管理学 点击: 2012-10-12
2017高考英语作文绝佳材料
一学校生活
一、话题常用词汇必背
1.常用单词
(1)conflict n. 冲突
(2)harmony n. 和谐
(3)quarrel n. 争吵
(4)virtue n. 美德
(5)dormitory n.公寓
(6)relaxation n.放松
(7)board v. 寄宿
(8)beat v. 战胜
(9)exercise v. 锻炼
(10)strengthen v. 加强
(11)participate v. 参加
(12)exciting adj. 兴奋的
(13)first-class adj. 一流的
(14)compulsory adj. 强制的
(15)competitive adj. 竞争性强的
(16)self-centered adj. 以自我为中心的
(17)calmly adv. 平静地
(18)wisely adv. 明智地
2.常用短语
(1)the final exam 期末考试
(2)after-class activities 课外活动
(3)be accustomed to 习惯于
(4)make up one's mind 下决心
(5)distinguish oneself 展示自己
(6)build up one's body 增强体质
(7)be beneficial to 对……有益
(8)get into a bad habit 染上坏习惯
(9)live an ideal life 过着理想的生活
一、话题写作佳句必背
1.According to the rules and regulations of our school, it is
compulsory for us students to live in the dormitories of our school.
根据学校的规章制度,我们学生必须住在学校的公寓里。
2.For the sake of convenience, there are a large percentage of
students boarding with local families in and around the village.
为了方便,有很大比例的学生寄宿在这个村子及其周围地区的家庭中。
3.The English corner gives me a chance to distinguish
myself by speaking English fluently.
在英语角里说一口流利的英语给了我一个展现自我的机会。
4.The dream of going to the first-class university attracts us greatly and we have made up our minds to
achieve it despite great hardship.
上一流大学的梦想深深地吸引了我们,尽管有很多困难,我们下定决心要实现这个梦想。
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.(2012·湖北高考短文写
作)
你不能选择你所被给予的东西,但是你可以选择如何利用它。
(江苏高考)生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合
此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。
满分作文会仿写(按要求将文章补充完整并背诵)
范例一
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. Su Hua bumped into Li Jiang
(昨天下午在打篮球时,状语从句的省略). Then Li Jiang began to shout to Su Hua, (结果导致一场激烈的争吵,非限制性定语从句). 他们吵架的原因是他们不够冷静,The reason why ... was that ...). Both
of them wanted to win, but it was not helpful to do so. When we meet such situation, we should try to keep
calm. (相互体谅是必要的,it作形式主语). It is also a virtue to
forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.
Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
(只有这样我们的学校生活才能和谐,强调句式).
1.while playing basketball yesterday afternoon
2.which led to a horrible quarrel
3.The reason why they quarrelled to each other was that they were not calm enough
4.It is essential to be considerate to one another
5.It is by this means that we can lead a harmonious school life
范例二
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su 状语从句的省略).Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
插入语), it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame — they were not calm enough and 强调句式). As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
(定语从句). It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place. Don„t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. 倒装句式).
二 网络与生活
1.常用单词
(1)virus n. 病毒
(2)credit n. 信用卡
(3)complaint n. 抱怨
(4)recreation n. 消遣
(5)advantage n. 优点
(6)email n. 电子邮件
(7)information n. 信息
(8)convenience n. 方便
(9)communication n. 交流
(10)cyberspace n. 网络空间
(11)chat v. 聊天
(12)explore v. 探索
(13)exchange v. 交换
(14)download v. 下载
(15)fictional adj. 虚幻的
(16)artificial adj. 人造的
(17)universal adj. 普遍的
(18)intelligent adj. 智能的
(19)technological adj. 科技的
(20)widely adv. 广泛地
(21)actually adv. 实际上
2.常用短语
(1)instead of 而不是
(2)shop online 网上购物
(3)click on sth. 用鼠标点击
(4)make good use of 充分利用
(5)surf the Internet 上网浏览信息
(6)broaden one's horizons 开阔视野
(7)a technological revolution 技术革命
(8)provide ... with ... 为……提供……
(9)download information from the Internet 从网络上下载信息
1. We are now living in an information age, in which the web is widely used.
2. Whenever necessary they can download all kinds of information from the Internet.
3. It is email instead of letter that makes communication easier.
4. People are worried about the safety of paying for goods using credit when shopping.
一、话题写作佳句必背
1.You can shop as you like as the online shops are open 24
hours a day.
你可以随心所欲地每天24小时在网上购物。
2.It is easy to find what you are looking for on the Internet.
在网上找你正在寻找的东西是容易的。
3.Some people are worried about the safety of paying for goods using credit cards when shopping on the Internet.
一些人担心在网上购物时用信用卡为商品付钱的安全性。
4.Once cheated online, you may find it difficult to make a complaint.
一旦你在网上受到欺骗,你会发现很难起诉。
5.We must think twice before we decide to purchase goods sold on the Internet.
我们在网上购物时,必须三思而后行。
二、连句成篇并背诵(选用“what's worse, in my opinion, finally, for one thing, for another, secondly, firstly”过渡词衔接成文)
Online shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a number of benefits for the shoppers. , the most important advantage is convenience. You can shop as you like as the online shops are open 24 hours a day, and do not have to queue with other shoppers. easy to find what you are looking for on the Internet. goods through the Internet.
Every coin has two sides, online shopping has its disadvantages, too. , you can't people are worried about the safety of paying for goods using credit cards when shopping on the Internet. What's worse, once cheated online, you may find it difficult to make a complaint.
(安徽皖南八校第一次联考)如今网络已经对人们产生了很大影响,对中学生影响尤其之深。有人认为网络的利大于弊,有人认为网络的弊大于利。请以“Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet”为题,用英语写一篇文章,结合实际情况谈谈你的看法。
范例一
Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
People, old and young, are using it, and we students are no exception.
However, our parents are worried about our surfing the Net, (现在分词作伴随状语). In fact, the Internet can do us more good than harm. For instance we students can seek help online when we are faced with difficulties in our studies or when we want to find some useful materials to complete a task. The Internet also provides us with a cheap alternative to communicate with others.
定语从句); but that's not the fault of the Internet. We should have control over ourselves to make good use of the Internet.
范例二
Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
在日常生活中,我们通过因特网受益颇多,同位语从句). We can read news, watch films, keep in touch with our relatives, make friends, or play games to get relaxed on the Internet.
But every coin has two sides. The Internet also has bad effects on people, especially on teenagers. Things such as violence and cheating, often appear on the Internet seriously polluting their hearts and soul. Consequently, children will gradually lose interest in their studies.
到了政府该采取有效措施的时候了,it's high time ... 句型). Some websites that disobey the rules(不遵守规章的,定语从句) should be made public and closed up. As students, we should protect ourselves by keeping on guard against the bad effects of the Internet. I'm sure we will have a better online environment soon so that the Internet can serve us better(目的是因特网能够更好地为我们服务,so that引导目的状语从句).
世界与环境
一、话题常用词汇必背
1.常用单词
(1)action n. 行为
(2)desire n. 渴望
(3)harmony n. 和谐
(4)environment n. 环境
(5)existence n. 生存
(6)energy n. 能量; 精力
(7)consider v. 考虑
2017届浙江省新高考英语书面表达之应用文写作十九篇汇编
应用文写作
【2016-2007真题汇编】
(2016·浙江)“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。
要求如下:
1.简述你对这句名言的理解;
2.用一个具体事例加以说明;
3.给出恰当的结尾。
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
1.(2015浙江)在班级活动中,当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时,你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人,还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题,用英语写一篇100~ 120个词的短文。要求如下:
1.从以上两种做法中选择一种;2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.When I have a different opinion,I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority. The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism,I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit.Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum.I would love to go to a museum,but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic.Without hesitation,I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.
2.(2014浙江,30分)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
Dear Mr.Wang,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books,I’d like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books.Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addition to reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books.Classic works,written by masters,present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.They not only offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically. I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
3.(2013浙江,30分)请以“One Thing I’m Proud of” 为题, 用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文, 记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下:
1. 记述事情经过;2. 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。
One Thing I’m Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice makes perfect.”
4.(2012浙江) 你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote) 并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. ”请按下列要求用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文:
1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法; 2. 举例说明理由。
In the English Reading Week,one of my classmates recommended a quote to us,which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things,but mostly on you. “I can’t agree more with this view. It’s true that our future is determined by many things,such as opportunities and help from others,but our own attitude,determination,and hard work play a more important role. In other words,we are the master of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln for example. He was born in a poor family,and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts,he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day,Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore,I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.
5.(2011浙江)假设你是高中生李越, 有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to scribble) 和乱丢垃圾(to litter) 的行为, 请用英语给校长写一封100—120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容:
1. 说明写信目的; 2. 对这些行为进行批评; 3. 提出建议。
June 8, 2011
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior Ⅱ. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully,
Li Yue
5.(2010浙江)最近, 李越被评为你们班的“每周之星” 。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午, 不顾天气炎热, 为班级选购歌咏比赛服装), 用英语为班级板报写一篇100—120个词的短文。
你的文章应包括下列要点:
1. 李越的事迹及其对同学的影响; 2. 你的评论。
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of“Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.
6.(2009浙江)5月1日, 高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院
(Sunshine Nursing Home) 开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者, 请按下列要点用英语写一则100~120个词的新闻报道。
1. 时间、地点、人物、活动; 2. 老人们的反应; 3. 简要评论。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
7.(2008浙江)人们完成工作的方式通常有两种: 独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team” 为题, 按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:
1. 独立完成: 自行安排、自己解决问题2. 合作完成: 一起讨论、相互学习3. 我喜欢的方式及理由
Working Individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this
way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.
8.(2007浙江)在英语课堂上,你喜欢老师授课时只用英语,还是英语、汉语兼用?某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕 “How do you prefer English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。
I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well. Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment. When English is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportunities to practise listening and speaking. Therefore, they will be able to learn it more quickly.
However, there are also some problems with this teaching method. As we haven’t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learners may even lose interest in English.
Practice makes perfect. To learn English well requires a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English.
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both Chinese and English. In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process. As middle school students, we only have a small vocabulary. If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class, we will understand the lesson better.
Of course, an English class taught in two languages has its shortcomings. Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning. Some students will speak
浙江省2017高考改革第一次高考英语考试真题题型
2016年10月16日下午4时,随着外语科目考试结束铃声的响起,浙江省新高考第三次学考选考落幕。
昨天,是浙江新高考外语首次开考,对现场考生来说,这就是高考。也因此,不少考生一出来,已经等在门口的家长便拥了上去,场面一点儿都不亚于“老”高考。
据了解,浙江新高考各科考试中,除了外语是用全国试卷外,其他科目都是浙江自己命题,外语卷面满分为150分。
试卷结构有许多调整
阅读理解题数减少
新高考外语科目(含英语、日语、俄语、德语、法语、西班牙语)从本次考试起实行一年两考,一考两用,限当年高考生报考,一次安排在10月份与其他学考科目一起,另一次在6月份与高考语文、数学同步。
每次外语考试都兼具学考和高考两个功用,两次考试的学考等级和计入高考的卷面得分均由学生选择一次使用。
这次英语新高考与之前自主命题的浙江卷相比,考试形式和试卷结构都有许多调整,其中增加了语篇补全(七选五)、语法填空、一篇书面表达、阅读理解和完形填空的单题分值,减少了一篇阅读理解并且题数由原来的20题减少到10题,同时取消三种题型,分别是单项选择题、任务型阅读题和短文改错题。
大家说难度适中
题型灵活性很强
那么,首场新高考外语考试难度怎么样,记者随机询问了多名考生,不少人都觉得难度适中,部分考生甚至觉得有些偏简单了。
“题目是比较简单,但总体来说灵活性非常强,尤其是最后一道作文,灵活得让人有些头疼,它需要我们开脑洞,还考验语言逻辑能力。”杭二中考生小白说。
其他考生也有类似观点。
这是一道读后续写式的书面表达题,前面讲了一个故事,需要考生用150
词把结尾写完。小白说,卷面上规定后面的故事要分成两段写,每段的开头是设定好了的,所以需要用最精练的词把故事讲完讲漂亮。
“大意是说Jane和Tom两夫妻去野营,路上因为一个问题吵了起来,Jane生气跑了出去,但很快就在森林里迷路了,Jane开始后悔,想求救,当时有架直升机从她头顶上飞过,Jane尽力挥手,直升机却没看到她,Jane就在森林度过了一晚。”小白说,给出的第一句话是飞机再也没有来,第二句是当Jane醒来已经是第二天早上了。
小白说,这样的题型从来没遇到过,自己选了中规中矩的表达,比如Jane冷静下来,回忆了各种之前学过的野外求生技能开始自救,最后还给了一个happyending。
“我有个学霸同学还编了一个故事,说Jane在森林中开始不断乞求上帝,最后还真的见到了上帝。”小白说,新高考真的改变挺多,不过自己挺喜欢这种改变的,还有点小挑战。(来源:青年时报)
浙江新高考外语考试结束了,这次考试是对自己学习的一次全面检验。新高考的背景下,高中英语的学习方法和策略也应该有相应的调整去适应。
2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题
2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题
第一节:应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李明。上周末学生会组织部分学生去附近社区进行了一次义务劳动,受到居民的欢迎。请你给校园英文报写一篇报导。活动内容包括:
1. 打扫卫生;
2. 浇灌花木;
3. 帮老人干家务。
注意:
1.词数80左右,题目已为你写好;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Students’ Voluntary Work in a Neighbourhood{2017浙江省英语高考作文}.
第二节:读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem, ” Arthur said.
“ I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.”
“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. looked at the two “Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me these suitcases into a taxi.”
“ No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.”
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started !
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.
Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.
She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “ Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “ The suitcase! She thinks I’m”
Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.
注意:
1. 所叙写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”
Paragraph 2:
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur…
第二节:概要写作(满分25分)
阅读下面短文, 根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out
disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of
France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.
Though the belief in the merit(好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II.
Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the
contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist(免疫学家),encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter(后者)position is gaining some ground.
【范文点拨】
原文所给关键词分类:
地点:Park Avenue, the bank
人物:The young man, people, the bank thief
事件:suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, robbery, the shouts 在续写时,除了注意原文给出的关键词,还需要注意以下线索:
1. Why did the young man look worried?
2. What happened? But everyone had a different answer.
3. Arthur became frightened and without another thought, he started to run.
二、题型解读
1.题型介绍
◆选材特点
(1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;
(2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
◆评分参考
阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:{2017浙江省英语高考作文}.
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;
(2)内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;
(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
注意:
(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右(词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分);
(2)应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
(3)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
(4)续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2.考查能力
读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式,旨在考查学生的综合语言运用能力。与应用文不同,故事续写除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外,还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。主要聚焦在以下四个方面:
一是把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。学生需要了解给定短文的主要内容,清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况,并通过续写短文表现出来。
二是语言运用的准确性和丰富性。期望学生在词汇和语言结构的使用方面准确、恰当,能够根据内容需要使用较为高级的词汇和语言结构,阅卷老师会感觉这个学生很有水平。 三是对语篇结构的把控能力。考查学生对上下文逻辑关系的掌握情况,希望学生续写的短文语句连贯、有序。
四是创造性思维能力。这是对学生续写短文内容得要求,期望学生续写的短文具有较丰富的内容。该试题具有一定的开放性,要求学生详细和生动地描述情景、态度和感情,符合课程标准的要求和学生的能力水平(刘庆思,陈康,2016)。
3. 续写特点
读后续写,简言之,就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后,根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写完部分补充完整,使之浑然一体。它一方面很好地考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力,而另一方面,它也培养学生的发散思维能力。根据《考试说明》该部分的规定,考生在续写文章时,要注意续写部分“与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度”,“内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况”,“应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性”以及“上下文的连贯性”。根据这些规定,我们会发现读后续写有如下特点:
(1)读后续写不是随心所欲,是要在引导语(开头语)和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分。如《考试说明》样题中规定“应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语(10处)”。这些关键词语类似于传统写作中的要点提示,如人物、地点、事件,但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用。这样考生可根据自己的理解有很大的自主权。另外,所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头语,即:不能另起炉灶。这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似,在某种程度上引导你的思路向哪方面发展。
(2)续写短文多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。这样考生能够根据提示词语,顺着原来文章的思路续写文章,并适当发散。
(3)读后续写要求读写并重。与阅读理解题一样,读后续写同样需要对本篇文章精确理解,这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题,就这方面而言有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断,如“Whatwould happen next?”。
(4)所给文章的未完部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的,考生可以根据自己对文章的理解,从而对文章的结尾有不同的诠释。如《考试说明》中读后续写的样题的结尾,考生可以理解为这个年轻人是银行抢劫者,而Arthur因此成为一个大英雄;考生也可以理解为这个年轻人不是一个银行抢劫者,结果产生了误会。
4. 续写步骤
(1)精读文章,确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜(结尾)”。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示,这样考生做到“心中有数”。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路,结合段首的提示语,最终确定续写段落的思路,同时结合文章划线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
(5)标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时,务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。
5. 备考建议
面对读后续写这一新写作题型,在了解了其特点和写作技巧之后,考生只要加以适度练习,对此新题型可以做到得心应手。
1. 充分利用记叙文故事类的阅读理解或者完形填空。考生在做此类文章的试题时,读到适当的位置,可以短暂停止,根据已读部分文章的脉络,对文章进行发散思维,设想可能的几种结尾,最后对照原文的结尾,看自己的设想是否与原文一致。
2. 经常实施微型化训练,也就是对所读文章的某一段落进行设想。根据某一段落的首句提示,结合文章的上文对该段进行合理设想,具体推断该段可能要讲述的内容。
3. 与传统写作类似,续写文章更加要注意句与句之间的连接词,甚至是冠词的暗示作用。如《考试说明》的样题中续写部分的第二段“the Police Station”中的“the”表明在上一段中已经提到,同时后面的and表明前后之间是并列关系。
2017高考英语作文押题10篇
于参加2017高考的同学来说,现在开始复习和背诵英语作文完全来得及,推荐高考英语写作优秀范文全集,满满都是套路,掌握后还怕得不了满分吗?
1. 感谢信
假设你是李华,梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造,现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取,请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Professor Liang,
I am writing to extend my gratitude to youbecause with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of SydneyUniversity.
Last June, when I applied to become agraduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuablehelp. You not only wrote a
recommendation(推荐) for me to Professor Wells who worksin the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions onhow to fill the application forms and write the application letters.
It is your unreserved(无保留的) help thatenables me to obtain this splendid(极好的)opportunity of further education. For thefollowing two years I will study hard to reciprocate(回报) your sincere help andexpectations with excellent grades.
Yours truly,
Zhang Ying
2. 道歉信
假设你是李华,你上星期参观伦敦,当时你爸的一个朋友Rogers先生对你照顾有加,请写封信表达你对他的感谢。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Sarah,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable toattend your birthday
party next Thursday evening. That is owing to(因为) the fact that (同位语从句)my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital thismorning. I have to go there immediately and take care of him. As told by thedoctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I haveasked my boss for a leave.
I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate yourbirthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself withall our old friends. I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to youtomorrow to show my best wishes. Besides, please give my regards to our friendswhen you meet them at the party.
Cordially, (sincerely)
Li Hua
3. 申请信
假定你是李华,将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书,你很感兴趣,要写一封求职信,包括下列要点:
1.年龄:182.
2. 学习情况:班级前5,英语口语好
3.兴趣和特长:打字快,喜欢阅读,听音乐
4.性格特点:积极向上
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行为连贯;{2017浙江省英语高考作文}.
3.开头语和结束语己为你写好。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I’m really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.
I’m18 years old and will graduate from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July.I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, especially spoken English. I often use
the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.
I hope I may be granted(授予) an interview,when I can explain my qualifications(资格,条件) more fully. I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely/Yours,
LiHua
4. 通知
假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来,为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化,学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示,用英语向他们发出口头通知。
时间:下周五6:00—8:00
地点:教学楼101室
内容:1.唱中国歌 2.比赛用筷子 3.学习包饺子
注意:1.词数不少于50;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
Good afternoon, everyone. May I have your attention, please?