But my favourite season is summer. It’s always sunny and hot. I can wear my sunglasses and my T-shirt. I can swim in the river. And I can eat ice-cream,

too. I can have a long summer holiday! I like summer very much.

二十二、描述一下四个季节,写一写它们的天气以及在这四个季节中你可以干什么。

Four Seasons

There are four seasons in a year. They are spring、summer、fall and winter. I like spring. It is warm. It often rains. I can plant trees and flowers in spring. Summer is very hot. I can swim in the river. Fall is a good season. It is sunny and cool. I can fly kites in fall. I can eat many apples too. Winter is cold. I can ski in winter. I love all the seasons, because they are nice.

二十三、以My last week 为题,描述你上周的生活情况。

My last week

I was busy last week. On Monday, I read books in the library. On Tuesday, I watched TV in the evening. On Wednesday, I played football with my friends. On Thursday, I did my homework. On Friday, I helped my mother do the dishes. On Saturday, I went swimming in the river. On Sunday, I went hiking. I was happy last week.

二十四、写一写John在上个周末做了些什么,他的心情怎样。

John was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, John went to a park, he sang and danced there. In the afternoon, he went fishing. In the evening, He did homework. On Sunday morning, He played football with his friends. In the afternoon, he went swimming in the river. In the evening, he read books. He was tired but happy last weekend.

二十五、请用英语描述一下得了流感有何症状,应该怎么办?

When you have the flu, you will have a headache and you will have a fever, your throat will sore and your nose will hurt. But don’t worry. If you are sick, go to the hospital and see the doctor. Take some medicine and drink hot water. Stay in bed for a few days. You will feel better soon.

二十六、以My family 为题目写一篇作文,介绍一下你的家庭成员及他们的职业、爱好等。

My family

I have a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me.

My father is a doctor. He is 38 years old. He likes swimming and diving. My mother is a teacher. She is 38 years old, too. She likes reading books and singing. I'm a student. I study at a school .I'm 12 years old. I like singing.

I love my family very much.

二十七、以My bedroom 为题,用there be 句型介绍一下你的卧室以及卧室内的陈设。

My bedroom

I have a small bedroom. There is a bed in my bedroom. The bed is green. It is on the left. There is a small desk near the window. There are same books on the desk. There is a chair in front of the desk. There is a bag on the chair. There is a picture on the wall.

My bedroom is nice, I like it very much!

二十八、请以“My Spring Festival”为题,介绍去年春节的天气情况,你去了什么地方,和谁一起去,做了些什么事情等。 (这篇作文也适用于写去年寒假或是去年暑假,但天气需要改动)

上个周末英语作文六年级篇六

小学五、六年级英语作文范例

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

{上个周末英语作文六年级}.

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at 6:00, and go to school at 7:00. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章,小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物,而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外,文章中出现了一些生词,可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能做的家务,很详细,到位。

小朋友们在写作时,应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情,这样会避免在作文时显得太空,因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。

小朋友们,可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起,利用所学的句子,描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时,可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

My weekend

There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.

【要领点评】

写法:这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动,记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即:周六上午:舞蹈课→下午:做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上午:看望祖父母→下午:阅读→晚上:看电视,与父母交流→感受:高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写,先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事,有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚,最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。

时态:这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时(主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的);b.一般现在时(主要描述你经常怎样度过周末);c.一般将来时(主要描述你要怎样过周末)。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的,所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意:活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识,eg.(例)起床get up,和新知识,eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句,eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。

My Seasons

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

【要领点评】

写法:这篇短文是描述“我的四季”,在写法上,是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的,先讲明每个季节的特征,之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受,最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容,之后再去讲其他几个季节,还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色,如:秋天的田地里一片金黄,农民在收割等等,这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。

时态:这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”,是比较惯常的一些行为,所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即:在什么季节,天气如何,我们可以做什么。

注意:在写作内容上,不可以像以往的内容那么简单,因为有四个季节,所以要写明季节,季节天气,季节性活动,活动的人,活动的感受等,要求句子顺序要正确,在写作中还要注意关联词的使用,如用了“因为”,就不能用“所以”,二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。

My Birthday Party

Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my party, we can do many things:

1. Light the candles.

2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song.

3. Make a wish.

4. Blow out the candles.

5. Cut off the cake.

6. Eat the cake.

7. Open the presents.

8. Sing and dance.

9. Watch videos or play other games.

10. Say goodbye with each other.

That’s my birthday party, is it interesting?

【要领点评】

写法:这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的,记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动,比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法,这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。

时态:这篇短文可以用三种时态来写:

1、一般将来时:主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划,都将如何进行。

2、一般现在时:主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。

3、一般过去时:主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。

句型:invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事

注意:由于这篇短文很有局限性,所表达的大体上都基本相同,所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误:

eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。

My family

There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!

【要领点评】

写法:这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员,以及此刻他们正在干什么,表达了自己对家人的感情。 时态:由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态,所以建议采用现在进行时态。{上个周末英语作文六年级}.{上个周末英语作文六年级}.

句型:主语+be+动词的现在分词。

注意:本单元的重点是现在进行时态,注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性,即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。

In the park

It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.

【要领点评】

写法:这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。

时态:这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态,由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时,因此,描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。

句型:一般现在时:主语+谓语+其他

现在进行时:(1)What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他?

(2)主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。

A Field Trip

It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited. Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.

【要领点评】

写法:这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的,记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。 时态:这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时,所以,这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。

句型:××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.

注意:活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。

PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

Li Ying ’S Hobby

Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.

Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.

【要领点评】

这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话,我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。

小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时,可以从两个角度下手:一是具体地描绘;二是和上面小朋友一样,粗线条地勾画,二者各有所长,另处在行文中使用一些问句,使用一些转述的话,可以使作文更有灵气,避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子,使读者眼前为之一亮。

Don’t be against the traffic rules

I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.

If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的经历写起,叙述自己以什么方式去上学,在上学的路上是怎么做的,很形象。

小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大,那样很容易使文章显得空洞,而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。

I Love My Family

Here is a photo of my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

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